IPKKND FF - In My Arms (CH1 Pg1)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi! This is my first FF in IF...
I am not so good at writing,but gave it a try.
Starting off with a simple chapter...
Leave your comments and let me know about your views, it may help me in continuing my work.

I am NOT an Indian, So PLEASE FORGIVE If i have made MISTAKES While USING HINDI...
Thanks!

In Your Arms - CHAPTER 01

"Par kyun Arnav ji?" Khushi followed Arnav into their room in a rush.
"Reason zaroori hai kya?", he replied with a haughty look towards Khushi, standing at the other end of the pool side.

"ZAROORI? Haan zaroori hai! Aap mere pati ho...aur har biwi ko haq banta hai, yeh jaan ne ki, apna pati din bhar kya karta hain aur kya nahi!".
She was sulky now,Arnav felt it for sure but he didn't bother to look at her.
"You know Khushi, i was hoping ki tumhara dhimak itna kharab nahi hai,jaise maine socha tha...but guess what! dheere dheere, you are proving me wrong..!" may be he got angry at the words she associated.
"Kya?!" she replied with a rebuke.
"Khushi! I was planning for our honeymoon next week, aur tumne woh stupid DARSHAN ke plan wahan kyun ghusa diya!!??
"Stupid? Stupid hoga aap keliye Mr.ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA! humhare liye nahi! Aur aapne...kab...honey...moon...", her volume decreased...and the words then came out with a gasp. "Aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?"
"Woh...main...surprise dena chahta tha...tumhe..", he paused for a while.
"Ab nani aur di ko na bhi nahi kehe sakhte"
He was dissappointed with what happened downstairs minutes ago;after all he was finally dreaming of to get in private with Khushi, away from the busy life and most importantly, HIS PRIVATE LIFE ENEMY-"AMAN". But here he is now; again at the same starting point.

"hmm... " he sighed.

He walked towards her, and took her hands in his.
"It's okay Khushi", he slowly stroked her cheek and smiled.
"...par maafi to tab milegi...jab tum...you know what i mean..."
Khushi kept on looking at him surprisingly.
"Maine maafi kab mangi?", her face was flushing and smiling. She slowly started recoiling and in the next second, she was off his grip and running in the corridor.

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So guys! COMMENTS PLEEJ!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh nyc yaar!!!!!!!! u r not an Indian!!!!!!! wht r u saying??????? ap to ek Indian se bhi acchi hindi bol leti ho :)))))) i lkd it:) keep it up :)👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rasa23

ohhh nyc yaar!!!!!!!! u r not an Indian!!!!!!! wht r u saying??????? ap to ek Indian se bhi acchi hindi bol leti ho :)))))) i lkd it:) keep it up :)👏


thank u! Bt thought f editin dis again.
:D THNX!

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