One evening at Hrishiksh: Completed!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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For all you wonderful jodi fans out there!!! Rajeev-Aamna Hrishikesh to pahunch he chuke hain, imagine ki unki pehli evening kaisi rahi hogi??? Ok so here I present my romantic cum comic interpretation of their first evening………

Rajeev: Aamna aaj mausam kitna acha hai naa!!! Kuch khaas karein?

Aamna: Kya khaas? Don't tell me tum mere liye chaand taaare tod ke lane waale ho!!!

Rajeev: Look Aamna, I can best answer this by singing, "Chaand mera dil, chaandi ho tum, chaand se hai dur, sitaare kahan!!!"

Aamna: Very funny!! Vaise tum kuch khaas karne ki baat kar rahe the!!

Rajeev: Hum dono, media ke stupid questions se dur, yahan itni khoobsurat jagah pe, akele hain, is se khaas kya ho sakta hai?

Aamna: Kuch to sharam karo!!! Vaise mai tumhe yaad dila doon ki tumne abhi tak officially ghutno pe aakar mujhe propose nahi kiya hai!!!

Rajeev: Abhi kiye deta hun. Isme kaun si badi baat hai? Aaaaaachuuuuuuuuuooooooo!!!!!!!

Aamna: Satyanaas!!! Ab cheenk aa gayi!!

Rajeev: To?

Aamna: Arre apshagun ho gaya!! Ab propose karoge to gadbad ho jayegi!!!

Rajeev: Kaisi gadbad? Tum mujhe chod ke Gurpreet ke saath bhag jaogi????

Aamna: Stop it!! Kya ootpataang baatein kar rahe ho?

Rajeev: Acha Aamna!! Mai Shweta ke saath flirt karu ya Priyanka ke saath?

Aamna: Kisi ke saath nahi!!! Filhaal hum humari baatein karein???

Rajeev: Haan!!! Aamna tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Kya??

Rajeev: Tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Kya??? Kya hua meri aankhon ko?

Rajeev: Tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Tumhara tape atak gaya hai kya???

TO BE CONTINUED……………………..

Sochte rahiye Aamna ki aakhon ko kya hua??😆 I'll finish it off tomorrow!!!😳 I hope you liked it!!!!😉

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So the time has come to reveal the secret of Aamna's eyes...............Let's see ye dono kya kar rahe hain!!!!!

Rajeev: Tape ki kya majaal Aamna mai to khud he atak gaya hun!!!

Aamna: Kahaan?? Meri aankhon me??? (Looking romantically at him)

Rajeev: (Coming closer to her with each dialogue) Haan Aamna!!! Mai tumhaari aankhon me atak chuka hun...tumhare pyar me latak chuka hun...aur tumhare dil ki galiyon me bhatak chuka hun!!!!

Aamna: (A bit surprised at his behaviour) Tum theek to ho na Raj?

Rajeev: Aamna!!! Ek baar tum bhi kaho naa..........(Tabhi wahan park ka watchman aa jaata hai)

Watchman: Saab!!!

Rajeev: Haaaiiiin!!! Tumhari aawaaz ko kya ho gaya Aamna?

Aamna: Stupid ye mai nahi vo hai!!!

Rajeev: Lekin hum dono ke beech me ye VO kaun aa gaya darling???

Aamna: Kabhi watchman ka naam suna hai???

Rajeev: Maine to sirf AAMNA ka naam suna hai!!! (Looking naughtily at Aamna)

Watchman: Saab!!! Park band karne ka time ho gaya hai!!! Aapko jaana padega!!!

Rajeev:(To himself) Ise kabaab me haddi ban na zaruri tha kya??? (To the watchman) Tumhari shaadi hui hai?

Watchman: Haan saab!!! Hui hai.

Rajeev: Par meri to nahi hui na yaar!!! Situation ke nazakat ko samajh aur nikal le yahan se!!! Samjha???

Aamna: Tum kya khusar-pusar kar rahe ho watchman se???

Watchman: Kuch nahi memsaab!! Apun chalta hai.

Aamna: Kamaal hai!!! Tumne kya kaha use jo vo chala gaya?

Rajeev: Maine bas itna kaha ki dil ka maamla hai!!! Vo to samajh gaya, jaane tum kab samjhogi!!!!

Aamna: (Very innocently) Mujhe exaclty samajhna kya hai??? Zara elaborate karenge aap??

Rajeev: Aamna!! Bas karo ab bhaav khaana yaar...........bachche ki jaan logi kya???

Aamna: Romeo ban ne chale ho, itne se nakhre nahi seh sakte to jaao........jaakar kisi aur ko dhoondh lo.......I'm not interested!!!

Rajeev: Pakka???

Aamna: Aise kyun pooch rahe ho tum???

Rajeev: Nahi actually mai soch raha tha ki now that you're no more interested to Esha, Misha, Nisha ka raasta clear hai naa???? I mean I can................

Aamna: (Naughtily being angry at him, holds his collar close to her) Agar mere alaawa kisi aur ladki ke baare me baat ki, ya socha bhi, to mai.............

Rajeev: (inturrupting in between)..................vo jo Esha hai naa, uski naak thodi choti hai, Misha thodi moti hai aur Nisha ki aankhein thodi left-right hain!!!! Tum karogi???

Aamna: Kya?

Rajeev: (Very sweetly, like a little innocent kid) Mujhse shaadi???

Aamna: Dekhoongi....sochoongi....kal parso kuch kahungi!!!!

Rajeev: Jo kar doge inkaar, to jee na payenge.............jo kar doge iqraar, to mar he jayenge!!!

Aamna: To phir mai kahun kya???

Rajeev: Kuch mat kaho!!! Bas directly mujhse shaadi kar lo!!!

Aamna blushes. Rajeev picks her up in his arms and they went-off celebrating their love!!!!

To ye thi humaari favourite jodi ki pyaar ki ek lammmmmmmbbbbbiiiiii daastaan ke kuch pal...............DIRECT DIL SE!!!

Hope you all liked it! - *Do comment*

**I hope mods will not close this topic as it is related to the article about Rajeev-Aamna which is also posted at LRL forum**

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 Khyati, I think u had already read my answer in KTH forum, but have to say to people here, u all know ke Aamna ke Aankhien to sirf Rajeev ka dil dhekayee deta hai 😉 😳




Regard
Rajeev and Aamna jodi's biggest admirer and supporter forever and ever Zee....

Edited by farislove - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 OMG!!!!! yeh padke toh main unhe ek saath imagine karne lag gayi!! 😳
its AWESUMMMMM!! 👏 khyati....PLZZZZZZZZ continue kariye!!!!!! 😃 i jus LUVED it!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice imagination. i really liked ur creativity 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its awesome yaar Khyati 😳 ....but post it in KTHF na....coz may b the topics mite get closed na.......I really want ur FF to b appreciated 😳
Swapna-Mobile 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetncute

Its awesome yaar Khyati 😳 ....but post it in KTHF na....coz may b the topics mite get closed na.......I really want ur FF to b appreciated 😳
Swapna-Mobile 😳

It's related to the article which is posted already here, so I don't think it have to be closed, as Rajeev is a part of LRL....

Even Priyanka Bassi, and Shveta Salve's names are mentioned, so I don't think that this topic should be closed....

Regard

Rajeev and Aamna jodi's biggest admirer and supporter forever and ever Zee....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fan-fic khyati! 👏 plzzzz post part 2 faaaaaaaaaaaaaaast!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr888 i just went along with the dialogues and imagining rajeev and aamna together nice work i think aamna ki aankhon me pyar ke saath rajeev ki chahat bhi dikhne lagi hai
main shveta ke saath flirt karu ya priyanka ke saath is a very naughty question any ways i would say enjoy with aamna rajeev...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...what an imagination! wat if its actually happening... me already feel like jumping 😳
aamna gurry ke saath bhaag jayegi 🤢 😆 😉 raj is pretty gud at taunting 😆 ,tana maar raha hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: farislove

😆 Khyati, I think u had already read my answer in KTH forum, but have to say to people here, u all know ke Aamna ke Aankhien to sirf Rajeev ka dil dhekayee deta hai 😉 😳

Regard
Rajeev and Aamna jodi's biggest admirer and supporter forever and ever Zee....

Ab aankhein Aamna ki hain to chehra to Rajeev ka he hoga naa di!!!!😳😉

Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

😳 OMG!!!!! yeh padke toh main unhe ek saath imagine karne lag gayi!! 😳
its AWESUMMMMM!! 👏 khyati....PLZZZZZZZZ continue kariye!!!!!! 😃 i jus LUVED it!!!!!! 😳

A few more hours to go dear!!! It will be there for you!!!! I'm glad you could visvalize everything...........😳

Originally posted by: hina192006

Nice imagination. i really liked ur creativity 😊 😊

Thanks for the compliment!!!😳

Originally posted by: sweetncute

Its awesome yaar Khyati 😳 ....but post it in KTHF na....coz may b the topics mite get closed na.......I really want ur FF to b appreciated 😳
Swapna-Mobile 😳

So sweet of you Swapna di!!!! I have posted this in KTH Forum as well!!! I'm glad that you liked it so much..........I'll soon be completing it!!!

Originally posted by: nailaqureshi

"mai shweta k saath flirt karon ya priyanka k saath".....very nice question 😆 naughty raj 😉

Hmmmmmm.........he is very naughty, not only in my imgination, but in real life too!!!!

Originally posted by: farislove

It's related to the article which is posted already here, so I don't think it have to be closed, as Rajeev is a part of LRL....

Even Priyanka Bassi, and Shveta Salve's names are mentioned, so I don't think that this topic should be closed....

Regard

Rajeev and Aamna jodi's biggest admirer and supporter forever and ever Zee....

Thanks Zee di!!!!!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

awesome fan-fic khyati! 👏 plzzzz post part 2 faaaaaaaaaaaaaaast!

It's on the way dear!!!!

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

gr888 i just went along with the dialogues and imagining rajeev and aamna together nice work i think aamna ki aankhon me pyar ke saath rajeev ki chahat bhi dikhne lagi hai
main shveta ke saath flirt karu ya priyanka ke saath is a very naughty question any ways i would say enjoy with aamna rajeev...

Enjoy to vo Aamna ke saath he karega!!!! Aamna ke saamne thode he use koi aur nazar aayega!!!!😉

Originally posted by: mitali_s

wow...what an imagination! wat if its actually happening... me already feel like jumping 😳
aamna gurry ke saath bhaag jayegi 🤢 😆 😉 raj is pretty gud at taunting 😆 ,tana maar raha hai

Thanks!!! I'm happy to get such a great feedback!!!!

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