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geet today is ur day..u should be strong dear'in anyway u should get him for u today'.enough of being coward in front of him yaar'..u are always a sherni before every one but u become a cat infront of him'.when ever u see him ur lips will be seized into a tight line and u give him a dreamy look leaning on the person beside u with ur one foot up in the air and hands clasped together'.like a love sick puppy..huh'.are u not fed up with ur own self???

No geet today don't behave such stupid'.u'.in anyway are going to meet him'going to talk to him and going to say him whats in ur mind'no no whats in ur heart'..go girlie goo''u can do it'

Geet'.geet handa the rock girl 'the tom boy and the most not girlie type girl'.today us standing before the mirror in her room wearing a red simple yet beautiful knee length party dress and white simple bracelet on her wrist,with a beautiful yet simple white ear hangings complementing her dress and a dreamy yet determined look on her face which had a light makeup which brought out her already natural beauty an extra look'.is standing infront of the mirror and cursing herself and also encouraging herself'to finally go infront of the one person she is dreading to be with'.the one person she is fascinated of'.and the one person she is head over heels in love with''


"hmm I think I m looking okay'babaji don't make me embarrass infront of my whole college'.what so ever geet'this will happen for sure'.every one will laugh at u for sure'.today of all days'u r wearing a girly dress instead of ur torn jeans and sleeveless tshirts and the rough jacket of ur'.pata nai log kaise dekhege kaise hasege'.waise geet from when did u start thinking about whats others think and do? Its not u right! So be u girl'..oh no no'I should be like a girl'unlike me'.ufff babaji'.yeh kaise din aagaya'.no worries geet waise bhi its not that hard to look like a girl" geet smirked taking to herself.

Just then there was a knock on the door and geet ran to open.

As soon as she opened the door she came face to face with a shocked'..really shocked yash malhotra'her best buddie'.

"what?" geet gave him a irritating look while he just stared at her with an open mouth.

"did u dress to kill him? Poor soul" he exclaimed.

"yash are u outta ur mind? What are u speaking?" geet said irritated as she walked back to her room.

"I m speaking English and I m saying that u r looking absolutely sexy" yash said as he followed geet into her room.

"u know I hate tht word yash" geet said making faces.

"come on geet atleast for today behave like a girl and haan don't say the same thing 'I hate the word sexy' to ur dear man when he says the same to u today" yash said.

"oh I so hope that he don't call me sexy today'or u know what I will do" geet said giving herself a last look into the mirror before grabbing her valet and stepping out along with yash.

"ha ha I don't think u will slap him" yash said sitting in his car and unlocking the passenger door for geet.

"I dunno" geet said sitting beside him with a worried look.

"oh ho geet atleast be like a girl for tonight'.its valentines party after all'.i m sure u will get him to u today'.did u remember what all I said to u'i mean how to get him" yash said and geet nodded.

"as soon as we enter the party hall don't go all dreamy and stare at him'just ignore him and go kill ur time speaking to other guys and girls in college'then later after sometime when the dance floor opens'ofcourse the dance floor will be open from the start but only after some time go straight to him and ask him for a dance'then ask him for drink take him out and say whats in ur mind'.what u feel about him'..aur haan if he turns u down just give him a kick or call me I will show him what I can do" yash said while geet looked at him listening like an obedient student.

Finally the party venue came and yash stopped his car infront of the venue. Handing over his car to the security to park he came to geet's side and held her hand taking her into the hall.

Geet stopped infront of the hall looking at the closed doors of the hall nervously while yash nudged her "ooowww I never know that Geet Handa can also scare"

"shut up yash" geet said taking deep breaths.

part 2

part 3

hey guys just 1 or 2 updates bas...plz like and comment if u like this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yippe first one

read karne ke baad comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start

so geet handa is in love with someone

waiting for the someone(maan)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
awesome...
very interesting...
cont soon dear...
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part 2

Finally the party venue came and yash stopped his car infront of the venue. Handing over his car to the security to park he came to geet's side and held her hand taking her into the hall.

Geet stopped infront of the hall looking at the closed doors of the hall nervously while yash nudged her "ooowww I never know that Geet Handa can also scare"

"shut up yash" geet said taking deep breaths.

"I told u…see how people are giving me looks" geet cribbed to yash standing in a corner of the hall trying her best to hide from all.

"oh shut up geet….they are all feeling insecure…jealous of u coz u r looking more more and more beautiful than all of them" yash said.

"but…." Geet started to say but cut by yash.

"now stop sulking and go do what u came here for" yash said trying to push her from there.

"yash look yaar he is not even giving me a glance..how can I directly go to him…aur haan see that bimbo sam…how she is clinging to him….chi…she don't have anything in the name of shy…." Geet commented.

"I wonder where my rowdy handa is right now" yash said dramatically.

"huh?" geet looked at him confused.

"can u please help me search her" yash said again.

"yash that's not funny" geet glared at him.

"then whats making u back yaar….u r a rowdy afterall….so strong and daring…now what happened to u?" yash said.

"u r not scared are u?" yash asked again while she nodded a no and then an yes. He chuckled at her childish response.

"go…go and get ur man miss geet handa" yash pushed her.

Geet walked forward…as she took few steps forward she was surrounded by the twin devils sasha and tasha giving her all the odd and disgusting looks.

"tasha…look yaar…here is some boy wearing a girls dress" sasha commented.

"ya sasha…he shldnt have done that…ohh poor soul don't even know the G of being a girl" tasha commented back.

Geet gave them an irritating look "I m surprised u had enough guts to come before the geet handa…even after lots and lots of things u got from me in college till now…and I hope u don't like another one from me today"

"oh I m scareddd….what will u do handa?" sasha said angrily.

"I m sorry to do this" geet smiled with fake sweetness as she walked pass the sasha not before making her trip on her legs and fall flat on the floor with her nose touching the ground and bleeding.

Everyone around looked at her and had a hearty laugh while geet slipped away from there silently.

Yash looked at the fiasco and know that is done definitely by his so called rowdy handa…he sighed but where is she?

He looked towards the direction of her man….THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA…standing with that sam while she is literally all over him and he sipping a drink silently…but wait geet was not there….no where near there.

Yash walked forward in search of geet when the lights dimmed suddenly and a spot light fell on…..

And the music started….

The spotlight fell on maan and sam and they looked around bewildered…maan was looking confused and irritated and sam was enjoying the spotlight even as she is confused and then the next moment the spot light fell on tasha who is sitting on the lap of her boy friend varun and kissing his cheek .

Tasha instantly stood up embarrassed due to the spot light and looked her and there uncomfortably and the next the spot of fell on sasha who is slapping her bf on shldr in anger on geet while he is trying to check her wounds.

And then the spot light roamed to all the other couples one by one and atlast went off as a voice added a song to the music….and the spot light fell on…..

Ladki ek pal mein pat gayi
Pal mein palat gayi
Dil ki toh lag gayi

Pehle pyaar jataa gayi
Phir band bajaa gayi
Dil ki... toh lag gayi



The spot light fell on geet who just kept her glass down with a thud on to the bar table and laughed loud making her head fall back….she looked at others who are looking at her in silence and got down the bar stool and walked towards tasha. She is walking around tasha and varun in slow steps matching with the beat and swinging her hips to the music. She pulled varun by holding his wrist away from tasha and walked around him by keeping on hand on his sholders and as a round completed she pushed tasha a bit and walked away from them towards….

Tu hawa, hawa hai yaa hai hauwa
Tu dava duaa hai ya auwaah!
Husn ke maare aadam bechaare
Naa jaane jannat hai kya
Tu hawa, hawa hai yaa hai hauwa
Dil ki... toh lag gayi
Dil ki... toh lag gayi



She then moved to sasha and her bf rahul…rahul and sasha stood still in there places….rahul kneeling down before sasha to check any wounds and she pushing him in anger….

Geet held rahul by sholders and made him stand. She came in between sasha and rahul and stepped towards rahul still holding him by his sholders while making him to take a step back…

Ladki, takatak hot hai
Tequila shot hai
Dil ki toh lag gayi
Lambretta si lage
Farrate se chale
Dil ki toh lag gayi

She looked back at sasha and turned to her sideways while still one hand on rahul's sholder and other holding sasha's arm…she left rahul and rounded sasha…geet went behind sasha and pushed her from behind and same time holding rahul's wrist pulled him outta sasha's way so that sasha fell down on her knees….

Tu hawa, hawa hai yaa hai hauwa
Tu dava duaa hai, yaa auwaah!
Taare ishaare hai maare maare
Na jaane jannat hai kya
Tu hawa, hawa hai yaa hai hauwa
Dil ki toh lag gayi ? ? ?



Geet sat on her knees and smiled sarcastically at sasha while rahul bent and held sasha by shoulders and helped her get up while geet again rounded around them smirking and patted rahul on his sholders….rahul loves sasha truly but who will say him that he is just another pass time for sasha…she looked at them a bit and moved away as music started…

Yash looked perplexed at geet..this is not what he is expecting and this is definitely not she should do. But geet is geet….she just made her way to sam and maan and kept her hand on sam's shoulder….everyone in the hall are silent and looking shocked at whats happening including sam and maan

Geet dragged sam from maan and pushed her in to the other side of floor…am almost fell but was stopped further embarrassment by sasha who held her from falling.

Geet smirked at sam as she made her way to maan who stood there shocked to core…

Ladki lambada dance hai
Rumba romance hai
Dil ki toh lag gayi
Cinema ki hai tu aah!
Mungambo khush huaa ha ha :D
Dil ki toh lag gayi...



Geet moved towards maan while maan is still looking at her shocked like the rest others….geet looked in to maan's eyes and just got lost…but she came out quickly and turned around still so close that her whole body is touching maan ….while her back is facing him…she is so lost as her back came in touch with his chest…strong muscled chest…but forgetting or atlest trying to forget that feel…geet swing her body like snake across maan holding his neck with her arms stretching back singing …. "ladki lambada dance hai"

And she turned to face him again and this time she placed his one arm around her waist and while her one arm around his shoulder and held his other hand in her and fell back in his arms as shw swing from right to left in his arms and came back to standing position as she sang "rumba romance hai"

She left his arm and placed her fist on his heart and punched him a little as she sang "dil ki to lag gayi"

She pulled him to the center and started dancing holding him…and dancing around him….


Cinema ki hai tu aah!
Mungambo khush huaa ha ha :D
Dil ki toh lag gayi...

Tu hawa, hawa hai ya hai hauwa
Tu dava dua hai ya auwaah!
Kore kunware, hero humaare
Na jaane jannat hai kyaa
Tu hawa, hawa hai ya hauwaa
Dil ki toh lag gayi
Dil ki lag gayi...
Dil ki toh lag gayi
Dil ki toh lag gayi
Dil ki hi... toh lag gayi
Dil ki hi lag gayi.



As the music stopped geet hugged maan with all her strength as the whole hall stood shocked and gasps came from all around. She released him from the hug and and held his collar and pulled him forward and placed her lips on his giving him a soft peck and whispered "hey honey….will u be my valentine"



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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first yeyyy

awesome part its so romantic and last line was the epic

loved it sweets

hey dear one request can u complete your other two ffs have read them but they r incomplete

ishq hua and pyaar ya shaadi
they r the wonderful piece of work
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part
it was so cute with a romance in it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awe awe awe this was tooo cute...! I wish the guy would turn out to b Maan only ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oops I just that it's part ' :p yaha to part 2 b tha :p will read it now :p
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Wo-A-oW!! Love is in the air lovd Geet n Maan romanc actually! Geet's romance with a shocked Maan...Loved it too very much! It was totally cute!
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago

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