virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg maya again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow really like the twist
you doing great continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG WTH Maya???
-oh no maya is back what a full on shocking update the was maya name was sed and virat's phne fell fabulous
Couldnt get any better loved it totally
Update soon and pm
Me please
Thanksz x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey naina pls updt soon n pmkk n ptyka too...plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 15
virat was numb.. it was a nightmare come true for him. his present and past were standing face to face. his small little world came to a standstill. maya- his painful past whom he had forgotten long back was now standing in front of him and next to him was his love, his life, his wife, his manvi. virat looked at manvi and suddenly his heart ached at the thought of being away from her. that old fear of losing manvi gripped his heart again. only 2 days back he got his everything back. only 2 days back he told manvi about his past and now his past was standing with them. only 2 days back he thought that now nothing would go wrong and today everything was on the verge of being spoiled. only 2 days back, they started their new life and now his past became a part of his present.
manvi was continuously blabbering things when karan nudged her. manvi saw virat looking at her and blushed.
manvi : virat...
manvi smiled and again called virat..
manvi shook virat and shouted " virat... "
virat came back to the present and replied " hmm..."

manvi : come lets sit talk...
virat : lets go back manvi...
karan : virat dude... control yourself... we will be going back home soon... (teasing virat)
virat looked at karan with a angry look and again said " manvi... its important... lets leave.. "
manvi was embarrased and smiled at karan who was teasing manvi with the look on his face and maya who was standing quietly looking at virat.
manvi : chep ho kya...??? kya keh rahe ho...?? chup chap aao na... let maya do the packing... then we will leave...
how can virat refuse manvi, so he agreed to wait for them and held manvi's hand.
manvi (whispered) : hotel room mein aate hi tum bade romantic ho rahe ho...
virat faintly smiled at manvi but from within he was burning... every cell of his body was paining on seeing maya and screaming to tell the truth to manvi but his throat was jammed... words werent coming out of his mouth.
maya : manvi should i order something for u guys...
manvi : no its ok...
karan : you have learned manners mani... but why this formality with us...??

manvi : ok then i want a cold coffee and grilled sandwich...
maya : and what about you virat...???

virat shot his head up as soon as he heard maya saying his name. once his name sounded like music to him whenever he heard it from maya and today virat was feeling disgusting.
manvi : virat loves coffee americano and no junk food for him these days... gym instructor and all stuff (and she giggled)
karan : but u look fit dude...???
again manvi answered in place of virat " arrey he is salman khan u see... fit n fin... and sexiest of all..."
maya : and baby what will u have...???
karan : may (thats what he calls maya) i just want a glass of water...
manvi : arrey coffee peelo motu...
karan : nahi mani... mann ni hai...
manvi : nakhre toh dekho janab ke...
virat : can u guys make it fast...??
manvi glared at virat and wondered what was wrong with him suddenly... he was fine before karan arrived...

manvi (thinking to herself) : mr. chep vadera is jealous of this motu... he is just like piyali and was thinking of having a baby himself... virat my jaanu... i only n only love you... mela shona... i love you.. i will make up it to u tonight...
karan : virat why dont we all eat and then leave... if its okk with u...??
virat : its ok...
karan : may make it fast baby...
maya : yes baby (saying it in a different tone...)
virat was damn uncomfortable now... there was a time when he was ready to share his life wuth her and now sharing the same roof was irritating him and making him uncomfortable.
manvi : motu for long are u here...??
karan : a month mani... just 30 days...
manvi : uff... that means i have to handle u for next 30 long days...
maya : you wont regret it manvi...
manvi : i hope so...
virat glared at maya trying to read between the lines, trying to hear the unspoken words, trying to understand the real meaning of her words.
after some time maya was done with packing and was looking at manvi and karan who were busy talking to each other about their childhood and virat who was trying his best to behave as normally and casually as possible...
manvi : virat...
virat : hmm...
manvi : you know this motu is soo cute... we were neighbours in delhi and there was a huge mango tree in our locality... aur ek din main jidd karne lag gai that i want one. di tried but was unable to reach one. then this motu came to our rescue... he climbed the tree and got three mangoes... one for me, one for di and one for himself. and while coming back , he fell off the tree. but me being manvi the great, was unhappy that i got only one mango, so he gave me his mango despite the fact that he absolutely loves mango... thats so sweet isnt it...??? he is such a sweetheart... my motu...!!!
karan : mani... you remember that...!!! u know i gave you my mango because you were about to cry and i cant see you crying... i just cannot... thank god i found you... now i wouldnt let u go...

virat : you did so much for my manvi... (putting his arm around manvi's shoulder) thanks...
karan : arrey you dont need to thank me virat... she is my mani u see...
virat : i need to thank you... she is my wife you see (making it clear to both karan n maya that they can never come in between him and his manvi...)
karan looked at virat and he felt... he had no words... he had no words to explain how he felt at that moment...

manvi turned her gaze towards virat and looked lovingly at him.
manvi : i love you...
virat : i love you too... (looking at only n only manvi, completely ignoring karan n maya who were looking at the couple in front of them...)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing Update...! loved Virat's reaction on Maya and her words but this seems fishy...looks like they faked their relationship to get back their love...😆...Like the way story has progressed...Thanks for the PM Naina..~!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Amazing Update...! loved Virat's reaction on Maya and her words but this seems fishy...looks like they faked their relationship to get back their love...😆...Like the way story has progressed...Thanks for the PM Naina..~!

hey congrats u are once again the first one to comment... and thanks 😊
something if for sure fidhy but what... i also dont know... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

hey congrats u are once again the first one to comment... and thanks 😊
something if for sure fidhy but what... i also dont know... 😆

yes i am the first 1 to comment😊...will wait for the story to unfold...!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

yes i am the first 1 to comment😊...will wait for the story to unfold...!

yeah... 😃 that is the best option ever u see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome loved it... continue soon...
thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LV88

awesome loved it... continue soon...

thanx for the PM...

hey thanks... 😊

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