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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: Artii159
Haye sharam karo tum dono...😆

im besharam nd i knw it😉🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

mannat ko liya hai kis baat ki sharam yaar 😆

Bechari Maanvi, usse toh pata hi nahi uski Beti zinda hai, aur tum dono usse lene ki baat kar rahe ho...Aul mujhe Vilika de lahe ho..😛😉😆🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey guys, m bck wid a new update, thnks a lot guyz,,,I hope u guyz lyk dis update...Enjoy..Extremely sorry 4 da delay...Keertu Beta, Kulsum, Anjali, Shruthi, Samu_khamkar, Marooshmalik...m sorry if m missin ne1...dis update is 4 u all...hope u lyk it..

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 39...

~Recap~

Viraat continued kissing her neck, shoulder, collar bone, while Maanvi smiled with teary eyes. Both were standing in the rain, of desire and love, not thinking about anything else, just lost in each other's arms.

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VirMan were still lost in each others arms, when suddenly something fell down with a thud. They both opened their eyes and pulled apart, looking at each other shockingly. Viraat looked down, at her hands, where she was holding a photo frame. It was his photo frame, which she came running for in this heavy rain, which she was holding so tightly, when she was hugging him.

Maanvi: (looking down) Woh...

Viraat, without listening to her words, turned around and walked away, leaving her alone in the rain. Maanvi smiles a little, remembering their passionate hug and followed him inside the house. When she reached where Viraat was, she heard him saying something.

Viraat: Kya? Par...?

Maanvi was looking at him confusedly, his back was facing her.

Maanvi: Woh, main..

Viraat turned towards her with blood shot red eyes. Maanvi gulped hard and looked down as she noticed he was talking on the phone.

Viren: (on the other side of the phone) Haan Viraat, aur kuch nahi ho sakhta hai, pura traffic jam hai, tujhe wahi kahin rukna hoga. Aas paas mein koi na koi hotel hoga, tu wahi ruk jaa.
Viraat: (running his hands on his wet hair) Theek hai main yahin kahin hotel mein ruk jaunga, aap bas...
Viren: Tu fikar mat kar, main teri Mannat ka pura khayal rahunga. Tu bas apni chinta kar.
Viraat: Thank You Bhai, aap bhi apna khayal rakhna. Bye.
Viren: Bye.

Viraat hanged up the phone, without looking at Maanvi, he turned around towards the door to leave.

Maanvi: Vi..Viraat...

Viraat stopped in his track, without turning back to her.

Viraat: What?
Maanvi: (stammers) Wo..woh..ya..yahan..koi..ho..hotel nahi..nahi hai...tu..tum, tum chaho, toh, yahan..
Viraat: (rudely) Mujhe aapki madat ki koi zarurat nahi hai Ms. Chaudhary. I can manage.
Maanvi: Ma..main janti hun...par ba..bahar...

Viraat was about to say something, when Maanvi's phone started ringing. She turned and picked up her phone from the table, after looking at Viraat once.

Maanvi: Ha..haan Di, kahan ho aap?
Jeevika: Mannu, main yahan phas gayi hun, mujhe nahi lagta main aaj ghar aa paungi.
Maanvi: Par aap ho kahan?
Jeevika: Ma..main, woh..main ek hotel mein hun, tu meri chinta mat kar..
Maanvi: Di aapne kuch khaya?
Jeevika: Haan Mannu, tune?
Maanvi: Main..(looking at Viraat) main, kha, kha lungi Di.
Jeevika: Haan tu kha lena. Mannu tu darna mat, mujhe pata hai tujhe andhere se aur lighting se bahut dar lagta hai, par...(worriedly) tu sambhal legi na?
Maanvi: Haan, haan Di, main sambhal lungi.
Jeevika: Bahar bahut barish ho rahi hai aur traffic jam bhi hai, isliye main nahi aa sakhti, tu apna khayal rakhna.
Maanvi: (smiles) Haan Di, aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aur Virika ka bhi.

Viraat smiled a little and turned around towards Maanvi as she said 'Virika'.

Jeevika: (smiles) Theek hai, chal bye.
Maanvi: Bye Di.

Maanvi hang up the phone and looked at a smiling Viraat, who was looking at Virika's picture, which was hanging on the wall.

Viraat: (smiles with teary eyes) Yeh..Yeh, Virika...Virika hai?
Maanvi: (smiles) Haan..

Viraat came back to his sense and looked up at Maanvi. He turned around yet again, to leave, but stopped.

Maanvi: (tears filled her eyes) Please mat jao. Di..Di bhi nahi hai,.please.

Viraat thought a little.

Viraat: Theek hai Ms. Chaudhary.

Maanvi smiled with tears in her eyes. He only agreed because he know how scared Maanvi is of darkness and lighting.

Maanvi: (looking at him) Tum..tumhare kap..kapde bheege huye hain, main..main tumhare liye kuch kapde laati hun.

Without listening to him, Maanvi walked away with the photo frame of his in her hands, towards her room. She smiled as wide as she can with tears as she entered the room. She walked towards her wardrobe and opened it, she placed the photo frame inside. Taking out a bag, she walked towards her bed and placed the bag on the bed. Tears rolled down as she opened the bag, which was filled with his stuff, his clothes, his perfumes, which Jeevika got for her, when they left the Vadhera Mansion. She smiled and hugged his clothes close to her heart.

Maanvi: Pichle teen saal se main tumhare har ek chiz ko apne sine se(close to my heart) lagaye rakha tha Viraat, par aaj mujhe pata chala, tumhari chizon ko sine se lagane mein mujhe woh sukun nahi mila, jo aaj tumhe laga kar mila hai. In teen saalon mein main kaise jee rahi thi yeh shayad tum kabhi samjh nahi paoge, par aaj ek lamha, jab tumne mujhe apne gale se lagaya, uske aage toh yeh teen saal ka dard bhi koi dard nahi laga. Yeh lamha kuch pal ka hi sahi, par please, in kuch lamho mein bhi mujhe chodh kar mat jaana, teen saal se jeene ki koshish kar rahi thi, tumse dur reh kar, par agar ab gaye, toh jee nahi paungi. (tears streaming down her cheeks) Main mar jaungi tumhare bagair Partner, mar jaungi main.

Maanvi came back to her sense as she heard Viraat's voice, she immediately wiped her tears and ran towards Viraat, with his clothes in her hands.

Maanvi: Sorry, woh main...(handing him the clothes) yeh, kapde.
Viraat: (sternly) Mujhe aapki ehsaan nahi chahiye Ms. Chaudhary, main yahan reh raha hun iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki main aapki har ek baat maanunga, so please cut it off.
Maanvi: (controlling her tears) Viraat please, isse pahenlo, warna tumhe thand lag jaye gi.
Viraat: Mujhe nahi...
Maanvi: Please...

Viraat took a deep breath and took the clothes away from her hands. He looked at the clothes confusedly.

Viraat: (to himself) Yeh toh mere kapde jaise lag rahe hai, jo mera favorite tha, main isse paglon ki tarah dhundh raha tha, yeh yahan kaise..?
Maanvi: (looking down) Woh, yeh tumhare hi kapde hai...woh..
Viraat: (rolled his eyes) I'm not interested, will you please tell me, change kahan karna hai.

Maanvi was really hurt at his tone, but she smiled at him and pointed towards her room. Viraat without saying anything, walked towards the room, with his clothes in his hands. He entered the room and looked around, it was the same way as their,,sorry, his room is decorated, in the Vadhera Mansion. He walked towards the bedside, and saw their wedding picture, and beside that was a photo frame of Mannat...(confused?) actually, the picture of her ultrasound sonogram scans, which she got done, when she was seven months pregnant.
Viraat picked up the photo frame and smiled with tears.

Viraat: Ab yeh sab se kya hoga, jab thi tab tumne uski kadar nahi ki Maanvi, ab kyun uske liye tadap rahi ho?

He placed the frame back on the table which was beside the bed and walked inside the bathroom.

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Virika: (cutely) Mama, Uncle so gaye.
Viren: (smiles) Nahi Beta, main yahin hun.
Mannat: (smiles/cutely) Bale Papa, aapko neendi nahi aa lahi kya? (Bade Papa, aren't you feeling sleepy?)

It was 11:00 pm, Mannat and Virika were lying on the bed, and Jeevika was patting them to sleep. Viren, who was standing at the door way, walked in towards the bed, he looked at Jeevika, who looked away from him.

Viren: (smiles) Aa toh rahi hai Beta, par Bade Papa aapko good night kahe bina kaise so sakhte hain?
Mannat: Oh ho, main toh bhul hi gayi thi Bale Papa.
Viren: Koi baat nahi Mannu...
Mannat: (frowns) Bale Papa Mannat...mujhe Mannu nahi pasand.

Jeevika looked at Mannat, her hate towards her name, Mannu, was way to much.

Jeevika: (to herself) Yeh Mannu naam se itna nafrat kyun karti hai? Kahin Mannat ko pata toh nahi hai, ki uski Maa ka naam bhi Mannu hai?

Jeevika looked up at Viren, questioningly.

Viren: Woh..um sorry Princess...
Virika: (confused) Mannat, tum Uncle ko Bale Papa kyun bulati ho?
Mannat: (cutely) Mujhe nahi pata, Papa ne kaha tha bulane ko.
Virika: (excitedly) Tumhale paas Papa bhi hai? (You have a Father as well?)

Jeevika and Viren looked at each other.

Mannat: (smiles) Haan, mele paach Papa bhi hai, aul Bale Papa bhi. Aul bhi bahut saale log hai, Dadi, Bua Dadi, Bale Dadaji, Chachu Dadu, Chachi Dadi, Chlok Chachu..dheel dheel hain. (Yes, I have a Dad, Bade Papa, and many more people. Dadi, Bua Dadi, Bade Dadaji, Chachu Dadu, Chachi Dadi, Shlok Chachu...I have so many people with me.)
Virika: (smiles widely) Wow, itne saale log, (frowns) mele paas toh silf Mama hai aur Maasi Maa. (Wow, so many people, I only have my Mom and Maasi Maa.)
Mannat: (smiles) Maachi Maa bhi hai?
Virika: Haan.
Mannat: Aul Papa? Woh nahi hai? (And Dad? You don't have your Dad with you?)
Virika: (sadly) Nahi, Papa nahi hai.

Viren and Jeevika looked at Virika with tears in their eyes. Viren wanted to hug his Daughter and tell her that he is her Dad.

Viren: (teary eyes) Main hun na Virika.

Jeevika looked at Viren, while Virika looked at her confusedly. He walked to the other side of the bed and sat down beside Mannat.

Viren: (smiles) Beta, kisne kaha ki aapke paas Papa nahi hai? Main hun na..
Virika: (cutely) Aap?
Viren: Haan, main..main aapka Papa hun Baby.
Virika: (smiles widely) Sachi?

Viren nodded and smiled at his Angel. Virika gave him a big smile and jumped on his lap, hugging him.

Virika: Papa.

Viren hugged her tightly as tears rolled down his eyes. Jeevika looked away and smiled with tears in her eyes. This was the second thing that she ever wanted, that she always prayed for.

Mannat: (innocently) Maachi Maa, jaiche Bale Papa Vilika Didi ke Papa hai, waiche aap bhi mele Mama ho? (Maasi Maa, If Bade Papa is Virika Di's Dad, then are you my Mom?)

Jeevika looked at Mannat with tears in her eyes. She felt really bad for this cute, little, innocent girl. She felt guilty for hiding the truth away from her Baby Sister.

Jeevika: Nahi Beta..main aapki Mama nahi hun. Aapki Mama koi aur hai.
Mannat: (looking at her with a smile) Aap janti ho unhe?
Jeevika: (smiles through her tears) Haan.
Mannat: (cutely) Woh kahan hai, woh mujhche milne kyun nahi aati? Kya woh mujhche pyaal nahi kalti? (Where is she? Why doesn't she come to meet me? Doesn't she love me?)
Jeevika: (cups her cheeks in her hands) Woh aapse bahut pyaar karti hai Beta, bahut zyada pyaar. Woh aapke baare mein din bhar sochti hai, hamesha aapko miss karti hai. Bas woh aapke paas aa nahi sakhti.

Viren was a little confused, he was just looking Jeevika.

Mannat: (innocently) Kyun?
Jeevika: (trying to control her cries) Kyun ki...Kyun ki aapki Maasi Maa ne unse kuch chupaya hai. Par sirf uske liye, aapki Maasi Maa appki Mama ko udaas nahi dekh sakhti.
Mannat: (smiles) Mujhe unse milna hai, kya aap meli madat kaloge? (I want to meet her, will you help me?)
Viren: Mannat, bas. Papa ne kya kaha tha aapse.
Mannat: (frowns) Oh, solly, main bhul gayi thi. (sadly) Solly Maachi Maa, main ab nahi puchungi Mama ke baale mein. (Oh, sorry, I forgot. Sorry Maasi Maa, I will not ask anything about my Mom now.)
Viren: (smiles) Good Girl, chalo ab so jao. Good night my Princess. (kisses on Mannat's forehead) Good night my Angel. (kisses on Virika's forehead)

Jeevika, Mannat, and Virika smiled.

Mannat: Good Night Bale Papa.
Virika: Good Night..Papa.

Viren smiled widely and walked to the other side of the room.

Jeevika: (smiles at them) Chalo so jao, aakhein band.
Mannat: (pouts) Maachi Maa, mujhe loli bina neendi nahi aati, aap loli gaoge? (Maasi Maa, I can't sleep without listening to the lullabies. Can you sing one for me?)
Jeevika: (smiles) Of course Princess.

Jeevika sang the lullaby for Mannat and Virika. Within no time, both went into a deep slumber. Jeevika lied down, thinking about her day, her meeting with Viren after three long years. She closed her eyes and all the flashback came in her mind, flashback of the day when she left the Vadhera Mansion...her fight with Viren.

~Flashback..3 Years Back~

Jeevika was packing the bag, as Viren just entered the room. He walked towards Jeevika confusedly.

Viren: Jeevika yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?

Jeevika just looked at him once with teary eyes and went back to her previous work.

Viren: (sternly) Jeevika main tumse kuch puch raha hun.
Jeevika: (wipes her tears/turns towards Viren) Koi zarurat nahi hai Viren Ji, aapko jo kehna tha aapne kaha, aur maine suna. Isske aage mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai.
Viren: Jeevika dekho hum baat kar sakhte hain, samjha sakhte hai dono ko.
Jeevika: Dono ko nahi Viren Ji, aapke Bhai ko. Samjhna usse hai, meri Bahen ko nahi.
Viren: Jeevika dekho...
Jeevika: (tears rolling down her cheeks) Dekhne aur sunne ko aur reh kya gaya hai Viren Ji? Aapke Bhai ne meri Bahen ki khushi usse chinn li.
Viren: Bas Jeevika, in sab mein mere Bhai ka koi kasoor nahi hai. Sirf usko ilzaam mat do, Maanvi ne jo kiya...
Jeevika: (shouts at him angrily/with tears) Kya kiya Maanvi ne? Kya kiya Viren Ji meri Bahen ne?
Viren: Jeevika...
Jeevika: (turns her back towards him) Mujhe meri Bahen par pura yakeen hai, woh aisa kabhi nahi kar sakhti. Arey karna toh kya woh aisa kuch soch bhi nahi sakhti hai.
Viren: (walks in front of her) Main janta hun Jeevika, par Viraat ne jo dekha, usse hum galat toh nahi keh sakhte na, usne toh apni aakhon se, aapne kaano se sab dekha aur suna hai, aise kaise usse jhuta sabit karde?
Jeevika: Toh aapke kehne ka matlab hai ki in sab mein sirf aur sirf meri Bahen ka kasoor hai? Aapki Saali ka? (looking at him in disgust) Itni asaani se aapne maan liya Viren Ji?
Viren: Aisa nahi hai.
Jeevika: (crying) Aisa hi hai. Aapko meri Bahen galat lagti hai aur aapka Bhai sahi. Yeh jante huye ki Meri Mannu aisa kabhi nahi kar sakhti, fir bhi aapne apne Bhai ki baat maani. Aur maane ge bhi kyun na, khoon ka rishta jo hai aap dono ka. (wipes her tears) Par ek baat yaad rakhna Mr. Viren Vadhera, jis din...jis din aapko sachchai ka pata chalega na, uss din bahut der ho jaiye gi.

Jeevika zipped her bag, picked it up and was about to leave when Viren spoke.

Viren: (pleadingly) Jeevika please, mat jao.
Jeevika: (without turning back) Meri Bahen se toh uska Baccha chinn hi liya hai aapke Bhai ne, kya ussko uski Bahen se bhi dur karna chahte ho aap?
Viren: (teary eyes) Please Jeevika, Virika ko tumhari zarurat hai.

Viren thought that Jeevika is leaving alone with Maanvi.

Jeevika: (turns towards him) Aapko kisne kaha ki main Virika ko yahan chodh kar jaungi? (tears streaming down her cheeks) Jo apne Bhai ke liye meri Bahen ko doshi karar de sakhta hai, woh ussi Bhai ke liye meri Beti ko bhi chodh sakhta tha.

Viren was just looking at her shockedly. Jeevika just turned around with teary eyes and left the room.

~Flashback Ends...~

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~VirMan...Chaudhary House~

Maanvi was in Jeevika's room, while Viraat was in Maanvi's room, all fresh and cleaned. They had their dinner in their room and went to sleep. But sleep was far far away from them. Maanvi was just lying on the bed, thinking about Viraat, while Viraat was just looking at their wedding picture, which was placed beside the bed. Maanvi sat up on the bed, worriedly, sweating as the light turned off, then there was a loud thunder which scared her to the core. Viraat also sat up on the bed and looked around, the loud thunder worried him as well, but not for him, but for her.

Viraat: (looking around) Yeh light ko kya hua? Maanvi ko toh andhere se dar lagta hai...

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Maanvi: Di, aap kahan ho? Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.

Maanvi was shivering, sweating, and sobbing, while hugging the pillow close to her.

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Viraat: Isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Woh meri kuch nahi lagti.

Viraat laid back down on the bed and closed his eyes.

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Maanvi was damn scared, she covered herself with the duvet, head to toe, while sobbing softly.

Maanvi: Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai..Vir..Viraat...mujhe..

Her breath stopped as she felt someones hand circling around her waist. She recognized that touch, her lips curved into a sweet smile. She pulled the duvet down and looked at that person. It was none other than her Husband, Viraat. After fighting with his mind and heart, he came to his Wife as his heart won over his mind. Maanvi's eyes sparkled as she smiled looking at him. Viraat was lost in her beauty, he moved some of the hair strands away from her face, wiped her teards and kissed on her forehead, leaving Maanvi shocked yet happy. She closed her eyes and hid her face in his neck, and he pulled her even more close to him. After such a long time, they both slept peacefully in each others arms.

Hehehe😆...I knw u must b hating me 4 stopping here,,,par thoda toh intezaar karna chahiye na..:D..sorry 4 da delay guys...I hope u lykd dis...plz leave ur comments n hit lyk 4 me...Nxt part mite b a lil late, sorry bout dat...Thnk u...LOVE U All...Aartii...

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Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

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unress
phirse am first yahooo balle balle
and this update was just perfect 👍🏼

finally past ka kuch toh khula soo virat left manvi haan par kyun ??? does he feel that she didnt want the baby ?? is that even possible...yaar koi toh in loadko ko dimag de dooo akkal ke dushman 😡

btw i love jeevika here more than how can he even misunderstand manvi and jeevika just for her sis apne husband ko chor diya the best sister ever...👏
and the sonography pic in manvi's room yeh dekh kar bhi virat ko samajh nai aaya ke how much she cared for her baby..and she still had his stuffs with her shows how much she loves him 😊
and mannat aww she is soo adorable woh toh mere liye manvi se ziada favourite hoti jaa rahi hai...jaise woh bolti hai bahot samajhdar yet soo naughty ❤️🤗

and the last part just made me smile...finally apne ego ko chor kar aahi gaya manvi ke paas😃

update next part soon ...😊
mujhe poori baat janni hai actual mein virman ke beech hua kya tha...😕

Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

ress😭😭😭

im late again nd kullu stole ma spot😛

its ok waise bhi ma comment is unique na😆

first of all wonderful update!!!👏👏

da stating was bad.. virat itna rude kyun hai

oh so virat aur manvi ek ghar mein aur barish ho jaye😳

nd virika ek jagah pe.. wah waha aarti luv it😆😉

aww manvi's thoughts.. litna miss kiya hoga virat ko😭😭

oh so clothes chupake ke rakh liye😉

haww wat did virat say😲 uska matlab kya hai😕

aww virika nd mannat😳 ma lovely munchkins.. i luv dem❤️

aww finally viren ne keh diya😳 virika kitni happy hai nd even viren... cutest scene😛

aley meli mannat ko mama chahiye😭 kitni sad ho gayi😭😭

yeh flashback mein hua kya im lil confused😕

da ending ego chodke vira aa hi gaya😉

superb update aarti!!!!

plz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm

Edited by shruthi13 - 13 years ago

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Love this part..
I m in hurry for my study nd then i also hve to my story updates...
So i read in hurry...
Nd
no long comment...
But i always like ur story..
Continu soon..