VIRMAN ss : ACCIDENTALLY IN LOVE...new update 01.02.14@pg 122 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the beginning!! Can't wait to find out what will happen between them!! It is so good that I can't wait for the next update!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry guys!!!!something's wrong with my private messenger.😕am not being able to send pm's.i have been trying since two hrs ago.you'll receive pm's as soon as the problem resolves.plz forgive me.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved chapter 2!! OMG it is getting good!! Ver interesting!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daydreamer9


cut the crap drama-queen.*rolling eyes*
what will u do being here before d pm?you don't need the pm?ok,won't pm u.😛then don't come crying to me wanting the pm(which will contain the update😆).

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Haww...to others you say ''don't keep your hopes up" so politely and to me DRAMA QUEEN? I was just trying to be nice *OK fine I agree I am a Drama Queen*

The update is in the PM? How did I forget that? * EMBARRASSED*

OK , I take it back, I DO want the PM! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! I AM BEGGING IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!!! PLEASE DISHA!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shimer55

Loved chapter 2!! OMG it is getting good!! Ver interesting!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the good work!



thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Menzena


Haww...to others you say ''don't keep your hopes up" so politely and to me DRAMA QUEEN? I was just trying to be nice *OK fine I agree I am a Drama Queen*

The update is in the PM? How did I forget that? * EMBARRASSED*

OK , I take it back, I DO want the PM! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! I AM BEGGING IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!!! PLEASE DISHA!!




i won't be nice to you.you're special.😛and again...STOP!!!!i'm updating chap 3 right here.let's see if you can be the first.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello..!!

Just read chapter one..!! and it sounds amazinggg!! Loving the concept, so he loves/likes her and she hates him 😆 FOBLLL!!

and AHAHAHH poor Mayaaa..!! gets what she deserves you can say 😛 loving Mannu's "slap list"😆 please add me to your list..??😳

-Luv Pari!
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Posted: 12 years ago

i can't pm the update.don't know why.but i don't want you guys to wait for this stupid story.so am posting it here.the next chapter will be pm-ed to your in-boxes.i just copy paste the likes from the previous chapter and that becomes my pm list.so if u want to read chap 4...you need to like this post.ok.bye for now.happy reading!!!!





you'll need to listen to the song

beautiful monster by ne-yo



Chapter 3



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2 hrs back


"So that's all for today. Your projects have been graded. I'll publish your grades tomorrow." professor

Khan announced.

"Who cares for grades!!!The torturous day is over" Jeevi chirped.

"That's my line." I stuck out my tongue at her.

"I'm only saying it before you" she mirrored my action.

"I want ice-cream!!!!l" I pulled her by her arm but she was looking behind me.i followed her gaze and found Virat n his gang stealing glances of me occasionally and whispering amid themselves.

Something definitely was fishy. But I ignored the feeling. Who cares!!!

I want ice-cream and I want it now. The rest of the world can go to hell.

"jeevi come on. Let's go." I had to drag her out. Why so curious about everything.

"Mannu…something is seriously wrong." she and her sixth sense. I rolled my eyes.

"Whatever!!!!i want ice-cream. Let's go." how many times will I have to say that!!!

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mmm……..pure bliss. I had just put the first spoonful of my favorite caramel combo in my mouth.

"Friends and fans…. I'd like to do something." I heard his announcement.

Ufff……that show off. Don't know how and why everybody admire him.

Every eye was turned at once toward his direction. Except mine's of course. I took the second spoonful n put it in my mouth. Jeevi seemed to be forgotten to eat. How can anyone think of anything beyond ice-cream.

"Mannu…he's coming here." I turned back and he was there. Right in front of me. I could smell his after shave.

"Hey beautiful." his voice so soft n husky. What is he doing?

"What do you want?" What's wrong with him.

"I need to tell you …. no actually…."he turned back"… I need to tell everyone something" he started circling me. Seriously….what's wrong with him!!!

I felt his warm breath on my neck. It's ticklish. I was about to turn to yell at him when he started……..

All my life and the hereafter……

I've never seen, seen one like you (he came in front of me n nodded his head in disapproval)


You're a knife, sharp and deadly

And it's me that you cut into (he smirked)

But I don't mind, in fact, I like it (he started circling me again)

Though I'm terrified, (he looked at me with mock horror on his face)

I'm turned on but scared of you…


She's a monster, beautiful monster

Beautiful monster but I don't mind

And I need her, said I need her

Beautiful monster but I don't mind
No, I don't mind
(I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind) (3)

No, I don't mind

I didn't know how to react. What the hell is he singing???!!!!

(He held my hand and pulled me close)
In her eyes, there's love and fire

And my heart, she's burning through

But I don't mind, in fact, I like it

Though I'm terrified,

I'm turned on but scared of you (he let me go)


She's a monster, beautiful monster

Beautiful monster but I don't mind

And I need her, said I need her

Beautiful monster but I don't mind
And I need her, said I need her

Beautiful monster

But I don't mind (I don't mind, I don't I don't mind)

No, I don't mind


Playing with my heart
(he pouted)
And she's playing with my mind

And I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind

No, I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind (3)

(I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind)

And I don't mind (I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind)

Said I don't mind
(I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind)
(2)

Beautiful monster


She's a monster, beautiful monster

Beautiful monster but I don't mind

And I need her, said I need her

Beautiful monster but I don't mind
And I need her, said I need her

Beautiful monster But I don't mind (I don't mind, I don't I don't mind)

No, I don't mind (Said I don't mind, I don't, I don't mind)(3)

No, I don't mind.(he winked at me)

By the end of the song I was fuming in anger. And next thing he said made me lose all the sanity I was left with.

"You're beautiful and monstrous. But I don't mind you being my girl. So will you be my girlfriend?" he held out his hand for me to take it. i looked around only to find everybody trying to hold their laughter.

I took my cup from the counter and emptied the nearly untouched icecream-turned-into-milkshake on his head. Then took jeevika's and did the same.

This is the lamest and most idiotic proposal in the history of proposal. Yeah he said I'm beautiful. But monster??? how dare he???

He most definitely needs to listen to some love songs. Somebody please get him some CD's.

All I was hearing is the gasping of the students. I walked out from the caf and went to the washroom and splashed water on my face constantly.

I was burning in rage. How dare he???About fifteen minutes later Jeevi came in and told me I had been called by the principal.

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"Manvi" Virat's voice brought me back to present. "sir is asking you something" how can he remain so cool. Does nothing affect him??

"I'm sorry sir. I shouldn't have done that." but I'm not regretting what I did. Virat Idiotic Vadhera deserved that. It's just I don't wanna be in trouble. I wanna go home now.

"This is the first time I've got any complain against you two.so I'm not giving you any punishment. But next time….."you won't get a cookie. Sorry. Couldn't help it. I thought he'll say this.

We're not kids. Next time he won't be alive to get punished.

"That's all." And that was our cue to leave.

Remember the messy wet hair? Now you can guess the reason.😉



p.s.plz hit like if you want pm for the nxt chapter.comments will make me write further.the more the number of comments will be the sooner the next update will be.


love u guys!!!muahhh

Edited by daydreamer9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow am the 1st one to comment...feels great 😃

and this update was just hilarious ...👍🏼
first of alll manvi's thought are just soo much fun to read...
at the end the cookie thing was just bang on 😆
and what she did to virat was with the ice cream i just loved it her reaction beautiful but how can he call me a monster ??😆
am sure that was a dare for him but still it was fun...
awesome update...👏
waiting for the next one ...do pm me😃
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

Hello..!!


Just read chapter one..!! and it sounds amazinggg!! Loving the concept, so he loves/likes her and she hates him 😆 FOBLLL!!

and AHAHAHH poor Mayaaa..!! gets what she deserves you can say 😛 loving Mannu's "slap list"😆 please add me to your list..??😳

-Luv Pari!



thanks.😃who told u he likes her😛.my pm list will change after every chapter.so u need to read each chapter to get pm for the next .😊

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