It was so beautiful.. you wrote it very nicely! :D
I just loved the part when Swayam heard her singing lullaby for Tanya! Aww... what a cute mamma she is! <3
The end was hilarious when Sharon pulled Swayam from kiss.. not to mention what a cute pappa he is too! 😆
I loved this OS a lot..
P - S : Hey, why don't you put your works in D3 official writes up gallery..? Here is the link..
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3469012/d3-ff-ss-os-gallery-2013-editing-udtpg12-april5
-Marium