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Posted: 12 years ago

Previous part:- https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3351151&PID=81574451�

Climax

Heer was standing with Meher and some of her friends

Meher:- Di'jiju ko kab bata rahi ho???

Heer:- kya????

Meher (teasingly):- yahi ki ap Prem ki dewani ho'

Heer blushed

Heer:- chup!!! Kuch bhi bolti hai'

Meher:- oh c'mon'we all know that you're in love with jiju'infact dil hi dil mein jiju bhi yeh baat jante hai'.bas apke confession ki deri hai'..

Heer:- Meher dekh tu n'.

Geet (Heer's friend):- or nahi to kya heer'meher thik keh rahi hai'dekh aj moqa bhi hai or dastoor bhi'aj sabke samne bol hi de Prem ko'ki tuje usse pyar hai'

Heer (blushingly):- shutup geet!! Tu bhi meher ki tarha kuch bhi bole ja rahi hai'

Meher:- di isme sharmane wali kya baat'dekho jiju ne apke birthday apko kitna acha surprise diya'to uske badle'unke liye apke pyar ka confession sabke samne to banta hi haina'to chalo'abhi jake sabke samne jiju ko "I Love you bolo" c'mon chalo

Heer:- Meher tu pagal ho gai hai kya..nahi

Geet:- Kya nahi nahi kar rahi hai'Meher bilkul sahi keh rahi hai'chal abhi jaake Prem jiju ko "I love you" bol chal..

Both Meher and Geet started dragging towards the stage and Heer was continuously protesting'Just then Prem come to the rescue

Prem (confused):- Heer'kya hua??? Meher'kahan leke ja raahi ho Heer ko

Meher:- Jiju human di se keh rahe hai..ko wo apse apn'.

But Heer closed her mouth with her hand

Heer:- umm kuch nahi Prem'wo meher to bas aise hi'kuch bhi bole ja rahi hai'

Prem:- umm anyways..Heer zara aao to'muje tumhe apne best friend Karan se milwana hai'

Heer:- han chalo..

Heer immediately goes with Prem before Meher and Geet could stop her

Prem:- Heer isse milo'yeh Karan hai'I best friend..

Heer:- Karan'Prem'inhe to main janti hun'yeh to Raj'..

Heer got sad thinking about the past

Prem'got the reason of Heer's sadness and understands her uneasiness

Prem changed the topic

Prem:- acha tum janti ho Karan ko'

Karan:- han Prem, Heer or main ek hi college main the

Heer:- umm han'lekin tum dono ek dosre ko kaise jante ho

Karan:- arre hum dono ek sath college mein'.

Prem glared at karan for blurting out the truth'.as Heer does not have any clue that Prem was in the same college as hers

(Note:- Heer still don't know that Prem was in her college)

Heer (confused):- Kya college mein??? Prem tum humare college mein the???

Prem:- umm nahi Heer actually wo'Karan ke kehne ka matlab tha'umm hum dono MBA college ke dost hain'ummm London'London mein'.haina karan

Karan:- han han Heer'hum dono MBA college ke dost hain'actually Delhi university se graduation poori karne ke baad mein..MBA karne London chala gaya tha'wahi main Prem se mila tha

Heer:- oh acha'

Prem sighs in relief

Karan:- by the way this my wife Kritika'

Heer:- hello!!!

Kritika:- hello'Happy Birthday!!

Kritika handed her a bouquet

Heer:- thank you so much

Karan:- arre main to tumhe wish karna bhool hi gaya Happy birthday Heer

Heer:- Thank you'

Karan:- umm Prem'Kritika ki tabiyat thordi thik nahi'to I'll take your leave..

PRem:- arre itni jaldi'

Karan:- han actually from past few days she's not feeling well'to isiliye'

Prem:- ok..main zyada insist nahi karounga'Main driver ko bolta hun..wo tum dono ko tumhare hotel chord ayega

Karan:- arre Prem uski zarurat nahi hum issi hotel mein hi thehre hain'

Prem:- h ok..thik hai'

Karan hugged Prem and said bye to Heer

Just then one waiter come and accidently collide with heer and drop glass of cold drink on her saree

Heer (wiping her saree):- oh no

Prem (angrily to waiter):- dekh ke nahi chal sake'

Waiter:- sorry sir'sorry man'achanak se pair slip ho'I so sorry

Heer:- its ok'koi baat nahi tum jao'

Waiter left from there

Kritika:- Heer tum ek kam karo humare sath humare room mein chalo'or yeh saf karlo'warna daag pard ajyega'

Karan:- han kritika thik keh rahi hai

Heer looked at Prem

Prem:- han Heer jao'or yeh saaf karlo'

Heer went with Karan and Kritika

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In Karan-Kritika's room

Kritika :- Heer washroom wahan hai'

Heer:- ok thank you

Heer went inside the washroom and start wiping the cold stain'after washing the stain, she was about to leave but stopped hear the conversation of Karan and Kritika

Kritika:- Karan'tumne or Prem ne Heer se jhoot kyun bola..ki Prem tumhe London mein mila tha

Karan:- shhh Kritika dhere bolo Heer sunlegi

Kritika:- dhere to mein bol lungi..but pehle batao'tumne to muje bataya tha ki Prem tumhare sath delhi mein college mein'or ussi college mein Heer tumhari junior thi'.Or Prem Heer se college ke time se pyar karta tha'to phir tumne Heer se jhoot kyun bola

Hearing this Heer got shocked

Heer:- Prem..mere college mein??? Main'

Karan (to Kritika):- Han job hi maine tumhe bataya thaw o sab sach'or Heer se jhoot maine Prem ke kehne pe kaha tha'kyunki wo nahi chahata ki Heer ko ise bare mein kuch bhi pata chale'

Kritika:- Lekin kyun??? Prem kyun nahi chah''

But Kritika stopped in between

Karan:- Kya hua'tum aise chup kyun ho gai

Karan turned around and looked and got shocked seeing Heer

Kritika:- Heer..umm wo tumhare saree mein cold drink ka daag nikal gaya hai'

Heer:- abhi abhi tum dono jo baat kar rahe the'kya wo sach hai'

Karan:- umm Heer wo hum dono to bas aise

Heer (with tears):- Karan please'sach sach batao'abhi abhi dono jo baat kar rehe the kya wo sach hai'please karan'please batao muje'kya Prem humare hi college mein, tumhare class mein tha??? Han..kya muje college humare college ke time se janata tha'please Karan batao muje please!!!

Karan took a deep breath

Karan:- Han Heer'yeh sab sach hai!!!!

Heer got shocked'then Karan narrated her whole story..how first time Prem saw her and fell in love with her'how he used to follow her'how he secretly helped her'how his heart got broken when he got to know her and rajveer's relationship etc '.till how he Prem saw her in his office and he told Prem about Heer's past.

Tears welled up in Heer's eyes

Heer (closed her eyes and whispered):- PREM!!!!!

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At the party

Prem (to himself):- Heer itna time kyun laga rahi hain ane mein'

Just then he felt something'.and turned around and looked at the stairs where Heer was standing

Song Direct link:- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aKo9jhed3xI

Na kuch Poocha, Na kuch managa

Tune dilse diya jo diya''..

(Heer sang while take steps on stairs looking at Prem)

Na kuch bola, na kuch tola''''.

Muskurake ke diya jo diya

(heer took one more step towards Prem'Prem looked at her into her eyes')

Tu hi dhoop, tu hi chayaa

Tu hi apna, paraya

Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu

(Prem smiled with tears seeing the same love of him in her eyes and he wanted to see)

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai..yara mein kya karun

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai..yara mein kya karun

Sajde sar jhukta hai yara mein kya karun

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai..yara mein kya karun

(Heer come in front of Prem bend to touch his feet as if she asking his forgiveness for not understanding his love but Prem stopped her holding her by her shoulder and hugged her)

Rab ne'banadi jodiii'hayyyeee

All the people who were present there had tears in their eyes'seeing Heer's cute confession and started to clap. Hearing the the sound of the clap'both Prem and Heer broke apart.

Heer (with tears):- I am sorry Prem!!

Prem:- shh'aj mein bohot khush hun heer..tumhari ankhon mein apne liye wahi pyar dekh ke mein bohot khush hun'.

Heer:- I love you Prem!!!

Prem:- I love you too!!!

Saying this they hugged each other again tightly

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Prem was standing near the window shirtless continuously smiling thinking about Heer's confession and the moment of their first love making session'.Prem shyly smiled remembering how heer melt into his arms'he remembered those words of love which they both exchange just few hours ago while making passionate love

Suddenly he felt a pair of hand on his chest from back'he felt the soft kiss on his bare back'Prem smiled and bring his wife in front of him sliding his hands on her waist..And Heer put her both arms around his neck and she was wrapped in white sheet'.

Heer put her head on his bare chest placing soft soft kisses on his chest'.Prem too hugged her tight placing kiss on her head.

Heer:- tum soye nahi abhi tak..

Prem:- nahi

Heer:- kyun???

Heer looked at him broking there hug

Prem caresses her cheeks'.

Prem:- kyunki main yeh pal, yeh lamha jina chahata hun, mehsoos karna chahata hun hare k pal ko'is pal ka muje kabse intazar tha'

Heer smiled and hugged him again

Heer:- lekin main tumse ek baat ko lekar naraz hun'

Prem:- or wo kya???

Heer:- tumne muje kyun nahi bataya ki tum mujhse college ke time se pasand karte ho'

Prem (shocked):- kya umm nahi to'

Heer:- jhoot mat bolo Prem, muje sab pata hai'.Karan ne muje sab sach bata diya..

Prem:- karan ne'.(beneath his breath) karan ke bache ko to main chordunga nahi'

Heer:- kya kaha tumne'khabardar agar tume karan ko kuch bhi kaha to'samjhe'agar karan muje nahi batata to'to muje to kabhi yeh pata hi nahi chalta ki tum mujhse itna pyar karte ho'ki meri khush ki khatar'tumne apne pyar ko kurbaan kar diya'or muje door chale gaye'.yahan tak ki apne pyar ke bare mein muje pata tak nahi lagne diya'

Prem:- Heer..umm main kya bolo tumse'.main

Heer:- kuch mat bolo Prem'main samajhti hun'khair chordo'jo ho gaya so ho gaya'ab shuru se shuru karenge humari zindagi'

Prem smiled and kissed her forehead

Heer:- waise'ek minute'.tumne muje mera birthday gift abhi tak nahi diya'.

Prem:- arre'tumhare liye itni surprise party arrange kar'wo kam tha kya'jo tumhe ab gift chahiye'infact tumhe to mere surprise ke badle muje ek return gift chahiye

Heer:- return gift???

Prem:- ji han'

Heer:- acha to kya return gift chahiye'

Prem smirked and pulled her closer by holding her by waist..Bring his face near her ear and whispered

Prem (whispered):- humari pyar ki nishani'chahat!!!

And he kissed her earlobe and started the series of kisses on her neck

Heer blushed'hugged him tightly by putting arms around his neck

While kissing on her neck Prem scope her in his arms, heading towards their bed'He make her lay properly on the bed'Heer cupped his face between her palms brought him near her'Prem after give the passionate look sealed his lips with her's and led her to the paradise of his enternal love'.


----THE END----

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first 🥳
awesome kiran..finaly heer knw the entire history and i lovd her confesn..
And premeer scene..wht should i say..phrooling..
cant believe that this ss is ended 🥺 i'm gona to miss this badly..
Keep writing..


Edited by Premeer_Diwani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awww how sweet! finally heer came to know about
"heer deewana" 😛

karan-kritika, meher-geet were nice parts 😊

lucky prem ⭐️ heer confessed to him in front of everyone 👏

the last scene ☺️ ☺️ i'm so dead 😛 😳 hope they get their chahat soon 😃

kiran i'm so sad it's ending but honestly it was a treat to read your version of premeer and kis desh. ver very well written

A BIG THANKS TO YOU.
hope you will write more in future.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Its an awesome lovely update kiran
Love u dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a fantastic epilogue
Loved the way heer said her feeling to prem
awesome
hope we get to read more fabulous stories from you
thanks for the pm
kiran_28 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

Me first 🥳
awesome kiran..finaly heer knw the entire history and i lovd her confesn..
And premeer scene..wht should i say..phrooling..
cant believe that this ss is ended 🥺 i'm gona to miss this badly..
Keep writing..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania


awww how sweet! finally heer came to know about
"heer deewana" 😛

karan-kritika, meher-geet were nice parts 😊

lucky prem ⭐️ heer confessed to him in front of everyone 👏

the last scene ☺️ ☺️ i'm so dead 😛 😳 hope they get their chahat soon 😃

kiran i'm so sad it's ending but honestly it was a treat to read your version of premeer and kis desh. ver very well written

A BIG THANKS TO YOU.
hope you will write more in future.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hcsee17

Its an awesome lovely update kiran

Love u dear ...

kiran_28 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

That was a fantastic epilogue
Loved the way heer said her feeling to prem
awesome
hope we get to read more fabulous stories from you
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
C o n g r a t u l a t I o n s on completing your SS.

pg 57
Meher and Geet literally dragging Heer to the stage 😲 what's wrong with these girls ! Glad Prem rescued her. Karan and Kritika are funny. How can they discuss about PH while Heer was v close by haha. I thought it was hilarious. Anyhow Heer finally found out and it's cool. Her re entry into the party accepting Prem's love for her is v sweet. Nice job Kiran. 👍🏼

Prem thinking about Heer and how they finally moved on their relationship is a no e scene. Also Heer confronting Prem about him being in her college and his feelings is v interesting. You covered all the loop holes haha :)

Ty 4 entertaining us 🤗 will miss this shy / strong willed Prem and attitude filled Heer,
Masti of cute Preet , Meher and the warm hearted parents of both PH / Meet.



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