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Posted: 12 years ago

"Then what? Don't tell me you can't feed him neither! After all just look at you, you hardly looks as if you are eating enough food for yourself to survive!" Mrs Rawte.

"I'm afraid to say Riya, but you seemed to be a very bad mother! And if you decide not to marry my son, I'll do everything so that Aryan be snatched from you!" Mrs Rawte said in a cold voice.

Riya held to Aryan in a tight hug, "Nahin you cant do such things!"

"Yes I can, I can see that you aren't looking well after my grandson. Besides you are a career woman, when will you have time to look after Aryan?!" Mrs Rawte added.

Mrs Rawte never had any intention of separating Riya and Aryan, despite everything she could see that Riya did look well after Aryan, but she had to make Riya agree for the marriage in anyway she could, even if it was emotional blackmail. She was very afraid that Riya would leave this house taking Aryan from her. She didn't want to lose her only grandson.

Riya stared with fear at Mrs Rawte. She had never realized that she could really lose Aryan one day. What if they really took him from her. Riya wasn't even related to Aryan, while these people were the blood relations of Aryan. Riya couldn't lose Aryan, what will Gia do when she returns and finds this.

"Think well and give me your answer!" Mrs Rawte said, bent to give a peck on Aryan's forehead and went away, happily because she could see that her threat had worked on Riya.

Riya, on her side, was very worried now. What must she do now? How can she marry Arjun? What about all her dreams? She made Aryan sleep and put him back on the bed. She went to remove a letter from her suitcase, this was the only last thing she had from Gia. She opened up the letter and read it again.

"Dear Riya,

I'm going away. Please don't hate me too much. But after what happened, after what he did to me, I cant seem to look at Aryan at all. I do love Aryan, he's my baby, the evidence of mine and Shree. That's why I brought him to this world, but for the time being, I cant bring myself to look at him, everytime I look at him, I feel like I see Shree everytime I see him! I feel so much depressed, and I don't know what to do!

This is better if I just go away. I don't know how long it will take me, but when I feel very much ready, I'll come back when I feel better.

Please don't try to contact Shree or anyone in his family.

Till then please look at Aryan!

Gia"

Riya still had tears in her eyes, no matter how many times she read that letter, she still missed Gia. She had done her best to look after Aryan, and now after so many sacrifices, she couldn't let them take Aryan away. She finally decided, if she had no choice till the wedding day, then she'd marry Arjun. The rest she'll cope and deal with when the time came. She didn't know what Arjun will say or do when he came to know about her decision.

Arjun would probably glare at her, insult her and more, but she didn't have any choice.

Back to the ETF's conference office

Chotu was briefing everyone about the new case.

"One hour ago, we had a shooting in a shopping mall! Three persons were injured, but hopefully no one died! This is the third time this week that we have a shooting in shopping malls! What's more strange, is that no one died till now, they were just injured!" Chotu concluded.

"Yes, it seems that either the people are trying to scare us or they are just amateurs," Arjun said entering the conference room.

"Ok then, Arjun and Chotu go and investigate on the crime scene, while me and Ankita will go and take the precious case details from the police station!" Rathore ordered.

"But I.." Ankita started to say, she didn't want to go with Rathore, but one glare at Rathore she didn't continue. This time the glare was a professional one, she knew she had to keep her craziness out of this.

So all went away to investigate as Rathore's order.

Rathore and Ankita were alone in the SUV. Ankita hated silence, but one look at Rathore's profile, she knew that she didn't have any courage to try any conversation. So she decided to put on the radio, and just at that time an old song was playing.

main kyaa karun raam mujhe buddha mil gayaa
haay, haay buddha mil gayaa

main gudiyaa hasin meri morani si chaal hai
sar mein safed usake dada ji sa baal hai
bigadega har kaam mujhe buddha mil gayaa
main kyaa karun raam mujhe buddha mil gayaa...

Ankita couldn't stop herself from bursting into laughter on hearing this song. She stole one glance at Rathore's profile, he was seething with anger, and he immediately switched the channel. But to his bad luck, another song was playing there also,

sari umar mai is jiwan ki

daud me bhaga dauda

sari umar mai is jiwan ki

daud me bhaga dauda

ab kis kam ka

are ab kis kam ka

ab kis kam ka goli maro

budha ho gaya ghoda

Enough was enough for Rathore, he angrily switched off the radio.

"Ab aap radio se kyun naraz ho?" Ankita said jokingly.

"Truth is always bittersweet!"Ankita added in a serious voice.


Precap: No precap😆😉

So how was it?

Sorry for any spelling mistakes😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
feeling sad for ria
dont know where gia is but ria has to struugle a lot for aryan
ratod is funny
why ankita thinks rathod is old
poor guy
thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
amaizng part Tina

completely hilarious

loved it

i m ROFLing thinking of rathore's imagination

n here ria is undergoing n emotional trauma

haila ...his mother was actually blackmailing her

Ria is caught in her own world of lies , i guess

n ddat too unintentionally

waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one..
Ankita and Rathod's takkar:p kamaal hai
Riya decided to marry Arjun..
Gia's letter...had Shree left her?
Songs...totally perfect for the situation
Well written..
Beautiful one:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Tina ...

Amazing update ...just way too gud !!
Ankita and rathore ...buddha mil gaya ...OMG😆😆😆
Yeh Mrs Rawte toh bahut chalu hain yaar ...aur yeh Gia aur Shree kahan mazee kar rahe hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! u updated! thanx.u made my day.

hilarious. rathor ka reaction i was.🤣 loved it. awesome.cont soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the Ankita Rathod part, Rathod imagining Shree tied in chains :O 🤣🤣
Poor Riya, feeling bad for her...she is doing SO much for her friend, well actually i dunno whether to be sad at her or to laugh at the irony as Gia is enjoying out there, somewhere with Shree :|
Buddha milgaya part was awesome🤣🤣
Awesome update, contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di
pm bi kr diya kro lol
my goodness
me want anki pls
lol buddha
arjun bhaiya amazing
kidnap shree omg
arjun bro mum hehe
lalita pawar
haye sngs rofl
lov it di
love u
tc
hugs..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome posts
so funny and a laugh riot
I guess, a first FF when Rathod, Rawte are doing so much comedy!

Riya's concern and Mrs Rawte's blackmailing were good scenes!

loved it

cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Tina,

This is what is called treading water, or staying afloat while not moving in any direction. The story has not got anywhere much, and as for these cases, they are almost always just a prop for the main romantic story line, in this case a double barrelled one, even leaving out Shree and Gia.I suppose this stasis is because you have not yet decided which way you want to go.

What I liked was your clever adaptation, to eavesdroppers, of the very famous opening line of the Jane Austen classic, Pride and Prejudice "It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife". I am a very great fan of Jane Austen, and so I saw that line with a start of delighted recognition.

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 10
Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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