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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
congrats on new thread...
yepieee waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

@SHRUTS...finally!...finally miling update :p


Seriously an update after 2 days 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 25

The two pieces that r supposed to be together missing each other.. still the calmness that stilled their heard was long lasting. The tranquil the soul missed since the last time they were together.

The shenai's tune had faded. The couples probably moved to their rooms. Rahul & Niti had their cute little marriage ceremony. Mk & Geet still stood in peace. It was probably around 1am.. she turned into his arms & looked at him. His eyes was closed.. a peaceful smile adoring his lips. She raised hand to touch his cheek.. then stopped mid way. He turned his cheek to rest in her palm.
Der hogai hain, why don't u catch up for some sleep she spoke reluctantly pulling her hand away
umm he said taking her in his embrace.
She began to get restless now with their closeness. It was just the moment.. the impuissance.. the pain but now the storm seemed to have subsided. She looked down & stepped back. The coldness he could instantly feel. He knew she was back in her shell. Neither did he want to cross that line. He looked dearly .. longingly as he walked to the door. She just went to the wash room changed into her night dress & slipped into the quilt on the floor.
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Next day after a small ceremony in the church Pari & Mark left for their honey moon. Rahul & Niti too decided to have a small honey-moon near by. Azaan & Sam couldn't get themselves to speak to Mk..neither could he.

The return drive was just them. She took her bag & came down after getting a warm good bye from Pari's mom. She settled her bag in the back.
Mk ' well its just us
she was her reversed self again. She smiled softly & sat next to him.
He looked at her for few sec before starting. She didn't want to notice, he sighed & reached to her seat belt, she jumped back & looked at him bit startled
seat belt he said as a matter of fact.
She panicked & did the seat belt herself. He wondered how she could cut off after all that they shared. He had placed his most naked emotions infront of her.. it placed her in a special space where he never had any one. Not even Sam.
She sat aloof looking outside the window. The first couple of hrs just passed in silence. She was not making any effort. She was just being herself. The self she had become. The emotions she felt for him was different, unknown. She just left it there. The warmth in his arms was very comforting to the lost soul.. but she refused to feel it. She was clear from deep with in her conscious, nothing mattered. Her taming self discipline helped her a lot not to ponder over her such matters or feel anything further. Her mind was so focused she couldn't think of anyone else in her life, not even a passing feel.
Yes Mk did give her a different feel but it was limited to different feel thats it.
He tried to speak to her now & then but she avoided & just replied in umm.. After some time, she closed her eyes pretending to sleep. Half way through they had to stop over because of bad weather. He had informed her abt the approaching snow storm .. but it was not supposed to be so bad. They took a break at the service area. Couple of hrs & they should be back on road. .. she wore her jacket, cap & gloves. He slipped into his black leather jacket covering his head with a black cap. His hard warm arm slipped around her, tugged her sideways against a rock-solid shoulder as they walked in, after securely locking the car. Mk ordered a coffee for himself while Geet took green tea. She kept looking out through the glass walls. The snow was slowly covering the entire place. Everything was beautifully covered that spotless white blanket .. pure.
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The storm had subsided people had began to leave. She just sat by the window enjoying the sight.. it looked spectacular. Mk had finished his coffee. He took his smoke.. the snow wet his cigarette every time he was about to light it. It seemed funny how he had to discard it & pick up another one.. & still did the same mistake. A tiny smile curved her mouth for a moment, then faded as she averted gaze else where. A smile he could kill for. The feel that touched his heart was so soothing. He ditched the plan smoking.. & just spun in the bliss of white flakes.

He kicked the heaps of snow.. he peeped through t window at her, she too just for the moment wanted to feel that iciness chill her. She joined him.. spinning around spreading her arms. A chill ran down her spine when she felt his freezing finger slip snow into her jacket. She jumped crazily.. like a small kid.. wiggling.. getting mad at him.. making baby angry face.. warning him a revenge.. before she grabbed a snowball self & came running behind him.
He laughed holding her wrist not letting her way out.. & she fought back like a kid.. both for them.. did actually.. Mk had never thought so before, but he definitely did now & not because of the way she looked moreover she looked wrecked soaked in snow as of now! As their face came inches close fighting.. turning around, panting. His breath fanning her face.. dam he wanted to kiss her.. his gaze rested on her lips..
He inwardly snorted at the last thought.. kiss her my foot!!! he wanted to do a hell of a lot more than that. He looked back at her hazels.. twinkling. A deep realization she would be impossible to reach in any sense of the word sunk in. She had this wall built around herself & he suspected any people ever past it to the girl barricaded within. Only such situation made her emerge from that fortress & gave him the glimpse of the real her!!! ..he sighed in his thought lost in those hazels..
But now he has seen her & loved wat he has seen.. making him forget his barriers.
His gaze went back to her quivering lips.. he leaned closer with his heart beat raising..
"Mk" she gasped & innocently looked at him.. he rested his head breathlessly on her forehead
"why don't u marry Sam, I know u don't believe in vows but..." she held his hand & lead to his heart.. "u love her" "it will make u believe it"
he looked at her lovingly.. her hand in his over his heart.. her every word
"Maan"
Now that we are close, he squeezed her closer, I think you should call me by my first name.
She stood frozen blankly staring at his face. "M-A-A-N" resonating in her
Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 24 PREV NEXT PART 26 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
LoL m first :o :p tukke se :p :p again hehehehhehehe

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the last word! 'maan' this word feels soo soo sooo soo sothing isnt it...hehe finally she came to know he is Maan but will wait for the tym when she cums to know he is HER Maan :) i guess the time's near! Is it so?

Awe! The both stood their bringing a relief in each other's lonliness! Soothing one another with the warmth of their touch! Hushh! The feel to be felt by someone who can actually ease u is so much releaving! Isnt it!

But what I loved the most was Maan's sudden change in behaviour towards Geet, like he was bond to force himself n her away coz he felt he was commited for sumone! For Sam!
Though he wasnt! I still rmmbr! U did mentioned he shiverd with the touch when u mentioned about Sam fr the very frst tym! Isnt it?

N now! The snow fight n the desires I guess she fought n played like this after years! The feel of that feeling is simply amazing hehe I loved how Maan actually tried to start a convo n Geet monoslybs talks :p LoL...n then the cutie lil snow fight...awee I love them two

ab suno mere na cramps se jaan jaa ri hai or wait ni kar skta! Aap update do jaldi jaldi...plzzz
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrates muskaan for new thread... As usual update was good i like d way how geet controls her emotions how ever d situation iz whether its marriage cermonies, people taunts, or being around maan... But sumwhere i feel bad dat geet ka pura haq hai her choti badi khushi per.., but its all b'cos of maan she has 2 live in a shell... Now d big question iz vl geet forgive maan after knwing he iz her husband?
Edited by Hina.khanxxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautiful...
Both are so much lost in each other's warmth and trying to find solace in the other...
Maan did confide his deepest emotions to her... ofcourse he is yet to realize the feeling that makes him confide to her...
And on the other hand, Geet doesnt want to let the barrier fall.. she knows wat she shares with MK is special, but yet she could never be back to her own self...
And again a glimpse of real Geet during the snowfall... and Maan completely lost in her...
And then comes the revelation... MK is MAAN and Geet;s world just stands still now...
Beautiful emotions and loved the update...
now how am i supposed to wait for the next...
please continue soon

Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
congratulation for new thread
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
maan confessed his emotion, break down in front of geet but y, he felt so ease to confide his emotions to geet
when how easily geet understand his pain , but still the barriers r there
during the snow fall and their playing
loved maaneet moments
that is so beautiful, divine something spl
real geet and MK witnessed it and then the one of the most imp revelation
MK is MAAN and geet froze
and now we r also froze
can't wait any more
update soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
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Amazing update ...loved it ..I hate to see geet control her emotions for everything she deserve .
ohhh finally his first name she know waiting for her reaction .
Edited by --Fairy-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Finally she knew his name
i m waiting eagerly to know her reaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
finally geet meet maan
just maan

its still long way to go before
she meet maan singh khurana
aur he is a step away

please tell this soon

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