AGAINST MY WISH: part one updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER ONE

In the ancient days, when men were still men,

Nature of the world remains stable, with strength remain strong,

When legend turns myths and the balance of the world maintained.

People used to live happily among themselves, wives stocked to their husband with so much respect, love, loyalty, and faithfulness, husbands equally has the same ability of to stick to their wife and work hard to provide her and her children with enough foods and clothing despite the fact that then the main occupation was fishing and farming. Though development was however slow but the people still live very comfortable and happy.

In most community in #*#*#*, when a girl is born during her naming ceremony she will be betrothed to a man who will grow to become her husband, the girl child will grow knowing fully well that she is already married and will always appear before the people as a bride about to be wedded to a groom.

Likewise the male child will already be informed of his bride and will always bear in mind that his bride awaits him, while they wait for time to mature before the traditional rights be put in place. The male child should learn how to be hard working and as such avoid going close to other girls to avoid being cut up by his future bride just as the custom and tradition of the land demands. But all that does not relate to the way of the people in modern days, development has come to town with a lot of side effects which has completely changed the entire surface of the planet.

Law, principle and order are now the common language among the people no one wants to submit to the other because the law has put up equality among all living creatures, women having equal right as the men, children posses' equal right as that of elders.

In most foreign and advanced countries, equal rights of freedom have been extended down to animals especially dogs that no one should maltreat or underestimate any living creature.

That's all I have for now, will update the next chapter soon, hope I was not boring, sorry for not introducing yash and aarti, but will introduce them in the next chapter. Forgive me for my mistakes, See you soon guys. Please don't forget to hit the like button, and comment on it too. Thanks'.Toddles 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is one really beautiful piece of work! The way you write is amazing! I never knew you could write this well Billie!!

Amazing...loved it! Please continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .KillTheBitch.

This is one really beautiful piece of work! The way you write is amazing! I never knew you could write this well Billie!!


Amazing...loved it! Please continue soon!

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thank u very much part two on driving its way😉😃
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Wow, what a marvellous piece of writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Brilliant writing dear 👍🏼 I'm very much intrigued with your piece of work.
Concept is really interesting and I can't wait for your next update.

Thanks for the PM.
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This was superb dear...Cant wait for the main story to start...please continue...
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Opening of the chapter beautifully written, waiting for chapter two.InshaAllah .

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