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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can try to read your eyes, but just look at me once

I can try to interpret your actions, but don't give explanations for once

I can try to listen to your heartbeat, but don't talk for once

I can try to sense these vibes, but don't run away for once

If you ask me to stop quoting my sonnets, I will

But just ask me once

If you want me to leave, I will

But don't come after me just once

I can wait at your doorstep forever, but open it once

I can bear the pain of the thorn, but give me the rose once

I can sit quietly, but let me listen to you once

I can share the pain, but don't push me away for once

If you ask me to wait for an eternity, I will

But just ask me once!

I am the girl of your dreams, but let yourself dream just once!

You are my life, please let me live just once!

(Random Musings. Zoya's tale)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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the poetry is beautifull but have you written it for asya or rk and madhula.(I USED THE WORD RK OR MADHULA BECAUSE JST A FEW MINUTES BACK THE TOPIC MAKER MADE A PIST ON QH FORUM WHICH HE ACTUALLY WANTED TO POST ON MADHUBALA FORUM I GUESS.)
i am just conforming that the post is posted on right forum because no name is mentioned in it.anyways the poetry is wonderfull.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now he hs mentioned zoyas name in the post.i guess right forum this time.:-))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan.G.king

the poetry is beautifull but have you written it for asya or rk and madhula.(I USED THE WORD RK OR MADHULA BECAUSE JST A FEW MINUTES BACK THE TOPIC MAKER MADE A PIST ON QH FORUM WHICH HE ACTUALLY WANTED TO POST ON MADHUBALA FORUM I GUESS.)
i am just conforming that the post is posted on right forum because no name is mentioned in it.anyways the poetry is wonderfull.


lol.. don't you see Zoya written below ..😆.. me not new to QH .. FYI ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan.G.king

now he hs mentioned zoyas name in the post.i guess right forum this time.:-))


lol.. ek galti bahut bhari pad rahi hai .. eh? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful.. LOVED IT .. and it relates to zoya a lot, ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan.G.king

the poetry is beautifull but have you written it for asya or rk and madhula.(I USED THE WORD RK OR MADHULA BECAUSE JST A FEW MINUTES BACK THE TOPIC MAKER MADE A PIST ON QH FORUM WHICH HE ACTUALLY WANTED TO POST ON MADHUBALA FORUM I GUESS.)
i am just conforming that the post is posted on right forum because no name is mentioned in it.anyways the poetry is wonderfull.


Waise to put your mind to rest.. shayari is pure TV world mein sirf zoya hi karti hai.. so clearly the poem is all about her .. 😆 hence rt forum 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very beautiful.👏.u blended zoya's feeling perfectly in words👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pieryrose

beautiful.. LOVED IT .. and it relates to zoya a lot, ❤️


Thank you 😊.. glad it hits the chord..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam.

Beautifully written :-)


Thanks for the appreciation. 😊

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