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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg wt an thrilling update!!!
Can't wait ... cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting updt fiza
nupur is too intelligent she did a awesome job
hope diya is fine cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
aslamoalkum api😊
shukar h nupur save h 😃😃 ap na to dara he diya tha api
by the way mindblwg update api u r just to good 👏
update soon plzzz
bye.may ALLAH BLESSD YOU
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Posted: 12 years ago
pheeewww...bach gayi Nupur.
halaq mein saans atki hoyi thi.
so they know who is behind all this?
Mayank nd Parakh both know each other very well.
Bt yeh kya ,ab taj pr q attack.
ek our musibat.
Nupur k codes ko crack krna really difficult tha.
bt they did it.
Thnx for update nd PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting update.
Waiting for the next one eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for being late... i was sick.. pardon errors to.. as itna hi likh pai hoon might not be the best...


Chapter: 12

Samrat: security at taj collapsed

Mayank: wht ….. he looked at benji… diya… diya is there

Benji: he looked back to all of them…

Samrat; put his hand on his shoulder….

Samrat: go to her… check wht is going on there… but b very carefully

Benji: I cant go there ..we donot have much time and I have to be here too but ….

Mayank: its oky benji… she was already so sacred with all this u should check n go…

Benji: ok….

Mayank: donot worry she will be fine… just be there if u want tu vahin se kam ker… jab hum attack per jay ga tu tujhy bola laynay gay….

He nooded n rushed to diya…. He was worried more over they all were feeling strange…. There is sumone from inside to whose keeping such a deep eyes on them… sumone is eavesdropping on them…. Some one very close..

This was the reason they were not moving out of the conference room for any thing.. the cameras n the signals were jam here by benji from the morning

………………….

Priya: tum dono ki love marriage… she turned to her with a smile

And nupur grinned more…

Nupur: ya… old story….

Priya: wht u were in trouble and he saved u….

She was speaking with so much excitement tht nupur couldn't help to laugh

Nupur: no.. she chuckled.. I use to irritate him to core… he was perfectionist… abhi bhi hai… per us waqt tu maha sadu bhi hota tha… aur mein ny us k dosto ko apni taraf kiya aur us ki bht wat lagai thi….

Priya: and u fall for him like this

Nupur: he made me fall for him.. I was never a person to believe in relationships… but he made it…. I just donot know actually wht was it wch made me so in love with him… aj sochti hoon tu asa lagta hai I was more like falling in love with him whn I got married to him… but after that whn I felt him so much… I went heads over heal….

Priya: he is romantic.. she asked excitedly…. Wht tell me nah ur already blushing

Nupur: priya… me blushing.. god.. I never thought I can blush I was such beshram one… but man he is dam romantic….he made me blush a lot…

Priya: so u both live in Delhi

Nupur: no we live sumwhere else…. But he is here these days for work..

Priya: huh.. u r not telling me anything about the blushing parts not fair…

Nupur smiled and look behind the days… she cant help her self but to smile… there life has been beautiful n fun since when the meet eachother… but yes when she really got to know him was the part when she actually feel all the love affection he has in him…. It always surprised her , the hard core cop has such soft n amzing side to himself… whos as fragile as any one whn it cums to his family and as strong as nobody can be.. when today his heart must be sinking with fear… but still he must be figuring about the clues she has given….

Mayank: kya soch rahi hai ap wifey…. He hugged her from back..

Nupur: kuch khass nhi…

Mayank: tu aam se hi baatado…

Nupur: you know sumtime it makes me feel strange .. the first time I saw u and now.. ur so much changed…

He chukled..

Mayank: I m not changed I would say… it was just a part reserved for my close ones.. and sum rare parts reserved for the closed..he said puling her more closing… lying on the bed..

Nupur: but u shouldn't have done tht….

Mayank: nupur evrytime I will cum back home are we gonna fight on this… mein kya kerta aur… u know making vikram arrest tum sab pehasty …specially u… and I certainly cant take tht risk tht u will be send sumwehre in weird place… mjhy tu kahin bhi bhej dayty kya farak parta

Nupur: waoo .. kya farak perta hai …u are absolutely right.. kisi ko kya farak perta hai..

Mayank: mein ny yeah nhi kaha ,. I mean …

Nupur: thik hai tu kal ko mein bhi kuch asa hi kero tu donot cum to me saying k why this risk n tht…

Mayank: ab yeah kya baat hoi… ohh wait a min,,, tu tum mjhy yeah aj wali baat per suna rahi hoo

Nupur: mein koi suna nhi rahi hoon … mein sirf bata rahin hoon…. Mein ny is se bhi bora case handle kiya hai…. Tum janty ho … mein ny apna dad k case bhi handle kiya hai…. N I can take it… but still I respect ur feelings on handling the case in tamil… and if its about the work n duty …than why u stoped me going there

Mayank: wht do u mean… meri biwi ho

Nupur: tht is why I am saying meray husband ho..

Mayank: mein jang per nhi gaya hoon Delhi mein hoon.. and to hell wht evr u thought about all this.. per I m ur husband and I have all the right to protect u n u even donot dare to take it away… got it… tu mein jaha hoga waha kero ga…. N will not let u take any risk on ur self… tum ny jo kuch bhi pehly kya tha kiya hoga… now ur life is attached me.. so u donot get to decide alone …

By the time he was almost with his finger pointing to her , scolding her

Nupur: hay kaun se film k hero k dialogue hain yeah… meray sadu…she said spreading her hands on her face

Mayank: NUPuRR….. and now hum is baat per dobara nhi laray gay… got it

Nupur: fine mein bhi kisis din koi risk uthao gi aur yeahi kahao gi … she showed him her tongue… and turned to other side..

And he chukled and pulled her close to him… closing his eyes..

Mayank: meray hotay hoay dekhty hain kasay layti hoon

He sigh looking out the window of the office.. he will bring back everything back… she has trusted him always , he promised her tht he will not let anything happen… and this time its all on him… there life, there future… her life… his son's life… as she says not another sadu on board …

Nupur: mayank kya larka larka lagraha hai

Mayank: kyun kya masla hai… mera tu beta hi hoga.. bulkily mera jasa dekh liana….

Nupur; Mr sharma… noway … ek aur nhi

Mayank: oye he is a sharma

Nupur: han per ek aur sadu nhi chaiy mjhy… kal se hi benji ko ghar bolati hoon din bhar us ko dekho gi

Mayank: deemgh karab hogaya hai kya…. Us k deemgh bhi nhi hai

Nupur: han han jab hi tu senior officer hai… sadu… no sadu..

Mayank: mera beta hai n that's it….

Nupur: mein bhi dkehi hon tumhra beta tum per kasa jata hai…. Tum us ko dkehy ho abhi tak….

Mayank: nupur yeah waha na honay k tana maat do..

Nupur: do gi sadu…

Mayank: nupurr.. tum kam se kam meray betay k samny tu izaat day do….

Nupur: huh… izzat my foot

Samrat: mayank COM is here….

Mayank: lets go… we have to made this operation extreme secret..

………….

Benji: diya open the door its me..

She opened and sneak out carefully and sighing in relief hugged him.. he was taken a back with her sudden gesture… he took sum steps inside and placed his hand on her back….

Benji: hi releax.. its nothing… I checked ..its just short circuit.. that has cause it…

He broke away and removed her hairs from her face… she was beautiful with her such changing personality , at one side she was as fragile as glass and on other he meet her in a caf breaking the rules

Diya: per woh sab kah rahy thy k sirf mera hi room hoa hai… benji kya yeah..

Benji: asa kuch nhi hai diya… mein ny pora hotel k sab chees check kiya hai… phir bhi tumhari security k liyan mein ny do officer yaha lag diyan hain…. Kal mein aao ga aur tum ko subha khud Mumbai chor aao ga….oky….

Diya: per tumhara case…. Solve hogaya kya

Benji: nhi .. abhi its along way to go.. tum us ko chor woh mein handle ker lo ga.. tum apna kayal rekho… tum sojao... I have to go…. But u can call me anytime… oky

Diya: pls thori dair rukh jao mjhy bht daar lag raha hai… she hugged him from side.. and snuggled closed…

He was surprised with her.. they have nevr even ever hugged eachother.. but than she is dam sacred about all this… so he hugged her back…

Benji: have u eaten anything… she nodded in no.. diya whts this.. wait I will order sumthing… bhook tu mjhy bhi lagi hai..

Diya: I want sumthing to drink…

She pouted and looked at him… he smiled at her…. And said yes..

Ordering food , he brought two glass of juiced for themselves… true in all this they haven't had food since morning,.. and tht took him to mayank

He excuse her for min and tell mayank that he will be there but will in sumtime…

Cuming back he had his drink and gave her sum two… god knows why he was getting distracted form all this…. But he was getting effected to much from her closeness.. he was drowning in her… he has such n urge to kiss her to hug her… to pore his heart that how much he is worried for nupur…. How much…

Diya: kya hua tum itnay chup kyun hoo…

She was half lying on him and he too has placed his feets up on the bed…

Benji: im worried diya…. To much…

She looked up to him… and his eyes droped on her… bad idea it was .. it was pretty bad idea.. all the urge he was having was on now on surface… he leaned to her and she closed her eyes willingly …. He kissed her more for himself than anything else… for his comfort.. for seeking her support…

Diya: u will make it … ur plan is good nah… u have a plan… she said still resting her head on his head…

Benji: ya we have… but we cant move in like this…. We are planning to take the risk.. involving army and moving in… they will react but than this all we can do

Diya: it can kill so many people benji..

Benji: that is wht is stoping us … this the only thing…. Im worried about… ur ok

She smiled n nooded… suddenly she moved back and sat surprising benji yet again

Diya: but airport flying area kaun control keray ga… woh tu mein ker rahi thi … mjhy us per kam kerna chaiy hato benji

Benji: hay relax woh hum handle kerly ga…thora rest kerlo phr dobra kam per lag jana..

Diya: per…

Benji: shh mein bol raha hoon na… u sleep.. now.. cum on..

She nodded her head in yes… and benji sigh in relief… but sumwhere he knew this cant be coincident…. He look down and saw her asleep quite quickly…she was scared, nervous and bit tired too she has been working on the pc from so long to help them ..she has placed perfect jammer to control the flying tower and area… stopping any movement staying here at the hotel… and now this …he went outside.. He instructed the man outside not to let her meet anyone nor to let her go anywhere alone.. its not safe…

……………….

Mayank: tu agaya .. kya hua

Bneji: sirf diya k room mein yeah sab hua… ek call aya… n after that waha sab block hogya…

Samrat; sirf us k room mein… is k matlab

Mayank: she is in danger… it was done deliberately.. they are telling us k they can harm our families to……

Benji: but yaar yeah baat tu kisi ko nhi pata k mera aur diya koi relation hai.. I mean yeah tu hum ny ek dosray se bhi nhi kaha than asa ho kasay raha hai

Mayank: samjh ni araha hai..CC footage hum ny band kerdiya hai… yaha k guards n all k samny hum asi koi baat ni ker rahy hain…

Samrat: ek min tuny woh "daro maat meray pass arhi ho" wala phone cll apny registered no. se kiya tha

Benji: haan

Mayank: teri tu..pagal hogaya hai kya… woh track ker lay gay easily aur teri aur uski baato se koi bhi yeah kah sakta hai….diya ki security increase ker

Benji: mein ny kerdi hai … usko tu zayda bol nhi sakta she is hell scared

Mayank: obvious hai… humain usko sath he rekhna chaiy tha.. jab ghar per mom thi tu usko wahi rekhty ..us k frst time hai in sab mein… and this all is going in hell way

Benji: han mjhy kayal nhi raha.. diya k koi relation hai hunmary sath they will know mein ny socha nhi tha…. But khir ab us ki security kafi tight hai ..

Mayank: but we sumwhere lost a programmer of ours.. woh best thi is mamaly mein continuously change ker rahi thi signals ko to make it no flying zone…

Samrat: mayank anty

Mayank: in k bus tight security hain ….. lets brief COM sir… and get there…. We just have two hrs … it getting more than us… we need to solve it now ASAP.. is baat ko ab khatam kerna hi hoga ..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update :-) :-)
You were sick r u OK now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
is diya d one?
m having such feeling from past few updates n aj to aur laga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update, Apu..
Flashback scenes were very cute.. Ye diya kuch alag hi behave kar rahi thi iss update mein..
How r u now?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
h r u now? TC Of rself.

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