new ff-rishtey updated pg 32 - Page 22

honey nice part
pls thoda bada lkho
aur jaldi pia ki shadi roko ya phir yahan bhi shadi mein se use bhagane ka irada hai

whe n r u writhing the next part.i also think jai is going to fil bani's maang
davia

my next part is going to be long and the story comes to an end.may be this part really surprise yu.

i'll update soon.
stay tuned.........

honey

very nice
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awwwwwwww !!! Honey !! the last part was fab !! amazingg !! awww !! y cant Bani admit it that sh elovess jai !! the confession needss to comee sooonn !!!! will be waiing eagerllyyy for a nicee lovey doveyy parttt !! 😉
great updatee hun !! andd ur Sher's.....r simplyy trooo goood !! yyaar itna acha kaisee likthi ho ...? 😉 😃
pleasee updateeee soooonn !! will be waiting eagerllyy !!
Thnksxx !!
Shafaq ! 😛
👏

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

awwwwwwww !!! Honey !! the last part was fab !! amazingg !! awww !! y cant Bani admit it that sh elovess jai !! the confession needss to comee sooonn !!!! will be waiing eagerllyyy for a nicee lovey doveyy parttt !! 😉
great updatee hun !! andd ur Sher's.....r simplyy trooo goood !! yyaar itna acha kaisee likthi ho ...? 😉 😃
pleasee updateeee soooonn !! will be waiting eagerllyy !!
Thnksxx !!
Shafaq ! 😛
👏

thanks for yur appreciation.so yu also like my shairi.i'm happy.and i'm writing something for yu.

Khuda na kare apko kabhi koi ghum mile
khushiya,hansi our kamiyabiyan har dam milein
Ghum jab b kabhi barhna chahe apki taraf
Khuda kare raste mein use hum milein

aapko kaisa laga batana zaroor....
honey

ye specially mari pyari jaan ke liye.arz kiya hai..

Naa muhabbat naa dostii ke liye
vaqt rukataa nahii.n kisii ke liye

dil ko apane sazaa na de yuu.N hii
soch le aaj do gha.Dii ke liye

har ko_ii pyaar Dhuu.NDhataa hai yahaa.N
apanii tanhaa sii zindagii ke liye

vaqt ke saath saath chalti rahe
yahii behatar hai adaa ke liye...

meri jaan,jawwab ka intezaar rahega mujhe...

honey

Originally posted by: honey11

ye specially mari pyari jaan ke liye.arz kiya hai..

Naa muhabbat naa dostii ke liye
vaqt rukataa nahii.n kisii ke liye

dil ko apane sazaa na de yuu.N hii
soch le aaj do gha.Dii ke liye

har ko_ii pyaar Dhuu.NDhataa hai yahaa.N
apanii tanhaa sii zindagii ke liye

vaqt ke saath saath chalti rahe
yahii behatar hai adaa ke liye...

meri jaan,jawwab ka intezaar rahega mujhe...

honey

awwwwwwwww thats so sweet! i really like ur poems and this one is very special! amazing yaar! u write so well! i tell u u shuld publish them!😉 and i would buy all of ur books!😃 mazing poem! well done and thanx uve done it for me! thanx thanx thanx! im very happy now!😊

Originally posted by: honey11

my next part is going to be long and the story comes to an end.may be this part really surprise yu.

i'll update soon.
stay tuned.........

honey

i'll be waiting!😊

end? oh nooooooooo

meri jaan tumhari khushi se mujhe bohot himmat milti hai...but i'm not too good in writing.writing another one..

Dekhoo muhabat karoo tu itni karoo k koi had na rahay,
Intezar karoo tu itna karoo k koi waqt na rahay...
Bharoosa karoo tu itna karoo k koi shak na rahay
Nafrat karoo tu itni karoo k phir muhabat na rahay...


tumhare jaisi koi ho hi nahi sakti jaan....tum itni achi ho isliye tumhe main bhi achi lagti hoon...

honey