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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking my ss and also for lovely comments... thanks a lot...I am updating the next part now...hope you guys will like it...


Part 3:

Kriya was just sitting on her bed and listening songs from her ipod...eyes closed...suddenly someone jumps on her bed she opens her eyes..

Kriya : tum?yar Sharon kitna dara diya muje...

Sharon; laughs...look at your face...

Kriya: hogaya?

Sharon : okay sorry...relax...now tell me how are you feeling?

Kriya.: muje kya hua hai?

Sharon: oye dont act infront of me...I am not talking about your health...swayam has already told me everything..

Kriya : accha ohh?

Sharon: han wahi...abb tell me are you nervous?

Kriya: obviously yaar...pehle Mumbai jaane se muje itni ajeeb nahi lag rahi thi but now I am really nervous...I mean abb I am going to stay there in payal aunt's house for 2 years and jab bhi rey ko face karungi, mom ne jo bhi kaha hai wo bat tho dimag mein rahega hi na? Now it will be difficult for me to adjust there...

Sharon : I can understand...but kriya just forget everything and be urself there...everything will be all right...

Kriya : hmm I will try...lets see...

Sharon : accha leave it...now tell me whatz your opinion about rey...? Forget about familiy friendship and everything...just think about rey and tell me...

Kriya : what " just think about rey and tell me" as if I know him...arre Sharon hum dono ek dusre se baat tak nai kie hai aaj tak...muje kuch nahi pata hai yaar uske bare mein..

Sharon : tho ab pata lagao...baat karo usse...

Kriya : yaar aap sab log mere piche kyun pade ho? Pehle mom and then swayam ...now you also...? Kaise karu yaar usse baat? Aur kya karu baatein usse?

Sharon: hmm point...but kriya you know I would still suggest you to talk to him...dont get angry ...just listen to me first...see what I want to say is if you start speaking to him once you go to Mumbai, then you may feel awkward initially and you will also take time to become comfortable with him...instead you start talking to him now only, then you will adjust there very soon...

Kriya: haan wo tho teek hai ...but baat kya karu main usse?

Sharon : keep it to a friendly talk kriya...just casual talk first...

Kriya : I will try Sharon...but seriously I am very nervous and scared to talk to him now..

Sharon : don't worry he is very friendly person...he z a sweetheart...

Kriya just smiles...

Sharon : ek baat batau..? If you dont mind..

Kriya : yeah

Sharon : you know I and swayam always wanted this...I mean we always used to say rey and kriya are perfect for each other...even we planned to express it to smriti aunty and payal aunty...but only when the right time comes then...jab bhi koi ladka tumhe propose karta or any girl try to impress rey, main aur swayam sochte the ek baar aap dono ko milwana chahie...you dont know kriya how much happy we both are today...tumhe pata hai it took almost 10 minutes for me to calm myself before coming here...

Kriya: calm yourself? But why?

Sharon : because your idiot friend swayam ka order tha that I should not go to your house with excitement...I should be very calm and normal in behavior...as if nothing has happened...he thinks my excitement will scare you...huh

Kriya laughs on this...she totally forgets her nervousness...

Sharon : han han ha ha hasso..and you know that idiot khud monkey ki tarah jump kar raha tha terrace par...

Kriya : kyun?

Sharon : because he was that much happy...wo itna kush tho shayad hummari confession pe bhi nahi hua tha...

Kriya : smiles n hugs Sharon...- thanks ...

Sharon : chalo ab sojate hai...kal rey se baat bhi tho karni hai tumhe...

Kriya : mujse jada tho tum aur swayam excited ho...

Sharon : aur nahi tho kya...hummara sapna jo pura hone wala hai...

They say goodnight to each other n slept...kriya finally felt relieved after speaking to Sharon...


Morning at 7 am...

Swayam was in beach doing some light warm up exercises...he was very happy...rey reaches him...

Rey : hey...good morning...

Swayam :(smiles) good morning...(again smiles)

Rey : okay...dude I want to share something...
Swayam:(smiles) han han bol na...(again smiles)

Rey : wo kal ( he looks at swayam and observes his continuous smile)...wait...kahi tumhe already pata tho nahi hai ki main kya bolne wala hoon?

Swayam : (immediately becomes serious)..wh what? Muje kaise pata hoga?

Rey : saale don't act smart...kab se dekh raha hoon...idiot jaise has raha hai...I am damn sure you know the matter...am I right?

Swayam : tu apna bata...leave it whether I know the matter already or not...

Rey : (smiles shaking his head) swayam wo tho main tumhe bataunga hi...whether you know it already or not, it doesn't matter...because you are my besttie also... then he narrates the whole conversation with his mom...

Swayam : congratulations dude...I am very happy for you...

Rey : wo tho tumhare shakal pe hi likha hai...but thanks...now muje tumhari bahot help chahiye aaj ke baad...so please jo bhi I have decided, please help me in this...

Swayam: wo tho main karunga you don't worry..I am always with you and kriya...but tu please hindi kam bola kar uske saamne...
Rey :what ? Dude my hindi is good okay...accha chod but ek baat bata muje...though I know the answer already but still I want to ask so that I can prepare my self accordingly...

Swayam : haan puch

Rey : kriya is not like those two south indian idiots na? I know wo nahi hai..but still...

Swayam : kyun? Agar hogi tho apna decision wapas loge kya?

Rey : no no...kabhi nahi...itz just that...I wanted to know bas

Swayam : relax...she z not like them...

Rey : I knew it...

Swayam : aur kuch? I mean do you want to know anything else about her?

Rey : mmm...nope...thats it...baki I will find myself...when she comes here..

Swayam : wah kya bat (dramatically)

Swayam's cell starts to ring...it was Sharons call...so he picks it up immediately...

Swayam : hey Sharon...good morning...

Sharon: good morning swayam...so rey se baat hui?

Swayam: yup...I am with him only now...

Sharon: oh really? Then keep the phone on speaker..I want to talk to him...

(Swayam keeps the phone on speaker)

Sharon: hello rey..good morning..

Rey: good morning...kaise ho?

Sharon: yeah I am good...u tell me...kya haal chaal hai?(in teasing tone)

Rey : (laughs) tum tho sab janti ho na already...

At that moment kriya comes out from bathroom...she just had shower...she came out singing the song "pareshan" from ishaqzaade movie...

Swayam : are wah lagta hai koi bahot acche mood mein hai?

Rey liked the sweet voice...rey knew that kriya has 4-5 friends group...and Sharon is one of them...

Sharon : haan lagta tho hai(looking at kriya)

Swayam: accha phone speaker pe rakho...

(Sharon also kept the phone on speaker)

Sharon :(to kriya) swayam tumse baa karna chahta hai...phone z on speaker..

Swayam : good morning baccha...

Kriya : (shouts sweetly) goood mooorninggg Mumbai iii...

Swayam : wah kya baat hai kitne dino baad fir se iss style mein good morning sunne mil raha hai...

Kriya : haha...ab wahi aarahi hoon na so dont worry daily aise greet Kia karungi...

Swayam : thank. You...

Rey liked the sweet voice...he was smiling listening to the conversation...he did not know that it was kriya on the line...and kriya was not aware of rey's presence with swayam...

Smriti enters the room : kriya beta I am leaving for office...will see you in the evening...

It was then rey understood that swayam was talking to kriya...and that sweet voice belongs to kriya...he looks at swayam who understood what rey wanted to ask so he just nods his head signaling that yes she is kriya...rey smiles and starts listening to her voice...where as swayam was happy to see rey's reaction...

Kriya : mom aapne breakfast kiya?

Smriti : office mein hi kuch kha lungi...bahot busy hoon aaj...sorry beta bye..

Kriya : par mom...

Smriti : bye beta...shaam ko milte hai...(she leaves the house)

Kriya: ye mom kabhi nahi sudregi...(to swayam) swayu tum ek min Sharon se baat karo I will just call the office canteen staff ...just 2 mins ...plz...

Swayam : okay madam

Sharon : wo chali gai...now see her drama...

Swayam : I know..

Meanwhile kriya calls to office canteen

Kriya : hello...ramu kaka?

Kriya: good morning...kaka suniye mom ghar se nikal chuki hai...aadhe ghante mein office pahuch jayegi...tho aap unke waha aane se pehle ek veg sandwich without cheese n 1 glass chilled badaam milk unke cabin mein rakh dijie banake...

Kriya : aur haan...sandwich ko chote chote pieces mein cut kijie...aur har ek piece mein ek ek toothpicks rakh dena...n milk glass mein straw rakhna mat bhoolna please...

Kriya : thank you kaka..bye

While talking she went to balcony ...after disconnecting the call she starts speaking in kannada with watchmen...she was teasing him and having fun...rey didn't understand what she was talking since he doesn't know Kannada...

Swayam : yaar Sharon bula usse...kabhi nahi sudregi ye ladki...

Sharon calls her saying swayam is on line...

Kriya : sorry sorry sorry swayu...

Swayam: idiot...atleast watchmen uncle ko tho chod dia kar...

Kriya : haha...nahi swayam seriously I am telling you watchmen uncle kuch tho feel karte hai wo dudhwali aunty ke barein mein...

Swayam : shutup kriya..he z married..

Kriya : haan tho? Extramarital affair nahi rakh sakte kya?

Swayam : what? (He looks at rey who was watching at phone n smiling)

Kriya : haan..main tho Extramarital affair rakhungi after marriage...agar koi Salman khan jaise body wala ladka mila tho...

Swayam : accha..?(looks at rey again)

Kriya : han aur nahi tho kya? Yaar body dekhi hai salmaan ki...muscles and all...woww...mann karta hai ek baar tho touch karu...

Swayam : looking at rey's muscles, accha? Aur agar tumhare husband ka hi waise muscles and body ho tho?(winks at rey..who inturn just smiles)

Kriya : fir tho main ghar se bahar hi nahi niklungi kabhi...starts laughing on her own comment giving hifi to Sharon...

Swayam : shameless girl...kuch tho sharam karo...

Kriya : sharam tho usse aati hai jo sharmati hai sharam se...wah wah... sharam tho usse aati hai jo sharmati hai sharam se..hum tho besharam hai aise ki sharam bhi sharmati hai humse...wah wah...kya baat hai...patting her own back...

Swayam : nautanky...accha ye sandwich ka tukde karke toothpicks lagane ka kya idea hai tumhara?

Kriya : kuch nahi...mom ka aaj full day meetings aur discussions hai clients ke sath tho nahi khayegi wo kuch bhi office mein bhi I know...so agar sandwich ko aise pieces mein dekhenge tho shayad kam karte waqt khalenge...and glass mein straw hoga tho I am damn sure wo badaam milk resist nahi karpayenge because its mom's favorite...

Swayam : hmm manna padega...

Kriya : hmm...so

Swayam : kuch nahi ..tum batao rey ko kab call kar rahe ho?( rey raises his eyebrows looking at swayam)

Kriya : (becomes serious) I really dont know swayu...I am nervous to call him...kya baat karungi kuch samaj mein nahi araha hai...

Swayam: arre...you have something to ask him na? Tho bas wahi puchne ke lie call him...
Kriya : yeah I know...but still...I am very nervous...I will try but not sure kab karungi...
Swayam : hmm...I can understand...chalo then bye...

Kriya : bye swayam...tc

As soon as swayam disconnect the call,

Rey : what she wants to ask?

Swayam : puchlo ussi se jab wo call karegI tab

Rey : aur usne call nahi ki tho?

Swayam : you call her...simple...(saying this he starts walking with a wide grin on his face)

Rey thinks for a minute then he too leaves following swayam...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
amazing update
Read all parts in one go ...
Great ff ...
Loved it ..
loved reyam and krisha phone convo
update soon
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
unres

i just love this haha
swaron mzay ley rhey hey dono ko preshaan kar k
Kriya she is so cute
watchman tak ko tang kar rhi hey
rey to voice sun k he lut gya
jab dekheyga tab kya hoga uska
kriya bohat saytaan hey
last part to osam tha
haha rey ko tension ho rhi hey ki usey kya pooshna hey
chalo isi bhaney call to krega
i love this
osam update
update soon ha
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hey ...
Read all parts in one go ...
Great ff ...
Loved it ..
The concept is great ...
Very interesting and different ...
Waiting to read more ...
Plzz add me to your pm list ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Awesome update krisha convo was fab swaron phone convo nd kriya also came there bt don't know that rey also on call rey heard her voice nd happy after hearing her voice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Res
unres
awesome update loved it
thanx for pm
update soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awsum update
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
amazing update...
tht phone part was great...
loved it...
thnx for pm n update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Awesome update

loved it sooo much

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
this ss is awsmm..plzz update soon

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