Kriyaansh os love birds in Goa...chapter 2 updated

Hey guysss...actually meine socha ki iss concept mein ek OS ho jaaye..kriyaansh confessed nd gang knows that no Tanni in my os..
Here is the update...
Part 1
Neha:kriya khahan hai vishaka..
Vish:i dnt knw dude,Rey tumehin pata hai tumhari Battcutter kab aayegi..
Rey:hello hello,uusse Battcutter sirf mein bol sakta hoom.get that..
Vish:god Rey..itna possessive mat
bhano..woh thodi naa tera Personal Property hai..woh sabse pehle hamari dost hai uske baad tumhari love.ok,hai naa neha.
Neha:right you are vishaka...
Rey:kya right..she is mine..only mine..
Lets bet...dekte hai kriya sabse pehle kisse hug karti hai...humein ya tumhein?
Rey:fine...lets see...
Kriya reached college...
Neha:guys kriya aa ghayi...
Rey:really...
Vicky:rey sabar ka fal meeta hota hai..ok ab dekte hai kisse pehle hug karte hai..
Rey nd vish neha:yuppp...
Swayam entred ...
Swayam:hai kriya...he called kriya then he immideatley hugged her.
Rey:WTH...swayam kar kya rha hai...
Nicky bursted out laughing..
Swayam:chalo kriya chalte hai...
Kriya:haan
kriyam entered the Bus...
Kriya hugged Neha and vishaka...Then hai ,hello to sharon and simmi Rinni and everyone...ony Rey left.
Rey's Mindtalk..
Battcutter ye tumne acha nhi kia...tumne sabko hug kia par muje nahi...dekho mein tumse bat nahi karooga..
Kriya:aaree Rey ko kya ho ghaya.
Meri taraf dek bhi nahi raha hai..hmmm lagta hai mujse gussa hai mein itni dher jo kardhi
universe ji pls help me...
Kriya sat next to him
kriya:Rey hi...
Rey turned his face..
Kriya:aare kya ho ghaya rey..aap mujse baat kyun nahi kar rhi ho
Rey mind talk:aaree kitni cute hai meri battcutter..maan kar rha hai ki abhi kiss...goshhh Rey control..
Kriya:rey...
Rey:hmmm.
Kriya:you are really cute..then she kissed his cheek.
Rey was shocked...
Rey mindtalk...
She really kissed me...OMG...really im i dreaming..woh bhi sab log hote huye bhi..
Then she wispered his ear...
I love you chabhilal...
Here is the first part...how is it...

nice...continue soon
waiting for next part and do pm me...

Chapter 2..
Rey:ye tumne kya kia battcuter..
Kriya:kya...mein toh..
Rey:haan mein toh ..what?
Kriya:mein woh...Rey ye kya kar rhe ho leave me.
Rey:no wat Battcutter...
Neha:ahem..ahem soo unfortunatley...Bet kisine nahi jeeta..
Rey:sooo what,shes mine..ok..hai na
kriya:hmmm she blushed...
Gang:awww so cute...you guys are soo cute together...
Bus journey...
Rey:kriya...
Rey:hmmm
rey:i luv u..
Kriya:Reyyy...aap din mein muje kamse kam hazar baar i luv u bolte ho,,
rey:woh islie battcutter mein tumse Bhaut pyaar karta hoom
kriya:awww...aap bhahut ache ho Rey..
Rey:i knw...
Then he started kissing allover her face...then her neck..
Kriya moaned his name...
Kriya:rey chodona...koi dekegea..
Rey:no way battcutter...btw ab sab log soo rha hai...
Then he started his work.
Meanwhile They reached goa...
Sharon:wowww wat a beautiful place...hai naa guys
gang:yup..awesme dude...
They reached a big hotel then the receptionist has come.
Sooo guys welcome to Goa..
Girls ka room uss portion mein hai aur boys ka udhar...
Rey:what...WTh itni door...
Swayam:rey dude...dheere bolo
kriya blushed...
Neha:kriya...kriya..
Nil:Rey...rey...
Goshhh inka kuch nahi ho sakta...
Earth calling kriyaansh...swayam sai..
Vicky:kriyaansh...what was that.
Swatam:aare its simple kriya+Reyaansh kriyaansh
kriyaansh blushed..
Bots and girls reached their respective room...
Rey:guys muje apni Battcutter se milni hai...kuch karona
amar:stop it yaar hum sabko girl friends hai par hum toh...
Rey:excuseme,meri battcutter sabse diffrent hai shes not my girlfriend shes my life .
Boys:awww
i knw Bakwaas dha...next part will be awesme..
Precap:romantic date of our kriyaansh

Awesome...
Hayee rey possesive for his batcutter...
Continue soon

omg.both parts were superb.fabulous..

Both parts of the is we're amazing please continue :)