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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashri12

thank u soo much for the lovely update😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyahmt

Lovely update...
MEET scenes were cute. Loved the way meher knockd out preet :D
PREMEER was adorable. Lovd the way prem protecting heer <3
cant wait to see the next.
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

very cute update dear

preet meher meeting was rocking
Prem heer scenes were so cute
Loved it
precap sounds interesting
Waiting for it
Take care dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -prime-

lovely upadte but HEER is too ziddi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

hello knock konck!! don't forget to update soon 😊

i try to update asap...dont worry 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
please update with loads of premeer,,,

]i miss them.. please kiran
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dear plss update soon waiting
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Part-13

Teji opened the main door as the door bell rang. It was Heer

Heer (smilingly entered):- Hi ma

Teji smiled and closed the door after she entered

Heer straightly went to the fridge, opened it took out a water bottle and drank the water

Just Balraj came there

Balraj:- Arre beta agai tu, aj bardi der ho gai ane mein

Heer:- Han papa ji wo bus hi nahi mil rahi thi'isiliye thordi si der ho gai

Teji:- chal koi baat nahi..meher bhi bus abhi abhi college se hi aai hai'tu bhi jaldi se fresh ho ja'tab tak mein ap sab ke liye chai or snacks bana deti hun

Heer smilingly nodded her head and went to her room for freshen up

Both Teji and Balraj looked at each other

Teji:- Aj Heer ka mood thorda thik lag raha'mere hisab se aj hi baat kar leni chahiye usse

Balraj (nodded his head):- Hmm tum thik keh rahi ho'lekin bhi nahi'aram se dinner karne ke baad hum usse baat karenge'thik hai'tab tak meher ko bhi samjha dena ki jo baat uski aj college mae preet se hui thi'us bare mein wo Heer se abhi koi baat na kare thik hai.

Teji:- Thik hai..mae bol dungi usse'mae tab tak chai banati hun

After saying that Teji went to kitchen and Balraj start watching TV sitting on the couch in living room

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In Juneja Mansion

Prem happily enterend the house continuously whistling'Seeing Prem's mood trio Lalit, Gayatri and Preet also become happy

Gayatry (loving tone):- Prem'kya baat hai aj barda khush nazar araha hai mera beta'

Prem come and hugged Gayatri

Prem:- Kyunki aj mae bohot khush hun ma

Gayatri:- Hamesha aise hi khush raha kar.

Preet:- Mom, agar ab chahati ho ki PB hamesha aise hi khush rahe to bus jaldi se PB or Heer bhabi ki shadi karwa do'kyunki PB ki is khushi ki waja Heer bhabi hi to hain'kyun PB sahi kahan na meine

Prem blushed and ran his hand through his hairs

Lalit:- Gayatri duniya ka athwa ajooba'humara mera Prem sharma raha hai'oh khote da puttar sharmana band kar ab jaldi se yahan aake hume bata ki tera plan kahan tak pohocha

Prem smilingly came sit beside Lalit

Prem:- bas bauji..samaj lijiye ki ab Heer ke dil mein mere liye jagaha ban hi gai'

He remembered when they were in the bus and Heer was secretly smiling on his antics

Gayatri (delightedly):- Yeh to bohot hi achi baat'or sabse bardi baat to yeh hai'ki Heer ke ghar walo ko bhi is rishtey se koi aitraz nahi hai'

Preet:- Correct ab bas Heer bhabi hi der kar rahi hai han karne mein

Gayatri:- Han wo to hai'lekin isme us bechari ki bhi koi galati nahi hai'us ke sath itna kuch ho gaya hai..to aise mein kisi ke liye bhi mushkil hoga kisi pe itni asani se vishwas karna,'isiliye behtar yahi hai ki hum Heer ko thorda time den'sambhalne ke liye.

Prem:- Han ma ap bilkul sahi keh rahi hain'hume Heer ko sambhalne ka moqa dena chahiye lekin wo moqa main Heer ko shadi ke baad dunga!!!

Gayatri, Lalit and Preet become shocked

Gayatri (shocked):- Lekin Prem beta'yeh thik nahi rahega'agar hum abhi Heer ko time nahi denge to..beta yeh to zabardazti hui na phir uske sath. Hum aise kais'

Prem:- Janta hun ma..ki yeh Heer ke sath ek tarha ki zabardazti hi hui..lekin ma (Prem in tears) main ab Heer ko khona nahi chahata'Ek bar pehle bhi isi waje se maine Heer ko khodiya tha'ab jab bhagwan ne Heer ko meri zindagi mein wapis laake muje ek or moqa diya hai..to main yeh moqa gawana nahi chahata'main Heer se bohot pyar karta hun ma'And now I just can't afford to lose her again!!!

Lalit:- Lekin Prem yeh'

Prem:- Bauji'trust me'muje pe bharosa rakhiye'main Heer ke sath kuch galat nahi hone dunga'or rahi baat Heer ko time dene ki to uske pas abhi 18 din or bache hain'or 18th din k eagle din hi Heer'Mrs Heer Prem Juneja ke naam se kehlayegi'bas

Preet:- Pb I like your spirit'don't worry I am with you!!

Prem smiled and hugged him

Prem:- Thanks bhai!!!

Seeing the brother's love both Lalit and Gayatri smiled

Lalit:- Thik hai Prem jaisa tu chahega..waisa hi hoga

Prem:- thanks ma'bauji

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After dinner time in Heer's apartment

Teji was massaging Heer's head with oil..Balraj and Meher was sitting across the table in front or Teji and Heer.

Heer had her eyes closed as she was enjoying the massage. Balraj, Teji and Meher was talking to each other through their eyes'telling each other to talk to Heer about her marriage'At last Balraj started the conversation.

Balraj:- ahem..an umm Heer beta

Heer (closed eyes):- hmm ji papaji

Balraj:- Beta wo tumse kuch baat karni thi

Heer (still with closed eyes):- Ji kahiye

Balraji:- beta tumne aage ke bare mein kya socha hai

Heer now opened her eyes looked at her father in confusion

Heer:- Aage ke bare mein??? Matlab???

This time teji came forward to speak

Teji:- matlab..hum teri shadi ke bare mein baat kar rahe hai beta.

Heer (shocked):- Shadi???

Balraj:- han Heer shadi'dekh tu kab tak aise akele zindagi bitayegi..kabhi na kabhi to tuje shadi karni pardegi na

Heer (angrily):- pls papaji'muje shadi karne mein koi interest nahi hai'muje shadi nahi karni'or mein akele kahan hun'ab sab log to haina mere pas..to phir

Balraj:- Lekin kab tak Heer? Kab tak hum tere sath rahenge? Humne to apni zindagi jee li hai'age kitna or jeeyenge..kisi ko kya pata..or Meher??? Uske baaren mein bhi to soch. Jab tak teri shadi nahi hogi'uski shadi kaise hogi.

Heer:- Papaji..ap Meher ki fikar mat kijiye'uski shadi ho jayegi'main karwaoungi uski shadi'lekin please ap log muje shadi ke liye force mat kijiye please!!!

Teji (angrily):-Thik hain..hum nahi force karenge tuje'.teri shadi ke liye jo kuch bhi socha tha..jitne bhi sapne dekhe te..un sapno ko apne dil mein hi daba ke hum mar jayegi'tab tuje tasalli hogi'

Heer:- Ma yeh kaisi baatien kar rahi ho ap

Teji:- To thik hi to keh rahi hun'kya galat bol diya maine'yahi to tu chahati haina'

Heer:- Uffo ma..ab khamkha baat kaa batangard bana rahi hai..yeh aj achanak se ap ko meri shadi ka khayal kyun aya

Balraj:- teri shadi ka khayal to kabse humare mann mein hain'lekin khayal zuban pe aj aya kyunki aj tere liye ek rishta aya hai'.

Heer got shocked

Heer:- Rishta??? Mere liye??? Par..kiska rishta???

Meher:- Prem Juneja ka rishta???

Heer again got shocked

Heer (whispered):- Prem!!!

Heer (angrily to her parents):- ohh to ab samaj mein aya..ki yeh shadi ka fitoor apke dimand mein kisne dala hai'uss Prem juneja ne'

Teji:- Han to kya burai hai Prem mein'kitna acha lardka hai'sanskari hai'apne papa ka poora business sambhala raha hai'uska pariwar bhi kitna acha hai..or'

Heer:- hold down'hold down'uske pariwar??? Ab log Prem ke pariwar se kab mile

Teji:- umm wo' Prem ke mummy or papa aj hume shiv mandir mein milen'or tabhi unhone humse Prem ke liye tera hath mang liya tha

Heer (shocked):- Kya???

Balraj:- Han beta'dekh..main janta hun..ek pehle jo kuch bhi hua..usse tera vishwas uth gaya hai'shadi par se lekin beta saare lardke ek jaise nahi hote'.Prem bohot acha lardka hai beta..wo tuje bohot khush rakhega'uske pariwar ke sath uske ghar mein tu bohot khush rahegi'or sabse bardi baat prem tujhse bohot pyar bhi karta hai'

Heer:- Lekin papaji main

Balraj:- dekh tuje apne ma- papaji pe vishwas hai ya nahi

Heer nodded her head positively

Balraj:- to bas phir humari baat man or shadi ke liye han karde

Heer took deep breath and said

Heer:- Thik hai papaji'ap kehte hai to main is rishte ke bare mein'Prem ke bare mein sochungi'.lekin maine abhi shadi ke liye han nahi ki hai'muje thorda waqt chahiye'

Balraj:- Thik hai beta tuje jitna waqt chahiye..lele'koi jaldi nahi hai'bus tune humari baat maan ke humari izat rakhi..humare liye yahi bohot hai'.tu sochle is bare mein'tab tak hum mein se koi bhi is bare mein tujhse baat nahi karega thik hai

Heer:- Jee papaji'main bohot thak gai hun'main sone ja rahi hun'good night!!!

Balraj:- good night beta!!!

Heer left from there

Teji:- chalo shukar hai'50% to man gai..

Balraj:- Han par jab tak Heer 100% is rishtey ke liye nhi manti koi..bhi is bare mein usse baat nahi karega..

Both Teji and Meher nodded

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Balraj and Teji informed Lalit and Gayatri that Heers has agreed to think about Prem's marriage proposal. All of them become happy special Prem. Now it has been 10 days since Heer's parents had talked her about her marriage..but still there was no response from Heer'neither Yes nor No. And Heer's this silence was making Prem crazy day by day.Even Meher and Preet also tried some trick to bring Heer and Prem together but end up with huge mess. In these 10 days Prem was continuously trying to make Heer comfortable in his presence, to make her realize about his love for her..And some what he was successful in this task, because now he was completely sure that he has some soft corner for himself in her heart. Aur ab bus Heer ki Han ki zaruraat hai!!!

On 11th day Heer was getting ready to go to office, just then she heard some noise from her parents bedroom. She ran towards her parents room and saw Balraj on the floor unconscious and Teji was crying setting next to Balraj trying to bring him on conscious.

Heer (shouted in fear):- PAPAJI!!!!!!

She come and kneeled down near Balraj

Heer:- ma papaji ko kya hua'

Teji (in tears):- Pata nhi beta..abhi thik the'achanak se behosh hoke gir parde'

Heer:- ma papaji' ko hospital leke jana pardega'ap gabrao mat..kuch nahi hoga papaji ko'.main taxi leke ati hun

Heer left from there to bring taxi

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At City Hospital

Heer, Meher and Teji were outside waiting for the doctor who was checking Balraj to come and give them the details about Balraj's health.

Heer came and sit next to Teji who was continuously crying

Heer:- Ma..pls ro mat'kuch nahi hoga papaji'ap chinta mat kijiye'

Teji nodded her head and hugged Heer from one side and Meher also hugged Heer from another side.

Just then doctor came outside

Heer:- doctor mere papaji kaise hai..wo thik to haina

Doctor:- umm gabrane ki koi baat nahi hai'he's out of danger now'lekin

Meher:- Lekin'lekin kya doctor

Doctor:- Well it was a heart attack'

Trio Heer, Meher and Teji got shocked

Heer:- kya heart attack!!!

Doctor:- Ji I guess it was a first attack'or pehle hi attack mein hi unka heart bohot kamzor ho gaya hai. Its better'ki kisi bhi tarha ka koi stess, tension ya exertion na'wo job hi kahe'waisa hi ho'warna 2nd attack bhi aa sakta hai'jo ki unki life ke liye bohot dangerous sabit ho sakta hai'

Heer:- ji'hum is baat ka poora khayal rakhenge'ki papa ko koi tension'hum unhe ghar kable ja sakta hain

Doctor:- Abhi unka BP bhi high hai'or cholesterol bhi barda hua hai..to main kum se kum aj ke din yahan rehne ki hi salha dunga'aj ke din hum unhe under observation rakhenge'or kal kuch test karwa ke or ECG karwange'agar sab kuch normal raha to ab unhe kal hi ghar le ja sakte hai'lekin aj ke liye unhe yahin rehna pardega.

Heer:- Thik hai doctor'hum abhi mil sakten unse

Doctor:- ji han'lekin time pe ek hi insane unse mile'or unke samne pls roiyega mat..ok

Heer:- Ji doctor..thik hai

Doctor:- Ab tab tak..reception pe ja ke admission ki formalities poori kar dijiye pls

Heer:- Ji doctor main formalities poori kar deti hun

Heer (to Teji):- Ma ap jake papaji se millo..main tab tak form bar ke aati hun Thik hai..

Teji:- thik hai beta

Heer goes to reception and start filing the form

In the mean time Prem and his family arrived there as Meher informed Preet about Balraj's attack

Lalit:- Bhabiji'kaisi tabiyat hai Balraj ki?

Teji (with tear):- doctor ne kaha hai ki heart attack tha'abhi khatre se bahar hai lekin aj ke din unhe under observation rakhenge. Unhe kisi bhi tarha ka koi stress ya tension nahi hona chahiye.

Gayatri:- Ab chinta mat kijiye..bhagwan pe bharosa kijiye'sab thik hoga

Prem:- Han aunty..ap chinta mat kijiye'balraj uncle bohot jald thik ho jayenge'I'll make sure that ki best treatment mile

Teji was delighted to here these words from Prem and her family'now she is hundred percent sure'that Heer will happy in this family and with Prem after the marriage.

Prem (to Lalit):- Bauji mein formalities poori karke ata hun.

Lalit nodded his head

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At the reception

Heer was filing the form at the counter. After filing the form she handed it back to the nurse. Nurse took the form back and ask her to deposit the fees i.e Rs 25000/-

Heer (shocked):- kya 25000???

Nurse:- ji 25000/- admission or treatment fees hai'baki jo dawaiyan or injection hain'.wo apko khud bahar se hi khardine pardenge.

Heer (thinks):- hey bhagwan'abhi 25000 hazar kahan se laoun'.is mahine to kharcha bhi bohot ho gaya hai. ab mae kya karun'.

Heer (to nurse):- umm kya fees abhi thordi der mein deposit karwaon to chalega

Before nurse could answer her.

Yeh lijiye mera card'.said Prem

Heer turned around and looked that Prem was standing holding his debit card looking at the nurse

Prem (to nurse):- jitna bhi amount you can take it from this.

Nurse took the card and swapped it and handed back to him

Heer (angrily):- Iski koi zarurat nahi thi'mae unhe pay kar deti na. yeh sab karke kya sabit karna chahte ho tum'ki tum kitne ameer ho huh'.kya sabit karna chahte ho'mae apne papaji ka ilaj nahi karwa sakti. Tum samjhte kya ho apne apk'..

Prem (angrily):- Just shut up'.

Prem angrily held her by her arm and dragged her to the corner and caged her between him and wall by putting his arms on both the sides.

Prem:- kya keh rahi thi tum mae yeh sabit karna chahta ki mae bohot amir hun'tum gareeb'how could you thing about me like that heer. Muje laga tha ki tum muje ab samjhne lagi ho'mere pyar ko samajhne lagi ho. Lekin nahi'aj tumne phir se muje galat sabit kardiya'..Heer'maine payment sirf isiliye ki taki tumhare papaji ke treatment na ruke'tumhe pata hai agar abhi tum payment nahi karti to yeh hospital wale tumhe time to dedete payment karne ke liye lekin wo sath hi sath wo tumhare papaji ka treatment bhi rok dete'samjhi tum'isiliye payament ki maine'.agar mere yeh karne se tumhare dil pe bohot barda bhoj pard gaya haina to'.to jab tumhe salary mile to muje yeh paise wapis kar dena..thik hai

Prem left from there leaving shocked Heer

Tears welled from her eyes.

Heer (cryingly thinks):- Maine phirse Prem ko galat samjh liya!!!!

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Heer come and greeted Lalit, Gayatri and Preet

Gayatri:- beta chinta mat kar..waheguru sab thik karenge'.

Heer smiled and hugged Gayatri'From the edge for her eyes she was looking at Prem with guilt. Prem was just looking at her without any emotion.

Just doctor came for the another check up of Balraj

All are waiting for the doctor outside the room when doctor came outside all them started questioning him about Balraj's health

Doctor:- gharbrane ki koi baat nahi unki recovery ho rahi hai'.and now he is in conscious or who Heer se milna chahate hai'to ap mein se Heer kon hai

Heer:- Ji doctor'main hun Heer.

Doctor:- wo apse milna chahate hai'lekin ek baat ka dhayan rakhiye ki unhe kisi baat ka stess na ho'..

Heer:- ji doctor.

Heer went inside the room and and sit beside Balraj

Heer:- Ap ko pata hai'.apne hume kitna dara diya tha'

Balraj gave a weak smile

Balraj:- isme ghabrane ki kya baat hai'an sharer hai'.dukh suk to chalta hi rehta hain'.or waise bhi ek na ek din sabhi ko jana hi hai'

Heer:- please papaji aisi baatie mat kijiye'.

Balraaj:- isme darne ki kya baat hai beta'yeh to zindagi ka dastur hai'lekin beta

Heer:- lekin kya papa

Balraj:- mein marne se pehle apni dono betiyo ko shadi ke jorde mein dikhna chahata tha'.unka ghar baste hue dekhna chahata tha'lekin ab aisa lagta hai ki mera yeh sapna adhora hi reh jayega'.tum dono ki shadi se pehle hi mein'

Heer:- nahi papaji..Please'.aisa mat kahiye..Please'.ab muje or meher ko shadi ke jorde mein dehkna chahate haina'to ap zarur dekhoge papaji..

Balraj:- kaise dekhunga beta'kaise tu to shadi karna nhi chahati ot teri shadi se pehle meher ki shadi nahi ho sakti'to kaise dekhunka mein

Heer (with tears):- ap zarur dekhoge papa'main'MAIN SHADI KE LIYE TAIYAR HUN!!!!

Balraj :- sach!!! Tu sach keh rahi hai beta

Heer:- han papa ji'ap chahate haina ki main Prem se shadi karun'to main karungi'lekin pleas ap marne ki baat mat karo please papa'.

Balraj smiled and put his hand on her head

Balraj:- aj main bohot khush hun beta'bohot khush!!!

Heer took his hand and kissed it

Heer :- Love you papa

Balraj:- Love you too beta!!!

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(Ok guys..here is the next part...hope you like it 😳)


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Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

finallyyy!!!!! you updated it 😃 thank you so much ❤️

so heer is ready to get married 👏 i'm happy that everyone is so happy and i'm sure that heer at the depth of her heart is also happy 😳 i think we are going to read wedding rituals from next updates. i'm very excited kiran ⭐️ 🥳

love,hate.anger whatever u show me if it's premeer i keep on phreaming about them

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