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The show has been great til now ... I really appreciate the creatives for moving the show the way they have been moving it so far ...
But suddenly I feel the scenes look a little too disconnected .
Yday's show Mein they shifted all of a sudden to the engagement . It was weird . Asad says he is gonna be firm and the next scene is the engagement . It's supposed to be funny , Looks like they wanted to show / tell us that ammi had her way . But the lousy editing with a break Inbetween ruined it .
As audiences we wanna see the emotional turmoil of asad and zoya .But what we get is disconnected scenes .
Even today was weird . There is a scene in asad's room , then we see zoya sleeping and the dinner . Very weird !
The asad who looked totally smitten by zoya while he places a ring in her finger was actually cutting her off while she was talking abt Taveer . I thought asad was an introvert and didn't have multiple personality disorder !
Screenplay and editing really need to improve ! I know it's difficult to churn out 20 episodes a month, but four lions has given us great shows so the expectations are high :) I'm sure they are capable of giving us better stuff specially at such a crucial point of the show ... I.e when the leads are falling for each other and realising it :)
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Anupamaa
