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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

helmet se kya kaam banega madam...get urself a bullet proof jacket coz i wanna shoot u!!! samjhi!!!!


bola tha maine kuch garbad mat karna! but nahi...u will not listen...bas apni hi manmani karni hai apko!
jao!

karlo apni dil ki!

agar yeh CSI wala ff nahi hota na...i swear i would have stopped reading!...lol

waiting for the next part



lolz.. mjhy kyun maar rahi hai mjhy maary gi tu mayank kya hoga soch.,.. agay ki story k kya hoga
yeah CSI hai is mein garbar nhi kero gi tu maza kya rahy ga...

abay hat teray tu achy bhi read kertay tera murder hojata agar tu nhi parhti tu,...
will update soon
u know where i m caught up
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Posted: 12 years ago


thnks

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Fiza nupur ko kaise maar dala? Oh no .don't do this plz



aray abhi agay tu dekho kya hua



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Posted: 12 years ago


tension nhi lay nay k

Originally posted by: ratibob007

Nice update.

Please don't make it sad one.
Thanks for the pm.
My curiosity is killing me please update soon.



thnsk alot dear
nah me n sad has hardly happen



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice

last part is scary
hope nupur is ok
continue soon



thnks alot



thnku

Originally posted by: Ria..

OMG- what happened to Nupur
I hope she is fine



hope so dont worry




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pia-

oh GOD- what a suspense
waiting for next aprt



thnku

Originally posted by: Dalia.

Please Nupur ko kuch maat hone dena




donot worry


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kinnzy

Ahh my Nupur 😭

Plz update the next part soon



donot worry kuch nhi hoga

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

I loved the update but wht was the last sentence..




thnks alot dear
last part the dhichkiyoo,.,,.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

di aisa maat karo na pls sab thik kar do

bechari nupur
what happen to her
but honestly u r update is really nice
thank for pm me and sorry for late


love u always

deepa




kuch hi hoga chilaz
thnks alot glad u liked it

Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

omg dont kill her😡

nice update
thanx for the pm



donot worry



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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks to u all for lovely comments

Replayed to u all..

Hope u like it

Chapter: 11

He placed the gun on her… this was not she has expected… but she has done wht she has meant to do.. maybe mayank will hate her all his life….but all this people will have there loved ones with them… may she will not… she closed her eyes…..

SHOT…..

She opened her eyes to look at them..when she heard screams all around… they didn't shoted her yet they made her know they can…she sigh an took a breath.. nevr she face abit reluctance in facing death ..

Tum ko baat samjh nhi aai nah… haina… ab tum dekho mein tumhary sath kya kero ga…

Nupur: mjhy maaf kerdain pls… mjhy maaf kerdain.. mein ab nhi kero gi…. Pls meray bachy k liyan mjhy chor dain pls… mjhy maat maray

The plead was sumwhere true as a gunman has the gun pointed on her head… and she knew they can do this.. but than she has done wht is required to safe all of these people… just her life is on stake…

Tum ko woh wirelss use kerna kasay ata hai

Nupur: mein ny traing li thi.. networking army mein.. apn IT course mein …. Mjhy pata hai code kasay use kertay hain

Kafi khatarnak ho tum… jo dekhti ho woh ho nhi… kuch tu kerna paray ga tumhara

Nupur: mein sach kah rahi hoo nap kuch bhi nhi kero gi.. pls mjhy maat maray pls….

She was hating herself to plead like this… but she have to …. To make things better here she needed here alive….

Is baat tu mein ny maaf kerdiya hai… per tum yeah maat sochna k tum meri nazar mein nhi hoo ab… waha samny se hilna maat samjhi… bulky is k ek pair bandho chair k sath….

………………

Mayank: is k kya deemg karab hogaya ahi… wireless k sath harktein ker rahi hai… yeah pagal hogi hai…. Unlogo ny pakar liya tha … god cant she remain in peace for sumtime…

He threw his things away .. and benji samrat were starlet seeing him such…. He is quite but not tht much angry evr… but thn they also knew the emotions tht he is fighting evry second…. benji came and sat there with him..pressing his shoulder to comfort him

Benji: mayank waha saray logo k ghar waly teri tarha pershan ho ga… tu tu phir yeah janta hai k nupur apni hifazat kuch had tak ker sakti hai… per woh tu yeah bhi nhi kersakty … tujhy yeah pata hai k woh safe hai… ek baar us ki awaz suna tujhy kitni strength dayta hai… woh tujh se bar bar kah rhai hai k tum ker sakty ho… tu us weakness bana raha hai…

Maaynk looked at him and sigh..

Mayank: us ko yeah nhi kerna chiay tha

Benji: janta hoon per koi tu wajha hogi us k yeah kerny ki… woh bewaquf nhi hai….

Mayank nodeed in yes.. and collected himself to look at the information

Mayank: park view tu koi hotel nhi hai yaha… han Delhi INN tu hai….

Samrat: phir is ka kya matlab hai…

Benji: park view…. Parking se view….

Mayank: could be… map lay…..he brought the map and they all sit together…. yeah parking hai … correct benji yaha se center area yahin jaha hostage hain waha tak jany k liya 5 wings hai…

Mark it…

Mayank: wht about the date…

Samrat; it was the same date whn we were working on vikram khurana case.. and we found arms ther in the under ground areas …

Benji: wait a min… that means there arms to there…

Mayank: so we have gold and arms that are meant to be taken away from there.. I have ask the force to start surveillance above the airpot and they are continuously doing so…

Samrat; but there is a problem they may take sum hostages with them

Benji: and than wht we will do we cant even shout the plan down

Mayank: we have jammed the area benji and the best programmer including u, diya are continuously surveying them… they cant do tht… they shouldnt be able to do so…

The only thing is that pata nhi my gut feeling said that this man sumwhere knew me very well… they way he knew I m gona use secondary blocks… I m gona use… forces at the central area… the knew me sumwhere…

Samrat: im on it we will find sum few mins ..

Samrat was working on the different ex ploice men and benji was breaking the jammer , trying to over cum that.. along with mayank… they were sure that sumthing more is to it…

Samrat: mayank I got it…

Mayank: wht u got…

Samrat: I got him …. There is only five people who were there with u as IT securing person… 3 of them are still working in different branches 1 dies.. so left is one

Mayank: who is that….

Samrat: Parakh Chohan…. Worked with u in mumbai as chief security officer…. Bingo…

He hit the paper he got….

Mayank: on Reserve n security project … oh freak this cant happen

Benji: wht happen…

Mayank: he hated me to core…. To core…. He was one of the best software jammer and my security officer… and he worked with me so many project… that's why he make such perfect jam of security… but he got involved in corruption…

Benji: he is the same person whom u traped in his on hell

Mayank: ya… he was trying to take away gold from reserve bank…I got to know that ..first I wasn't sure about that but than the way secure plans were manipulated I looked in it.. it was the night they have planned everything….

Benji: it was the first project of mine… he smiled

Samrat: han woh din hum kasay bhool sakty hain jab hum in is musbiat ko galay lagay tha…

Benji: oye mein nhi hota tu ab tak india lout chukka hota samjha tu

Mayank: exactly… he did the everything and made him get traped in himself…

Samrat: he is taking revenge from u…. if not that time this time

Mayank: he was the seruity officer there…. And he himself was involved in all this… but there is more to it… anyways that's great… benji he has a particular way of making jams.. study it n break it…. Wasy bhi … u know to well u have done this before u can do this again…. U can have diya in it…

I asked the map of---- hotel usk kiya hua….

Benji: on its way…. Ya I know his type of programming but I will b needing sum help… there library mein networking books hain kya

Mayank: han basic

Benji: kam hojay ga..

Mayank: no we all are going office.. as this night we will hopefully enter the place…. I m not gonna let him go away,.. he escaped last time not this time .. not at all this time….

…………

Priya: wht do u talk on phone….

Nupur: she looked at her n smile…. I just hope whatever I have done…. He can read it…

Priya: u think he will

Nupur: yes he can read my silence my words are to easy for him….

Parakah: we are ready for the mission… we have all the things loaded….

Man: sir we have packed everything… and the plane is ready… but why u r waiting for 6 am

Parakah: I will do it on spot…. I know him, he must have jam all the signals and must have corrupted them… so that we cant fly… but I can break this … he knew it.. but he doesn't knew im involved in this all

…………

Mayank: he knew how to break the jammer we have placed..

Samrat: mayank … mayank

Benji: yaar yeah tu sound effects k sath kyun bol raha hai bolna….

Samrat: kal same date hai…

Mayank: what…. matlab

Samrat: its…. See the date nupur has said she was right … u got stacked with big things three times….first parkah's frst plan…. Second it was vikaram khuana…. And third

Mayank: will be tonite… he is just doing to make me suffer

Benji: wht he wants to repeat it all…. Mayank its not just… u know pretty well wht u can loss…. Ur job too

Samrat: ya mayank… ur sole responsible for security… atleast for sumtime u can get suspended

Mayank: I donot care… the only thing now matter is to make them all cum home safely… nothing else…

Samrat: hmm…

Mayank: he look at his watch… dam it.. its already 11… we have only time till 6 in morning… if he is palnning to repeat history.. per mjhy abhi tak yeah samjh nhi araha hai…. K yeah hotel k kya chekar hai….

Benji: yeah lay aur dekh … k hotel k kya chekar hai…. This the map of all…

Mayank: oky this hotel is pretty close to the airport…

Room no: is here

Samrat: but its isn't connecting to the other room….

Mayank: it has no connection with airport….

Benji: this window… definitely is straight in path of the parking area of airport…. Kuch tu hai jo woh kah rahi hai

Mayank: room no 132 kaha hai

Samrat: hai benji are u sure yeah map thik hai… ..yaha tu asa ko room no hi nhi hai…

Benji: yaar bhabi tu kya bol rah hoo…..

Mayank: yeah room direct view to the aiport true….

Samrat: distance to the airport is wait a min.. its not 18 mins drive…. Yeah specially passenger k liyan hai… taky they can rest if they have long transits…. Its jut 8 mins drive…

Benji: 18 mins can be.. wht… 1 8 M I N S.. agar 18 ko words mein convert keray tu…. A N M I N S… donot make any sense

Mayank: shuffle kerny se kya bany ga…. Nothing….. nothing…

They all were shuffling the words, marking here n there.. benji made the map at angle 18 nothing… room no 18 doesn't have anything….

Mayank: wht the… kuch tu hai… kya hai… kya hai…. 18 day ….

Benji: aj nhi hai… nah kal hai… 18 hr ja chukka hai aur us fate k hum ny 18 hr per attack nhi kiya tha….

Mayank: wait a min… 18 hr is 6… he attacked last time at 6 in morning….

Samrat: tu us ny directly 6 mins bolna tha mayank… she has been very precise with all information she has given us…. Its sumthing more to it..

Benji: kya kya…..

Samrat: agar is ko distance min convert keray… 18 kms from aiport… kya hai…

Benji: aby hat.. yeah sewerage croos… waha kya hum fishing kerny jaygay hat

Mayank: benji.. pls marry diyu us k sath rah rah ker tu waqi aqalmand hogaya hai…. Sewerage .. sewerage line..

Room no… ki sewrage line….. kaha hai.. plan nikalo…

Samrat: this one pipe is going all the way to main line… the main line is than here … right here dividing in to… 3….

Mayank: jhasi ki rani u rock….man u so rock… The second one…. 132 k 2… is directly leading us to here…. Central lounge washroom no 132 ….

They all look at each other and smiled widely…. There officer.. ther best officer really made it al for the,,… she did it….

Mayank: this lounge will lead us to the the area whos internal view has been given by nupur…

Samrat: yaar she has made everything so easy for us…. So easy for us

Benji: its still not easy… woh itna bewaquf hai k woh change nhi keray ga internal… jab woh jammers ki frequency jab har waqt change ker rahy hain tu …. Postion nhi keray gay

Samrat: but atleast humain waha tak k rasta pata hai…

Mayank: benji…. Until we are making the force ready… I want u to get me an inside glimpse…

Benji: I think I can do it… after knowing how he makes it….

Mayank: get diya;s help if u want..i donot mind…

Samrat cell ringed and he was shocked to hear the news..

Samrat: wht the hell

Benji: now wht…

Samrat: the security at taj collapsed….

Mayank: wht the hell…. Benji diya…. …

They all look at each other she was there…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was such an Awesome n exciting update
loved it to d coreee
though i need to catch up many parts of it
bt i sooo loved it
API hw can u write so well i mean every time in every season hayeee..MashALLAH
keep writing like this
loved this part
loved it lodsss
bt ab plzzz jaldi se Nupur ko waha se bacha kar le aao
OMG! ab Diya ko kya hua plzzz
ab sab accha karna
will be waiitng for ur update
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

ps: pata hain yeh 2nd time cmnt likh rahi isse pehle ka post hi nhi hua
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago

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