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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

back to back update. very interesting. is diya a terrorist?




yup CSI back with pace

Originally posted by: Sara92.

Wonderful update
but missed Nupur today



thanks alolt


Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part

missed nupur
😊



thnks alot
u will get nupur




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

superb update

thanx for the pm
cont soon dear



thanks alot dear
will cont soon



thnks alot



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Posted: 12 years ago

This update is for Aswathy..on her brthday... Happy brthday to her... may good bless u


rply to u all


Chapter: 9

Samrat: wasy achanak fuel kasay khatam hua

Mayank: pilot aur jin logo ny chk kiya tha zara un ko tu pakran….

Reserve bank ki flight frm Delhi confidential hoti hai … sirf major logo ko pata hota hai.. proper chk hoti hai for everything… phr take off k bad us k fuel kasay khatam hyua

Benji: hua tu hua woh waps Delhi kyun aai… nearby aur bhi city thi woh chor ker Delhi tak… its just tht

Samrat: they are involved… atleast pilot tu

Mayank: details nikal us ki bht help milay gi…. Hum ny pehly kyun nhi dekh asay kafi easy hojay ga

Samrat: thik hai … tu ghar ja hum atay hain

Benji: mein bhi diya ko chor ker ata hoon

…………….

Benji: diya mein tumhain hotel chor dayta hoon ya bore hojao gi as lot to do…

Diya: tum naraz ho…

He chukled at her pout

Benji: nhi baba naraz wali kya baat hai is mein

Diya: tum ny kitny confidently apny dosto se kaha … aur mein ny sab bigar diya…

Benji: its oky.. humain pata hai yeah log kafi rapidly chesay change ker rahy hain

Diya: change ker rahy hain??? She said surprisingly … tu phir tu ek kam hoskata hai

Benji: kya…

Diya: dekho is se zayda strong jammers tu hotay nhi… aur is neechy waly jammers tu tum bhi ap unlock kersakty hoo…

Benji: kasay..

Diya: main frame computer k andar at basic level enter hona sab se muskil hota hai… woh mein ny kerdiya hai… right

Benji: right

Diya: waha se sirf blockers ko unlock kern a aur hack ker kafi easy aur basic knowledge per based hota hai… jo being a street hacker mera weak hai.. per tu ny study kiya hai sab… tu tum kersakty ho

Benji: actually diya ur so right… tum thik kah rahi hoo… yaha se tum mein atleast try kersata hoon…as tu mein socha hi nhi .. thnks

Diya: han study kerlo books yaad ajay ga

Benji: he smiled… aur tum kah rahi thi tum humaray kam nhi asakti … you actually solved a big thing for me…

Diya: waha becih mein if u need me tu I will connect to u…

……………….

Mayank Driving his way back to home he was thinking so many things… his plan 5000 people and to add on this there is no way they have been able to find and near view of… and in all this there is nupur there… if anything they will do the any of hostage she will do sumthing or they other to do make things better and that can lead to the worse… doubting on nupur leading the thing he is fearing… both of them in trouble..he passed his fingers in his hair frustrated … he cant do any thing … n

Ya she n his son… he still cant just believe he is gonna be a father.. it was the biggest surprise evry he had …. It was unplanned… and sumthing he thought not cuming anytime around 3- years soon…

Mayank: nupur mein drive ker raha hoon..

Nupur: tu mein ny kya kiya… kaun sa apny ny hath tumhary baalo mein pahy rahy….

Mayank: he actually jerk them off…. Wht the hell nupur ur distracting me yaar

Nupur: really mr sharma… mein tu phone per hoon..she laughed

Mayank: but I can still feel ur hands here….. Mrs Sharma…

Nupur: na baba na ab woh harkat nhi kero gi…

Mayank: acha really… us din kya hua tha…

Nupur: mjhy kya pata tha tum asay nikalo gay… mjhy laga tha tum shareef khandan k ho… public place per ek bechari larki k faida nhi uthao ga

He chukled

Mayank: bechari larki…. Nupur tum aur bechari.. yeah kahbi nhi hosakta… aur madam us din waha daur daur tak koi nhi tha… its call tit for tat…. Aur tum mera jo fida utha rahi thi who

Mayank was in mumbai office, as he had sum work in Mumbai and he came… nupur was hell busy that whole day… she had an case than it was all branch head meeting.. she was hardly getting anytime to see him and she knew he is getting ignited more n more… she has just hugged him lightly and went away…

But he took full revenge of her teasing in the conference room… they were siting beside each other and the head of CSI was givng the whole year works presentation.. mayank was in full mischievous mood….

He adjusted his chair more closer pretending he was trying to get better acces to the screen… though he was trying to get better acced of his wife…

Placing his hand on her waist … he seductively moved it up in a feathering manner and than down… nupur hold her breath and tried to move abit.. making her protest registered but as if he cares.. he knew she cant say anything and he has all the time to touch her.. and made her know how it feels whn u tease the other who is meeting u after so long…

Removing it from her waist as he can see she was going to become breathless.. he gave her a bit rest she sigh in relief… but than gasped.. her hand that was holding the chair tightly because of his last encounter was now being caressed by him.. she looked at him and he dint looked back.. she pleded ..

Nupur: mayank pls..

Mayank: wht…he looked at her with smirk and she pleaded innocently.. god now that's wht he cant say no to … and he stoped…

But tht day when they were driving back home together.. she took full revenge of his seduction …. While he was driving she knew he doesn't get distracted …and he will nt to anything in return …so she thought its safe.. she placed her fingers and rufled his hairs..

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: wht

Mayank: kya ker rahi hoo… he said moving his head away

Nupur: wohi jo tum conference room mein ker rahy thy…

With that she moved them down to his neck and he griped her hand moved it away

Mayank: nupur its not joke.. I m driving kuch hogaya tu

Nupur: kuch kya hogaya…. Mein ny kya kiya ab itny dino baad apny pati ko dkeha hai.. I even cant touch him kya…

She was busy in her seduction or rather feeling him around her… and he was trying hard to maintain his attention on rood… but just than the car stop with a halt and and next wht happened she didn't knew

In a move, he made her seat go back and he was leaning on her…

Mayank: u right.. gahr ja ker tu time hi nhi milay ga… wht about here..

Nupur: tumhara demag karab hogaya hai kya.l. hatao bechy mayak.. yeah kaun sa tareeqa hai

Mayank: kyun abhi tu tumhara pati ko hath lagny k dil ker raha tha … mein bhi socha k mein bhi apni biwi k sath thora tu quality time spend kero…. He said huskily moving near… spreading his finger on her cheeks seductively

Nupur: mayank.. yeah public place hai

Mayank: wrong yeah restricted area hai… yaha kisi k bhi ana mana hai… siway tumahray…. So wht say

Nupur: kya…

Mayank: ya… he smirk and lean to her…. Kissed her softly making her gasp and lost her all rational mind… she pulled him closed and kissed him deeply… gosh he so love when she takes the charge and love him like this…

Mayank: nupur…. He was still busy kissing her and she was lost sumwhere in loving him

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: restricted area k sun ker sardak per hi shoor… u were so desperate kya

Nupur: hmm..out of blue she said tht

Just when the confession escaped form her mouth she opened her eyes to find him smiking leaning close to her.. she pushed him away and adjusted her dress and sit back straight… and he was taping his fingers on steering wheel

Nupur: and im not despo u were

Mayank: really…. Its oky I donot mind u taking advantage of me… no no….despo….

He burst in to laughter and she glared…hiding her blush tht was turning more n more deep

Mayank: per yaar sadark per sab k samany…

Nupur: she look around here n there.. and was relief its no one around.. she just cant imagine wht she was doing… the pibnk blotch appeared on her cheek just thinking wht she was doing she was hell embarrassed

Mayank: its oky u donot need to blush…despo... He was still laughing and he received a tight punch on his arm.. and he pulled her in his arm… and she join him laughers to….

Mayank: han ti despo aj kya hua

Nupur: stop calling me that mayank.. I will kill u.. aur atleast asai baatein bacho k samny tu maat kero

Mayank: kis k bachy.. samrat k bachy bhi hogay.. abhi us k shaid ko 4 months tu hoay hain.. who asa nikla kya baat ker rahi hoo…

Nupur: tumahra deemgh chal gaya hai mayank sach mein… u have lost it completely…. Tumahry bachay

Mayank: meray bachy kaha se aay hai tu abhi koi…

He press the breaks

Mayank: nupur wht are u trying to say

Nupur: mayank woh… I had a test and it came positive.. she wasn't sure how she should react to it and how he will react to it… it took time for her to get this feeling sink in… she never thought abt being a mother specially with this kinda job…

Mayank: kaun sa test

Nupur: ullu…. Pregnancy test mein hi pata chaly ga nah k mein tumhary bachy ki maa bany waki hoon( I cant get out of this dialogue away from my head of MJHT.. so nupuriosh)

Mayank: kya… per yeah kasay hua

Nupur: kya matlab hai tumahra kasay ho… tum mjhy per hsak kerya hai

Mayank: nhi I mean mein tu yaha ho

Nupur: MAYANKKK

Mayank: I mean are u sure

Nupur: kya kay im sure of

Mayank: we parents.. are u oky with it.. mean its…

Nupur: ur not happy

Mayank: aray nhi baba it… just its.. to sudden n I didn't thought u will b saying this to me now now.. he lean back to his seat and smiled…. He chukled a bit… I m actually happy mein saocha nhi tha… so its…he smiled…. Really nice I m happy… its .. I am feeling overwhelmed… but dekho mera kuch nhi jata… na job wise na personal… are u oky with it.. cause no matter how much I say im there with u ..its u who have to in practical wil be facing all..personal level per bhi aur more on professional lvel

She smiled at her husband … he is truly one in million ..aww she would have pulled his cheek …

Nupur: initially mayank I was like a bit scared n all but now..pata nhi im feeling good

Mayank: wait im going on my ipad… I m hating this distance…

He switched on and he smiled looking at her.. it was stupid he knew but she looked so different.. chumby.. he chuckled

Nupur; why are u laughing

Mayank: ur looking more red n chumpy… cute…

She frown and glared and he laughed more

Mayank: god nupur ur looking too cute…

Nupur: mayank…

Mayank: oky how r u feeling

Nupur: happy… but..

Mayank: but…

Nupur: alone… ur not here mayank n u will not be there in initial months.. n I so want to

Mayank: sigh… I really wish I can.. he toughed his finger on sreen…. Btw.. congratulations wifey… or shuld I say mom… tum ny mom ko bataya

Nupur: han woh rona tu band keray… uff I just at times doubt she is my mom.. she is so senti

Mayank: oye mom ko kcuh maat kahan… ab mjhy pata chala from back few days why ur were at times so amzing and time an hitler….

Nupur: tum jao ur getting late…

Mayank:u made my moring actually amzing

She returned the smile now fully… this news that turned for her as a happy news was now the best she can get… the way his eeys were shining with happiness… she knew she lacks expressin of happiness… and now she can see he is surprised yet pleasantly

Mayank: wifey donot look at me like this… ur already looking so irresistible… he passed her kiss.. and bid her bye…

And just couldn't help the smile on his face was not leaving him at all….

he still haven't felt him.. he hasn't yet seen nupur like this….he hasn't talked with his child…he hasn't been there for her. his destiny cant be so cruel… it cant take away his family again from him.. but he knew this has happened before.. and it can happen again… so he will do everything that is possible to fight against it…

He opens the door and was stunt to see the sight… he sigh more in like now wht evr he was keeping himself will shattered now…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*sigh* fiza-ji.. aapko toh pata hai na.. yeh mera favourite FF hai.. kya awesome characters banaye hai aapne.. dil khush ho gaya... *applauds*
lovely update.. waiting for more😃

~jiya~

P.S. yay!! me first!!😃
Edited by --jiya-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update, Apu !!
Now Benji will be able to hack their computer..
Loved the flashback.. Specially that beech sadak wala part ;) ye MayUr bhi na*blush*
continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update
that sarak wala scene... i lost my heart to mayank :P but haye how sad he's only nupur ka :P
great update
perfectionism :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Congratulation for becoming sizzler [=D>] :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful updt
scary ending..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



thanks alot dear
gladu liked it

yes nupur ki jaan k khatraa hamehsa rahy ga
bichari diya tum log tu police waly hogay hoo...
last time gunjan er tu shak nhi kiya woh tu us k behan thi jo kidnaper tha

llol... mein medical ki hoon beta ji
thnks alot
its oky dear




tabhi ap itni intelligent ho
ap apni padai ka poora fayada utha rahi ho 🤣 🤣 🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago

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