virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Hey dear waooo awesome update...😊😊😊 loved it sooo muccchhh..👏👏👏 Awww felt bad 4 virat his past n present came infront of each other... tuning of maanvi n karan is damn cute... loved it 2 the core...😛😛... Awww virat n maanvi both love eachother sooo much... damn awesome update... continue ASAP dear...😊😊... sorry 4 commenting late..

thanks for the wonderful comment n dnt be sorry anjali... its okkk... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooo !!! how I missed this story!!! I just read it and have to say one of the nainaish works! loved the feelings of jealousy,anger,insecurity and possesivenss u hv depicted that to with so much beauty!!!! have to say another great work!

thanks for the pm! love
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving more after every updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update. Loved it. In Last virat's possessiveness towards maanvi is superb. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
maya back, nice update. Thanx 4r the pms
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Posted: 12 years ago
link to previous chap part 15
PART 16
virat signalled manvi to ask whether karan n maya are done with the packing n all...
manvi : motu chale...
karan : yeah mani.. we are almost done...
manvi : so me n virat are going down... you both come down
maya : we all can go together also...
karan : let them go baby...
maya : okk...
virat glared at maya n went out with manvi.
virat : manvi i...
manvi : i love you too...
virat smiled and stopped himself from saying something he was about to...
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manvi, virat, karan n maya reached vadera mansion and were sitting in the hall with others. viren came back from the office n stopped in his way the moment he saw maya.
jeevika : viren ji... aap aa gaye...
viren : hmm...
jeevika : aaj fresh ho jaie main chai le k-
viren : nahi... virat...??
virat looked at viren and viren signalled him to come n talk to him.
viren : whats all this...?? that was maya, right...??
virat : yes thats maya, karan's girlfriend...
viren : and what about manvi...??
virat : she doesnt know this maya is the same maya who ruined my life...
viren : but we should tell manvi before that bitch tells manvi anything...
virat : i know bhai.. i will tell manvi tonight because i know maya is upto something... i can feel something is wrong and -
viren : and...??
virat : and dont take me wrong... but i am not liking the way karan is behaving with manvi... for god sake she is my wife n that karan is still in his mani mode... and we all know manvi.. she is just too friendly n humble...
viren : hehe... already jealous...?? oh cmon... i also found it weird they too were behaving.. as in my motu my mani... but they are childhood friends virat n its okk...
virat : what if one day jeevika bhabhi's childhood friend comes... will you not feel jealous n insecure...???
viren : bhai i understand what you are syaing n its so damn natural... but u have faith on manvi.. right...??? so till the time you trust manvi n her love, dont ever think that she can betray you or something...
virat : i know bhai manvi loves me she would never ever betray me... i know...
viren : so problem solved... lets go then...
virat : yeah lets go... tea time...
after tea, karan n maya went inot their room and came out at dinner time.
at dinner table
jeevika was serving food to karan when manvi shouted
manvi : di...
jeevika : kya hua mannu...???
manvi : di wo karan karela nahi khata
jeevika looked at karan n he nodded in a yes...
karan : tumhe yaad tha mani...
manvi : haan motu...
karan smiled at manvi which annoyed virat and irritating him agian with this mani notu crap..
virat : khane kahlo meri bhookhi sherni...
manvi : haan... waise bhi mujhe bahut bhookh lag ri hai...
piyali : mujhe bhi khana hai...
everybody turned their gaze towards piali who was walking down the stairs while rubbing her eyes...
manvi : alley mela baby jaag gaya...
karan choked on his food n started coughing. maya gave a glass of water to karan to drink and rubbed his back. she whispered in his ear " its ok.. relax " . virat saw it n smirked on seeing the scene.
manvi went n picked piyali in her arms n came back to the dinning table...
virat kissed her cheek n said " alley merra baby... " and again looked at karan n maya.
piyali : vilat... meli chocolate...
manvi : haww uthte hi chocolate... naughty girl...
piyali : alley ye chalta hai mannu...
manvi : haww. dekho di, mujhe mannu keh rahi hai...
jeevika : aap kyun jag gaye piyali...
before piyali could say anything, virat interrupted and took piyali from manvi and made her sit on his lap.
virat : aap khana khalo princess... phir main chocolate leke dunga...
piyali : promise...???
virat : promise piya...
manvi : aur mujhe...
virat : mannu ko chocolate leke de piya...
piyali : hmm... no...
virat : done... hehe.. see mannu is crying...
manvi : nobody loves me n acted as if she was crying...
everybody on the dining table were laughing n admiring the trio except maya n karan.
viren noticed it n he was sure that something was fishy...
virat on the other hand was enjoying this now... enjoying... NO he was loving it...
manvi was unaware of all this, and was enjoying her time to the fullest...
manvi : piyali baby apni manvi ko chocolate nahi degi...
piyali : hmm... but manvi ne mujhe ab tak small baby nahi diya...
virat immediately turned his attention to piyali who was making faces...
virat : haan piyali ko small baby chahie par ye manvi na...
piyali : haan ye manvi bhi na...
viren : what...???
before piyali could say anything, again virat diverted her attention.
virat : manvi se manglo na piya aap...
piyali : kya vilat..??
virat whispered in her ear and they gave each other high 5.
viren : whats happening bhai...???
piyali : alley hum small baby ki lamming kar rahe hain... mela bhai... chota bhai..
viren : thats planning sweetheart...
piyali : haan wohi lamming...
jeevika : piya shhh...
manvi was blushing very hard on listening to all this n she looked down...
vanshika : bas meri bahu ko tang mat karo virat...
virat : piya n maine kuch nahi kia... hai na...??
piyali : haa dadi... small baby laana toh manvi ko hai...
virat : hehe... thats like my princess...
dinner ended like this n after dinner manvi wanted to talk to karan n maya while virat took her in their room...
manvi : kya hai..?? i wanted to talk to them...
virat : let them have their time manvi...
manvi : but they had their time whole day, didnt they...???
virat : forget about them... what about our time...???
manvi : our time as in...
virat : as in..
manvi : as in compensation...???
virat : hmmm...
manvi hugged him and said " i love you "
virat : i love you too...
manvi : virat
virat : hmmm
manvi : woh maya bahut dhinchak piece hai na... abdi hot shot types...
virat : i dont know...
manvi broke the hug n said "oh cmon... btao na...??"
virat : kya bataun...??
manvi : woh maya hot hai na... bilkul model types...
virat : par woh meri manvi toh nahi hai na...
manvi : par manvi uski jaisi model tyoes tip top toh nahi hai na...
virat : manvi jab chahe maya ban sakti hai, par woh maya kabhi meri mavi nahi ban sakti kyunki meri biwi tum ek one piece ho...
manvi : hmm woh toh hai par-
before manvi could say anything, virat captured her lips in a kiss. without hesitation, she kissed him back and was enjoying this moment when there was a knock on the door..
manvi : uff... kaun aa gaya...??? pati patni ko aaram se
virat : sherni relax... main dekhta hoon...
virat opened the door n saw maya standing there...
virat : yes...
maya : actually we were wondering if u both could join us... actually me n karan arent feeling like sleeping n we thought...
virat : i am sorry but we are sleeping... goodnight...
maya : but
virat didnt let maya say anything n he closed the door on her face.

precap : be intehaan n virman romance... ☺️ n pms will be sent later~~~

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely...
After so long time..
Bt liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😆 UNRES 🤣
hayye update poori update chor...nahi nahi poori story chor but last scene...!!! maya ke toh class ho gaye virat se aur wo b free ke 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 mera poor rofl rofling kar kar ke thak gya 🤣
awwe piyali was so cute 😊 family planning wo b dinning table pe 🤣 🤣
virat pretending as her own daughter in front of maya n karan 🤣
haw karan b evil hai kia story me 🤔
i loved the update naina 😃 well written 👏 aur meny enna rofl b toh kia tumhare update ke wja se 😆😆😆
thanks for the pm 😛
Edited by fatima06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
meko koi first nhi ane deta...hatt 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
res*unres* thank u sooo... much fo updatin woh pal ... this is one of my favr8 . n..suprb update lvd piyali+virman scene it was adorable .piyali chooo chweeet .. n our viru boy is too naughty .. family planning khullam khulla ..kar raha hai .. lvd karan's xpression on seeing hw manvi adressd piyali.. he thought she is virman's daughtr. n dis maya n karan are upto sumthng. . .hop viren n virman get to knw bout their intention soon.. bt i think this maya karan track wil make virman relation mor strong
Edited by surovita - 12 years ago

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