~Kyun Yea Ishq Nahi Hai Asan?~ AsYa OS

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"Kyun Mr Khan? Kyun kyun?" Zoya yelled in a raspy pained voice, pulling Asad by his hands, with all her might towards her.


'Kyun Mr Khan? Apke liye yea sab kyun NAKLI hi hai? ASLI kyun nahi??'


Asad turned his face away unable to meet upto Zoya's tears.


'Kyun karte ho ap mujhe inti mohobat Mr Khan? Kyun Kyun?'


'Main. Apse. Mohobat. Nahi. Karta. Miss Farooqi!!' Asad said as he ground his teeth, turning his back on Zoya.

Neither he could see Zoya in that devastated state nor could he bring himself to the level where

he was free from his Woh Actuallys and his horrifying Fears.


'Toh-toh' Zoya hiccuped hard as she gathered herself for the up hill task she was up to.


'Toh-Mr Khan ap kyun gaye thay mujhe airport rokne? Kyun bachaya tha mujhe Bathtub se? Kyun bacha tha uss kabr se?! Kyun Mr Khan? Kyun kyun? Kyun pehnaya thi YEA ANGUTHII Mr Khan?!'


'--Ammi ne kaha tha--' Asad tried to divert the topic.


'Am-Am-hic hic-Amii-Ami ne toh-hic hic--aassaa' Zoya's voice trailed as her legs gave way.


"Zoo-yaaa!!'Asad yelled as he saw Zoya to swoon down.

'Zoo-Yaaa!' Asad shouted as he engulfed Zoya by her waist before her knees could even touch the floor. She had passed out. Asad picked her carefully up in his arms and gently laid her down on his own bed.


'Zoyyyaa?' Panic clear enough in Asad's hushed voice, as he patted Zoya's cheeks carefully. Without a min's haste Asad threw the flowers out of the bed side stand vase and sprinkled the water on Zoya's face.


"Zooya? Zooya?' Asad inquired in the most affectionate voice, warming up her hands.


"Zooya-pani piioo! Abbhii!" Asad ordered as Zoya came around slowly.


"Are you feeling fine? Zoya are you fine? I am calling the doctor right away don't you dare to move!" Asad ordered as he helped Zoya to sit up and recline on the pillows.


Zoya stared at him with a faint smile.


'Kya huya?'


'Kahiye yea sab bhi drama hai! Sab nakli hai!' Tears finding the way up to her beautiful face again, threatening to spill down her flushed red chubby cheeks.


'Zoy-'


'Drama hai toh main apko azzad karti hoon! Abhi issi waqt! Apko aur jhooti concern dikhane

ki koi zarurat nahi hai! Ap iss-'


'Zoyaa SHUT UP!! Bahut huyii Bachkani Harkat!' Asad yelled in anger as he stood up!


"Toh apko yea sab, sab kuch, nakli kyun lagta hai Mr Khan? Kyun?'


'Jo ap--'


'Toh Mr Khan main kya samjhoon? Mere Appi aur Jiju aa chuke hai, aur aap ab bhi Nakli nikaah Nakli sagaaii--aaa' Zoya's head suddenly started to pound violently.

Stress had taken a toll over her.


"Zooyaa!Tum thik ho?" Asad hands cupped instantly her face up.


"Main theek hoon Mr Khan! I want some answers today by now itself!'


"Miss Farooqqi! Calm down now! We can talk later, let me call the doctor! Let me call Ammi first-'


"Main apse baat karoon toh kab karoon Mr Khan? Jab bhi apse baat karna chahti hoon ap mujhe ignore karte ho!" Zoya whimpered, Asad's ignorance hurt her.

Asad looked at her and lowered his gaze at his shoes, he indeed on purpose had been ignoring her, it not only hurt her but himself the most.


'Pehele app sab se jhoot bolte ho taki mere VISA ka problem solve hojaye, which was a very big heinous crime to do, then puri duniya ke samne you propose me in the most unexpected way which makes me feel the luckiest girl in the whole universe and then bwwaaamb News Flash Yea Sab Natak Tha! Mr Khan you broke my heart you know?' Zoya started to cry uncontrollably.


'Zoya-Zoya kuch deir soo jao please' Asad brushed her hair trying to pacify her.


'Nahii!!' Zoya jerked his hands away from her and continued 'Nahi Mr Khan you will have to Answer me today! This seriously doesn't mean ANYTHING to you? SERIOUSLY? Apne puri duniya ke samne yea anguthi pehenai thi Mr Khan, what i saw in your eyes cannot be fake-'


'Zoya-listen to me once please you need to rest for now!' Asad tried to cradle Zoya up in his arms as she kept on protesting.


'Nahi Mr Khan i need some answers a proper answer! Aap naa mujhe jeene dete hai naa mujhe mar--'
'Zooyaa!' Asad yelled before she could finish her stupid blabber.


Zoya's state pained him more than more than a 100 Stabs in his heart.


Brushing her hair affectionately he started 'Tumhe lagta hai yea sab assan hai mere liye?!'


'Darta hoon main Zoya! Kahin-Kahin main-"

'Apko kyun lagta hai ki ap apne abbu ki tarah bann jayngey? Kyun?'


"KYUNKI THEHRA TOH MAIN UNI KA HI BETA NAAA!!' Asad shouted at the top of his voice as he stood up from the bed anger filling his veins up.


Phew! That was easy!


Zoya blinked a coupled of times faster just to clam herself down. She felt tiny tremors go down her spine. Slowly she realized she was shaking.


Few moments later Asad realized what he had done. Scratching the bridge of his nose Asad fumbled a sorry. His eyes trailed towards Zoya

She looked paler than before. Worse of all she was shivering! He has scared her big time.


Shit Shit Shit!


Asad mentally cursed himself with all the swears he could remember.

This is the reason why Zoya this is the reason why!


"Zoya Zoya! Am sorry! Its okay!'Asad said as he knelt beside her.


'Its fine shhh' Asad cradled Zoya up in his embrace as her tears drenched his shirt.

After a while Zoya pulled herself back breaking the embrace, leaving a shocked Asad behind.


"Apko lagta hai main apko chor kar chali jaungi Mr Khan?' Zoya innocent eyes teared his up. She had caught him off guard.


Asad forced on a smile as he said 'Main kahin Janab Rashid Ahmed Khan ki tarah tumhe bhi-'


Before he could complete Zoya had taken him in her arms. She cut him off by saying 'Ap apke abbu ki tarah bikul nahi hai Asad,bilkul bhi nahi!!'


'Apko apke pyaar par yakeen nahi hai?Mujhe par bhi nahi?" Zoya said as she looked deep into his brown eyes.


Asad cupped Zoya's face and kissed her forehead.


"Hain Zoya!' Asad chuckled 'Hain tab hi toh beintehaan mohobaat karta hoon meri musibaat se!' Asad tucked her hair behind her ear as he smiled a dented one.

WAIT! Did he just say he loved his musibat? HELL NOO I AM NOT A MUSIBAATT!!!


'MIISSSTTEERRR KKHAAANNN HOW DARE YOU CALL ME A MUSSIIBAAATT' Zoya yelled as Asad grinned an ear to ear.


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1113 words.


Because i wanted to write. 🤣 🤣

Crap i know. 🤣 🤣 🤣

LIKE + COMMENT cause i wrote and posted it an hour 🤣

Rotten Tomatoes and Smelly Shoes! I know I know 🤣


❤️ Ankie

For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳


A friendly reminder, KARAN SINGH GROVER will always be MY ASAD AHMED KHAN and SURBHI JYOTI as ZOYA FAROOQI in my FICTIONS, rest is up to you readers, You can imagine anybody my leads to be as, I assure you I will not have a problem with that. 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mey bht umeedein lekar ye OS parhne aii thi, but nothing can change the fact that you are an ULTIMATE Mangalpuri Aatma...
a crazy notion that Asad will only melt up when Zoya is in some kinda danger. 😆😆
well this works all the time to make Asad confess.. 👏


P.s- and gosh you made zoya drink the vase water 🤣🤣
Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome .
I loved the ending .

I really really wish that such a scene is shown in the show . But I know asad miyaa will never exceed hisWoh actually... in the show ...

Good job , ankie ... ⭐️
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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and your love for Mangalpur continues... 😆🤣 Zoya getting panic attacks and Asad chillauing Zoyaaa Zoyaaa ...oh have i read that before ????

but i loveddd it ...i so love this kinds of sequence when Asad is going all sorry sorry to Zoya and wiping her tears...aweee B-E-A-U-T-I-P-H-O-O-L 😳

and the last ka Midas golden touch was MA 😳 museebat 😆
Edited by RiDz_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well written. 👏
They should replace you with one of the writers. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is a BIG BIG BIG BREADTHE OF FRESH AIR after d so called drama ITA😆


u u knw wen i read kyun bathtub se bachaya, mein gutterland mein chali gayi for a few secs😆😆



pura ka pura scene imagine kar liya aur dil mast maula ho gaya😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: xNinalove

Well written. 👏

They should replace you with one of the writers. 😉


this is CRAP 🤣


i write better! Read other works of mine! you will enjoy! now i am cursing myself ki why i have posted this 🤣 ahhaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written Ankie 👍🏼 Good job. Only when something happens to Zoya, Mr Khan is forced to open his mouth otherwise to you can't expect anything from him other than "Woh actually." And these days it is another thing he chants, "ye nakli hai." 😆

Thank you for this 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya solid OS likh diya ankie
round of applause to you *clapsclapsclaps*
first you made me all heartsore, then you brought a smile to our faces, thnks for writing...

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