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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

amazing update kiran.. finally heer agreed for the marriage.. but still need to sort out premeer thing..esp heer want to know abt clg things..

cant wait for premeer's marriage... update soonn...

thank you priya..for reading and commenting...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

update soon kiran please. and please don't make it last update ๐Ÿ˜”

updating right now...it will be the last part dear๐Ÿ˜”...but dont worry there will be a surprise for you guys...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

very very nice update dear

Very emotional and sentimental too
Prem is as usual cute
So the wedding bells are going to ring soon
Waiting eagerly for it
Update soon dear
Thanks for the pm

thank you soo much for commenting and taking time to read ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Previous part:-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81172454

Part-14

Heer was standing near the window looking at the moon; in her room'wait'her room??? Yes!!! Now it's hers and her husband's room'her husband Prem Juneja'.Yesterday she got married to the most eligible bachelor of the town'..Prem Juneja!!!

When she told her father that she is ready to get married to Prem, both juneja's and Maan's got happy specially Prem. Who was in ninth sky'after all his dream to get married his lady love is going to come true. Now only he had right on his Heer'only he had right to love her, to console her, to share her happiness and sorrow, to give her all the happiness of the world, to make love with her, to had children.

All the functions and rituals are done in a week only as per Balraj's order as he wanted to see his princess happily married to Prem very soon.

Today morning she entered the juneja mansion as the "bardi bahu" of the juneja family. After performing all the post marriage rituals she made kheer for her husband and her in-laws according to tradition, which goes very well and all of them phrases Heer's cooking and give her naik also.

She found Lalit and Gayatri quite similar to her own parents and Preet'the biggest prankster of the world'.just made her remember meher's antics'.And her husband Prem??? It's really difficult for her to describe the feeling she had for him'.still she's very confused even though she knows that he loves her a lot'but still she was confused and scared. Dont know why'

Anyways'now it's time to forget the past and start new and fresh life with her new family with her HUSBAND!!!! She looked up at the moon hoping to get some courage to start a life with Prem!!!!

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Prem entered his room after facing lots of teasing from his brother and friends. Close the door behind him. He turned around to look at his bride'and when he turned around, he got frozen at the spot seeing her beautiful bride in blue and maroon heavy designer saree, looking extremely beautiful and gorgeous. And the moonlight's reflection making her face even more glowing. Heer was standing at the window with her eyes closed enjoying the cold breeze without knowing that her husband was looking at her with lots love and passion.

Prem admiringly came near the window and silently stood across her and started admiring her serene face. Thinking about his fate, that how lucky he was, to have her in his life as a life partner.

After some time she opened her eyes and looked that her husband was very busy in admiring her. Seeing his passionate gaze on her, she become nervous, Prem smirked seeing her nervous. Heer decided to leave and go to the washroom but Prem's voice stopped her.

Prem:- Ek minute, wo mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai'

Heer turned around and looked at him

Prem:- wo main..Actually wo..

Prem came closer to her and seeing this Heer become more nervous and started moving backwards as Prem was coming forward continuously looking at her eyes.

Then suddenly while moving backward she hit the bed and she simply sat on it. Prem came forward putting his arms both the sides caging her. Heer nervously closed her eyes, realizing whats coming next. Prem smiled at her nervousness and innocence. He brought his hand above and took the pillow from the from the bed and stood straight.

When Heer realised that Prem was not near her she opened her eyes at looked Prem who standing infront of her holding the pillow and giving beamed smile. Heer's cheeks got deep red as she was thinking about something else. She mentally kicked herself for that.

Prem (smiled):- relax Heer, main to bus yeh keh raha tha ki, tum yahan bed pe so jao or main waha couch pe so jaounga..

Heer looked at him with surprise

Heer:- Couch pe???

Prem:- han couch pe. Main janta hun Heer kit um mere bare mein kya sochti ho, lekin main waisa bilkul bhi nahi hun heer. Or main yeh bhi bohot achi tarha se janta hun ki tumne yeh shadi sirf apne papaji ke khatir ki hai'isiliye nahi kyunki tum mere pyar ko samjhti ho ya tumne mere pyar ko apna liya hai. Isiliye jab tak tum khud apne mann se, apne dil mere pyar ko or humare is rishtey ko nahi apna leti tab tak main tumhe chuhunga tak nahi!!!

Heer looked at Prem

Prem:- Han Heer, jab tak tum nahi chahogi, tab tak humare bich koi pati patni jaisa rishta nahi hoga. Yeh mera wada hai tumse. Anyways raat bohot ho chuki hai, to subha se sari rasme poori karte karte tum thak bhi gai hogi'isiliye tum jake change karlo or so jao'thik hai.. or yeh pani ka jag yahin side table pe hi rakha hai'by chance agar tumhe raat ko pyas lage to.

Saying this Prem went to couch and adjusted the pillow and blanket on it. He took his night suit from the closet and went to his study room for change.

Heer (thinks):- Main prem ko kitna galat samajhti thi ab tak. Khamkha main prem ko rajveer se compare karti rahi. Wo to aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai. shayad papaji sahi kehte the bhagwan ne meri Jodi Prem ke sath banai hai...

Prem came inside room after changing his cloths and saw Heer lost in her thoughts

Prem:- heer!!

Heer (come out of her thoughts):- han..kya

Prem:- tumne abhi change nahi kiya. Bohot raat ho gai hai jake change karlo'or so jao..kal subha bhi tumhe jaldi uthna hoga na'jao..

Heer:- han main bus ja hi rahi thi

Saying this she took her night dress from her suitcase and went to washroom for change.

Prem smiled and lay down on the couch thinking about Heer

Prem (thinks):- Thank you soo much bhagwan'Heer ko meri zindagi mein lane ke liye. Ab mein Heer ko kabhi bhi apne se alag nahi hone dunga.

When Heer came out of the washroom wearing violet gown'Prem couldn't help but admire her'she was looking extremely pretty. Heer was arranging her bed'she was about to lay down, when she looked at Prem. Prem immediately closed his eyes pretending to be sleeping. Heer switched off the lights and lay down on the bed, closed her eyes to get some sleep. When Prem make sure that now Heer would be sleeping, he opened his eyes and again starts looking at his princess who was now in deep sleep. Soon he too drifted into deep sleep'

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At Juneja Mansion

Heer (irritatedly to herself):- Huh aj ka to din hi kharab hai'kisi ko bhi yaad nahi aj ka din'sab bhol gaye mein..mein ab kisi se bhi nahi baat karoungi'specially Prem se'usse bhi yaad nahi hai aj din..waise to shadi se pehle barde barde waden kiye the..heer main tumhe saari khushiyan dunga'tumhe kabhi udas nahi hone dunga'wagera wagera'huh'or aj jab un sare waadon ko sach karne ki bari aai to aj ka din hi bhul'Gayatri ma- Lalit papaji, preet, meher or yahan tak ki mere sage ma-papaji yaad nahi ki aj unki beti ka janam din hai'Mein kisi se baat nahi karoungi ab'kisi se bhi nahi'.

Heer was in her worst mood'talking to herself whiling working in the kitchen'it has been 10 months since her's and Prem's wedding took place'.and in these 10 months'many things has changed'now her relationship with Prem has improved a lot'and after lots of argument with her brain now she came to the conclusion that "she is in love"'yes she is in love with her husband Prem juneja'.but she's too scared to confess this truth in front of him'in these 10 months Prem and as well as the juneja family gave lots of love to her'she too love and respect them but today she was angry, not only with Prem, but with her in-laws and her family'because they forget that today's her birthday'.

At early in the morning when she woke up, she was expecting that Prem will wish her happy birthday in different style'but nothing sort of that happened'instead of that he woke up early in the morning, got ready and went to the office'leaving a note on the dressing table'.that there is an important meeting..and he has to leave without informing her'sorry!!!!

But she pacified herself "chalo koi baat nahi'.he'll wish her later'but to her disappointment'he didn't even call her once in the whole day'and when she called him..To remind him about her birthday'then his manager would give lame excuses that he's busy in the meeting'or foreign delegates are here etc etc'.Same thing happened with rest of the family members also'today they are too busy to talk to her'

And at evening she was in the kitchen making food for herself because'Prem would come late from the office, lalit-gayatri went outside to had dinner with some family friend and Preet was busy with his friends and he would also had his dinner outside'

After making dinner she come in living room, sat on the couch and switched on the T.V for time pass. She was randomly channels'as if she wasn't interested watching it'.Just then a door bell ring'

Heer:- is waqt kon hoga'kahin Prem to nahi

With this thought she excitedly went to the door and opened it'soon her excitement went into drain when she saw Preet at the door'.with restless expression on his face'.

Heer soon forget that she was supposed to be angry with him as he forget his bhabi's birthday, when she saw restlessness on his face and worriedly asked

Heer (worriedly):- Preet kya hua tuje, Tu itna pareshan kyun hai'.

Preet:- Kya batoun bhabi'aj ka to din kharab hai'sab kuch gardbard ho gaya'

Heer:- arre lekin hua kya'batayega bhi'

Preet:- bhabi apko yaad haina'maine pichle dino apko ek lardki ke bare mein bataya tha'alisha'yaad hai'jise mein bohot pasand karta hun'jo abhi bhi humare college mein aai'meher ki friend'

Heer:- han han yaad hai'yaad hai'to usse kya hua??

Preet:- usse kuch nahi hua'.hua to muje hai'

Heer (confused):- tuje kya hua'offo preet'tu ghuma fira ke baat keun kar raha hai'seedhe seedhe batana kya hua'

Preet:- bhabi aj haina'Alisha na muje apni party mein bulaya hai'.to maine apne dosto ke sath yeh shart lagai hai ki main aj ke aj hi usse purpose karounga'..lekin ab mai bohot nervous ho raha hun..

Heer (teasingly):- ohh to mere pyare devar ji'.jo na jane kitni lardkiyon ko apne charm se nervous kar chuke hain'aj khudi ek lardki ki waje se nervous ho rahe hai'hmm

Preet:- han bhabi'please help me na'

Heer:- Lekin Preet main teri help kaise kar sakti hun'

Preet:- ap meri help kar sakti ho bhabi'ape k kam karo'ap mere sath Alisha ki party mein chalo na'

Heer:- arre preet!!! Lekin main aise kaise uski party mein ja sakti hun'main to usse janti bhi nahi hu'or usne tuje invite kiya'main jaoungi to aise ache nahi lagegaa na preet'nahi nahi'yeh thik nahi hai'

Preet:- oh c'mon bhabi please'Alisha ne muje invite kiya hai'ab main apne sath kisi ko bhi le jaoun..to wo meri marzi haina'please bhabi chalo na'apke ane muje kafi moral support milega'please bhabi mere liye!!!

Heer:- lekin Preet main kai'

Preet:- PLEASE!!!!!!

Heer (defeatedly):- acha thik hai chalti hun..

Preet (excitedly):- thank you bhabi'love you a lot'ab world ki best bhabi ho

Heer:- han han bas ab maske lagana band kar'

Preet giving cheesy smile

Preet:- chalo jaldi se jaake taiyaar ho jao

Heer:- taiyar to main ho jaoungi'lekin

Preet:- lekin kya???

Heer:- lekin preet, ghar pe koi nahi hai'or agar hum party mein chale gaye..to piche se ma-bauji ya Prem agaye to'

Preet:- bus itni si baa tab unki tension mat lo'ma-bauji se meri baat hui thi or wo 11 baje se pehle nahi ane wale..or abhi to sirf sham 7.15 baje hai'or rahi baat PB ki to office mein busy hai'or shayad late bhi ayenge'.ap ek kam karo..ap jake taiyar ho tab tak mein PB ko call karke inform kar deta hun'ap mere sath party mein ja rahe hao..thik hai'chalo ab jaldi jao'or jaake taiyar ho'.

Heer:- han thik hai jaate hun'tu prem ko call kardena thik hai'

Preet:- han thik hai ap jao'

Heer left for her room to get ready'and Preet dialed Prem's number

Preet (smirkingly):- PB get ready'kam ho gaya'main bhabi ko leke bas 1 ghante mein pohoch raha hun'

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On the way

Heer:- Preet pakka na'mere ane se Alisha ko koi problem to nhi hoga na'.muje bohot ajeeb lag raha hai aisa party mein jaate hue'.

Preet:- bhabzzz relax!!! Kuch nahi hoga'.ab bus mere sath hi rehna..or muje support hi karna ok..

They reached at Hotel Sunshine

Preet:- bhabi ape k kam karo ap andar jao'tab tak main car park karke ata hun'

Heer:- lekin Preet main aise kaise andar akeli chali jaoun'main to andar kisi ko janti bhi nahi hun'

Preet:- bhabi'ap chinta kyun kar rahi ho, meher hogi na andar.

Heer:- Meher??? Meher andar kyun hogi???

Preet:- arre bhabi ap bhool gai, maine apko bataya tha ki Alisha meher ki friend hai'or Alisha ki party mein uske friends nahi honge to phir kon hoga'

Heer:- arre han'main to bhool hi gait hi'meher to hogi andar'thik hai main andar jati hun, tu jaldi se car park karke ajaiyo..thik hai

Preet:- yup!!! Main do minute main ata hun'

Heer got down from the car and preet drove away the car for parking

Heer entered the ball room of the Hotel but what she saw'.the entire hall was dark'there wasn't any electricity'.infact not even a single candle was light there.

Heer:- yahan to bohot andhera hai'shayad main galat hall mein agai hun

Heer was about to leave but then suddenly the entire hall got brighten, and the whole crowd there started singing

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR HEER!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!

And heer was in complete shocked or you can say surprised

Heer saw her parents along with Meher, her in-laws , her school and college friends and her childhood friends even her office friends was there singing happy birthday song for her. Later preet also come stand with his parents and joined them

Tears welled up on her eyes'seeing this cute surprise

Gayatri came forward and wished her happy birthday then hugged'same thing goes with lalit, balraj and teji'Meher hugged her sister and then Preet wished her and hugged her

Heer (holding Preet's ear):- Preet ke bache!!!! Acting achi kar leta hai tu

Preet:- aww bhabi please chordo na dard ho raha hai..

Heer smiled and left his ear and then again hugged him

Heer:- thank you soo much'muje to laga tha ap sab log bhool gaye mera birthday'.maine to kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki ap log itna barda surprise plan karenge mere liye

Gayarti:- arre aise kaise bhool jate hum humari Heer ka birthday'.hum sabko tera birthday yaad tha'or hum tuje subha wish bhi karna chahate the'lekin Prem ne hum sabko mana kar diya tha

Heer:- Prem ne???

Teji:- han Prem ne'.yeh sara surprise Prem ka hi to plan kiya hua hai'

Preet:- or unhone hi to muje apko yahan lana ka kaam saupa tha'

Heer:- Prem ne kiya yeh sab??? Muje to laga tha ki wo bhi mera birthday bhool gaya hoga

Meher:- han di Prem jiju ne hi kiya yeh sab

Heer:- Lekin Prem hai kahan

Just then

Song link:- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0WXAAJKAGw


shehzadi hai koi, hai pholon si koi

Koi hai ab zara, pari si, pari si hai koi'.

Shehzadi hai koi, hai pholon si koi

Koi hai ab zara, pari si hai koi


(Prem singing the song holding mic'looking at Heer'Heer blushed)


Mehfil mein ho gayi hai shamil haan dekho yeh haseen

Is ki khushi ke liye aaye deewane hum sabhi

Mehfil mein ho gayi hai shamil haan dekho yeh haseen

Is ki khushi ke liye aaye deewane hum sabhi


(Prem came and stand in front of dance group and start moving with the beat. Heer smiled widely seeing prem singing and dancing for her)


Aap joh bolen woh denge na hum aapko

Har nazar kar rahi hai salam aapko

Shokhi mein bhi hai sadigi

Hai aap mein woh tazegi


(Prem came near Heer'continuously looking at her'moving around her'and Heer was blushing and smiling)


Chahiyi hai dham se aapke

Yahaan pe yeh dil kashi

Mehfil mein ho gayi hai shamil haan dekho yeh haseen

Is ki khushi ke liye aaye deewane hum sabhi


Prem took the bunch of flower from the side table and kneeled down with rest of the dancing boys in front of Heer'offering her flowers..Heer blushingly took them from Prem)


Shehzadi hai koi, hai pholon si koi

Koi hai ab zara, pari si hai koi


(Prem bring all his and her's friends near Heer and dancing around her)


na na na na na na na

na na na na na na na


Prem came and stood infront of Heer holding a rose flower


Prem:- Happy Birthday Heer!!!


Heer (smiled with tears accepting his rose):- Thank you soo much Prem


Seeing her tears


Prem:- Heer!! Main yeh sab kuch tumhari ankhon mein ansoon dekhne ke liye nahi balki khush dekhne ke liye kiya han


Prem said whiling wiping her tears off


Heer:- Nahi Prem, main bohot khush hun'or yeh khushi ke ansoon hain'tumne yeh sab kuch mere plan kiya'maine to kabhi soch bhi nahi tha..thank you soo much Prem


Prem (smilingly):- Wo to karna hi tha after all dosti ki hai nibhani to pardegina'.


Heer smiled..Just then Preet came there


Preet (teasingly):- umm sorry to interrupt your this thank you session but wo kya haina'cake katne ka time ho raha hai'or muje bohot bhook bhi lagi hain'to please


Prem and Heer laughed at Preet


Prem bring Heer at center near the table on which cake was there

Heer took knife in her hand'at first she blew the candles and then cut the cake'everybody start singing


HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR HEER!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!

Heer took the piece of cake and first gave it to Prem then Gayatri- Lalit, Teji-Balraj, then Meher and at last Preet'


After this rest of the guest came and start wishing Heer and giving her gifts. While getting greeting from everyone Heer looked at Prem who busy with his friend'Prem too looked at Heer'.both of them exchange smiles

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[Hey everyone'well according to me..This was the last part of this SS'but seeing your sadness I've decided to give Epilogue'.so the next part will be Epilogue'.so after reading this get ready for epilogue'.which will contain lots of your favorite scenes of Premeer and many secrets will be revealed '.but first give comments on this part.]


Next Part:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3351151&PID=81644708�

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HURRYYY..!! I M THE 1ST ONE TO COMMENT..

AWESOME kIRAN AWESOEM..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

BT HOW COME LAST PART.. AVI TOH i love u VI NAI HUA? ๐Ÿ˜ญ AND ROMANCE BET THEM.. WOH VI TOH NAI ๐Ÿ˜‰?? TOH HOW CAAN IT Be last????

And what is the meaning of epilog? i mean whts the difference? sorry i m new to all these so asking
๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” .
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
great ending
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

HURRYYY..!! I M THE 1ST ONE TO COMMENT..

AWESOME kIRAN AWESOEM..๐Ÿ‘

BT HOW COME LAST PART.. AVI TOH i love u VI NAI HUA? ๐Ÿ˜ญ AND ROMANCE BET THEM.. WOH VI TOH NAI ๐Ÿ˜‰?? TOH HOW CAAN IT Be last????

And what is the meaning of epilog? i mean whts the difference? sorry i m new to all these so asking
๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” . ๐Ÿค” .

sanju...epilogue means...finale...or climax ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

sanju...epilogue means...finale...or climax ๐Ÿ˜‰



Ok climax.. Hmmm ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

aab khatam ho jaye ga.. premeer ka love story..?? ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

bt make sure the epilog be best filled with the Romantic romantic bet premeer so that mein copy kar saku,... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



Ok climax.. Hmmm ๐Ÿ˜ญ

aab khatam ho jaye ga.. premeer ka love story..?? ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

bt make sure the epilog be best filled with the Romantic romantic bet premeer so that mein copy kar saku,... ๐Ÿ˜†

copy????๐Ÿ˜ฒ
๐Ÿ˜† ok...๐Ÿ˜†

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