taarey os- ab tum hi ho

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Posted: 12 years ago
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note - haters stay away...



hey guys i am just fed up with current taarey track so apni frustation ko bhagane k liye i thought to write an os on my fav song i really hope that you all will like it...

the dark sky is full of stars , the moon light seems more brither than the other days , a coll breze blew in the the dark moon light which add more beauty in the surroundings ,in that beautifull night the two love birds sitting on the long grass hand in hand , boy's hand wrapped around the girl and girl's head reasted on his shoulder ...
taani- rey...
rey- hmm... [ he gave a sweet moan]

taani - rey i am so happy [ she lift her head and looked straight in his brown honey eyes ] jab aapne mujh mai se or team mai se team ko chosse kiya toh mujhe aisa laga ki maine aapko hamesha k liye kho diya [ her eyes became wet due to rembering that moment] mujhe laga ki ab taau ji aapko or mujhe kabhi sath nahi rehne denge but rey aapne unhe proved kar hi diya ki dance bhi ek carrer option ban sakta hai or yahi hi nahi aapne unhe itna impress kar diya ki vo humare relationship k liye bhi agree ho gaye i am so happy rey ki ab hume kisi se kuch chupane ki jarurat nahi hai thanks for coming in my life and so sorry because maine aapko mu kiya maine yeh socha ki ami aapke liye important nahi hu or na jane aapse kya kya keh diya gusse mai par rey mai bhul gayi thi that dance is only thing which connect us mean amine aapse pyaar hi isliye kiya tha that you are a awesome dancer par maine kya kiya apko hi dance se dur hone ko kaha ye jante hue bhi that how much it important for you [ holding her ears ] i am so sorry rey...

rey- hey taani plz don't say sorry and all tumne uss waqt jo kaha or kiya vo tumhare p.o.v se bilkul right tha so plz don't say sorry or tumne hi kaha tha ki sorry or hank you bolkar mai humare relationship ko formal na banau toh ab tum kya kar rahi ho huu...

taani- ohh i forget i am so [ she just about to ay sorry but rey's look made her to stop ] okk baba no sorry no thank you...

rey- yaa that's better btw taani today i am so happy that tumhare taau ji ne humare shaadi ko bhi manjuri de di bas ek baar mera future set ho jaye phir mai jaldi se tum se shaadi kar lunga btw taani tum batao tumhe humare wedding par kya gift chahiye...

taani- aap oe aapka pyaar mere sath hai isse bad gift or kya ho sakta hai ...

rey- taani plz ye sab nahi you know har girl ka dream hota hai ki usse uski wedding par aisa gift mile vaisa gift mile tum batao na tumhe kya chahiye...

taani- [ she think for a while ]- umm haa rey jaise ki aapko pata hai ki dance hi aapko meri life mai laya so aapke sath ek romantic couple dance...

rey- baas itna hi vo wish toh mai abhi pura kar sakta hu ...

he took a phone from his pocket and play a song ...

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

[ he made her stand and pulled her towerds himself now his both hands around her belly which passes 1000 watt current in her body ]

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

[ then he placed her hairs to the another side of her shoulder and start kissing her neck ]

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
[ she try to free herself from his grip but her all actions goes in vain , he again placed a wet kiss on her neckline , now she copletely lost in kiss , she clutched her dress very tightly , closed her eyes ]

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera
[ he made her turn now both are face to face , she is looking like next to angel , he couldn't control his desires any more and start kissing her eyes , cheeks , forehead , near her lips now his all attention on her lips ]

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

[ he moved further the distance b/w their lips goes on decreasing both can feel eachother's warm breath on their faces , before kissiing her rey look into her eyes but her eyes are still closed ]

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

[ now rey placed his rough lips against her soft ones , the kiss was gentel and soft but enough to describe their feelings and emotions but as taani's hand start moving through his hairs to deepened the kiss then it turn to passionate one ]

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

[ rey want that she also respond so he nibbeled her lower lip , she also respond back their tongues take eachother in their embrace and that beautifull night witness of their love]

the end...

Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago

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chinudolly thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES/UNRES

SO BEAUTIFUL AND AWESOME STORY , I LOVED IT FULLY AND THIS SONG ALSO
GREAT WORK DEAR😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a very beautiful OS!! keep writing more.. it was lovely!! 😳 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...

seriously most needed os... taarey time...

hope aise hi d3 mein hoga... but i know it wud be dream...

yeh kya ho raha hai d3 mein samaj mein nahi aa rahi hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

coming to os

loved taarey convo and dance sequence...
hmm both cleared mu and back again...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os! Even im fed up of d current taarey track! This is was superb!! Really loved it a lot! Thnx for d pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow short and sweet ...nic os very well described 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres i just loved.. so sweet.. taanis gift.. shes so cute.rey puura phaida utaaya😊. a big thank u for this os..😃
Edited by gowri_amy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short and hot os,
love ur writings always.

👏👏
👏
NSohi13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short but sweet ... Hmmm Kash aisa real mein I mean D3 mein Bhi ho... Thanks sweety for make my mind fresh ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os dear... loved it!! =D

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