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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello guyz...thnks a lot 4 ur comments n lyks...And I really hope u'll lyk dis part as well... juz wanna apologize 4 da delay, many of u may knw da reason, as Anjali informed u, Thnks Anjali...ok so here we go...EnJoY..(dis update is fully dedicated 2, Cutiepie(Anjali) , Samu_khamkar, Keertu, Marooshmalik, Maanvi18, Madii786(Madhiya), Amgud, n Kulsum_virman.)


VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 38...


~Recap~


Viraat was shocked, looking at the person in front of him. His Wife, who was once his everything. After three long years, she was in front of him, looking at him through the sieve. His face changed expression, which looked more like worried one, as he saw Maanvi's hand moving towards her head, everything that was in her hand, fell on the floor, and her eyes getting slightly closed. He panicked and ran towards her in order to save her as she was losing her balance. Maanvi's vision blurred, everything around her was spinning, and the next thing she knew, everything blanked out.

Viraat: (shouts her name, while running towards her) Maanvi...


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Viren: Jeevika..?

Both were lost in each others eyes, with tears filled in it. Virika was just looking at her Mom and then at the unknown person who bumped into her Mom. Jeevika was the first one, who came to her sense and looked away. She turned towards Virika and held her tiny hand.

Jeevika: Viri chalo.

Viren gaze went towards a cute little girl, standing, wearing a blue and pink dress. His tears rolled down as he realized who that girl is.

Viren: (smiles with teary eyes) Viri...? Virika?

Virika looked at Viren in shock, yet confusedly.

Virika: (cutely) Aapko mela naam kaise pata? (How do you know my name?)

Viren: Beta mujhe nahi pata hoga toh aur kisse pata hoga, Virika..

Jeevika: (looking at Virika) Viri lets go, hum der ho rahi hai.

Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Jeevika ek mintue mujhe meri Beti se milne toh do.

Jeevika: (angerily/at Viren) Woh aapki nahi meri Beti hai Viren ji, aap please hathiye.

Viren: (shouts at her) Jeevika yeh meri bhi Beti hai, aur yeh sach tum jhuthla nahi sakhti.

Jeevika: Dekhiye, mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni hai, please mere rastein se hathiye.

Viren: (folds his hands in front of her) Jeevika Please, aisa mat karo, (tears rolling down) tumhe nahi pata main in teen saalon mein kaise jiya hun tum dono ke bagair.

Jeevika: (holding back her tears) Mujhe please jaane dijiye, mera ghar pe koi intezaar kar raha hai.

Viren: Chali jaana, par please, ek baar mujhe apni Beti ko gaale lagane do, usse pyaar karne do, please Jeevika.

Jeevika just looked away leaving Virika's hand. Viren smiled with tears and knelt down, in front of Virika, who was looking at him strangely.

Viren: (holds her tiny hands) Virika, main...

Virika: (cutely) Aap kaun ho? Aur lo kyun lahe ho? Aapko Mama ki baaton ka bula laga? (smiles) Aap fikal mat kalo, Mama aisi hi hai, woh bahut gussa ho jaati hai kabhi kabhi, pal baad mein jab gussa shant ho jaata hai, toh gaale laga kar dheel saala pyaal kalti hai. (Who are you? And why are you crying? Did my Mom's word hurt you? But you don't worry, Mama is like that only, she get really angry sometimes, but later on, when she calms down, she'll hug you and love you a lot.)

Viren: Mujhe pata hai Beta. (looking at Jeevika, pleadingly) Kash aapki Mama mujhe bhi gaale laga kar dheer saara pyaar kare. Kash ki woh mujhse gussa na ho.

Virika: Aap bahut ache ho, (looking at Jeevika) Mama, please Uncle ko maaf kaldo, woh solly hai. (You are really nice, Mama, please forgive Uncle, he's even sorry for his mistake.)
Jeevika: (looking at Viren, angrily) Viri, maafi unhe di jaati hai jo maafi mangta ho, jo apni galti maanta ho, unhe nahi, jinhe yeh lagta hai ki woh galat hi nahi hai.
Virika: Uncle, aapne Mama se maafi mangi? (Uncle did you apologized to Mama?)

Viren: Nahi Beta, (looking at Jeevika) Maafi usse nahi mangte jisse aap sabse zyada pyaar karte ho, woh toh bina maafi maage hi aapko maaf kar detein hain.
Virika: Sachi? (smiles) Aap meri Mama se pyaal kalte ho? (Really? Do you love my Mom?)

Jeevika: Uh..Viri bas bahut ho gaya, hume chalna chahiye, Mannu Maasi intezaar kar rahi hai.

Viren: (stands up) Jeevika, Maanvi...Maanvi kaisi hai?
Jeevika: (tears filled her eyes) Jis haal mein aapke Bhai ne meri Bahen ko chodha tha, aaj bhi waisi hi hai. Jee rahi hai, magar sirf mere aur Virika ke liye. (trying to control her cries) Ladh rahi hai yeh umeed se ki kabhi na kabhi uska Pati uske paas wapas aayega, uspe bharosa karega. Aaj bhi intezaar kar rahi hai woh uska, pal pal mar rahi hai andar hi andar, apni Bacchi ke liye.
Viren: Mujhe Maanvi se milna hai Jeevika.

Jeevika: (harshly) Aur kya baaki reh gaya hai Viren ji, aapke Bhai ne toh meri Bahen ka ansh usse chinn liya, aur kya chinna reh gaya hai?

Viren: (frowns) Jeevika please.

Jeevika: (folds her hands in front of him) Please hume humare haal par akela chodh dijiye. (holds Virika's hand) Chalo Viri.

Viren: Jeevika please, bas ek mintue.

Viren once again knelt in front of Virika and smiled at her.

Viren: Beta, kya main aapko hug kar sakhta hun?

Virika smiled widely, while Jeevika looked at Viren and Virika with teary eyes. Viren carefully pulled Virika close to him and wrapped his arms around his Angel losely. He was actually scared, of lossing her again. Virika wrapped her tiny little arms around Viren's neck and hugged him with a smile. Viren tightened his grip on her and cried with joy, holding his Daughter in his arms was the best thing, the best feeling in the world for him.

Viren: I Love You Beta.

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Viraat catched Maanvi on time as she was about to hit her head on the corner of the table. He worriedly patted on her cheek, in order to bring her back in conscious.

Viraat: Maanvi? Maanvi aankhe kholo, Maanvi...

He looked around worriedly, then carried her in his arms, and walked down, towards the living room. He carefully placed her petit body on the sofa and ran towards the kitchen. He came back running towards her with a glass of water in his hand. Maanvi regain conscious as Viraat sprinkle water on her face. Viraat hurriedly wrapped his hand around her shoulder and brought the glass in front on her mouth. She took a sip and opened her eyes, looking at her Husband closely after three long years.

Tere haath se pikar paani daasi se bann jaun rani...aaj ki raat jo mange koi woh paajaye re...aaa..aaa...


Unknowingly, Viraat broked her fast, his Wife's, his Maanvi's fast.

Viraat: (hand on her cheek) Tum thik ho?

Maanvi: (smiles a little) Ha..haan, m, I'm fine.

Viraat: What is this Maanvi, jab tumhe pata hai ki tum vrat nahi rakh sakhti ho toh koshish hi kyun karti hun. Agar kuch ho jaata toh?

Maanvi: (rolled her eyes at him) Kuch hua toh nahi na.

Viraat: Haan dekha maine, kuch hua toh nahi. (little angery) Agar main time par tumhe nahi bachata toh tumhara sir(head) aaj gaya tha. Bilkul fikar nahi hai na khud ki, humesha mujhe hi samjhana padhta hai. Kab sudhrogi tum Maanvi.

Maanvi: Viraat overreact kyun kar rahe ho, kuch nahi hua hai mujhe.

Viraat: Aur agar ho jaata toh? Socha hai mera kya hota? Tum na kabhi nahi badalne wali, kab chodogi yeh Bandariyan wali harkate?

Maanvi: (gasps) Tumne mujhe Bandariyaan bulaya, You Chep..(raise her hand to hit him)

Viraat: (holds her wrist) Hadh hai Maanvi, tumhe na samjhane se koi fayeda nahi hai, mujhe hi hamesha tumhara dhiyaan rakhna padhta hai, kabhi agar main nahi raha toh..?
Maanvi: (places her other palm on his mouth) Viraat.

They both looked at each other as reality hit them hard. Three years, it has been three long years they've been leaving separatedly, but today, today fate brought them face to face once again. Maanvi could see, Pain, Hurt, Anger, and Hatred in his eyes, but above all, she could see LOVE, Yes Love, she could still see Love in his eyes for HER. The only things that Viraat could see in Maanvi's eyes were Love and guilt.

Maanvi: (looking everywhere, but him) Woh..

Without even saying a word or listening to her, Viraat stood up and was about to walk out of the house, when his phone started ringing. He stopped at the door and answered his phone.

Viraat: Hello?

Mr. Kapoor: Viraat? Tumne papers sign kar liya ho toh please Ms. Chaudhary, I mean Maanvi se kaho ki mujhe woh papers send karde.

Viraat: (runs his fingers through his hair) Um..Ji, main abhi karwata hun.

Mr. Kapoor: OK thank you.

And he hang up the phone. Viraat, unwillingly turned towards Maanvi, who's eyes were filled with tears. She was standing there with her head down, and tears continuously streaming down her cheeks. Viraat looked down, sighed, and then looked back at her face.

Viraat: Ms. Chaudhary..?

Maanvi looked up at Viraat, a little shocked, hurt and confused.

Viraat: Mr. Kapoor, unhone AAPKO ek contract papers diye the, kya AAP mujhe woh contract paper laa kar de sakhti hain.

Maanvi: (confused/wipes her tears) Con..Contract Papers?

Viraat: SK music company, uska contract papers aap ke paas hai.

Maanvi: Haan par, tum..?

Viraat: (walking towards her) Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera, VSV, famous singer, shayad aapne naam nahi suna hoga. (he stopped/his back facing her back) Maine SK music company ke saath ek contract sign kiya hai, aur unka dusra contract paper aapke paas hai. (turns around/her back still facing him) So will you please, without wasting anymore time, give me those papers.

Maanvi turned around and looked at him shockedly. She was going to assist her Husband. India's Most Famous Singer, VSV.

Viraat: (controlling his anger) Ms. Chaudhary, will you please get me those papers.


Maanvi snapped out of her thoughts and turned around to leave towards her bedroom.

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It started raining as Jeevika turned around to leave, holding Virika's hand. It was raining heavily, and Virika started shivering.

Viren: Jeevika bahut barish ho rahi hai, chalo warna tum dono bemar padh jaogi.

Jeevika: (shivering/not meeting his gaze) Mujhe..aap..aapki, madat..madat ki zarurat nahi hai. Main, main chali jaungi.

Viren: Jeevika please, kam se kam (looking at a freezing Virika) Virika ke baare mein toh socho, woh bemar padh jaiye gi, mera hotel yahin hai, jab barish kam ho jaiye gi tab main tumhe ghar chodh dunga.

Jeevika: Mujhe..

Viren: (cuts her off) Please Jeevika.

Jeevika looked down at Virika who was hugging her while shivering.

Jeevika: (places her hand on Virika's head) Theek hai.

Viren carried Virika in his arms and walked hurriedly towards his car, followed by Jeevika. As they reached the car, Viren opened the door and saw Mannat crying. He place Virika on the seat carefully and went to the other side where Mannat was sitting. He sat beside her, worriedly, while Jeevika was just looking at Mannat, with teary eyes.

Viren: (cupping her cheeks) Mannu, kya hua Beta?

Mannat: (hugs him) Bale Papa, mujhe dal lag laha hai. (Bade Papa, I'm scared.)

Viren: (stroking her hair) Beta kuch nahi hai, bas barish ho rahi hai.

Mannat: (crying) Mujhe Papa chahiye.

Viren: Papa aa jaiyein gein Baby. (kisses her hair) Shhh, bas.

Jeevika: Mannat...?

Virika, Viren, and Mannat turned towards Jeevika, who was looking at Mannat with tear filled eyes.

Mannat: (wipes her tears/looking at Jeevika) Bale Papa yeh kaun hai? (Bade Papa, who is she?)

Viren: Beta (looking at Jeevika) yeh...

Jeevika: (smiles at Mannat) Maasi...main aapki Maasi Maa hun Beta.

Mannat: (smiles at her) Maachi Maa? (Maasi Maa?)

Jeevika: Haan.

Mannat: (pointing at Virika) Aul yeh? (And her?)

Viren: (smiles) Mannat, yeh aapki Bahen hai, Virika.

Mannat: (excitedly) Vilika Di?

Virika: (smiles) Tum kaun ho?

Mannat: (smiles back) Main Mannat hun.

Mannat and Virika smiled at each other. Jeevika extened her hand towards Mannat and touched her cheek. She wanted to hug her, but Virika was sitting in between them. Viren smiled, looking at Jeevika, Mannat, and Virika.

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Maanvi came back with the papers in her hands.

Maanvi: (handing him the papers) Ye..Yeh, contract papers.

Viraat harshly took the papers away from her hand and signed the papers after taking out a pen from his pocket. While he busy signing the papers, Maanvi was lost in her thoughts yet again, looking at his face.

Viraat: (handing her the papers, without looking at her) Yeh paper aap please Mr. Kapoor ko send kar dijiye ga, abhi ke abhi.

Maanvi: (eyes widen/worriedly) Oh No...

Viraat looked at Maanvi confusedly, who was looking a little worried and tensed.

Viraat: Kya?


Without answering him, Maanvi turned around with a spin and started running upstairs. Viraat who was confused, ran behind her curiously and concernedly.

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Viren: (smiles) Aao.

Mannat: (frowns) Aao na Maachi Maa. (com'on in Maasi Maa.)

Virika: Mama aao na.

Viren, Virika, and Mannat were standing inside the hotel room, where as Jeevika was standing outside, feeling very uncomfortable and confused.

Viren: (pleading through his eyes, along with words) Please Jeevika.

Mannat: (cutely) Maachi Maa, aao na pleej...(please come in Maasi Maa.)

Jeevika smiled at Mannat and entered the room.

Mannat: (looking at Virika) Aapko thand lag lahi hai? (Are you feeling cold?)

Virika: (hugging herself) Haan Mannat, mujhe thand lag lahi hai. (Yes Mannat, I'm feeling cold,)
Viren: (knelt down, in front of Mannat) Mannat, Beta aap apne kapde Didi ko doge pehne ke liye? Unke paas kapde nahi hai na abhi.

Mannat: (smiles widely) Haan Bale Papa. (holds Virika's hand) Aao Di, chalo.

She stopped and turned towards Jeevika.

Mannat: (confusedly) Maachi Maa, aapke paach bhi kaple nahi hai, aap kya pehno ge? (looking at her innocently) Mele kaple aapko nahi aayein ge na. Main choti jo hun, chilf(only) Didi ko aayein ge. (Maasi Maa, you also don't have any clothes to wear, what will you wear? My clothes are too small for you, I'm so little that's why. Only Virika Di would fit in it.)

Jeevika knelt down in front of her and hugged her tightly. Silently asking for forgiveness from Mannat and Maanvi.

Jeevika: Koi baat nahi Beta, main theek hun. (breaking the hug/smiles at her) Main aapki help karun kapde badalne mein?

Mannat smiled and nodded.

Jeevika: Chalo.

Viren: Jeevika, ek mintue.

Viren walked towards his bag and took out a T-shirt and a pant and took it to Jeevika.

Viren: Tumhe thand lag jaiye gi, abhi ke liye, (handing her the clothes) tum yeh pahenlo.


Jeevika thought for a second and then took the clothes.

Jeevika: (without looking at him) Thank You.


Mannat, Virika, and Jeevika walked towards the other side of the room, which was separated by a wall, while Viren walked towards his bag yet again and took out his clothes to change.

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Maanvi reached the terrace, it was rainning very heavily. Viraat was right behind her, he saw her standing there in the rain, looking at something very carefully. She ran towards the thing and picked it up from the table. He walked towards her, where she was standing and hugging that thing, close to her chest, as if her life deepends on it. As he reached there, Maanvi turned around and bumped into him. Her head was placed on his chest, while her hands were losely on his back, as if hugging him. Everything around them froze, their heartbeat were increasing and tears rolling down their cheeks, mixing along with the rain. Maanvi shivered and tighten her grip on him as she heard a loud thunder, Viraat felt her shivering, so he wrapped his arms around her, as he knew how scared Maanvi is of thunders and lightenings. Their eyes were closed, while hugging each other tightly.

Viraat: (softly) Maanvi...

Maanvi: (holds him even more tightly) Viraat..Viraat, mujhe bahut..bahut dar lag raha hai...

Viraat: (tighten his grip around her) Kuch nahi hoga Maanvi, main hun na tumhare saath.
Maanvi: Mujhe please chodhna mat Viraat, mujhe, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai..main...

Viraat: (stroking her hair) Sshhh,,,main hun na, nahi chodhunga main tumhe, rona band karo.

Maanvi: Viraat..mujhe...
Viraat: (kisses on her hair) Ssshhh, bas Maanvi..

Viraat tightened his grip around her, holding her really very close to him. The only thing that could calm her down was Viraat, his arms, his love, his care. Viraat moved his hand, and removed her hair away from her one shoulder to the other side. He leaned in towards her neck, and rubbed his lips on it, making her loose her balance. Viraat moved his lips down and kissed on her shoulder, kissing away all the droplets of rain away from her milky white skin. Maanvi melted in his arms, she calmed down and stayed in his arms, never wanting to let go. His hand moved up for her dupatta, which was losely placed on her shoulder, and pulled it away. His mind was asking him to stop, but his heart was telling him to hold her, to love her, to never let her go away from him. As always, his heart won over his mind, he was not willing to let her go, he loves her, he wants her, he craves for her. Maanvi held him close, along with the thing which she was worried for. Viraat continued kissing her neck, shoulder, collar bone, while Maanvi smiled with teary eyes. Both were standing in the rain, of desire and love, not thinking about anything else, just lost in each other's arms.



:D I knw, m vry mean, again stopping at a vry bad point...SHOLLY...will continue soon dis tym..hopefully...I hope u lykd dis part...Thnk u Luv Aartii..


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Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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balle balle am first one to commet finally mauka mil hi gaya 😃
arti no doubt fab amazing awesome update ..just love it 👏👏👍🏼
virika meet and viren meeting his daughter and jeevika meeting mannat and the two sisters meeting were just few adorable moments 😊 and mannat again she is sooo cute i love her kinda more than manvi😉the way she said
Maachi Maa, aapke paach bhi kaple nahi hai, aap kya pehno ge? Mele kaple aapko nahi aayein ge na. Main choti jo hun, chilf(only) Didi ko aayein ge. aww shweety baby is shooo shweet 😊

virman hmm unka part toh bahot hi weird tha wats wrng with virat multiple personality disorder hai kya usse 😆 jab dekha gale laga leta hai phir ms choudhary bulata hai ...i hate him 😔 manvi ko hurt kiya usne bechari manvi kuch bol hi nai parahi she is soo hurt 😭
virman moment bahot emotional tha...😭

i wanna know why they separated...is it coz of virika ya virman and sabko pata hai mannat ke baare mein par khud maa hi ko nai pata thats soo weird...hua kya tha and virat manvi pe shaq kese kar sakta hai...????
full confusion...😕

plzz next part jaldi update karo aur confusion door karo...😊
and i want ke manvi aur mannat ki bonding different ho i mean woh alag se kahin mile aur attached ho jaye ek dusre se 😉
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very ver nice update especially the talks between viren nd virika , jeevika nd mannat. waiting to know what will happen when they all come face to face especialy manvi nd her daughter waiting to know about their past nd waiting to know why jeevika didn't tell manvi she had a daughter. plzzz update next prt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Artii159

Thnk u so much...sorry I made u wait 4 so long...😊


😊 no need to apologize, I was just really glad you updated. Thank you so much though for the wonderful story...It was a wonderful update, and I will be waiting to read more. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar...
Finally Virika and Virman meet..
Pleasee continue soon thanks for your PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yees! u stop in the wrong place TT! continuee soon plis plis!! and nice update!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Wrong place to stop
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i really loved it.virman are missing each other.their love for eachother was portrayed so beautifully.virat unknowingly broked her vrath.loved virman scenes.and the last part was romantic.
then virika part was so emotional.father daughter conversation was so cute.loved viren's love for his daughter and his wife.
then the two sis bond was just like jeeman so caring.and they two was really cute.
loved the whole update plz continue soon and thanks for the pm😃
Edited by keertu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey arti awesome update yaar. I looved every bit of it. U r jst amazing writer. U toh rock gal. Viren nd jeevi's meetng was so touchng. Viren's pain of being away frm his daughter was written beautifuly. I hope tey patch up, so tat tey can bring virman together. Nd our two l'tle cutiepie's were so adorable. Tey r jst lyk mannu nd jeevi. Now cmng to our virman... Wat cn i say yaar, u left me speechless... Their scene was freakng hot. I m litraly dead... Bt u stopped at wrong tym dear. Pls update soon. Sry aarti, i couldnt write lng comment as i m readng thru mobile...bt believe me tis update made my day 😊 thnx 4 pm dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb, mindblowing updt...just flawless...viren met his daughter...loved viren jeevis small tiff...loved virikas convo with viren...so cute...mannat n viri r so adorable as usual...jeeman part 2...shooo shooo cute...so now jeevika is also know abt mannat will she tell this manvi?..
ahhh virat n manvi...awesome scene...virat still love her beyond anything...his anger cant stand in front of her fr long time...his true love will always win over his fake anger...there desire fr each other completely reflected frm there action...but the best part which i like most is manvi n mannat...both r not aware abt each others...but still both r so equal, lust like do jism ek jaan...both scared on the same thing, want a same person in that situation...virat...perfect mother n daugther...najar na lage kisiki...but pls dont reveal mannats reality in front of manvi soon...i want to c some serious fights btw virman over mannat...n again as u stopped at a wrong place so pls cont soon...i m egerly waiting...plsss

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