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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

res. till then a short comment:
vibha this is too scary!was it a bit short or i felt it that way??
btw... not necessary these two pl are manveer, they can be J n majnu also who he killed! OR, ITS JUST JUST JUST A BAD DREAM?????



Thank you Sanju ๐Ÿค— It was indeed a bad dream ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

hey...

great...but promo
is scary.

who get wounded

uday.nooo

cant wait.continue
as soon as possible.

eagerly waiting for
next part.

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Thank you so much dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ nice to see a new reader ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

scaryyy promooo but good chapiii



Thanks Huma ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wo read part 22 action packed this dude needs to be punished



Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vibha
Awesome update, loved the way Uday believed Manyata and not the doctor ๐Ÿ˜Š
I hope its not gonna be a tragic ending, Yuddha is even worse then J and Akash together
Thanks for the pm



Thanks Humaira ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: aathiraa

aaawwwsssmmm

cant wait.continue soon.



Thanks Dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: fireroad99

i hate this yudhan

i am going to kill him
i think probably the doctor is lieing becz of yudhan
and i had a question
who is yudhan
does he love manyata



Thank you Azwa ๐Ÿ˜Š to know who yuddha is, you have to read the previous parts deary ๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Vibha (AGAIN!!!)๐Ÿ‘. aww thank you so much๐Ÿ˜›
But , I think it was short ๐Ÿ˜•.im sorry ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I'm so happy that Yudda's plan back-fired and Uday believed in Manyata๐Ÿ˜ƒ ... rather than some medical report๐Ÿคข.
Now , just when she recovered from 1 trauma , there's another 1๐Ÿ˜ก. Yudda stabbed her after stabbing (probably) Udayveer. I'm so worried now ... are we going to have a tragic end๐Ÿ˜ญ? I'm really hoping that it's just a nightmare๐Ÿ˜‰! yes your guess is right ๐Ÿ˜ƒ it was a nightmare indeed ๐Ÿ˜†
Loved the chapter Vibha , im glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
please continue A.S.A.P๐Ÿ˜†. in a few minutes ๐Ÿ˜‰



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

wow loved the update...
again gr8 work vibha...

sorry wasn't able to cumment on last update...
now lets talk about update...
awesuuummm as usual...
is yudhaveer ka toh mein muh tod dungi...
bloody idiot


samjhta kya hai apne aapko...
aur manyata ko chaku mardiya ??

haila bahot jaldi mar diya...heehhehe kiddin...
aur veer haye kya bolu mein...
he's just so sweet gulab jamun jesa...


loved it loads sis thnks for pm...



Thank you so much Mahima๐Ÿค—it's such a cute comment ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice update Vibha ๐Ÿ‘

Loved it !
But it was too short
I am extremely glad that Yuddha's plan backfired ๐Ÿ˜ก
It's good that Uday believed in Manyata rather than that report !
It was cute the way Uday was trying to pacify Manyata ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Now coming to the end,
It probably meant that Yuddha had stabbed Uday before Manyata (I suppose) !
I feel that t is going to be a nightmare !
But if not than are we heading to a sad end ? ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !

P.S. And sorry for the late comment !



Thank you for the comment Vidhi ๐Ÿค— its alright about the late comment ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18

As she fell down screaming Veer's name, she noticed tad too late that it was stained with blood even before he stabbed her.
does this mean manyata died
jiji please update asap
awesome update
loved uday 's trust on her
oh come on bridgraaj manyata is not pregnant
jiji kill this yuddha please hate him
dirty creep
jerk
thanks for the pm



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update vibha
sort out all miss undestanding
prmo ws scary
thnx 4 pm n cntinue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter twenty three

She woke up in cold sweat only to realize that it had been a bad dream. It had seemed very real. What was the meaning of it? She saw that Veer was awake too. He switched on the bed side lamp and noticed the traces of fear still left on her face. "Kya hua Princess? Bura sapna dekha tumne?" he caressed her brow.

She hid herself in his chest in answer. He soothed her by rocking themselves back and forth. The dream still kept appearing in front of her eyes like some horror movie replayed again and again.

"maine sapne me dekha ki Yuddha ne'"

"Kya kiya Yuddha ne?"

She couldn't answer back as her throat constricted with grief. He repeatedly rubbed her back and she relaxed a little bit. The feel of his warm body was making her comfortable and she let herself go.

After a while he lowered her to the bed thinking she had slept but she was only pretending to be asleep. Her mind was on a different plane altogether.

From her childhood she had seen the men of the family treating women like inferior beings and in mind of minds expected her hubby to be same. But the man she had been married to was so different from all. Any other man in his place could have never taken the news of his wife carrying someone else's baby so lightly. Hell even her father had refused to believe her but Veer, he had stood with her like a rock of Gibraltar; never doubting her'showering so much love. 'He has done so much for you in such a short period'what have you done in return?' A voice spoke up in her mind.

'But love is not give and take, when the time comes I will do my bit' she answered it.

'Remember Manyata'when he was plain Veer, with no subtitles attached to his name, what did he ask you for? So selfish of you to forget'' the voice said again.

Oh yes'he wanted to learn English'And now it's become all the more necessary...how could she forget? A new thought came in her mind which made her smile instantly. She sat up and kissed the forehead of the sleeping figure next to her.

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Next day morning when she came down, every one behaved as if she was a criminal and only Veer's hand in hers kept her from bursting into tears. As usual her mom watched helplessly and others sulked.

No one spoke anything and as Udayveer was about to get up Manyata said in a whisper "Mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai'adhe ghante baad garden me milna mujhe"

What now? He thought.

He found her in the garden half an hour later, waiting for him with impatience pacing back and forth.

Before he could say anything she literally jumped at him "aey chalta hai kya? Sirf main aur tu...bada majaa aayega" she winked and whistled at him.

'Poor Manyata, the tension of last few days has been too heavy on her'may be her mind has snapped' thought Uday.

"Princess'yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Chalo ghar ke andar'dhoop me rahogi toh aur tabiyat bigdegi, chalo" he took her hand but she shook him off.

"Tu mere saath chalega ki nahi'apun ko kuch nahi hua hai" she said in all seriousness. He couldn't help but wonder what was wrong with her. Was she the same woman who was crying over a dream last night? As he stood there contemplating forcibly carrying her home, she did the unthinkable.

Veer didn't get a single second to think as Manyata closed his mouth with hers in a force unseen before. Veer thought he had reached heaven when his tasting organ explored the insides of her oral cavity. Smell of his aftershave was making her heady and she could easily forget why she had called him here. God forbid if DS or Giriraj saw them in this position, they might be disowned.

Although it was difficult, she broke the kiss first and steadied her breathing. Veer spoke first "Yeh sab kya hai Manyata?" he looked really confused.

"Veer, yeh meri choti si koshish hai'tumhare chehere par hasi lane ki'main kisi jagah bulaoongi toh tum mere saath chaloge?" she asked.

"zaroor chaloonga par kahan?" he was really intrigued now.

She started walking towards the back gate and he followed her. There was a car there and Manyata took the drivers seat. She signaled him to take the front seat besides the driver's one. Was she really out of her mind after all?

Uday's face was unreadable as he got in and closed the door.

"ab toh batado hum kahan jaa rahe hain?" He asked her.

"Hum airport jaa rahe hain" Manyata said.

"Airport!" he repeated.


Precap

As he pelted a snow ball towards her she ducked for cover. In the process of running, she didn't see where she was going and lost her footing. The snow was really slippery and she started going down with nothing to hold on to.


Thats it for today ๐Ÿ˜ณ thank you so much ๐Ÿค—


(P.S: i have really reduced the number of People in my PM list๐Ÿ˜Š from now on im gonna PM only those people who not only read but regularly 'Like' and 'comment' as well)


Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update? Just loved it to the core.๐Ÿ˜›

Thank God the precap was just a nightmare. Now I can take a sigh of relief.๐Ÿ˜†

Manveer moments was more than the Yuddhaveer in the nightmare so this is one of my favourite chapter.๐Ÿ˜‰

How can her family not trust her?๐Ÿ˜ก

I just love the promo๐Ÿ˜ณ. Update soon. ( I know I don't need to say that.)๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago

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