Tumhe kya farq padhta hai?|Piddi-Kiya-Avantika|OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Tumhe kya farq padhta hai?" And with that she walked away.

Seriously? I mean Ranveer was just like my brother.They have no idea how i feel? Ofcourse,meri kya feelings hongi? After all i'm a portable chamcha.

I walked towards my class. Kiya's words were in my mind,why does is matter me?

I missed our old gang,KD bhai,Kiya,Ranveer,Panchi,Samar,Juhi and Bobby. Collage mein sab alag-alag hogaye.

Someone sat next to me,"Heeey!" Avantika screamed.

"Hi" I looked down at my book.

"Tumhari book ulti hai" a confused Avantika said.

"Avantika,yaar,jaa disturb mat kar."

The class was empty. There was still 20 minutes before the class starts.

Avantika sighed."Problem kya hai?"

"Problem ye hai ki har koi mujhe bina jaane judge karta hai!!" I took a step towards her, "Problem ye hai ki koi meri feelings ki parwah hi nahi karta!" I started walking closely towards her,she backed away with her eyes widen.

"Piddi" She whispered.

"Problem ye hai ki har koi mujhe portable chamcha kehta hai! GOD dammit! Koi toh mujhe samjhe!"

Her back was against the wall, she looked right into my eye. I don't know what catch me,i forgot about everything and just leaned in.

"Problem ye hai ki koi mujhe samjhta hi nahi hai" I whispered.

Suddenly there was noise outside. Then it hit me,what was i doing? This not Piddi! What just happened?

"Problem ye nahi hai ki koi tumhe samjhta nahi hai, problem ye hai ki tum kissi ko trust nahi karte ho" She half-smiled and walked outside to see why there was such a noise.

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I badly want to see a intense Piddi. I mean we all have seen the nautanki wala Piddi, ek serious Piddi will be a good change. 😳
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WhisperOfDreams thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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alia girl...!!
your one hell of a writer i must say!! this is soo amazing!!!
i absolutely loved it!!
the piddi-avantika scene...!! i so wish i would get to see it..!!
and haayee no one understands piddhi...so sad!!
amazing..!! this is the 1st OS of urs that i have read!!👏
love
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Alia! Dis ws ossum!
Juz LUVD it n intence pidhi is d most needed 1!
U did a really gr8 job out der! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my Soul Sis. . u did it again!!!
u always leave me speechless!!
This was EPIC!!
I jus Loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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alia🤗
gosh this was beautiful❤️
short , sweet and yet so meaningful👏
loved the way u write yaar👍🏼
jst amazing!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: safi_kisha

alia girl...!!

your one hell of a writer i must say!! this is soo amazing!!!
i absolutely loved it!!
the piddi-avantika scene...!! i so wish i would get to see it..!!
and haayee no one understands piddhi...so sad!!
amazing..!! this is the 1st OS of urs that i have read!!👏
love
safrena


EEEP! Thanks girly! :D
Haha. *Blushes* Thanks alot! :D Itni tareef,i'm on cloud 9. 😳 😆
I really want to see an intense scene between any of the couples.
Piddi-Panchi bhi chalega!! I NEED AN INTENSE SCENE! 😕 😆😆 Lol,i'm going crazjo. -.-
Hamare KD bhai understands Piddi.
Thanks JAAANUU! :D 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver

Wow Alia! Dis ws ossum!
Juz LUVD it n intence pidhi is d most needed 1!
U did a really gr8 job out der! 👏


Thanks Adiiitiii! :D
i swear manh,ek intense scene likhne mein CVs ka kya jaa raha hai? :/
I'm dying for one intense scene. XD
I'm gonna write more intense scene OS,until the cvs give us an intense scene. 😕😕
thanks once again. *Floating on cloud 9*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

my Soul Sis. . u did it again!!!
u always leave me speechless!!
This was EPIC!!
I jus Loved it!!



SS! :D Meri jaanaa! :D Thanks thanks. XD
Apno ko koi thanks bhi bolta hai? xD

I tend to that alot don't i? 😉
Thanks thanks! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arhadlove

alia🤗
gosh this was beautiful❤️
short , sweet and yet so meaningful👏
loved the way u write yaar👍🏼
jst amazing!!!!



AHHH! Thanks! :D
Tum logon ne mujhe cloud 9 pe beitha diya hai,neeche lao mujhe!! Uppar internet connection slow hai. xD

Haha,thanks alot! :D
Pm me if you write an OS! :D 😳

thanks once again! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Alia-


EEEP! Thanks girly! :D
Haha. *Blushes* Thanks alot! :D Itni tareef,i'm on cloud 9. 😳 😆
I really want to see an intense scene between any of the couples.
Piddi-Panchi bhi chalega!! I NEED AN INTENSE SCENE! 😕 😆😆 Lol,i'm going crazjo. -.-
Hamare KD bhai understands Piddi.
Thanks JAAANUU! :D 😳 🤗

anytym sweety!!!
tareed to baan thi hai!!!!
yep i would luv to see a intense seen as well!!!
ofc he does and i love their friendship!!
u welcome again jaan 😉🤗

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