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Before you start reading this i would like to warn you its not like my other stories. It will not make sense it will not have good structure of language or good grammar. It doesn't even have proper story line. This is inspired by a tamil movie i saw yesterday. I wrote it as a stress relief and to take a break from boredom. All together i ll tell its some crap and defo not my best.
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The morning alarm sounded hideous to Maan who was suffering a hangover. Leaning on his bed and holding his head in his hand he swore on his dead grandmother's grave for the 15th time that he will not drink. Well but he can never follow that his grandmother is already dead what worse can happen he thought to himself every time he enter the bar with his friends.
Maan singh Khuranna,27 years old has been living alone since hsi mother passed when he was 23. His only companion is her friend Adi apart from beer. Tossing on the bed Maan noticed the time in the wall clock that said 8:30 leaving only thirty minutes for him to get ready. Maan works as a Manager in one of the reputed banks in Delhi and lives in a two bed room rented flat. His life is no different than any average bachelor in India.
Being proud of himself for getting ready in less than fifteen minutes Maan made his way down to his second love Honda bike. ( well first love hopelessly still in search for the same).
" Maan babu " he heard the annoying sound of his old landlord.
He turned to see her controlling his anger pasting a fake smile on his lips.
" Bache ko school chod doh " she said smiling. Renting their house doesn't mean he is their servant but Maan's landlord fail to understand it.
" School right mein hai aur office left mein. Muje late horahah hai " he said trying to fit in his annoyance in voice.
" Arre yeh kya baat hui. Bache ko chod doh school mein tum toh mere chote bhai jaise toh bach ka mama hue na " she said and before Maan could protest made her son sit on Maan's bike.for some reason his landlord's son reminded Maan of kaalia from 'chota beem'
Cursing his luck and also his landlord Maan made his way to the school. Within ten minutes he was in the school.
" bye uncle " the boy smiled
" iss se pehale mein tension hojaoon chali jaa kaliya " Maan said with contempt. The boy stuck out his tongue and ran from there.
" bache pehda karne ko kaha toh bhoot pehada karliya " Maan mumbled to himself turning his bike when he felt thousand sparks.
He couldn't believe his own eyes what he was seeing. In front of him was angel in disguise. First he caught sight of her slim milky white waist playing hide and seek with him behind the saree ( much pervert himself) but when he saw her beautiful face complimented by round brown eyes. He found himself blushing. A single strand fell on her face reaching till her pink gloss-less lips that made his mouth drop down in desperation. When she passed by him she glanced at him and he felt as if he realized the purpose of his birth.
The whole day Maan couldn't take her image out of his mind. He was reading the first line of same file whole day until he was called by his head announcing increment in his salary.
" she is my lucky charm " Maan told his friend adi who came to visit him in the evening.
" i have only one chill beer we should share " adi told ignoring Maan's words.
Before adi could come back with cups the chill beer was already gone. He gave Maan disappointed look.
" saale share karne ko kaha " adi said
" deka ekhi chill beer ta aur muje milgaya. I told you she is my lucky charm " Maan said in dreamy tone
" beta mil gaya nahi tune cheenliya " adi said
Maan glared at him.
" acha , naam kya hai ? " adi asked
" Geet mam " Maan said as if just saying the name tickles him
" mam ? aunty ji hai? " Adi asked gaining a ball thrown at him.
" woh landlord ka beta ki math teacher " Maan said
" Teacher? " adi gave hopeless expression.
Since that day it became regular routine for Maan to go drop the small boy and drool over Geet 'mam'. This practice has helped him as now Geet gives him a look of familiarity. Not very late when god flowered blessings on Maan as 'the boy falied in maths consecutively and so his parents were called. Maan was glad to go as his guardian.
" good morning" he for the first time heard her melodious voice. He was lost hearing that. He imagined how well his name will sound in her voice.
" hello " Geet waved before his eyes breaking his trance.
" ji kahiye " Maan said lost in her.
" woh mangesh's marks ..."
" koun magesh ? " Maan asked confused.
Geet looked at Maan then the little boy standing beside her.
" yeh mangesh " she pointed
" arre kaliya " Maan laughed earning a glare from the boy.
Geet complained how he never attends math class and always fails in exam. But Maan was all busy checking her out. For the first time he was very close to her and he couldn't have missed the opportunity to take in her fragrance.
" ji kuch kahiya na " Geet snapped
" aree bacha teacher ki baat sunni chaiye. Agar doubt hai toh teacher ko phone karna hai " Maan said
" phone number nahi hai " mangesh said
" phone number nahi hai ? " Maan gave shocked expression as if its sin.
He took his phone from the pocket and gave it to Geet.
" aap abhi aapke number iss mein store kariya " Maan said
Geet was confused and hesitant.
" arre sochiye mat bache ki zindagi ka sawal ha. Agar usko 1 plus 1 pata nahi toh future mein kaise survive karega? Shadi kaisi hogi? " Maan said
" shadi ? " Geet asked shocked
" shadi? " the little boy asked excited.
" ab store kariye na number " Maan insisted
Geet didn't know what to do but store her number. Maan sighed relieved.
" ab mein missed call deraha hoon aap mere number store karlijiye. Maan , mera naam Maan hai " he said
Geet nodded still confused with his wired behavior.
" agar koi problem hai toh muje phone kariyega " he said smiling shyly.
Evening Maan was waiting near the gate when he saw Geet coming. He checked his tie and shirt to set it perfect.
" hello Geet mam " Maan said cheerfully.
" hello " gee said in a low voice
" aapne phone hi nahi kiya main wait kar raha ta " Maan said as if he is talking to his friend
" lekin koi problem nahi ta. Aapne problem hua toh call karne ko kaha ta " Geet said innocently
" at least phone karke yeh toh kaha hota ki koi problem nahi hai " Maan said making Geet smile.
" ji bye " Geet said shyly making Maan's heart skip a beat.
After a week Maan was going to meet some client when he saw Geet standing in the bus stop all tensed. Our hero immediately grabbed the opportunity to talk to her.
" hello Geet mam kaise hai " Maan said cheerfully she smiled.
" kya hua ?" he asked concerned
" woh muje exam dene jaana hai abhi tak bus nahi aayi " Geet said worried
" aap khud hi teacher ho " Maan laughed.
" woh mein MA bhi kar rahi hoon " she said
" acha main drop kardoonga " he said.
Geet first hesitated but Maan wasn't ready to give away this opportunity. Finally Geet agreed and got on the bike with him. That one help lead to texting each other, later phone calls and meetings. Maan never confessed his feelings he was all contented to be with her and her presence filled the void in him and he thought his life improved for the better. He dropped signs of him being interested in her but she never noticed. Accidental touching of hands and rubbing of shoulders were enough to satisfy him.
One day he called her phone but she didn't pick. After two minutes he received a call from her phone but it wasn't her. It was Geet's friend saying that geet's relatives are here to talk about marriage and Geet is talking to the to-be-groom. Maan shattered the very moment. He didn't know what to do. He was collapsed. The whole night he spent like a zombie roaming in the streets.
Next day when he went to drop mangesh he made sure to escape before Geet sees him but unfortunately she spotted him.
" good morning " she said cheerfully
" morning " he mumbled
" muje office ke liye late ho raha hai" he said before she could speak.
" aap puchenge nahi kal kya hua ? " Geet asked
" shadi fix hogayi? Mubarak " Maan said
" maine ladke se bahut saare baath ki woh US mein settle hone wala hai " she said
Maan nodded disinterested.
" aur maine apne pyar ke bare main bhi kehadiya " she said. Maan snapped his head looking at her
" apne pyar? " he asked
" haan maine kehadiya hain ki main Maan se pyar karti hoon" she said blushing.
" ji" it took Maan a minute to understand what she said.
He looked at her with wide grin. She was blushing making her cheeks glow like a tomato. Maan left out a howl and was about to hug her when she stopped him looking around to make sure they didn't gather audiance.
"school hai " she said dropping her head down
" sorry " he said but it was clear from his voice he wasn't sorry actually. He would have kissed her then and there if she had allowed
" evening kahi bahar chalte hai. I ll come and pick you up " he said smirking seeing her blush.
That was their just another interesting, adorable and innocent love story.
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I warned you not to read !
After reading if you are wondering what movie is this then i should tell you this is pathetic copy of " Edir Neechal " ( i changed a bit). It awesome movie unlike this story what should i say Sivakartigeyan is amazing .
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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