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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaili_Mg

but why if possible plzzz update fhtmm plzzz



umm dear, will thing over this... don't worry about that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love

part-2


When geet was 8 she lost her memory, after then she didn't remember anything…. She never met with maan… actually maan never went in the village…. Though geet met with dadi sometimes whenever dadi went to Hoshiyarpur on the death anniversary on maan's dada ji… but annie n maa never accompanied her….. cause first they did the puja in khurana mansion and then dadi went to village….. geet totally forget about maan but maan remember her , he has some photos of her of their childhood but geet had none……. Sometimes dadi also tell him about the village and all….

******

He went inside and was mesmerized by the view…. She was looking breathtaking beautiful in red color suit with chudidaar…. Open curly hairs but her hairs were covered with her chiffon dupatta….



He hated this tradition in their family…… uff he placed his hand on his heart stopping it from beating so fast…. But seems his heart is not in his control….. but next minute he gulped his saliva seeing the expressions on her face which she gave after seeing him….. those expressions were not so good, and he knew that, now he is going to blast again but by someone else this time….. he smiled nervously…… well Man Singh Khurana is nervous………….. of course….. today is his engagement and Yash's wedding….. geet's elder brother…..

Well he was kind of blushing- blushing but she went away glaring at him for coming late….. uff he thought today he gone from his sherni….. aahaan…. Vulnerable sherni………… oh man!... today I'll become mad surely….. he sighed deeply and went to anwesha,,,,,

Maan- hey annie.. maan called her….. annie at once threw herself in his arms hugging him and maan also reciprocate the hug…..

Annie- bhai…. Missed you…. We were waiting for you from so long….

Maan-yeah, I know that…. Aur isliye I was scolded a long before…. Annie giggled for his state…. Poor boy was scolded by dadi maa…..

Annie-bhai, dadi maa ne jayada to nahi daanta na? she asked to him making so innocent face but he knew that she is not so innocent….. in a few seconds he became restless cause his mishit went away from there without talking to him, now that is not tolerable for a man like Maan singh khurana……. Uff his eyes were moving left to right in a search for her but she is not there…… just then annie spoke up….

"what happened bhai? Kisey dhoond rahe ho?"

Maan came out from his lost state… "umm…. Wo teri bhab…" but he stopped before he feel embarrass in front of his younger sister or before she pull his leg….. but annie got his hint and teased him…..

Annie-bhabhi…. You are searching bhabhi… bhai? She asked standing in front of him…..

Maan-nahi….. nahi toh…. I am asking about yash's wife. He tried to escape….

Annie-oh…. Meera bhabhi….. but I thought you wants to meet my hone wali bhabhi…. Saying so she started to walk but maan held her hand…. "arey annie… you were saying something… ummm yeah… meeting and all…. " annie smirked…. "nahi bhai…. Maine kab aise kaha… haan… you wants to meet meera bhabhi na… … wait mai check karti hu where is she?" she was laughing inside at her brother and maan was like a total majnu….

"ohh…… it's ok… I'll meet to meera later" his face fell off after saying so…. Oh poor boy! Annie went on tip toe and whispered in his ears…. "waise bhabhi hall ke pichhey wale room mein hai , ready ho rahi hai" and went away from there leaving maan shocked , why annie is saying that she is getting ready,,, just now I have seen her, she was all ready… she was looking so beautiful…. May be she wants to wear something else….. and then a sudden smiled tucked on his lips, he put his hand in his pocket then felt shy and looked down…….

He went away from there for spending some time alone in peace though he wants to meet her badly but now circumstances are like he can't….

actually there is tradition in their family that girl & boy can't meet with each other before the engagement but only on engagement day itself… otherwise they can meet before a day ago or after engagement……….. he was walking and walking and reached to terrace where no one was present….


Just before some hours ago, weather was like hot oven and now suddenly sun has been set or clouds covered the sun…. the wind was so cool , so soothing for his body… his all tiredness went away in a small span of time sitting alone on the terrace feeling the cool breeze……

he take out the ring box from his pocket and lay down on the cot….. he took the ring in his hand and smiled again remembering their first meeting how unusual their meeting was….!

*******(PAST)********

The clouds were pouring water on the land in a form of rain…. The sky was Dark grey color and the so fast and heavy wind was blowing that day…. And by his luck that day his car went down, it was not starting and later he found out the tyre was also punctured… he was frustrated on his car…. In morning, he was so happy that his song was became so popular in a upcoming movie…. Everyone was humming that song…. So soft and touchy…..

It was around 7 pm but because of weather it was like 10 at night…. He felt tired while walking but then he entered in a park and walked towards the bench that is under a under…. For saving himself from the rain , he thought to sit on that…..he can see that another person is also there…. …

he didn't give any thought further on the person and sat on the bench with a thud, actually he was angry , first on his car that ditched him in mid way, then on not finding nay taxi and sone par suhaga….. the weather…..

When he sat on the bench he heard someone shout on him…. He turned his neck in the direction of person….. "aaram se nahi baith sakte kya?" anger went through in his veins hearing that a girl is shouting on him….. "meri marzi, mai kaise bhi baithu…" he spoke up in his rude tone …. He can see her face sky provide the light for him for mere seconds only…. A slim girl, fair skin tone , totally wet……

he heard her reply to him when she was searching something bending down in grass….. "none deny you to sit here but at least thoda aaraam se" well he was also so frustrated because of his misery, he didn't what he is doing ? neither she didn't know what she is doing? She was also so tensed in her own misery…

"listen I have no personal issues with you so please don't say anything further" he told to her…. She ignored him and continued her search…. The lines of worry were on her forehead and little tears in her eyes but because of rain they were hidden and who was there to see them except of maan and maan was also not in a state that he would solve others problem…..

After like 10-15 mins…. When his anger subsided, he took a deep breath and looked in her direction…. She was still searching something in that wet grass… he was confused what she is searching….. he was in a dilemma that should I ask to her or not? Ask or not? Actually he was asking to himself but suddenly he didn't know that why he questioned her…..

"ummm….. kya dhhoond rahi ho?" he asked in his very calmed tone which actually sooth her mind and she replied at once….. "wo parso yaha meri ring gir gayi thi…. Par abhi mil hi nahi rahi hai" while searching she replied….. "it will be here somewhere…. Don't worry mil jayegi" he tried to use those words which give her hope and strength for searching the ring….. he can see that she nodded in yes when he spoke up, she was agree with him…. It'll be here somewhere….. "let me help you" he offered the help…. And accompanied her in searching mission…. After lots of trying he sat on the bench and the girl also……

"how was the ring? I mean gold, silver or diamond" he asked to her…. Actually he didn't want to ask this question from her but still question came out from his mouth itself…. She looked at him, he knew that she is looking at him in the dark also… actually he sensed the movement of her head….. he cursed to himself for asking this question…. But he felt calmed when she replied to him….

" it was diamond ring, actually solitaire was there on the top of the ring and " her voice choked…. "the ring was around 4 lakh"

The past scene courtesy to the 92.7 Big fm…. Credit goes to Radio stories…. I have tried to narrate something about the childhood…… you were confuse na that's y….

If you like it then Please press Like and leave Comments…..

Love ya, Neha





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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: neha5058




ufff mai mar jawan gurmeet ko dekh kar...
thank u ... ummmuuuaaahhh



Yeh mere liye tha ke Guru ke liye 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058




haaye me drooling...
thank u so much for the pic...



He he he me too drooling on Him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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V nice update...bt why itna chotusa? awww blushing maan ..anie naughty...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058




haaye me drooling...
thank u so much for the pic...



He he he me too drooling on Him
😉 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update ..loved it ..but past confusing me .both meet each before engagement day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058



umm dear, will thing over this... don't worry about that...



It was your Best story plzz try to Update it 😭 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Awe Annie teasing maan...
Lovely flash back of maaneet meeting...
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! Past n present well incorporated! update soon

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