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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to the people who suggested title for this ss...thanks a lot...but I am really sorry to say that I am giving some other title which I think suits the story line..."MAINE PYAAR KIYA"...the story lil bit(5%) like that movie...so I am giving that name...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:

Kriya wants to discuss with some one about whatever conversation happened with her mom few mins back...n more than that she wanted to share that payal aunty said once rey doesn't like south Indian people...she z worried about the matter now...she doesn't want the friendship between two families to get affected...

Kr : kisse baat karu abhi main...itz too late to talk with sw... Sharon? Nahi nahi she will get excited n meri jo pareshani hai wo share hi nahi karpaungi uski kushi dekh ke...fir problem kabhi solve hi nahi hogi...fir kis se bat karu? Neha? Dramaqueen ...abhi ke abhi sare frnds ko call karke celebration shuru kardegi..na hi meri puri bat sunegi aur na hi muje puri bat batane degi...huh...fir kise call karu abb? Swayam ko hi call karu then? Yesss...ussi ko call karti hoon..n he z rey's bestie tho meri doubt BhI clear kardega wo..n he z my brother my bestie jab chahu call kar sakti hoon usse...y to think so much...


Kr calls swayam...

Sw : hello

Kr : hey swayu...

Sw: kya bat hai bahot pyar aaraha hai mujpe?

Kr : haha..aisi bat nahi hai...achha kya kar rahe the?

Sw: walking in the terrace...bahot heavy dinner hua aaj..

Kr : q khate ho jab tolerate nahi kar sakte utna tho?(smiles silently)

Sw : arre yaar nanu hai na..wo muje kaha chodte hai..kuch kehne jau tho bolte hai ki tumhare age mein main itna khata tha uthna khata tha...huh...

Kr : stop blaming nanu...its u who always try to eat more n more...so that u can put on some weight...

Sw : huh...hogayi? Yar seriously mera khana khane ka itna bada problem ban gaya hai meri life mein...ek nanu hai jo tus tuske khilate hai...ek tum ho jitna hota hai utna hi khane ke lie kehte ho...ek sharon hai jo hamesha meri weight put on karne ka suggestions deti rehti hai..n last but not the least rey mahashay...wo tho muje hammesha work out karane mein rehta hai...karu tho kya karu mein?

Kr : silent...she was listening n enjoying sw's complaining session till he took reys name...after that she became silent...

Sw : kriya...u there? Kriya

Kr : huh...haan? Han sun rahi thi..(with low voice which didn't go unnoticed by sw)

Sw: hey kya hua? Sab kuch teek tho hai na?

Kr: han ...wo muje tumse kuch baat karni thi swayi...

Sw : han bolo...

Kr : wo actually (sw's land line ph starts ringing...) tumhe koi call araha hai kya land line pe?

Sw : han wo shayad rey ka hi hoga...tumhare call aate hi uska bhi calls aana start hua n since this no. is busy tho usne land line pe kia hoga..kr will call u back in a min..let me tell him that I will call him later otherwise wo aise hi call karta rahega...abb land line bhi answer nahi kia maine tho wo directly nanu ka no. dial karega...I know him..

Kr : (smiles) acha suno suno...1 min

Sw : han bolo

Kr : don't tell him that u r talking to me...plzzz

(Before sw could ask her why she z saying like that, again his land line starts to ring)

Sw : okay ok will not tell him...but let me attend him first ...saala chain se nahi chodega warna...

Kr : yeah bye...plz be quick...

Sw : 1 min mein will call u back...pakka bye
(Line disconnect)

Sw calls back rey..

Rey : sale ph q nahi utha raha tha..? N kisse bate kar raha tha?

Sw :wo (he remembers kr's words) ..wooo...wo bas main sh se bat kar raha tha...han sh se...(bechare ko jhoot bolna nahi aata confidently)

Rey : accha teek hai teek hai...sun I need to talk to u urgently...itz something very important...

Sw : nahi...I mean abhi I cant talk to u...wo kya hai na...kii..ki...han..wo sh is upset...so I need to console her...so can we talk after few mins...I will pakka call u back once I make her feel better...

Rey : relax dude...I too dont want to share the matter with u on ph ...so I called u too tell that kal morning jogging ke lie chalte hai our favorite place beach pe...wahi bat karenge...

sw : cool..will see you then in the morning at 7..

Rey: yup ...n listen..

Sw : han bol

Rey :wo...wo ...huh...nothing...see u then

Sw : sab teek tho hai na rey? Bol na kya bolna chahta hai...?

Rey : no I just wanted to ask u ki...wo

Sw : han bol aaghe...what you want to ask me rey?

Rey : did kriya call you today? Did she tell you something?

Sw : (what...rey bhi kr ke bare mein aise questions puch raha haI? Aakhir chal kya raha hai in dono ke bich...ye dono tho kabhi ek dusre se baat tak nahi ki aaj tak) han nahi...nahi ki thi usne...muje call...

Rey: okay..aur agar ki tho dont tell her that I have called you to discuss something...plz ...atleast till I tell you the matter personally...
Sw : thinks its something serious..- sure...don't worry...chal bye kal milte hai then...

Rey :bye

(Call ends)

Sw calls back kriya...

Kr : hogai baat...?

Sw : yup...he just wanted some information of one of common client of ours...

Kr : oh okay...

Sw: so tell me baat kya hai

Kr : swayu mom mere lie ek proposal laye hai

Sw : u mean...marriage proposal?

Kr : hmm (she exactly knew what will be his reaction now)

Sw : what? Aise kaise kar sakte hai wo? You are still young...we all want you to finish your mba...work with smriti mom...aise kaise proposal laye wo tumhare lie...you don't worry kr I will talk to smriti mom...jarurat pade tho nanu ke help lunga but ye shadi nahi hogi...tum chinta mat karo...main hoon na

Kr: I know swayu but meri puri baat suno tho sahi..

Sw : han bolo...but main ye proposal ke lie han nahi karunga..kabhi nahi...tumhe chahe smriti mom ne emotional blackmail karke mana lia honge but main nahi manne wala..

Kr : arre listen to me 1st swayu...

Sw : dont try to convince me by calling swayu swayu(mimicking)...I am not going to melt this time...jo bhi ho wo ladka..jaisa bhi ho...I dont care...I just dont want you to accept any marriage proposal this early...I will search a better life partner for u once u settle in your life...better than this boy...

Kr :(smiles shaking her head) accha teek hai ...mat mano but meri puri baat tho suno yar...

Sw : han bolo...but dont you try to convince me for this proposal...

Kr : itz not like mom wants me to get married now only...merI shadi 2-3 years baad hi hogi...itz just that she wants me to understand the boy...know him properly...if things go well then she will think further...

Sw : but itni jaldi kya hai kr...abhi 2-3 years mein tho kuch bhi ho sakta hai...tumhe khud koi ladka pasand bhi aasakta hai...issi particular ladke se q smom(smriti mom) tumhari shadi karani chahti hai?

Kr : because he z the best for me...his family z best for me...(frustrated with sw's overreaction)

Sw : what ? Ye tum keh rahe ho? How can you accept the proposal kriya? Itni jaldi...I mean...huh...iska matlab tumne han bhi keh dia hai already..? How can you kr..? How can you?(almost cryin)

Kr : ye kya how can u .how can u laga rakha hai? Ek bar ladka kaun hai sun tho lo...bas apnI hi suna raha hai...bol rahi hoon kabse ki puri baat suno meri...but nai...without knowing who z he, you are just telling me to reject the proposal...

Sw : u r shouting at me kr? That too for that boy...? U shouted at me kr...for the 1st time...wo bhi ek ladke ki waje se...

Kr : rey ki waje se(in low tone...)

Sw : kya? rey ki waje se? (Still upset that kr argued with him because of a boy)

Kr : rey ke waje se hum dono ki fight ho rahi hai aaj...(still worried about his reaction after knowing the truth)

Sw : u mean rey ne ye proposal laya hai? Chodungi nahi uss sale ko tho main...milne do kal usse...

Kr : tum apne hone wale jijaji ko maroge?(she closes her eyes tightly...praying that sw should not object for rey atleast)

Sw : usko baad main marunga...pehle iss idiot rey ko tho dekhlu...

Kr :...

Sw : wait a min...what did u say?

Kr : she understood that sw understood her words now...

Sw : u mean. Rey...?...hello

Kr: (no reply...just praying god crossing her fingers)

Sw : means rey aur tum?

Kr :...

Sw : wo proposal rey ka hai?

Kr :...

Sw :matlab rey se tumhari shadi?

Kr : understood his tone...slowly wide smile spreads on her face...

Sw : yesss yesss...(shouts) is it true kr...? Rey aur tum...yuuuhhooo...thank u thank u thank u god...thanks a lot ...mhuuuaaa...

Sw :controling himself..- now tell me the whole story...I want to know everything...tell me..

Kr : narrates her conversation with her mom...

Sw : (smiles widely ) huh...kr u know what ? This z the best decision you have ever taken in your life...rey z the perfect life partner for you...I assure you..

Kr : hmm...

Sw : q kya hua? Tum kush nai ho?

Kr : no no...nothing like that...itz just that ...I mean...huh ...I don't know swayu...

Sw : kya bat hai yar ab? Tell me now plz...

Kr : kuch nahi...wo ek bar payal aunty told me that rey doesn't like south india cultured people...n u know me...tho bas...I mean I don't want mom to get hurt if that was the case n he rejects this whole proposal thing...

Sw : hmm...understood...see kriya I know the reason behind rey's dislike towards south Indian culture but I want you to find it by yourself...

Kr : means...?

Sw : talk to him.

Kr : what ? Plz...ab tum bhi mom ki tarah behave mat karo...main kya kahungi yaar usse? Aaj tak kabhi baat nahi kie hum dono ne...kabhi mile nahi...aur abb call karu? N wo bhi ye puchne ke lie ki usse south indian culture se kya problem hai? Wo bhi kis basis pe ?ki payal aunty ne aise hi kabhi baato baato main kaha tha islie? Aur q janna chahti hoon? Kyun ki hummari(she couldn't complete her sentence) (after a pause) no...I don't want to make fool of myself...

Sw : (smiles...no...grins...widely) dekho kriya...u r not going to make fun of yourself...n as far as I know rey, wo kabhi bhi kisi cheez ko jada dino tak dil main nahi rakta...I mean bad experiences...yup he had experienced something bad related to south indian culture...but that was past...ab tak tho wo bhool bhi chuka hoga as far as I know him...but still I want u to talk to him personally...

Kr : u really think so?

Sw : yup...

Kr : I will think on it then...

Sw : good...dont worry wo just because of that experience, ye proposal reject nahi karega...abb chodo ye sab...aur ye batao ke tumne sh ko bataya..?

Kr : nahi ..abhi bataungi tho she will come immediately n by seeing her excitement, mom will understand the matter n starts teasing me...

Sw : (smiles) baat karna hai abhi tumhe usse?

Kr : haan

Sw : okay I will do something...n dont worry smom ko doubt nahi hoga kuch bhi...n koi tumhe tease nahi karenge...

Kr :(smiles) pakka?

Sw : pakka...n tab tak try to call rey...if possible...he z awake...

Kr : msg se kaam nahi chalega

Sw :smiles - try it...but I recommend calling directly than texting...now its up to u...

Kr : I will see...but not today...may be tomorrow...

Sw : ok...as u wish...chalo bye...

Kr : bye...
(Call ends)


Done

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Posted: 12 years ago
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going for ...fresh honey a k unres doing pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome..
Swayam to phas gya rey aur kr ke beech meiin...
Oh god! Swayam ka reactiion whn he heard abt kr marriage...super awesome...
Now let's seee wat rey talks to swayam
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
i loved the enter conversation of rey, kria and swayan... awesome...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome SS..
Nice concept.. Luvd it..
Continue soon n pls pm me nxt tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ossumm...
Loved it..
Swayam was too cute...in dis part
Continue soon...
N thnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update

luvd kriyam's bond

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab part
loved the way u wrote it...and the convo was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum update
Thanx for d pm

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