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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanika

update was awesom you did a great job


Thank you Dear 😃


Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vibha
Awesome update, loved the part when a women called jai a maid 😆 👏
Thanks for the pm and please update as soon as possible 😉


Thanks Humaira 😃

Originally posted by: huma12.

bloodyyy yudhveer jai kam thi ju yeh kaminaaa bhi a gayaaa but over all love the chapy execilent vibhaa


Aww...thanks for the lovely comment Huma 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Superb update !

Loved it ! glad you like it 😳

Manveer moments were so cute 😳 aww!

Oh God ! Now from where did Yudhveer and his dad came 😡 straight away from hell...😆

(BTW Yudhveer is a nice name 😉) i got it from DEK itself 😛

I thought Jay and Akash were enough 😆

And please don't say that you are ending it so soon 😭 No i changed my decison now 😳

I really love it, especially because of the daily updates ! 😊 Thank you so much 😃

Sorry if I have not been regular actually was a bit busy lately ! Its alright 😊

But please don't end it so soon ''... no i won't

Eagerly waiting for the next update (Not the last one I hope )

i'd be updating in few min..n no its not the last one 😉

Continue soon '''...

Thanks for the PM ! Welcome dear 😊


Vidhi your comment was so awesome dear...Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Part Vibha

Manveer scenes were cute
I hate J and Majnu jodi now this Yuddhaveer has come he seems worse then Majnu and J put together now all evil people together will make plan against Manveer... hate them all hope Uday finds out and set them al straight
Cont Soon
Vibah dw about responses people will read and comment you're great writer dont be upset if u ever stop writing I will have to send you Majnu Pics and Majnu OS


di i know you don't like Thank you's but still Thank you for this comment and for all the support you gave me 🤗 big hugs 🤗
im not gonna stop writing so no Majnu pics please 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update,loved it! Jay is kamini n very good that they called her naukrani. Manveer are really adorable. I just wish uday beats that yuddhaveer n breaks his limbs. Do continue soon and dont end the ss,this ss is very nice. Thanks 4 the pm.


Thank you Sanah 🤗 im not ending it 😆

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow gr8 update sis
jay ko naukarini bana di so funny
hate baapbeti ek no kaminey
love manveer scene
thanx fr pm n cntinue soon


Thanks Shruthi 😃

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesooomeee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
loved it loads...
hehe veer scene was very nice...
pagal ladka lollipop leke aya...
tapori veer is also goodbut...
and ya...
ye ss mujhe bahot pasand hai vibha...
sorry for late comment...
plz end mat karna tujhe sab readers ki kasam...
plz plz plz...
i love ur writing and ss...


Aww thanks for the nice comment Mahima 🤗 itni badi kasam ko main kaise tod sakti hoon😲 im not ending it as of now..😳 im really glad you like my SS 😃

Originally posted by: aathiraa

nice update.
loved it.
continue soon.


Thanks Dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Vibha😊. Hello Navina 😃 you've changed your comment's color 😛

As usual - it was an amazing update. U had some very memorable scenes there ... which made the chapter all the more exciting. Loved the part when Jai was called a "NAUKRANI"😆 ... she deserved that! Then Uday smeared mud on his fore-head ... that was wonderful👏. I loved that part😳. Another scene which I thought cute , was when he brought 2 lollipops ... 1 for himself and 1 for Manyata😉.
really happy that you liked those scenes 😃
Can't believe I was right about the relatives. But when I saw the photo of Yuddaveer ... I knew that there was NO WAY , he could be good. Uday's own Uncle was behind his kidnapping - how despicable. Just for the sake of the crown , they did such a heinous crime😡. Hope they are caught soon. They should be beheaded 😈!!!!
Yeah i'd consider your suggession😆 but i have some thing more ghastly in my mind for Yuddha 😈
Yuddaveer is having very dirty thoughts about Manyata🤢 ... I feel very sorry for him if Uday comes to know of that😉! So , the trio are busy plotting once again ... it would be nice if someone would over-hear their plans😉 ... and then foil it😆. Uday himself would get to know about it and Yuddha is gonna be reduced to pulp very soon 🤣
Great work Vibha , thanks 😃
continue soon , in a few min 😳
thanks 4 the PM. Welcome 😊
PS - DON'T END THIS SS IN A HURRY , and please don't stop writing. I love your stories and I always look forward to your updates. U are a talented writer ... and it's a pity , u are not getting enough appreciation for your work! I do hope your "LIKEs" improve and u reconsider your stance about writing further😃! Aww..Thank you so much for understanding me...and don't worry dear..that was my little out burst in anger..i thought about it now and decided to continue with it 😳


Thank you Navina 🤗That was really wonderful 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Sorry sorry sorry
Once again i am late!! its ok 😊
hey don't think of ending it okay, you know i love Veer sooo,ooo,ooo much yes i know 😛
and its not boring at all!😳 Glad you think so 😳

The chapter was great! Thank you so much 😃
awww😳he got lolipops 😆 Yep
he is so cute😳

O my gosh!! neya villan😡
iski to shakl say hi ye bht ghatiya lagta hai!! Isiliye toh maine usko chuna hai 😆

don't apart them Please😭 I won't 😉
Update soon😳 abhi thodi der me😛
&
Thanks for the PM.😃 Welcome dear


Thanks for the comment Zainab 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


The day of coronation arrived after 2 days and the whole city was in a celebratory mode. There was a lot of hustle bustle going on in and around the palace. The future queen of Jaigarh woke her husband with a kiss and a cup of coffee.

He sat up, gave her a big sleepy smile and went to sleep again! Muttering "kya yaar, sone bhi nahi deti'"

"dekho main 3 tak ginoongi, agar tum nahi uthe nahi na toh sach me balti bhar paani tum par daal doongi'phir mat kehna-" he was not at all listening to her, the lazy bum.

"arre DS, aap!" Manyata said with shock.

"DS! DS aagayi!'kahan hai?" Uday woke up with a start; only to be greeted with a loud laughter from Manyata for having fooled him. there was no DS in the room. He chased her around the room and she dodged him till they both got tired. Manyata stopped and so did Uday.

She suddenly felt her hackles rising seeing the feral feeling in Uday's eyes. She moved one step back and he came one step forward till there was no place to move back.

Manyata was pinned to the wall and closed her eyes in anticipation of what was about to happen next.

"Maa aap?" Uday said abruptly.

"Tum mujhe yedi samjhte ho? Mera hi trick mere upar? Achcha bachchu'abhi main-"

She opened her eyes to see Komal smiling a 'know it all' smile. She went away not willing to disturb the newly weds. Manyata was embarassed to her roots and now it was Uday's turn to laugh at her.

While he was busy laughing, Manyata jumped up; gave a sloppy kiss on his cheek and ran out the room leaving an amused Uday.

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By afternoon guests had arrived from various places especially for the occasion. J as usual had her act in place and greeted guests with biggest smile possible.

"Yeh leejiye saab, yeh zeher jo aapne khas mangvaya tha, par aap iska karenge kya?" the servant said handing over a small bottle to the man standing in the dark room. The man's face was not visible in the dark but his silhoutte itself was enough frightful.

"tumhara kaam ho gaya tum jao, khabardar agar yeh baat kisi ko pata chali toh.." the man said. The servant went away after promising that no soul will have a clue about it.

He held the small bottle in his hands and anticipated the havoc it was going to bring.

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The pre-ceremony rituals began for the coronation. Firstly Uday was to have the holy bath. He had the time of his life with scented oils and rose petals.

After emerging from the giant tub, Uday could already feel the change that had begun in his life. He felt his previous uncertain life slipping away and a new one taking its place.

The 'Raj dooth' (royal servants) came to take him downstairs where he would take the blessings of the elders before proceeding to the place of the coronation.

Uday came down wearing his ceremonial garb along with the royal sword in his hands. There were enamored glances from the gathered people as well as lustful glance from particular pair of eyes.

But the charmer himself was charmed by the beautiful kohl lined eyes that looked at him with mix of love and womanly embarassment. He met her eyes from across the room and she lowered her eyes smiling.

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There was still time to go for the auspicious muhurat and Manveer were seated together on the swing posing for the photographs. A waiter with a tray of flavored milk came towards them and Uday took a glass.

"Sir, ab aap khade ho jaayiye'aayiye is side" the photographer called Uday aside.

Manyata already felt claustrophobic in her heavy banarsi Sari specially ordered for the occasion and she was thirsty too. She took a sip of the flavored milk and got a repulsant feeling instantly. Was there some odd flavor to the milk?

She felt dizzy and stood up. Yuddha appeared and went on speaking about some unimportant matter. She couldn't really focus on what he was saying. The room revolved round round and everything looked a shade darker.

"Bhabi saa'aap theek toh hain? Lagta hai aap ki tabiyat theek nahi hai, chaliye aap thodi der kamre me aaram keejiye" he offered her a hand and she took it gladly; relieved to receive a helping hand. He held her hand tightly and she felt a subtle prick on the back of her hand for a spilt second.

Uday saw them and rushed to help. Yuddha handed her to Uday and said "lagta hai Bhabi saa ki tabiyat kharab ho rahi hai; aap inka khayal rakhiye'hume thoda kaam hai'hum chalte hain"

As everyone was busy doing their own thing no one noticed Uday carrying Manyata to the room. By the time he reached the room; Manyata had fainted and Uday's heart beat a terrified rhythm. She looked ghostly pale like there was no blood in her body.

He placed her on the bed and sprinkled some water on her face.

No Response.

He rubbed her legs vigorously and felt them go colder by the second.

Oh NO NO NO!! this couldn't be happening.

Holding his own breath he checked her breathing; 'Sigh' She was STILL BREATHING.

His mind had stopped working and he did the first thing that came to his mind. He picked up his phone with leadened hands and dialled the first number on the speed dial.

"Unnati'jald se jald mere kamre me aao..abhi isi waqt'kuch mat poocho" he cut the call.

"tumhe kya ho gaya Princess? Tum yeh nahi kar sakti mere saath' Tumhe pata hai na aaj kya din hai'.utho Manyata..utho'" he pleaded her.

"Main is din ko kaise bhool sakti hoon Veer? Main bilkul theek hoon" She wanted to say. But her voice was lost somewhere and her eyes were glued to their eyelids.

"Tumhe agar kuch ho gaya toh main mar jaunga Princess'meri hatya ka paap lagega tum par'aankhe kholo Manyata" he begged her.

"tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh marne ki baat karne ki! She wanted to reprimand him but she was constantly slipping. The ugly black nothingness was crowding her and it was just inches away from gobbling up her consciousness.

He held her lifeless hand in his own and touched it to his cheek. A drop of tear fell on her hand and that did it. She got the strength that she needed to push back the dark cloud. Manyata forced her eyes open and there he was. His handsome face stained with tears.

The first thought that crossed her mind was 'Im keeping him away from the Coronation'oh my gosh'how could I be so selfish'

She gathered all her strength and forced her throat to utter a word. "U..day'main theek hoon'tum jao'ek Raja ka kartavya nibhao" she said in a barely audible voice.

Unnati arrived with an alarmed expression on her face and seeing Manyata's condition she understood why her dada had called her in such a hurry.

Some of the color on Uday's face returned after Manyata regained consciousness but he didn't want to leave her alone and go. He was so adamant in his stance that manyata had to make him swear on herself that he would go.

Holding his hands tightly with as much force she was capable of, she said "Tumhe meri Kasam hai Veer'tum mere pati banne se pehle iss jaigarh ke Rajkumar ho..tumhe apna raj dharm nibhana hoga..ab jao"

Unnati promised him that she would take care of Manyata till the doctor arrived and Prince Udayveer left them with a heavy heart.

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Yuddhaveer replaced the ring that he had stolen from the Jewel box. A ring that was a heir loom. He looked around to see if anyone had spotted him. The ancient kings were really smart and they had their own ways to tackle the enemy. 'Kootneeti' his father had called it. He threw the bottle of snake poison in the nearby trash bin.

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'Uneasy lies the head that wears the crown' Udayveer saw this proverb coming alive in front of him. Some one placed a crown on his head and there was loud noise all around. All eyes were on him but he was oblivious to all that was happening around. His eyes searched the one who was not there.

He remembered her words "Tum mere pati hone se pehle is Jaigarh ke raj kumar ho" true sign of a Rajwadan; who would give up her life for a promise.



Thank you all who liked, commented and supported me in previous chapter...love you guys🤗
by the way this is not the last chapter😳

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
I really don't want Manyata to die.
Just loved Uday's concern towards Manyata
And hate this Yuddhveer😡
I'm glad that you are not ending it...Thanks 4 the pm and update soon
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm manyata ku maena mat plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
LOVED IT!
I hope manyata doesnt die.
Do continue soon and thanks for the pm.
Edited by sanah12 - 12 years ago

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