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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 29

But for Geet family mattered the most. She still couldn't think of a person as her husband who cared a dam abt his Daadi & brother & portraying like he has nothing left in his life. Dammit she felt his tears were all crocodile tears now. His helplessness was his selfishness, his self - centeredness. She had seen daadi suffer.. bed - redden after they all believed he was dead. Even dev was not their for them. they had nothing in their life. the business was at the verge of closing.. daadi's medical needs were demanding.. everything was his responsibility. he didn't care!! that was not an enough excuse for her.

Dev had to speak to Geet. But before that he had to know abt his bhai. It was the best thing that had happened to him. He couldn't be happier. So many things happened.. suddenly prison, divorce & then marriage with Meera ..the events that happened one after the other.. & the news his bro was no more.. all was too soon & difficult for him to comprehend. For him it was like his brother was there, far some where!!! He had still not come in term with the reality of his death. Even when Geet got admission in the same city as where they were brought up...he preferred to be quiet. He couldn't think of his family house without his brother. Their house.. that city everything only made him feel..Maan his bhai was there some where.. Geet going there was like going to bhai.. he couldn't have voiced his thoughts to anyone..it would have sounded so silly. But when he saw Geet first time filling her mang yesterday.. it was like dream come true!! thats why not even for a minute did his heart doubt it could have been mistaken identity.. something like u believe wat u want to believe. He had not seen his brothers body.. he had not seen him in India.. so he preferred to live in his brothers sweet memories. He had not contacted anyone after Maans death in US because he was heart broken & some where scared to face them. He didn't even care abt their house in US.. since it meant nothing to him..without his bhai. Everything only reminded of him. Even the truth that bhiaya came to India only for him & then that accident made Dev more guiltier.

But now he had everything in his life .. his bhaiya.. most beatiful bhabhi.. he knows.. Geet is the best for his bhaiya.. especially knowing his bhaiya's temper & mood swings, only Geet could handle him. Also he knows Geet is angry at him right now.. but his bhaiya agar manane pe aajayen tho Geet won't be able to stay away from his charm. Especially when he gets naughty. With all high hopes he called his bhai. His heart beat was rising with every ring.. he held his breath.. the moment Maan picked the call.. Maan was bit confused seeing an unknown number
Maan very sceptically answered ' hello
oh.. god.. tears just poured hearing his voice.. Dev's words choked
bhai ..he said in a very weak tone
Maan eyes burned instantly recognizing his little brothers voice. With that followed the bitter memories of past freshened. It was like yesterday... when he left her in the madap & took a car to the near by village where he had heard abt Dev & his wife. He was still not sure wat her name was!! one of his detective had just called with fresh information on his brother & his wife. It was so embarrassing to learn his brother actually deceived a girl's & his wife was behind all this. Only next day he got to hear from the detective that they had flee to Canada.

He was broken beyond recovery.. his brother could stoop so low.. how desperate was he? Wat kind of women was that women who he is married to?. that she persuaded her own husband to marry another women for money .. this was worse than prostitution.. his anger had no limit. If he had seen Dev he would have buried him alive with his own bare hands.
It was his upbringing that reflected ..not Dev's character itself. He cried for forgiveness to his parents... there was no forgiveness for such sins in his dictionary. He respected women in a different way.. but everything changed for him that day..
first was his Daadi who had been tricked him into the marriage by her nautanki heart attack, he was not close to Daadi so her false heart attack story only left an ugly image in his heart.. & this women who trade her husband for money was unthinkable.. above that they ruined someones life. And when he came back to his so called bride... whom he was planning to any way part ways, disappeared leaving their families. Her family too refused to talk to him. All that only broke him completely. How much he was trying to respect every relation.. everything seemed to play ugly tricks on him.
Bhai Dev said again not hearing any response from the other side.
Maan held back all the emotions that was brimming
wrong number he spoke in cold tone.. reflecting nothing
but the hidden anger Dev could sense.
Before Dev could say another word Maan cut the call. He sat there numb!!! so much pain he endured only his heart knows. Daadi never lived with them in US so he was never close to her. Only family he treasured was Dev.

Maan had done everything he could to bring him up with good values but he could stoop so low to play with others life..tattered him... is that wat he instilled in him.. where did he go wrong in bringing him up ..he didn't know. He punished himself mercilessly all this years in the darkness. Worst he didn't have anyone by his side to hold him.. the only person who he could call right now he felt was Geet. He searched for her number.. disturbed Pari in her honeymoon.
Alas.. it only went to voice mail. He probably filled her mail box with his desperate voice messages. Not that he would have told abt Dev but he knew he could have just held her in his arms & world would have felt different.
He so much missed her. He closed his eyes letting the tears shed.. his heart ached to be in her arms. His thoughts began to cloud with her.. this sweet unknown feel.. he never thought love would come his way. He had closed all hopes to such emotions... but never thought he would feel for her like this. He took a deep breath.
She had caught him off guard & blew him away in her. She simply captivated him.. the same way she did when he looked into her eyes. It felt so peaceful to divert his painful past to her sweet angelic essence.
Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God me first...🥳

Me gonna FAINTTT... Please someone pinch me...

Kya sach mein... Muskan Di ke thread par main first...


yipieee!!!!🥳🥳

Aaj madhosh hua jaye re, mera mann, mera mann, mera mann...

Oh God... I still cant believe...

yepieee...🥳🥳

Ok now I am gonna read the update...
Edited by Priyasi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kuch nahin
I am 2nd

after so many days


i am second

me

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

😛


What to say...all r in pain ...
If Dev was wrong than what about him...😡
He didn't respect his Dadima...why...??? 😡
Dadaima was all alone in India but he didn't care
for her...😡
Though circumstances were not in favour ..but he was
also wrong at his place...😡
Jo bhi ho ...galti kisi ki bhi ho...but..but..
It is Geet who suffer d most ...😭
It is she who lost everything...😭
It is Geet who is living in hell...😭
Im so sad about that poor soul...😭
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for it di...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ab sab kuch saaf dikh raha hain🤓

Brilliant Update
Kudos to u Muski
😃

After reading the last part I was wondering why did Dev not go back to US to their home or why didn't he get back to their acquaintances there
But u answered all the questions 😊

So Maan thought after cheating the girl they fled to Canada and Dadi faked a heart attack drama and forced him to marry adding to his misery his so called wife also ditched him and ran away

Ab Maan pe gussa bhi bhi nahi kar sakte😒
Theek hain Aash ke Maan pe nikal loongi😈

Ab itna saara raita jo phail gaya hain usse kaun saaf karega Muski 😕

Maan cut the call
Dev could understand his Bro's anger
So Dev knows that Bro manane pe aaye
toh Bhabhi unke charm se bach nahi paayegi
Ab Maan ke charm se kaun bach sakta hain 😳

How many din...Geet in🤔

I really want Maan to work hard in manana
no cakewalks please
Geet should not give in easily.


I would like to wait-n-watch what you have planned
and
How will Maan come back home😊

Kya ek aur update aaj milega
Please
Kya kare control nahin hota😛
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Alas i thought when i ll login i want to read an update of sati yes .

my thoughts were filled ki what will happen next

Maan missing Geet Excellant

Dev missing his Bro -Yes

Maan hating his Bro becoz of whom his life turned upside down - wrong

dev will make his bhai n bhabhis life perfect by bringing them together - perfect

thanx for the update

can we get one more

Edited by mishtib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I came here to post waiting but there was an update


thanx a million muski


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

so maan is angry with dev

but m still having doubts why did not he contact his dadima

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