taarey ff: Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasan - Page 11

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

Omg!didi aur ek story???bt am sure it vil be osom blossom!!!!n am sry fo commenting late!..sry didi...just read CS nd Promo..itz superb!!bt watz dis??taani is in love in dis ff??par akhir me to taarey hi honge..isiliye no worries!^_^ nd thanx fo d pm!i just loved dis blockbuster nd SUPER SERIOUS STORY!!n der iz no doubt ki aap seriouswaly lovestory ni likh sakti..U R A FAB WRITER!!!plzz continue n do pm me!:-)

Chapter 1:

"Mohobbat har insaan ko azmaati hai,

kisi se rooth jaati hai aur kisi par muskurati hai,

mohobbat khel hi aisa hai kisi ka kuch nahi jaata

aur kisi ki jaan chali jaati hai'"

after writing those heavy words taani closed her diary' she was in pain, in deep pain' she kept dat diary aside n took a photo frame which was on table.. Constantly tears were flowing from her eyes when she was caressing someone's photo with her soft palm.. she was weeping badly bt still managed to utter some words'

taani: kyun sujal.. kyun kiya tumne aisa' main (while sobbing) main bohot buri hoon na.. tumne kyun kiya aisa'

when taani was so engrossed in dat photo frame her mom knocked the door..

rukmini: taani beta chalo nashta karne'

taani wiped her tears immediately n answered her mother: yes mom.. coming..

taani kept dat photo on table n moved towards the dining table..

at dining table her mom was waiting for her to come n when she came rukmini went near her n caressed her back slowly..

taani was in doubt.. she didn't get why her mother was behaving like this..

taani: what's wrong mom??

rukmini knew it will be very difficult for taani but she was helpless, after all she was a mother who always wanted to see her daughter happy''.. after gaining all the courage she sat on chair..

rukmini: taani tumhare papa aur main chahte hai ke tum shadi karlo..

after listening "Shadi" word taani's eyes filled with water.. she didn't know how to react on this situation.. for a moment she was awestruck..

rukmini was trying to read her daughter's expressions.. bt taani was not in her sense so her mom again called her..

rukmini: taani'

taani was brought to her sense quickly: haa??

Rukmini: kya socha hai tumne??

Taani was disturbed bt she had to convince her mother..

Taani: mom kyun kar rahi ho aap yeh sab.. aapko pata hai na main sirf sujal se pyaar karti hoon phir kyun aap''''''.

Bt taani was cut off by her mom..

Rukmini: taani sujal ko mare 2 saal ho chuke hai.. ab bass bhi karo yeh sab..

Taani: momm.. (taani shouted at her mom..) sujal mere liye abhi bhi zinda hai.. aaj bhi uski hassi mujhe sunai deti hai.. aaj bhi uski aankhein mujhe dekhti hai.. aaj bhi main use mehsoos kar sakti hoon' itna hi nahi uski aankhri cheekh aaj bhi mujhe raat ko sone nahi deti.. aj bhi main krishnaji se jhagadti hoon ke uss din hi kyun mujhe ice-cream khani thi.. aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe woh din.. uss din sujal bohot khush tha.. aakhir usne aap logon se humare rishte ki jo baat ki thi aur aapne haa bhi kaha tha.. isiliye mujhe long drive pe le jana chahta tha' pagal.. (small smile appeared on her face..)

FLASHBACK

Taani: sujal pls car slow chalao.. pls dekho mujhe sach mein dar lag raha hai.. pls sujal'

Bt sujal was so happy dat he didn't listen to her.. now taani got scared n tightly shut her eyes n held sujal's hand which was on gear knob.. as soon as her hand touched his he first looked at their hand n then taani.. he smiled n stopped the car, taani realized dat n slowly opened her eyes..

Sujal was looking at her with a cute smile'

Taani frowned n said: has rahe ho na?? mujhe darane mein mazaa aata hai na tumhe?? Huh???

Sujal placed his other hand on her hand which was still holding his hand tightly..

With a cute smile he replied: tumhe darane mein nahi balki jab tum dar kar mera hath pakadti ho na tab mujhe bohot mazaa aata hai..

Taani blushed n lowered her gaze..

Sujal: ohhooo koi toh rok lo.. blush haayeee'

Taani hit him on his chest n said: shut up sujal.. btw chalo na ice-cream khate hai..

Sujal: are mere hote hue tumhe dusri meethi cheez khane ki kya jaroorat hai haa??

Taani rolled her eyes..

Taani: sujal ab yeh draamebaazi band karo haa.. aur chalo'

Sujal laughed n said: as u say my angel.. tum meri jaan bhi manglo toh woh bhi tumhare liye hazeer hai..

Both got out of the car n started walking, taani was so happy bt soon her expression changed into fear when she saw a truck coming towards them in full speed.. in no time sujal pushed her aside n that truck hit him so badly dat he died on the spot..

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She covered her face with her palms n started weeping.. rukmini had tears in her eyes bt she knew it was time to console her daughter so she wiped it immediately n caressed taani's back..

Rukmini: pls taani beta mat ro.. par main ek maa hoon.. mujhe bhi apni beti ki shadi dekhni hai.. tum kabtak aise rahogi.. aur main aaj hoon kal nahi par mujhe tumhe apne husband ke sath dekhna hai jo tumhe pyaar kare.. jo tumhe chahe.. pls taani pls..

Taani removed her hands from her face n hugged her mom..

Taani: mom pls aapko pata hai na sujal ne mujhe bacha ke apni life kho di.. main uske liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti kya?? Main sirf uski rehna chahti hoon mom..

Rukmini caressed her hair n said: tumhe lagta hai sujal khush hoga tumhe aise dekhke?? Pls taani meri aankhri wish samajh ke puri karo.. sujal bhi yahi chahta hoga ke tum life mein aage badho.. pls taani pls..

Taani broke the hug n wiped her tears'

Taani: thike mom.. aap mere liye ladka dhundo.. bt main humesha sujal se hi pyaar karti rahungi.. btw mom mera kaththak show hai aaj so bye..

N she left..

Her mom smiled n talked to herself: no taani iss duniya ka ek rule hai ke zindagi kisi ke jaane ke baad rukti nahi aur har kisi ke liye koi na koi bana hota hai.. I hope tumhara perfect match jaldi mil jaaye'

N I know woh jaldi hi tumhari life mein aayega'

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At Singhaniya's house

"aaj to tu gaya beta' itne bade dance academy ka owner ek show judge karne ke liye late ho gaya.. kal paper mein toh tere bohot charche hone wale hai.. kaha tha kal alarm laga ke sona par nahi.. janaab ko alarm sunai kaha deta hai.. aur kar beta raat raat bhar "dil se re" pe dance.. " rey was murmuring to himself while getting ready..

He got out of his room n marched towards his dadi's room..

He opened the door n peeped his head through door' n he saw his dadi sitting on the bed n reading newspaper.. he entered n went near dadi , sat beside her n said..

Rey: kya dadi aapke samne itni badi news hai aur aap yeh sab padh rahi ho..

Dadi folded newspaper neatly n said: teri news kya sunu.. yahi ke mr. reyaansh singaniya ek badi academy ke malik phir se unke show ke liye late pohoche..

Rey remembered about his show n stood up quickly..

Rey: freak dadi.. aaj mujhe show judge karne jana hai.. aur aap ko pata hai na aapse mile bina main kahi nahi jaata so jaldi se apni blessings dijiye..

Dadi smiled.. rey took blessings of her dadi n went out of the house..

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At VENUE

As soon as rey reached all girls started running towards him but thanks to guards who saved rey from them.. he went inside where show manager was waiting for him..

Rey: mr. khanna right? Sorry for being late..

They shook hands..

Mr. khanna: yeah right' hello mr. reyaansh singhaniya.. n no sir aap bilkul waqt pe aaye hai' show abhi start karne ka waqt ho gaya hai toh shuru kare??

Rey: yeah why not..

Mr. khanna: so sir baki do judges ready hai.. aap bhi apni seat le lijiye..

Rey: yeah sure..

They both went near other judges n rey settled down.. Show started in another 10 mins.. rey was honestly judging dancers until taani came on dance floor..

The moment taani came on the floor rey's heart skipped a beat.. whole world stopped for him.. he could only see her not anyone else.. In her entire performance rey stared at her.. her cute face, her perfect postures for kaththak, her long hair didn't allow rey to blink for a second.. he was mesmerized by her beauty as well as her dance bt her eyes were reflecting deep pain.. "she was perfect" he thought.. he was staring at her until she left the stage..

After all performances taani got first prize n rey gave that prize to her.. she took it from him bt he was lost in her beauty dat he didn't understand when she left..

"thank you mr. reyaansh singhaniya for coming" host announced n all clapped.. n that was the time when rey came to his sense.. he saw here n there bt didn't find her.. he ran towards the manager..

Rey: excuse me.. woh abhi ek ladki ko maine prize diya tha.. taa.. taa.. haa taani yahi naam announce hua tha.. bata sakte hai who kaha gayi??

Mr. khanna: ji sir woh toh abhi abhi bahar gayi..

Rey: ok thank you' n he ran out.. Sweet smile appeared on his face when he saw her bt in a fraction of sec. she stopped one auto n went from there.. rey ran behind auto bt couldn't catch her..

Rey: shit'

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At swayam's place

Swayam was relaxing in his room when rey knocked.. as soon as swayam opened the door rey hugged him tightly' swayam was surprised bt he hugged him back n after breaking the hug he asked rey..

Swayam: kya baat hai rey.. aaj itna jyada khush kyun hai..

Rey loudly said: cuz mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai swayam..

Swayam was awestruck cuz rey was the one who told swayam dat he hates love bt today he sounded different..

Swayam: kya baat kar raha hai yaar?? Tu aur pyar??

Rey sat on sofa n replied: haa swayam mujhe ishq wala love ho gaya hai' suna toh tha love at first sight bt aaj pata chala ke yeh kitna sach hai'

Swayam was listening to him with open mouth..

Rey: aaj use pehli baar dekha aur dekhta hi reh gaya' uska dance, uski aankhein.. u knw wat swayam uski aankhein itni khoobsurat thi ke kya kahoon bt mujhe unmein pain bhi dikha yaar.. uski ek nazar hi kaam kar gayi' tera frnd toh tabhi mar gaya yaar' aaj pata chala ke love ki feelings hoti kaisi hai n trust me my bro it's wonderful.. bass ab jaldi se use dhundna hai..

Swayam changed his expression into confusion n said: ek sec dhundna hoga matlab??

Rey: matlab yeh ke mujhe sirf uska naam pata hai..

Swayam was shocked: wat???? Tu ek ladki se pyaar karta hai aur tujhe pata nahi who hai kaun.. great.. ab uska naam bata kya hai..

Rey : haa woh taa..

Bt suddenly swayam's phone rang n he said: ek sec haa rey.. abhi aaya..

Rey: nahi tu baat kar main chalta hoon dadi wait kar rahi hogi.. baad mein milte hai byee..

Swayam: ok bye kal baat karenge iske baare mein..

Rey with huge smile: yeah mere paas ab iske alawa koi baat hai bhi nahi karne ko..

N he left'

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So dat was it guys' I know guys aap logone bohot jyada expect kiya hoga na' so sorry if it was not dat good.. n so sorry for writing mistakes...

Res/ unres

First part was awesome dear... It's really nice ... Aww Taani ka pain and wow our hero is in love with the heroine yaar... Pehli Nazar ka Pyar ... Sounds really sweet :)
Plz update next part soon :)

Its fantastic!!
Taani's pain is really very hurting...
Rey in love with her!! Dat too at first sight!! Awesome!!
Ye bilkul bhi bura nahi tha!! It was brilliant! :D

it was really nice update soon

Loved the first chapter. A very good beginning. Please continue! :)

Pehli nazar mein kaisa jadu kar diya..😳😳.. Love at 1st sight , thats something so so magical n u wrote it perfectly ...
Now frm the start. The start was bit painfull , i was smiling reading the naughty sujal n a cute couple ..but... Fate just snatched him...was feeling sad reading taani in pain

it wasn't tht gud!!!! r u mad!!!!! IT WAS AWSOME DEAR...❤️ it... Rey ko pehli nazar me taani se pyar ho jata hai!!!... ye sayed pehli bar maine kisi ff pe padha hai... I sooo luv this different beginning of taarey's luv stry...nw eagerly waiting 4 the nxt part... do update soon

You cant just call this Good ... It was beautifully awesome ... Its sad that the guy Taani loves is dead amd she has been going thru a hars phase for the past 2 years and then later own camw my Rey ... Well pehli nazar mein ishq wala love is sooo cute eapecially when it comes to boys ... I really can't wait for the next chapter ... Thanks for the pm and do update soon