TAREY SS DOORIYAAN completed

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<font size="5"><font color="#990099">HEYYY GUSSS M REALLY FED UP WITH THIS CURRENT TRACK SO WRTTING THIS OS TO CONTRL MY SELF AGAR KOI MISTAKE HUI TOHNPLZ MAAF KARNA...
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<font color="#6633FF">2YEARS LATER
AFTER TANI COMPLETES HER STUDY SHE WENT JODHPUR WITH TAUJI N SHE CHOOSE BUSINESS AS HIS CARRIER...N SHE WELL KNOW FACE TO BUSINESS WOMWN...

IN JODHPUR
tani;goood morning tauji ...😊😊
tauji;good morning tani aaaj itni der kyu kar di...😃😃
tani;woh tauji main aaj office nahi aane wali ghar pe hi kaam karne wali hoon...😊😊
tauji;thick hai baitha jaise tuhmari marziii waise tuhmne woh munbai wali deel ka kya karne ka soacha hai ...i mean tum jaa rahi ho na yaa fir main jau.🤢🤢
tani;wohh tauji main aapko sham ko batati hoo mujhe soachne mein time chahiye...
tauji;as your wish tani jaldi batana mujhe tayariya karni hai ...
tani;thick hai tauji i will ...
tauji;so i have to go now have a good time bye...
n he leaves...👏👏👏

in tanis room
tani looking reys photo maine tuhme bhoolane ki bohot koshish ki rey par nahi kar payi uss din jab haamara breakup hua main toh tooth hi gayi mano kisi ne mera dil mujhse cheen liya bohot koshisho ke baad main tuhme bula payiii par aisa nahi hua tum mere dimaag aur dil se kabhi nahi jaa sakte aur naa hi main tuhme bhula sakti hoon...😭
aur aab pure do saal baad main fir se mumbai aa rahi hoon pata nahi kaise face karongi tuhme pata nahi...hey krishnaji plzzz meri madat karna plzzz.</font>
😭😭

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in evening
tani;tauji main mumbai jaa rahi hoon aur woh bhi kaal aap ari tayariya kr dijiiye...
tauji'goiod tani main arta hun...
tani thick hai tauji byeee

next morning
tani;main aa rahi hoon rey...


in mumbai
swayan place
swayamn sharon now married...
swayam;sharon kaha hon tum tuhme pata hai na aaj hamara dance performance hai aur tum kitna der karogi plzz jaldi aao...
sharron;aaa rahi hoon thoda der aur...
phone ring
swayam;helo
mom;beta main maa bol rahi hooon😛😛
swayam;mom kaise hoo aap...
mom;main thick hoon baita sharon kaisi hai aur tun kaise hooo
swayam;acche hai moom aur dad kaise hai aur tani...
mom;haan wohi baatne ke liye call kiya tha woh kya hai tani aaj munbai aarahi hai mujhe pata nahi tuhme iske bare pata hai yaa nahi par haan maa hun naa iss liye tension hoti hai plzz uss lekeaana...
swayam;par mom aaj aane wali hain thick hai main koshiosh karta hoon aap tension mat lijiye...
😲
sharon;kya hua swayam itne tense kyui ho
swayam;woh tanii aane wali hai aaj...
sharon;wooow its great par tum sad kyu hooo...
swayam,;tani ne mujhe bataya nahi maa ne bataya aur woh dooo sal ke baad aa rayi hai woh hamari shadi main bhi nahi aayi aur tuhme lagta hai k woh yaha aayegiii...
sharon;hhaan tum sach keh rahe ho...par tuhme jana toh hoga na ussse lane ke lie...
swayam;janatoh hoga par kaise jao aaj dance performance hai par manage karonga tun ek kaam karo tum jake rey ko bato ki main kuch time ke baat aaunga k aur haa usse tani ke b are mein mat batana...
sharon;thick hain swayam...

😛😳


soo kaisa tha guys plllzzz comm karna...😉😉</font></font>

<font size="5">Part 2 pg 2</font>
part 3 pg 3
part 4 pg 4

part 5 pg 5
part 6 pg 7
part 7 pg 8
part 8 pg 9
part 9 pg 9
last part pg 10
Edited by Naikravina - 12 years ago

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adi.cutiepie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ravina! its awesome! i liked it very much! update soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear very nice os awesome fantastic plz do cont soon so u back with another os i am very happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept, please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ravina Plz continue it soon dear... I just loved it and wanna Taarey meeting soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super loved it so taani cmg to mumbai plzzz do continue it soon n pm me 😊
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Originally posted by: radhu-taarey

super loved it so taani cmg to mumbai plzzz do continue it soon n pm me 😊

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PART 2

IN MUMBAI

TANI;so finaly m back in mumbai kya karu aab bhai ke paas jao ya fir hotel mein room lo ...i think mujhe room hi ook karna chahiye aur waise bhi bhai ko bhi toh pata nahi hai na ki main aa rahi hooo ...toh chalo tani hotelll...😊😊😊

in hotel
recei;heuyyy madam welcome to ur hotel so may i help u ...
tani;thanx woh i need one room for me for 2 days only...
recp;sure maam 😃😃😃
tani;tanxs

swayam house...
swayam;sharon tani aai hai kya yaha?
sharon;nahi kyu tum gaye the na usse lene nahi milikya...🤢🤢
swayam;nahi milli bihit dhunda usse par...lagta hai nahi aana chahti hamare ghar ...
sharon;its k swayam kuch kaam hoga aa jayegi..
swaam;nahi ayegi main janata hun meri behen hai wohhh😭😭😭
tu bata kaisa raha performance acha tha na .
sharon;nahi hua woh rey ko urgent meeting thi na toh woh nahi aaaya toh sabne cancel ki performance...
swayam;thats not fair.
by the way rey kaisa hai aa gaya na wo london se...
sharon;acha hai jyada baat bhi nahi karta uncle se mili thi woh bhi baat kar rahe the uske bare main chup chap rehta hai hamme usse baat karni chahiye swayam...
swayam;haann tum thick kehti hoon...vaise woh hai kaha...
sharon;as always meeting mein😉😉😉😉😉

IN REYANSH SINGHANIYA MANSION
rdad;rey tuhmari aaj meeting hai woh jodhpur se client aayi hai tuhmse milne aaj zara jaldi office aana ...yeh deal hamare liye bohot zarooori haii🥱🥱
rey;k dad i will be there on time aap chinta mat kijiye aur rahi deal ki baat toh woh sirf meri hogi kyuki rey joh kaam shuru karta hain woh sirf usika hota haiii😃😃😃😃
rdad;pata hai pata hai chal ab main chalta hun tum aa jana byee


IN OFFICE SINGANIYA INDUSTRIS
mr shaik;good morning sir ...
rey;good morning so woh ladki aa gayi kya .
mr shaikh;wahi joh jodhpur se aane wali thi..
mr shaikh ;haan sir woh aapke cabin main baithi hain.
rey;k main abhi aata hun ...
😳
rey;good morning missohh god mujhe iska naam bhi nahi pata may i know ur name pls...
tani;its k m tani shekhawat from jodhpur n u...
rey;shoack🤢🤢
m reyansh singhaniya
tani;shoack😕😕😕
rey;hi tani kaisi ho i mean aha kya kar rahi hooo
tani;wph main main woh yaha deal final karne aayi hoon kya yeh tuhmara office hain...
rey'haan aur tum deal i mean .
tani;confuse ho na main bhi kya main tumse baad main mil sakti hoon kya woh maineek zaroori csll attad karke ati hoon
rey;tani itni badalagyi hai aur swayam ne mujhe bataya kyu nahi ki tani munbai main hai...

👏👏


so guys kaisa tha baki ka baad
main hannn😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome loved it! ravina please change it from os to ss or ff because os means one shot which contains only one part n if you will give 5-7 part then its a short story(ss) n if you are having many parts then fan fiction(ff) n update soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was awsome!!! Plz update next part soon. 😛

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