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kriyansh22

@kriyansh22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

wonderfully written ahh! its as if shakti has herself poured out her feelings...simply gr8 one dear😃

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

such a marvelous piece
aww u showed so beautiful relation b/w master n studen
n best frnds too...da way kunwar xplaining her aww soo cute
love it to da core
n last part awww...soo sweet

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Purple

@Ocean.eyes

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Its Amazing
realy gud
different frm others...

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

wow dats realy nyc
i think ur OS is been most realistic nd i completely loved it
thnx 4 da pm

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesum work amy !!!!

Really u are too good at expressing shakti's P.O.V and her thoughts...

Very well written and executed !!!!

So,pls continue sooon nd do PM me !!!! ")

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Wow.. It ws touching..
Shakti lucky ua tht u hav a friend like kunwar...
Bt D3 is incomplete without you shakti so as kunwar...:)
Try to gt bk to D3 plz:(
Elz may u both achieve d best in life..
N stay at each other side always:)
Btw.. L love to c u both as a couple in real life.. Hehe

Btw gal.. Awsm interpretation.. Grt control ovr words feelings..
Lovd it:)

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Its awsome ..!
Y dnt u continew dis ..!
Would love 2 read more of ..!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

AWESOME OS...its really fab...the way you justified her actions and her dreams ...her relationship/friendship with kunwar ...the reaction of her fans,production house ...the way u concluded ...i loved it ... keep writing 😊