SS- Saras-Kumud proposal

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have written a short scene of LNV-Badi ma coming to know of saras-kumud affair
Saras sends a message to Kumud through Kumari to meet her in village to propose to her. Kumud goes to meet him. Badi ma sees her going and gets tensed and waits in terrace to check when she will come back.
Kumud showing attitude: Tumne mujhe itni raat ko kyun bhulaya, Kumari ke rahi thi ki tum mujhse kuch zaroori baat karna chahathe ho, jaldi jaldi bolo mujhe ghar jana hai, bahut raat ho chuki hai
Saras: Wohhh mainnn wohhh mainnn
Kumud: Woh main kya?
Saras getting nervous: Wohhh mainnn wohhh mainnn
Kumud angry: Bakre ki tara mainnn mainnn kya karrahe hooo
Saras angry: Bakre ki tarahhh
Kumud attitude: Nahi to kya, tab se to mainnn mainnn karahe ho
Saras angry and goes and stands near a tree.
Meanwhile in VC house
LNV thinking: Guman so gayi, chalo main saras ko jahakar dektha hun, woh so gaya ki nahi
LNV goes to Saras room and only Sunny is sleeping like a log.
LNV: Saras kahan gaya hoga
LNV goes seraching for Saras in house but he is not to be seen.
Meanwhile Kumud trying to pacify saras
Kumud holding her ears: Sorry, please kaho na tumne mujhe yahan kyun bhulaya
Saras angry and goes to another place
Kumud runs behind: Maaf kardo please, main mazak kar rahi thi
Kumud kneels down and folds her hands: Please sorryyy
Saras lifts her up: Kumud main kal Dubai ja raha hoon
Kumud sad but smiles: Accha, all the best.
Saras: Main main tumse yeh kehna chahtha tha ki main yahan se nahi chana chatha
Kumud: Humari ratnagiri ki baat hi aisi hai, jo aata hain uska dil yahi lag jatha hai
LNV goes to terrace searching for saras: saras saras
LNV sees Dukh Ba. Dukhba turns and looks at him.
LNV nervous: Wohhh main saras, saras kamre main nahi hai toh main dek raha tha kahin woh yaha to nahi
Saras pulls her to face him: Mera bhi dil yahin lag gaya hai
Kumud bends her eyes: Matlab
Saras: Matlab matlab "I III I love you" main tumse pyar kartan hun. Aur main jhanta hun ki tum mujse pyar karti ho
Kumud looks at him in disbelief and tears
Saras: Main aya toh tha Vidya kaka ko yeh batane ke liye ki main tumse shaadi nahi kar pahunga, magar agar tumhe manjoor he, toh dubai jane se pehle main Vidya kaka se tumhara hath mangna chahatha hun
Kumud shies and starts leaving
Saras holds her hand: Toh kya main tumhara jawab haan samjhun
Kumud: Hmmm
Kumud runs off and Saras goes behind her smiling in happiness.
Meanwhile LNV and Dukhba conversing
LNV: Main kal ja raha hun Dubai wapas
Dukhba: Aap kabhi aye hi nahi theee
LNV: Kya hum beeti baton ko bhul nahi sakte
Dukhba: Beeti baattt
Dukhba sees Kumud coming inside the gate and Saras a bit behind.
Dukhba: Kumud aur Saras aa gaye
Dukhba goes down to the main hall.
Dukhba: Kumudd, tummm
Kumud comes running and hugs her in happiness and kisses her. Dukhba surprised and embraces her: Kya hua Kumud
Saras bends his head and smiles.
LNV comes down: Saras, tum kaha chale gaye the, main tume kitni der se dhund raha hun
Saras: Woh dad and shiesss
LNV looks at Kumud and Dukhba smiling. Dukhba too is smiling in happiness.
LNV looks at them and understands: Hmmm, tum mujhse kuch kehna chahte ho saras
Kumud looks at saras and LNV and runs off inside.
Dukhba laughs: Kumud waittt and goes off behind her
Saras tries to run off: Good night dad
LNV: Saras rukho wahan
Saras stops.
LNV hugs him: Kya main jo soch raha hun woh sach hain saras
Saras embraces him: Haan dad, main kumud se shaadi karna chahatha hun
LNV smiles in happiness and pulls Saras from embrace: Really, saras kya main joh soch raha hun woh sach hai
Saras nods his head.
LNV hugs him: saras thanks a lot, main bata nahi sakta main kitna kush hun aaj. Main kal savere hi Vidya se tumhari aur Kumud ki shaadi ki baat karunga. Akhirkar tumne mere sapne ko sach kardiya. Main aur Viday samdhi ban jayenge
Guman hidding and hearing this: Laxmi nandan tumhara yeh sapna main kabi sach nahi hone dungi, kabhi nahi
LNV: Chalo saras. jake so jahoo, bahut der ho gayi hai
Edited by myviewprem - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one😳
keep writing more:)

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