AsYa OS: Saugaat- Part 1

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Hi Friends,

I am Harshu, and I have been a silent member of the forum for quite some time now, so I don't think anyone here would know me. I have been following the show regularly for the past few weeks, and liking the chemistry between the lead pair.

So today, I couldn't sleep, so I thought I'd try writing something, and this was what I ended up with. It is very short, and kinda stupid. Please forgive me, as I am writing fiction after about a year. I do intend to write a part 2, but since I have this amazing track record of starting FFs and abandoning them after a couple of parts, I shan't promise anything.

Also, I am not sure if I would be able to send PMs if and when I update, so if you guys would like to follow this thread, please comment on it so that you'll see the thread on My Last 10 Topics bar on the right. I shall update on the title when I update the story.

So, here we go..Please hit like and share your comments with me.

Concept Courtesy: Cup-Of-Chai

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Saugaat


Asad Ahmed Khan at the ladies' store.

It must be quite a spectacle to those who knew him closely, thought Asad as he scanned the store for something that would catch his eye. If his very presence in the store was not appalling enough, the reason for his being there was even more so. He was there to buy a gift for Ms. Farooqui of all people, and that too, for their Mehfil-e-Saugaat function.

Nakli Mehfil-e-Saugaat, he reminded himself.

It was ridiculous, the number of times he had to remind himself that his engagement with Zoya was fake.

Not real.

Unreal, that was what it felt though, and it made a hell lot of difference. And why he felt so, he knew not. Or did he?

Well, the question could wait for now, thought Asad, as he had more pressing matters at hand, the gift he was supposed to buy now for instance. Asad was absolutely clueless as to what to buy, what Ms. Farooqui would like. Of course, he could have just bought something random, or even sent one of his office boys to get something. After all, this was a fake engagement. But somehow, it did not feel right. For some reason, he felt the need to personally go and get something for her, something she would like, something she would cherish. And here he was, in a ladies' store, the last place anyone would think him to be in.

His eyes continued to scan the ridiculously pink territory that the store was, when something caught his eye. It reminded him of something. Something that belonged to her, yet he liked to keep, strangely enough.

It was not an exact copy though, but close enough. That should do, thought Asad as he asked the sales girl to pack it, and proceeded to pay, quite satisfied with his choice.

...to be contd.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome! Continue this soon! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting! Wonder wat caught his eyes for Zoya! Please Continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue jaldi jaldi jaldi please
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😃 Interesting, you have to continue, I am curious
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooo awesome start! Do continue soon :)
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Earrings, haina? 😊
Up-date soon...👏
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OOO, nice start!
I'm enjoying it
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luvllly !! asad in a LADIES STORE! sounds wierd n sweeet as welll!!
continue !!
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Perfect! Continue soon! PM me :))) Thank youu

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