ViBul Drabble ~ Colours

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Posted: 11 years ago
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One mistake. One trap. One video clip. And the whole of his world crumbled in a moment.

Never had he imagined that his past demons would come back to haunt him in such a way that his only dream would lay shattered in front of his eyes on the very day he thought he owned the world.

The moment he'd gotten married to Anika, all colours in his life disappeared. All that remained was grey. He felt as if all his life had been sucked out of him.

He looked at handle of the fridge, at his hand on top of hers. The hand he'd promised to hold for the rest of his life. Hanging his head in shame, he slowly withdrew it, letting bitter cold take over the warmth she provided. Just then, he felt a tug. Her hand was holding onto his. He raised his eyes to meet hers.

One gesture. One smile. One blink. And just like that, his world was back afloat, breathing colours away to glory.

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.Sunshine. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it! <3

Beautiful comparison <3 Do write more if time permits :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you :D
Glad you liked it (:
Will try..exams on, this one's just a stress buster ;)

P.S. Love ur username. Now I know why I couldn't change mine ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! beautifully written! U should def write more! 
AdorableTrouble thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks dear !
Will try my best (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dont watch this show, bur you've written it sooo beautiffulyyy! You're drabbling everywhere today! 😆

Very nicely written <33
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fujji my jaan, you know you're the sweeyest thing on earth :*

Umm yeah..ek aur forum pe soch ri thi 🤣 But probably won't :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Thank you :D
Glad you liked it (:
Will try..exams on, this one's just a stress buster ;)

P.S. Love ur username. Now I know why I couldn't change mine ;)


Anytime <3
Liked it? I LOVED IT <3
Ahh I see. Best of Luck then! :)

Hahah :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and she's back...once again with a beautiful piece:-)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice!!!!!  I agree, you should write more!