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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU ALL FOR THE COMMENTS [:))]
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE 9
THIS IS SPECIALLY FOR MY LOVELY SIS SHAFY .(I Have granted ur wish.I HOPE you will like it)
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na jane kya baat hui he
jo ab hum tumhse nafarat karne lage
bas bhi karo ab teri yaad satati he
kaise bhul jaun tumhe aisi baat karne lage he

credits -deepa di
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She felt heavy as she could feel Mayank's presence right in front of her. There was no space in between them which made her uncomfortable. She felt trapped she wanted to escape from this situation but she couldn't.

It had been some time and there was no reaction from Mayank so she decided to open her eyes. She slowly opened them and saw Mayank staring at her lovingly. It was as if he had been waiting for her to open her eyes. She was about to melt on seeing his eyes she wanted to break down she wanted to hit him she wanted to ask him a bunch of questions but she again controlled herself as she dint wanted to mess up the things. She dint want to bring up that particular topic .

Realising that Nupur was lost somewhere Mayank stretched his hands towards Nupur. Nupur was soon out of her thoughts and had became alert. She became conscious she expected Mayank to reach her but to her surprise he took something from the cabinet on which Nupur was leaning and he moved away from there he again started behaving as if he was alone in the room.

Though Nupur felt relieved when Mayank left from there but at the same time she felt irritated because of his acts.

"Mayank listen." Nupur ordered.

But still she dint get any response from him.

It was dark there and it was difficult to even see each other .But still she could blurrily see him so she moved in the direction she could feel his presence.

"Mayank why aren't you speaking ?"She asked him loudly.

"I asked for your phone I want to get out of here."

This time she shouted sternly.

This time Mayank also knew that she was serious so he decided to respond but before that he lit the candle he had taken from the cabinet.

And Nupur could finally see him.

"I can't speak ."

He said while giving a smile.

"Why is it so?"

She asked while raising her brows.

"Because someone told me to shut up .And I can't say no to her request."

He said while moving towards her.

"Stop it Mayank. Give me your phone."

Nupur ordered.

"I don't have one."

"Don't you wana get out of here?"

"No, not at all I can spend all my life just standing here with you."

"I hate you I simply hate you for doing all this"

"Please don't lie"

he said while grinning but Nupur gave him a disgusted look and turned around but Mayank caught her by her wrist and pulled her towards her and soon she collided with his chest.

A strand of hair was coming on her face so Mayank removed it from her face and Nupur closed her eyes she was shivering. His one touch had always made her shiver .

She was missing his touches she was lost in his touch while Mayank was decreasing the space between them. He was lost in her he wanted to touch her he wanted to feel her presence he wanted to kiss her. He had controlled himself from a long time but now he was unable to do so. She was right in front of her after so long but she wasn't his. He wanted to control himself but this time he couldn't.

He pressed his lips against hers , Nupur who was lost in her thoughts too responded back.Both of them were lost in it.Mayank wanted this moment to stop then and there even Nupur wanted the same but soon she realised what they were doing. She was surprised she wanted to continue but she knew it wasn't right so she pushed him and shouted

"This isn't right This isn't right Mayank. You have always had the habit of doing things you like . But this time I will not let that happen."

Mayank who was lost in her , soon realised what a blunder he had done .He knew he had made the situation worse because of his stupid act.

He gulped a lump down his throat and felt that his brain was not working. He fell short of words but then he spoke as he knew keeping quiet would be worse

"Listen Nupur I am sorry I dint want to hurt you neither did I want to do this but..."

Again he had nothing to say so Nupur again shouted

"But what huh Mayank?"

"I am sor-r-y Nupur"

he said while rolling his eyes and while stammering.

" Sorry! huh such a nice word na Mayank we can use it for all the mistakes we do without even bothering about the person's feeling. But I am glad you said sorry this time because you never apologized for the pain you gave. You dint say it when you left me. Oh actually I am sorry why you have said sorry. Please don't be sorry"

She said with a lot of anger and red eyes.

"Nupur I know you are hurt but this is not the way to sort it out we need to talk calmly. There was a reason for everything I did."

He said while moving towards her.

"I don't want to sort out anything Mayank its all over. There is no use of sorting it out its just over. And please Mayank please let us keep this as professional as possible ."

Nupur said this while moving towards the couch in her room.

Mayank stood there for sometime but then he went and sat on a chair.

Mayank had a lot to say but he couldn't complete. He dint want to force her so he kept quiet. He knew the right time would come when Nupur would understand all his decisions but for now he needed to be calm and he needed to earn her trust all over again.

hope u like it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was very beautiful part
something happened b/w them
umm mayank broke nupurs trust but how
very interesting

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Posted: 12 years ago
clear the misunderstandings soon dear.. :( :(
i cant see them like this!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nicely written MN part
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..
What happened in the past ??
Please clear the MU between MayUr..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
he bhagawan yeh kya tha yashu
nahi nahi mayank ne nupur ka trust tod diya

but it was nice update
i feel sad for NUPUR
thanks for pm me and sorry for late

agar safar asan nahi
to dag maganyege kadam
samalana he har waqt qki
hum tumhare sath rehgen aye sanam
love u its for u


deepa
Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg yashu u r too talented its excellent. :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update hope its gets sort out soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh this is a nice part...
do update soon :)

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