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Posted: 19 years ago
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Can i help t and d with my version of njkn using current track so they can have their bread and butter…

My version

Jassi as drama teacher (I want to change it to math but I cant) and pregnant. Working very hard trying to get use to with her new life. She is in touch with her parents and nandu by letters by post box address.

Here armaan hates jassi and malika adds more fuel to it.

Cj back to London or US (I don't care)

Raj silent viewer………..

After 10 years…

Armaan and malika more as friend and armaan wants fresh start with malika in nanital as he feels he has lots his life in nanital.

Cj comes back to India and wants to see rohan (purbs brother)

Jassi(neha) in nanital, everyone loves her(yaa) and has son….(ashish)……….

Do you want me to continue?????????? Let me know I am free at work nothing to do

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Cj goes to father rodrex (sp?) school to get detail about rohan. Fathers give address and update him on rohan that now rohan is not alone any more as he is taken care by good friend of purab. Rohan is very smart, intelligent and going to start business school this year. Cj is very impress. He goes to given address by father and our jassi opens the door……………

Jassi and cj both are surprised. Jassi explain her part of story how she became neha. She takes cj out side where rohan is playing with small boy. When that boy sees neha hugs her saying mummy. Jassi says he is my ashish (armaan's son) cj is not little taken back and thinking what he did 10 years back was right or wrong.

Cj goes to church for confession and he was saying his part…father comes out and says he did very big mistake as purab never wanted jassi to be in this state. He wanted her to be happy all her life and yadi yadi yaada

Cj is in fix how to explain this to jassi………….

Its night Armaan and malika are in car driving to nanital.

Cj goes to jassi he was trying very hard to explain what he did that night.. But was not able to… jassi says whatever happened happened its her past and let it be like that. Armaan is her past ………..

Armaan car breaks down…smoke are coming out its night and he is not able to fix his car. So they decide to walk they sees one small house. Armaan rings the bell malika is behind…. Here cj is trying to explain his part and some one rings the bell so he opens the door and freeze he is not able to speak any word so our jassi come who is at the door cj? And armaan and jassi face to face………. frezee

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! i am loving it... go on...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NOOO BITTTT!!! Why do I feel like Armaan's going to have a heart attack b/c he sees CJ in Jassi's house with HIS Aashish thinking it's CJ's son from that night in Nainital!?!? Please continue & make it happy!!! 😭

Siddhi

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Posted: 19 years ago
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After few minutes armaan hold malika's hand gives very dirty comments on cj and jassi's relation and goes. Cj tries to stop armaan but jassi stops cj.

Next day armaan car fixed and he is driving around in his car but thinking about jassi and cj and he hits a boy (ashish) he takes him to hospital and from his school bag he finds neha's name and phone number so calls her and gives update on ashish. Armaan gets flash back how he and jassi discussed about this name. And he see jassi looking for room number xxx its ashish room………. She runs inside and hugs him my beta how are you yadi yadi yaada. Ok got one trouble report in our software so now I have to go but now cj has to confess and malika has to blackout …… and a-j-a togather bye
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please please let it have a happy ending and do continue 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good one.But not for TD's brains.They dont believe in taking the story on right tracks.

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