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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome ff... I really like the title... nice

game idea was good...

hope rey finds the truth...

loved it... update asap

thnx for pm

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

if itz kriyaansh at d end...

then toh pakka keep pm'ing me...!!

story is gud so far...but plzz make krias entry fasst!!

cont soon

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome update...
Luvd it...!!!!
De game is vry gud...
Nw brng de entry of kriya fast...cant w8...
Thnx 4 de pm

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

awesome update.. hope rey realizes his mistake through this game.. sharon had to c n experience a lot.. she had herself in shel coz of her fear to get hurt loved swayam's reply to it.. loved ashi-boys part were they continuously ask ashi whether she like swayam r s she jealous of sharon.. loved her ans n sharon's little prank.. viha part was painful.. vicky now realized his mistake but very late in it.. feeling bad for neha.. hope rey understands kria soon.. waiting for next part now that exams r over soon pm me d next part..

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

nice 1 .. n thanxx for the pm ... when will kriya come ??? and one request zyaada taarey scenes mat diya karo ... is chappy me nahi the lekin kisi aur me the ... i don't remember specifically but plese ...tolerate nahi kiya jata ... gussa aa jata hai ... 😊

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

thnx for the pm...really interesting story...waiting for the next update 😃

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awesome ff 👏

thanx for pm...

looking forward for the nxt update..

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ashwini

@kria_reyd3

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

part 4

Phir turn ata he the Riyansh Singhahiya pr.
All girls-hm . . . . .Tani jo puchna he puchlo. Accha mauka he.
Boys-ab to rey phasa . . .ab kaun bachayega hmare rey ko
Swyam-shut up,guyz.
Tani-nhi mujhe kuch nhi puchna he.I trust u rey.mujhe pta he ap mere sath hmesha rhenge.aur mujhe kbhi chodkr bhi nhi jayenge.so,no questions . . . .
All girls-kya,tani.aisa kaise chalega.machli apne ap se jal me phasi he aur 2m use jane de rhi ho. not fair . . .
Tani-nhi, sach me nhi. (rey ye sab dekh rha hota he)
Rey-(in serious tone)pr maine 2mse kuch chipaya he tani . . .
Tani-kya hua rey, kya chipaya he apne mujhse
Rey-its about kriya. (ye sunkr all r shocked)
Tani-plz, rey mujhe nhi sunana he,mujhe itna pta he,vo apka past thi aur me present hu . . Agar past bura ho to use bhul jana chahiye.so,plz.
Rey-ha tani pr phir bhi me kuch kehna chahta hu.
me kbhi kriya ke bare me baat nhi krta,uska jikrh nhi krta, iska matlb ye nhi he me use puri tarh se bhul gya hu.
(ab hmari tani mam serious ho jati he.hona bhi chahiye hey na guyz . .) Me jb clg se lautkr ghar jata hu,akele me rehta hu,to vo kriya ke words bar bar yaad ate he. Ke akhir galti kya thi meri, itna bura to kbhi nhi tha me.
pr yakin mano tani tumhare sath bitaya hua hr pal its precious day fr me. Aisa nhi he maine koshish nhi ki uski yado ko mitane ki pr hr bar har jata hu .pta nhi kyu.(silently crying)
Uske photos,uski cheeze abhi bhi mere pas he,cupboard ek kone me he . . . Pr ykin mano tani,jb maine 2mhe prupose kiya tha,tb maine soch liya tha ki vo cheeze ab mere sath nhi rahegi, us din maine unhe kchre ke dibbe me phek diya,pr pta nhi mujhe kya ho gya tha,tani us kchare ke dibbese nikalkr phir se vo cheeze vhi ush jagah pr rakhdi. Maine un cheezo ko kbhi hat nhi lagaya pr me unhe mita bhi nhi paya.
Shayad isliye ke kuch bate,kuch sawal aj bhi he mere aur kriya ke beach me,aj bhi kuch he hmare beach jisne mujhe usase jode rkha he.sach khu to agar aj bhi kriya mere samne ayi to me kmjor pd jaunga.
Me 2mse ye bate kbhi chupana nhi chahta tha . . .so,thats why aj bta rha hu.
Tani-mujhe nhi pta rey ke mujhe apse kya kehna chahiye pr me appr trust krti hu.
Rey-thanx, tani.
(ye sb hone ke bad party khtm ho jati he aur sb apne ghar laut jate he apne dil me ek nayi kashmksh lekar . . . .)
In sharon's place ,
Sharon-thanx, for dropping me swyam. (swyam ka dhyan to khi aur hi hota he.)
Sharon-swyam
Swyam-ha, 2mne kuch kha.sry,maine kuch suna nhi.
Sharon-kya hua swyam,kiske bare me soch rhe ho.
Swyam-nhi kisike bare me nhi. . . .
Sharon-tani aur rey ke relationship ke bare me na. Swyam 2m rey ko jante ho vo kabhi bhi tani ko chodkr nhi jayega.
kriya aur rey ke beach me jo bhi hua usme rey ki koi galti nhi thi. Aur 2m rey pr itna trust to kr hi skte ho ki vo tani ka dil kbhi nhi todega.
Swyam-i know that sharon, pr aj jo hua . . . . .
Sharon-swyam, agar hum kisise beintahaa pyar kre aur vo hume beach raste me chodkr chala jaye vo bhi bina reason diye to kuch yadee,gile-shikve rehna ye obvious baat he.
rey aur tani ke relationship ko itna time nhi mila he ki vo ek dusre ko samaj ske,jan ske. Pr vaqt ke sath sath rey bhi sambhal jayega swyam . . . Aur vaise bhi us kriya ke liye rey roye . . .kbhi nhi. Jisne uske pyar ko nhi smjha,use nhi samjha, uske liye rona not fair na . . .
She is just a selfish girl.
Swyam-bas, sharon.
Sharon-what.
Swyam-(annoyingly)maine kha bas sharon.kriya ke bare me aur ek word nhi. Plz.
i kow that rey tumhara best friend he.pr jiske bare me 2m bura bol rhi ho vo bhi meri best friend he.
Sharon-(angrily)ha,vo best friend jisne jane se pehle apne friend ko batana jaruri bhi nhi samjha. bs chali gyi.
Swyam-(Calmly) I know that vo galat hai pr itni nhi ki me use hate krne lagu. Aur rahi baat Rey ki, mujhe pata hai vo kaisa hai n I fully trust on him .But,me Kriya ko bhi bahot acchi tarah se janta hu, vo fame ko pane ke liye kbhi Rey ka use nhi kr sakti.

Sharon-(Angrily)Agar tum Kriya ki side le rhe ho to obviously Rey galat hua. Right ...
Swyam-Nhi, Sharon.it just that, aj sirf hum Rey ki side dekh rhe hai , kya pta Kriya ka sach kya hai,uske suddenly jane ki vajah kya hai. Agar uska Rey se revenge leneka irada hota to vo rukti, Dazzler's ko ye dikhane ke liye ke vo weaklings se haar gye hai.
sahron-(Calmiy) Shayad tum jo keh rhe ho vo sahi hai,pr ab iska kya fayda ab rey apne life me move on kr chuka hai. Aur shayad tum bhool rhe ho ,ki Tani tumhari behen hai.
Swyam- Me nhi bhoola hu Sharon, yaad hai tum log hmesha puchte the ke me itna insecure kyu rehta hu Tani aue Rey ke relationship ko lekar... isliye nhi ki Tani meri behen hai ya phir isliye nhi ki Rey pr trust nhi hai, Me isi baat se darta hu,ke Rey ki life ka sabse imp. part ,uski life Kriya agar vaps aagayi to... to Tani ka kya hoga... in tino ki life ek kashmksh banke reh jayegi Sharon.
Rey aur Tani ke relationship ke bare me jb mujhe pta chala tab maine Kriya ko call,msg krne ki bahot koshish ki thi,ki ye jankr to Kriya mere msgs ka ans. kregi.pr aisa nhi hua...Aur nahi uska call aaya. pr Rey ko muskurata hua dekhkr jayada khushi hui mujhe.lga ki ab Rey ke life me Kriya ke liye koi jagah nhi he. vo khush he.
But,I was wrong...totally wrog.Aj bhi Kriya use affect krti hai.Us pal se dar lagta hai jab zindagi in tinoko amne samne layegi.kya hoga Sharon us vaqt.
Sharon- Swyam. aisa nhi hoga aur hua bhi to hum sambal lenge.
hey na.
Swyam- Hope so...
Sharon-Mujhe laga ke Kriya ka chapter hum sabke life se hmesha ke liye close hogaya.
Swyam- Kriya ko kaise bhul sakte hai Sharon
THE KRIYA GHAI...One who challenges the team DAZZLERS,one who made weakling team.
one who proved that she is the best dancer,meri bahot acchi dost MY BEST FRIEND... U know that Sharon hmne ek dusre se kbhi apni personal life share nhi ki. pr hmare beach ek alag si bonding thi yar...
Agar khi me sad hota to cheer up krne ke liye hmesha vha Kriya hoti. phir chahe vo uska reason jane ya na jane.she is always there for me.
uske jane ke baad aisa nhi hai call nhi kiya Sharon...bahot call kiye ,hr roj krta hu,Dehradun ke pate pr msgs bhi bheje ,pr kuch nhi hua Sharon ... Bad me ek friend se pta chala ,unhone deharadun bahot mahine pehle chod diya.pr phir bhi hr bar usi pte pr msgs bhejta hu.is hope ke sath ki kbhi to vo msgs kriya tk pahuchenge. Mujhe nhi pta vo use milte bhi hai ya nhi,pr phir bhi...
uski phikr hoti hai Sharon Really missin her. (Silently crying)
Sharon-I m sorry swyam.
Swyam-No,u don't.
Sharon-Mujhe nhi pta tha tum itne miss krte ho Kriya ko
Swyam- weakling team ka hr member krta hai Sharon...
ye hm sbka decision tha ki kriya ka nam hm sb jb sath hone to kbhi nhi liya jayega.ye sirf hmne Rey ki liye kiya...
Sharon-pr
Swyam-Bye,Sharon
Sharon-Sw...
Swyam-Mujhe thdi der akela rehna hai.So,plz... (Aur Sharon vaha se chali jati hai.)
Swyam (In car)- Sharon,sometimes we decide stop loving someone,not just becoz they don't love us.Becoz we find that they are more happier without us...
Kriya ke bare me Rey ko shayad aisa hi lagta hai.Rey ne ye man liya hai ke Kriya uske bagair bahot khush hai.
Sharon (in mind)- m sorry Swyam,Kriya ke bare me bura bolkr shayad maine tumhe hurt kr diya.m really sorry...
ye bat maine kisise nhi ki thi pr kuch to tha MISS KRIPA GHAI me.my one of the best compititor...pr ha acchi to thi vo , enemy nhi keh skti use ,gussa isliye tha kyunki vo acchi thi ,loyal thi phir chahe vo dance ho ,dosti ho ya phir dushmani me...
Rey (in mind) - m sorry tani, Aj shayad maine tumhe hurt kiya.
pr tumhare liye,ye janana bahot jaruri tha,tumne kbhi pucha nhi,pr me nhi chahta ke me tumhe dhoke me rakhu. pr itne trust kro mujpr ,Tani ke Kriya ne jo mere sath kiya vo me tumhare sath kbhi nhi karunga. aur Kriya ke liye to tumhe kbhi nhi chodunga.
(Guyz,chill abhi rey gussa he to aisa hi bolega.uski bato ko seriously mat lo.)

Tani (in mind) - Kriya... is naam se ab dar lag rha hai Rey.bahot jyada dar lag rha hai.Kbhi socha hi nhi, uske bare me,pr aj apne jo bhi kha...vo sunkr ek ajeeb si halchal machi hai dil me.
Ap pr bahot trust krti hu Rey,pr phir bhi... bahot swal hai,aur uwska jawab koi nhi hai...
.Shayad khi na khi mera pyar kum pd rha he,isliye,ap use nhi bhula pa rhe he...(Guyz, iski bato pr to bilkul bhi mat dhyan do.)

Vicky (in mind) -Aj shayad me bahot jyada bol gya,pr mujhe lga,Neha ye sunkr gussa kregi,royegi,pr uska ye reaction dekhkr m shock...
Neha (in mind) - Babu, aj bahot badi baat boldo,meri ek galti ki vajah se tum hmare beach ke vo sare pal kaise bhul gye.. Gussa krte krte tum kb mujhe for granted lene lage, tumhe samj hi nhi aaya.
pr ab me tumhe ye sab bilkul nhi krne dungi, tum chahte ho na me tumse dur rahu, me rahuni, aur khush rahungi...
Nil- Aj maine ye kya keh diya yar simmi se. Ab sb log mujhe chidayenge...Vicky,bharat,amar .in sb ko to kuch kamdhanda hi nhi he iske siva...shit yar... pta nhi simi ke aakho me dekhte hi mujhe kya ho gaya tha.
Simi- o...my God...o my God aj to khushi ke mare me mar hi jaungi.(Blushes) o...shit me aur nil...nli aur me...

Note- ab ap phir se bologe tani aue rey vale part ke bare to me pehle se hi bata deti hu.ke vo part jaruri hai meri aage ki kahani ke liye...n agar updte accha lga hoga to comment jarur krna...

Edited by kria_reyd3 - 12 years ago

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

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unres

yipppie...me first to comment

finally lga ki yeh ek kriyaansh ff he😆

very nice😃

the way u expressed their feelings was very very very good👍🏼

awww...swayam is such a sweet friend

pls. is part ki tarha kriyaansh thoda sa hi sahi pr rakho...tarrey😒, actually their names should not be together, so it is taani and rey together is untolerable

want a kr reunion fast

pls update soon 😊

and i didnt got a pm for this

Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 12 years ago

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ashwini

@kria_reyd3

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi
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unres
yipppie...me first to comment
finally lga ki yeh ek kriyaansh ff he😆
very nice😃
the way u expressed their feelings was very very very good👍🏼
awww...swayam is such a sweet friend
pls. is part ki tarha kriyaansh thoda sa hi sahi pr rakho...tarrey😒, actually their names should not be together, so it is taani and rey together is untolerable
want a kr reunion fast
pls update soon 😊
and i didnt got a pm for this