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Posted: 12 years ago
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my first try guys..comments r welcome..


Scene starts in Deshmukh House. Dk comes in to help arjun and ovi sort out their differences.

Pari is crying and all the family members r trying to keep her calm. Arjun looks helplessly at Ovi.

Ovi: (shouting) Meri taraf kya dekh rahe ho arjun. ye tumhari beti hai..tum sambhalo isko..aur pls ise yahan se le jao..mera sar phat raha hai iske rone se.

Arjun: Aise baat mat karo Ovi..wo tumhe bula rahi hai..tumhare hi haath ko wo maa ka haath samajhti hai..she needs u ovi..

Ovi: lekin main iski maa nahi hoon..pls leave me alone( get up to go..stops seeing purvi and onir enter the house with sulo in tow..they have come to c the family for the last time..b4 leaving)

Lo aa gai iski maa..bolo usko sambhaale apni beti ko.

Purvi: ye kya keh rahi ho ovi..pari ab tumhari beti hai..tum ho uski maa..pls ovi aisa mat karo..maine jo kiya tumhari khushi ke liye kiya..tumhe aur arjun ko kareeb laane ke liye..ab wo kaam pari hi karegi..wo yahin rahegi tumhare paas.

Ovi: Mat dikhao apni mahaanta..mujhe nahi chahiye tumhara tyaag , balidan and all that crap..lo apni beti ko aur jaao yahan se..

Arjun: bas ..bas karo tum dono. ( looking at both of them turn by turn)..pari tumhe nahi chahiye na, aur tumhe bhi nahi,,theek hai...kisiko nahi chahiye pari ..lekin mujhe chahiye...meri beti hai wo..

( taking pari into his hands..the baby has finally stopped crying looking at bade logon ka drama)

tum jaanti ho pari..jab tum is duniya mein aai thi..tumhari aai ne kaha tha pari ki do do maa hai..aaj dekho pari ki koi ma nahi..lekin tumhaare papa hai beta..papa hai tumhaare paas..aur hamesha rahenge..

Purvi : Arjun..pls..

Arjun : Kya purvi..ab aur kya karoon main...kya kya karoon...is baat ka proof doon ki main ek achha pita hoon? ya phir se ye proof doon ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon? ya phirse apni dosti nibhaaon? bolo na ab kya karvaaogi mujhse?

Purvi goes silent..Arjun continues..

Jaanti ho beta? aaj tak kisine mujhe ek insaan nahi samjha..bas ek cheez samjha hai..koi mujhe paana chaahta hai to koi mera sauda karna chaahta hai ( ovi cries) ..lekin main jaanta hoon beta tumse mujhe sachha pyaar milega...tum kabhi mere saath aisa nahi karogi..kyunki maine dekha hai ( looking at purvi) maine dekha hai ki betiyaan apne aai baba ke liye kya kya kar sakti hai..shayad tumhe paakar meri zindagi ki sabse badi kami puri hogi.

purvi: Arjun tum jaante ho maine jo bhi kiya apne aai baba ko milaane ke liye kiya..sabki khushi ke liye kiya

Arjun: kiski khushi purvi? kaun khush hai aaj? aur sabki khushi dekhi meri nahi? kya meri khushi tumhaare liye zaroori nahi? Aur agar tumne ye sab apne aai baba ke liye kiya to tumne kabhi samjha hi nahi ki unki mohabbat kitni sachhi hai..kyunki tumhaari pyaar ki samajh hi thodi kachhi hai..unki saari misunderstandings clear ho hi jaati..wo samjahte hain ek doosre ko..lekin tumne mujhe kabhi nahi samjha..kabhi mujhe apna kuch bhi nahi samjha..meri zindagi ki itni badi khushi mujhse chupaai..

Purvi: tum jaante ho arjun main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon..

Arjun: haan ..aur usi pyaar ke haathon majboor hokar main tumne jo kaha wo karta raha..apna pyaar saabit karta raha...ovi se shaadi karo..karli..ovi ke saath nai zindagi shuru karo..kar li..
lekin main tumhaare jitna mahaan nahi hoon...aise kuch dino main apne pyaar ko bhula kar aage nahi badh sakta main..i cannot move on purvi ( tears in his eyes).
aur badkismati se mujhe aisa jeevansaathi bhi nahi mila ( looking at onir) jo mujhe samjhe , mujhe sambhaale..

Ovi: tumne kabhi mujhe apnaya nahi arjun..

Arjun: koshish ki ovi..bahut koshish ki..lekin har baar tumhaare shak ne mujhe purvi ki yaadon ki taraf dhakela..i m human..koi superhuman nahi hoon main..waqt lagta hai mujhe..business deals bhi main soch samajh kar karta hoon..yahan to khud main deal mein bik gaya tha..isko accept karne main mujhe time to lagta.

dosti nibhaane ka waada kiya tha maine bachpan main..kya keemat chuka rahoon us dosti ki.

kitni koshish ki tumhe hurt na karoon..sahi waqt ka intezaar karta raha..shayad mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...shayad engagement ke pehle hi sab kuch bata dena chahiye tha...lekin pata nahi..tumhara junoon tab bhi rukta ya nahi..tumhe arjun chahiye tha na..mila tumhe arjun..with all his excess baggage..ab tumhe wo baggage nahi chahiye..phenk do arjun ko...jaise bachpan main karti thi..kab badi hogi tum ovi?

Ovi: tumne hamesha mujhse baatein chupai hai arjun

Arjun: haan..tumhe protect karne..is tarah batana chahta tha ki tumhe kum chot lage..aur pari ke baare main kya batata main tumhe..jab khud mujhe hi pata nahi tha? jab pata chala..i wanted to tell u..tab purvi ne roka mujhe..sahi waqt ka intezaar karo.( laughing) kambhakt waqt hi hamesha dhokha de jaata hai mujhe..

Purvi: arjun pls samajhne ki koshish karo...

Arjun: samjahta hi to aa raha hoon..tumhe samjha, ovi ko samjha, is parivar to samjha...lekin kisine mujhe nahi samjha..kya main itna galat hoon ki koi mujhe samajhne ko taiyaar nahi? kya kisiko mera dard meri takleef nahi dikh rahe? bataao..kahan galat hoon main?

tum ye sach chupaana chahti thi..lekin apne parivar ko..aaji ke ghar ko bachaane ke liye tum sab kuch bataane ko taiyaar thi..agar main takleef main hota..tum mere liye ye karti?

Everyone is silent..teary eyed..

chodo na...kisiko mere liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi..lekin main bhi thak gaya hoon khud ko sabit kar kar ke..mujhe nahi banna kisika pyaar, kisika dost, kisika pati..kuch nahi chahiye mujhe..koi nahi chahiye..bas apni pari chahiye..mujhe bas apni pari chahiye..(breaks down)..pls mujhe merii pari dedo (sits down crying and hugging pari)
DK comes to console arjun..arjun cries in his lap, like a baby.( teju comes and holds pari).manav too comes and puts his hands on arjun's head..arjun looks up at him with a lot of sorrow and complain in his eyes..manav is ashamed and looks away..

Arjun gets up and begins to leave.. turns his back to the family and speaks..addressing no one in particular:

Main pari ke custody papers bhej doonga..ye to nahi jaanta ki kis aai ke signatures chalenge..lekin ye zaroor jaanta hoon ki kisiko bhi sign karne main problem nahi hogi..aur haan Ovi ( turns around) azaadi mubarak ho..tumhe bhi aur mujhe bhi..i will send the divorce papers.

Arjun takes pari from teju and gives a good bye glance to everyone..a longer eyelock with purvi.

Turns around and leaves..
episode ends.

my wish for future tracks will include onir going to jail coz of stupid purvi and both ovi and purvi repenting their deeds..what happens to punni and mittal..i dont care.

If any of u want arjun and purvi together please carry forward from here.

Thanks






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Posted: 12 years ago
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no comments? this is so disheartening..itna bura hai kya?

i know there's a lot of i, me in there..but for once i want arjun to be selfish..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome..loved it..👏

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Awesome.. hope to see in original track 😉

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