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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Yay. .yayy. .yayyy. .yayyy. .yayyy. . . .
Me first. . . . . . . .
Yupieee. . . . . . . .
So,cuming to the OS. . .
Lovd it. . . . . . . .
Maza aa gaya. . .
Bt,u knw,I HATE SAD ENDING. . . . .
And KRIYAANSH KI SAD ENDING. . .
A BIGG NOOO. . . . . . .!!
Please,we want a second part. .pls. . . .
Ek aur last part pls. .

hm bolene ko bhimaar hai hmmm😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome OS.. Bt I don't lyk this type of ending! :-( want another part of it..
Give it a perfect ending plzz..
Edited by --Shukti-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome update.. loved it.. d sudden change if events were portrayed brilliantly.. gang c kria comes to know abt her sacrifice n d way rey went away al numb was nice.. swayam said everything to rey n he now wants his baatcutter back to his life.. end was sad.. if possible give a happy wala ending by giving another part to it... plz... but on whole it was awesome os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nyc OS...
but very sad one😭...
rey ko sab patha chal gaya but still he lost kriya...
want kriyaansh 2gether..
plzzz unhe mila dooo...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
awsome os...

u can cont to ss..
pls write more...show how rey went to dehradhun..,
pls cont

u write good!
love
tc!
shivani
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
It was an awesome super duper jhakkas OS.
But sad...


Aaise mind may aarahe thay donon..
Plzzz aik aur part likho aur donon ko mila do..
Can't see them..I mean read them like that😊😭
Well! Apart from that it was an amazing OS.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
it was amazing but please do continue it ... please please please ... one or two more parts please ... mujhe jaan na hai ki aage kya hua ... please please aur parts bhi update karo ... please please please 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hey guyzz i'm back..most of u ppl..hav asked me to update..last part...

so here's d update..4 u all...n thnq...soo much...for ur lovely reviews...




PART-2:

Swayam kriya chali gayi, mein usse wapas paa kar hi


rahoonga... Mujhe Dehra Dun Jana hoga... Kriya ko wapas Lana


hi hoga.." Said Rey. Sharon n swayam both supported him as


they too want kriya n Rey to be together forever... " Rey chal


ab chal tu kal dehradun jaa... Aur kriya ko wapas laakar hi


lotna..." Said swayam firmly.


The next Rey packed his bag and was about go when he

thought once he should taani n tell her tht der's nothing


between dem n also to meet gang...


Everyone were in rehearsal hall including taani...


"Guyzz mein jaa raha hoon"said Rey to gang. " par Rey aap

kaha jaa rahe ho.." Said taani. "Taani Tum rukho..." Said

swayam stopping her... " mere kriya ko wapas laane.. Aur taani

joh kuch bhi Tum humare baare soch rahi woh nahi ho

saktha.. I mean ki mein tumse pyaar nahi kartha... I love only

kriya..." Rey said... " mein aapko nahi rokungi..agar apko kriya

se sach mein pyaar hey tho I won't come in between u'll... I'm

happy ki aapko aapna pyaar mil Gaya... Aur mei hi pagal ho joh

pyaar samaj ke beyti thi..." Said taani with tears...( I really dont


think so coz i hate tht taani nani😡)


" haa taani... Rey ko Jana hi hoga.. rey kriya ko wapas laana

hi hoga... N Rey hum Sab tumhara saath hai... Tu jaa aapne

pyaar ko wapas lekar aa..." Said swayam firmly... And whole

gang cheered him...


Rey immediately took the flight and landed in dehradun after

4...5 hrs...



He got kriya's address frm Sharon as she knows where kriya

stays...


He then reached kriya's apartment were she leaves.. actually


at the door


little bit nervous..


ting tong...


kriya opened the door...


she was completely shocked by seeing rey here n she was also

scared coz ifher mom comes to know is here then...


" rey aap yaha kya kar rahe ho..."asked kriya...


" kriya mein tumse milne aaya hun..muhje tumse kuch baat

karni..hai"answered rey.


"rey please aap yaha se jao..agar mom ne dekh liya tho bahut

bade problem hogi..plz aap yaha se chale jao." said kriya in


tensed way.


" nahi mujhe tumse kuch baat karni.. itz very important..nahi


toh mein nahi jee saktha.." he said.


" kk wait mein abhi aati hoon.." she replied.


she went inside told her mom tht shez going on terrace take

bring clothes and directly took him to terrace..


"ab baatao kya baat karni hai.." kriya said.


"kriya woh i'm sorry kriya... i just wanted to tell ki I LOVE

YOU... mein tumhare bina nahi ji saktha hoon plz wapas aajao


kriya.. sharon aur swayam bhi yahi chate hai...aur humare


friends bhi...everyone misses u so much.. plz kriya tum


wapas mumbai aajao.. mujhe maaf karo galti meri hey uss din


mujhe tumhari kahi hui baat ka vishwas nahi karnichaiye tha..


plz kriya im sorry tum aajao mein tumhare binanahi ji saktha.."


he told crying.


"rey ab kuch nahi ho saktha...mom nahi manegi.. mein aapse

bahut pyaar karthi hoon par mom nahi manegi aur mom ko


akela chod ke nahi aa sakthi.." she also said crying.


"kriya mein aunty se baat karoonga plz.. man jao.. plz


kriya..mein ji saktha tumhare bina plz.." he said


she immediatel hugged him tight..


"rey I LOVE YOU TOO...mein aapke bina nahi ji sakthi... baata

nahi kaise jiye meine itne din...par sach toh yeh hai ki mein bhi


nahi reh sakti aapke bina.."she told still hugging him.


"kriya chalo mein aunty se baat kartha.. hoon.. ab hume koi nahi

rok saktha.." he said firmly.


" rey par mujhe dar lag raha hai..." she told him...


" kriya mein hoon na tum daro mat..mein baat karlunga aunty

se.."


"KRIYA..." kriya's mom shouted.


"tum toh shirtless wonder hona... tum yaha kya kar rahe


ho..."smriti said..


" aunty woh mein... mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai.."


" mujhe kuch nahi sunna.. kriya chalo niche..." kriya's mom told..


" mom plz aap ek baar rey se baat kijiye.." kriya spoke with

fear.


"aunty plz... mein kriya se bahut pyaar kartha.. mein usske bina


nahi ji sakthahoon plz aunty kriya ko wapas mumbai aane do...


plz aunty mein kriya ko bahut acche se khayal rakoonga..plz


aunnty.." he said.


" wht... mein janthi thi tum yahi kahoge..ki mein kriya se pyaar


kartha hoon n all.."

"par mom rey mujhse sach mein pyaar krtha.. n even i love

him..plz.. maa.."kriya told with tears in her eyes...


" mein rey tum par believe nahi kar sakthi...tum mumbai ke

ladke na.. no kriya chalo niche..."


" par aunty mumbai ke saare ladke ek jaisse nahi hote hai.. plz

mein kriya se bahut pyaar kartha hoon n i can prove tht aunty.."


" kk so meri ek condition hai... mein tumhe test karoongi..


matlab tumhe yaaha ek haafte test karoongi..tab mein decide


karoongi ki tum meri beti ke layak ho ki nahi.."


" kriya chalo niche... tum bhi..."





After one week...


it was finaaly the day when kriya's mom will take decision abt

dem...


"hmm... kk mujhe kk hai..tum acche ladke ho par toda pagal bhi


ho..i mean kriya ke mamlemein..."


"tum kriya ko mumbai le jaa sakte ho.. n n sry beta.. mujhe

pehle he samaj jana chahiye tha..tum meri beti ke liye perfect


ho...jao kriya aapne rey ke saath.." her mom told.


"thnq u thnq u so much aunty..." n hugged her..


"aunty nahi maa... tum mujhe maa bhula sakthe ho.."


"thnq u mom I LOVE YOU..." said kriya n the trio hugged...


the very next day kriya went back to mumbai...


she finally got her... DIL... DOSTI... DANCE...!!!!!!!!!...


😊 HAPPY ENDING..!!!😊




okay guyz finally finish... ab se yeh os ka naam.."REY I'LL MISS


YOU FOREVER..." nahi rehega... it is "REY I'LL ALWAYS LOVE


U FOREVER... hoga...so done... yippee kriyaansh ek hogaye


guyzzz wooh wwoohhh woohh..(cheers...😊😛😊)



do lyk n comment


lots of love


-deepsha❤️




Edited by deepshakriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3545177

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayye...it ws osm deepz..
loved kr ending...
no matter d3 mein we got happy ending ya not... but such ff's n os's totaly fill that incomplete kr story...!!
i feel soo content after reading kr happy endings with d3 plot..!!
love ya 4 this..!!❤️
write moree kk...!!

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