HUMARA PYAAR! PART 8 deserted love! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgg!!!!! shivvvvv!!!!! im gonna start cryinggg!!! SHIVVVV!! i know i wantedd kunal and nimmo together but not by shiv dyeinggg!!!!


its very well writen and cant wait till u continueee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmo4kunal



umm! i don't get what you mean by this! hahaha.. my family members(dad, uncles) say the same.. lolzz.. what do they say!



Shiv: aisa nahin hai! nimmo bohot hi achi ladki hai1

Kunal: yeh to har ladka shaadi ke pehele bolta hai!

this is what they say as a jokeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92



Shiv: aisa nahin hai! nimmo bohot hi achi ladki hai1

Kunal: yeh to har ladka shaadi ke pehele bolta hai!

this is what they say as a jokeeeee



OH! ok i get it now! sorry! and yeah i will continue soon! i am sorry i f anyone is disspointed shiv died but the story has just begun!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 5

Kunal: nimmo! dekho shiv...

Nimmo: nahin shiv theek hai! dekho use mujhe sutaane ka buhaana chahiye hota he bus! shiv is absolutely fine he is just teasing me! kunal dekhna ab mein shiv se baat nahin karoongi yeh acha muzaak nahin ha! (starts crying) acha muzaak nahin hai! (hugs kunal)

KUnal: (strokes her head) nimmo! i guess yeh hi kismat mein likha tha!

Nimmo: (crying) nahin kunal! shiv ko waapas aana hi hoga! (cries)

Kunal:
*FLASHBACK! *
Shiv: (cheerful) good morning everyone!

Kunal: (sitting and eating breakfast) ab ise kya hua?

Shiv's mom! (SM) (laughs) are beta aaj iski engagement hai na!

Kunal: wow! you're coming very close to barbaadi!

Shiv: chup kunal! yeh na ho tere waje se kahi meri shaadi hi na ho!

Kunal: (laughs) kya puta?

*END OF FLASHBACK*
Kunal: *thinks* kyun hona tha yeh! kyun such hua mera kehena!

WEEKS PASS AND NOW NIMMO JUST SITS ON HER OWN RARELY TALKS TO ANYONE, SHE NEVER FORGOT THE DEATH OF SHIV

NIMMOS HOUSE

Nimmo's mom: nimmo beta khaana khalo!

Nimmo: (just sat there staring into thin air)

Nim's mom: beta bhool jao, shiv waapas nahin ayega! please i can't see you like this!

Kunal: aunty woh.... (notices nimmo)

Nim's mom: ab tu hi samjha ise beta! (leaves)

Kunal: (sits next to nimmo) Nimmo! kaisi ho!

Nimmo: (in a faint voice) theek hoon!

Kunal: jhoot mut bolo!

Nimmo: (gets up and walks to her closet and takes out a photo album) yeh lo! (hands it to kunal)

Kunal: yeh kya hai?

Nimmo:isme meri aur shiv ke photo's hai! mein chahati hoon ki tum yeh le jao! yeh mere saath rehenge to mein kabhi shiv ko nahin bhool paoongi!

Kunal: (opened the album and saw nimmo in her wedding dress pic)

Nimmo: meri shaadi waali photo hai! kabhi shiv ke saath is dress me photo le hi nahin payi!

Kunal: (remembers what shiv had said to him)nimmo!

Nimmo: ha!

Kunal: kya tum yeh dress phirse pehena chahogi?

nimmo: (shocked) mutlab?

Kunal: mujhse shaadi karogi?

Nimmo: KYA? (shocked) Kunal! tum yeh kaise bol sakte ho! mein sochi ki tum shiv ke dost the! tum jaante ho ki mein shiv ko kabhi nahin bhula paoongi!

Kunal: YEH HI TO NIMMO! TUMHARI TO SHAADI BHI NAHIN HUI AUR TUM EK WIDWA BUN KE BETHI HO! KOI LADKI KO HUK NAHIN HAI KI WOH KUDH APNI ZINDAGI BURBAAD KARE! (calms down) Shiv humesha tumhe khush dekhna chahata tha! humesha husti hui! aur usne khud bola ki mein tumse shaadi karoon!

Nimmo: (shocked) kya? shiv ne.....

Kunal: nimmo! shiv se tum hamesha pyaar karti rahogi mein jaanta hoon! lekin ab meri responsibility hai ki mein shiv ki aakhri icha poori karoon!

Nimmo: (her eyes get filled with tears) kyun bola tumne yeh mujhse kunal! tum jaante ho ki mein shiv se itna pyaar karti hoon ki mein uske koi baat nahin taal payi! kyun bola yeh..kyun!

Kunal: nimmo! jo bhi shiv ne bola woh tumhare ache ke liye tha!

Nimmo: ha pur! mein tumse shaadi kar loongi lekin tum apni zindagi kyun barbaad kar rahe ho?

Kunal: kyunki shiv mera dost that aur yeh mera farz hai!

Nimmo: pur...

Kunal: please nimmo! kya tum nahin chahogi ki ek baar jahaan pur bhi shiv hai ki woh tumhe dulhun ke jore mein khush dekhe!

Nimmo: mein kabhi khush nahin rahe paoongi!

Kunal: pur shiv ke liye to hogi na!

Nimmo: (after a long time) ha! (cries)

Kunal: (hugs her) shiv bohot khush hoga!

Nimmo: (thinks of shiv and all the time they spent together)

Nim's mom: (overhears their conversation) Kunal beta tumhari lumbi umar ho! tumne hi nimmo ko aaj ek nayi zindagi ki umeed di hai! (smiles) bus ab yeh rishta mut torna bhugwaan! nimmo to shiv se pyaar karti rehegi lekin shayad yeh pyaar bhi...!

WILL NIMMO EVER BE HAPPY AGAIN? OR DOSE DESTINY HAVE MORE SORROWS TO THROW HER WAY?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o god. vo razi ho gai!! i am so happy yet sad cuz she doesnt love him.. not only that but she loves someone else and she barely got time toi mourn..

well continue sooonn and i hope she doesnt have to go thorouhg much with kunal.. hopefully he will keep her happyyyyyy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing ff felt like crying aftr readin the 4th n 5th part !!awsome 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
thnx i will continue but please reply
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
PART 6

Nimmo and kunal's wedding takes place even though everyone knew they didn't love each other people still had a little trust in god to make this relation work!

KUNAL'S (ACTUALLY SHIV'S) HOUSE!


Nimmo & kunal enter!

Shiv's mum! (SM) are kunal beta!

Nimmo: (just kept on staring at shiv's mum) Aunty!

SM: are nimmo! mujhe bohot khushi hai ki tumne aage barne ka decision liya hai!

Nimmo: (cried and went and hugged SM) aunty kyun apne aansoon chupa rahi hai!

SM: (cries) to kya karoon nimmo! shiv chale gaya lekin woh apna pyaar chor gaya!

Nimmo: shiv ke hi ghar aake mein shiv ko kaise bhool paoongi?

SM: yeh hi tumhari pareeksha hai nimmo! bhool jao shiv ko! as much as i feel sad but you have to forget my son and live with kunal! kya hua agar tum meri buhoo shiv ki patni bun ke nahi buni! lekin kunal ki patni...(cries)

Nimmo: aunty! (hugs her)

Kunal: (just stood in a corner watching all this) Shiv dekhna mein nimmo ke aankhon mein kabhi aansoon nahin aane doonga!

KUNAL'S ROOM

Kunal: (enters and sees nimmo sitting near the window) Nimmo!

Nimmo: (just kept staring outside with tears in her eyes! no matter how much she tried to hold her tears in they always found a way to escape)

Kunal: (just left to go to the bathroom)

Nimmo: *FLASHBACK*

IN COLLEGE

Nimmo: (recieves a note) yeh..(looks around and spots shiv winking at her) uf, ab isne yeh kya...(opens it and reads it) aaj shyaam dinner ke liye chalogi! (folded the note) shiv mein nahin aa paoongi!

Shiv: (whispers) kyun nahin?

Nimmo: mujhe behen ki shaadi mein jaana hai!

Shiv: (angry) mutlab i don't mean anything in your life!

Nimmo: nahin shiv....

Shiv: whatever nimmo.... you will care about me only when i leave you and you won't find me near you!

*END OF FLASHBACK*

nimmo: *thinks* kyun kaha tha tumne yeh shiv! kyun chora mujhe? (cries)

(THE SONG BHEEGI BHEEGI PLAYS IN THE BACKGROUND)

HERE ARE THE LYRICS!

bheegi bheegi si hai raaten
bheegi bheegi yaaden
bheegi bheegi baaten
bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha
sapnon ka saya palkon pe aya
pal mein hasaya pal mein rulaya
phir bhi yeh kaisi kami hai
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani

aadhi aadhi jaagi aadhi aadhi soyi
aankhen yeh teri toh lagta hai royi
lekar ke naam hamara
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha
rutha rutha rab chhuta chhuta sab
toota toota dil tere bina ab
kaise ho jeena ganwara
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani

bheegi bheegi si hai raaten
bheegi bheegi yaaden
bheegi bheegi baaten
bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha aa ha
aa ha ha ha
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
na jaane koi - 2 hamari adhuri kahani
na jaane koi yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
na na na....

Nimmo: (Cries) mein kabhi kisise pyaar nahin kar paooongi! sirf tumse pyaar kiya aur karti rahoongi!



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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 7

Kunal: (came out of the bathroom and saw nimmo crying) Nimmo!

Nimmo: (looked at him but didn't answer)

Kunal: woh kuch nahin bus bohot raat ho gayi hai to so jao!

Nimmo: (nodded her head) ji! (went to the couch and slept there)

Kunal: nahin woh...tum bed pe so jao mein couch pe....

Nimmo: nahin kunal tumne already bohot kuch kar liya hai mein tumhe aur problems nahin dena chaht!

Kunal: nahi woh....

Nimmo: (turned away and slept)

Kunal: (smiles) fine! (slept)

MORNING

Kunal: (got up and saw nimmo) abhi tak so rahi hai! (smiled at her beauty) no wonder shiv nimmo se itna pyaar karta tha! (his smile faded) kunal! tum yeh kaise bol sakte ho! nimmo sirf shiv ki hai! control yourself! never think aboutnimmo like this ever!

Nimmo: (got up) kunal! kya dkh rahe ho?

kunal: kuch nahin! woh.....jaldi tyaar ho jao!

Nimmo: kyun?

Kunal: woh breakfast kha lenge na! aur shyaam ko shaadi ki reception hai!

Nimmo: oh! ha shaadi ki reception!

Kunal: (noticed her sorrows but kept quiet) mein tyaar ho jaata hoon!

EVENING
SHAADI RECEPTION

Kunal: (hurried from his office to his reception) woh nimmo sor.....(kept looking at her)

Nimmo was wearing this

Nimmo: it's okay! waise bhi tum late nahin ho!

Kunal: (kept staring at her)

Nimmo: kunal! kya dekh rahe ho!

Kunal: kuch nahin!

Kaya: (came up to nimmo) congratulations! (in a faint voice because she knew how much nimmo loved shiv)

Nimmo: (the tears started to flow again) KAya! (hugged her)

Kaya: nimmo! nimmo! relax!

Nimmo: kaise bhooloon mein shiv ko? usi ki ghar mein usi ki maa ki buhoo lekin kisi aur ki pat...(cried)

Kaya: to kyun shaadi ki tune? kyun apne aap ko dhuk de rahi hai?

Nimmo: yeh sub shiv ki icha thi! aur mein shiv ko kabhi na nahin kehe payi! Aur maut bhi shiv ko na nahin kehe payi!

Kaya: nimmo! ab tune yeh decision liya hai to nibhana parega!

Nimmo: mein jaanti hoon!

Speaker: please may i request for the happy couple to take a dance!

Nimmo: (shocked) kya?

Kaya: jaa nimmo!

nimmo: nahin!

kaya: jaa nimmo!

Nimmo: pur..

Kaya: shiv ke liye!

Nimmo: (went to the dance floor with kunal and danced)

Kunal: (smiles)

Nimmo: (remembered the time when shiv and her danced but then she was smiling)

women: (right next to nimmo was dancing) are suno ji! (to her husband) yeh nimmo hai wahi na jiska puti to shaadi ke pehele hi mur gaya! (laughs) what bad luck!

Nimmo: (heared this)

Kunal: (was going to go teach that women a lesson but nimmo stopped him)

Nimmo: nahin! woh theek kehe rahi hai meri hi bad luck shiv pe par gayi! (cried and ran to her room)

Kunal: nahin nimmo! tum nahin jaanti shiv itna lucky tha ki tum uski thi!

Kaya: (came to kunal) pyaar ho gaya!

Kunal: (turned in shock) kya?

Kaya: pyaar hone laga hai tumhe nimmo se!

Kunal: nahin...woh...

Kaya: jhoot mut bolo! are nimmo aise hi hai koi bhi usse pyaar kar sakta hai! lekin woh sirf shiv se pyaar karti rahegi!

Kunal: (a frown came upon his face) ha tum theek ke rahi ho!

Kaya: lekin mein tumhari mudut karoongi ki nimmo apni zindagi mein phirse khushiyaan laye!

Kunal: pur uske saat zabardasti nahin kar sakta hum!

kaya: mein jaanti hoon! lekin i know nimmo deserves you and you will keep her happy! and i will help your relation!

Kunal: (smiled) really!

Kaya: anything for nimmo! and her happiness!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY GUYS I AM GOING TO CONTINUE BUT I HAVE ONE COMPLAIN MY FF HAS MORE THAN 400 VIEWS RIGHT NOW AND JUST FEW REPLIES PLEASE GUYS REPLY TO MY FF!

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