MG FF- *Love Story* #3 Pt 13_pg 66.. IMP NT pg77 march20

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello Shelloo ji... remember me or not? 😉 Iss Eshtoly ko sabb bhool toh ni gaye naa????? 😳
Well pehle toh me really shollyyy for leaving it abandoned for almost 1 month now
And moi alsho know k meine bola tha 26th ke baad I'll be updating it ASAP, but laziness took over me after those tedious exams and I couldnt come up to update 😭
And also i didnt feel satisfied with watever me typed for update 🤢
BUT finallyyy me thought to give you all an Update as a treat on this special day for all of us. 😃
Here wishing you all a Verry Happyy GHSP anniversary ❤️. This day is special to all of us coz on this very day we all got our very dear show "GHSP" and also "Maneet"... So enjoy this teaser for now, untill me come up with a full Update once done with typing ASAP 😊

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(Another cutoo edit by my very own Angel di [Dazzling Divz] 😃)

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Maan reached his seat and sat there while geet and yash followed keeping a safe distance among them.

Yash just casually sat on the bench just beside maan while geet frowned at it, she was supposed to sit beside maan not him "oyeee waha se utho wo humari jagah hai.." she said with a frown "tumhari nahi yeh meri place hai, aur mei nahi jaunga" yash answered adamantly. "Maan humare friend hai toh hum unke pass baithenge na ki tum" Geet said firmly "wo tumhara nahi mera friend hai aur me nahi jaunga" saying yash turned his face in front ignoring her "maan humare friend hai.. issiliye wahaa se uth jao warnaaa... " she threatened him "warnaa kyaa?" yash challenged

"warnaa.. warnaa yehh" ...

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Heheheh now upto you to guess what the devil did this time 😉
Update As soon as i complete typing, umm maybe tomorrow or today late night Dunn know

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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Blushingqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

didu hereee yaaayyy
wowww teaserrr
jaldi update karrr bsss tera resting time over lolzzz
waiting
waitng
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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Blushingqueen
didu hereee yaaayyy
wowww teaserrr
jaldi update karrr bsss tera resting time over lolzzz
waiting
waitng
waiting

Hehehehehe 😆
Ummaaahhh lubbb yaaa 🤗

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Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

WOW FINALLY KUCH TOH MILA 😉

AWESOME TEASER

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

welcome back honey...

teaser
awesome teaser...
ohoh Yash is in trouble...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: spvd
welcome back honey...

teaser
awesome teaser...
ohoh Yash is in trouble...
cont soon dear...

Thank youuu diii 🤗
Me updating just now 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

(Another cutoo edit by my very own Angel di [Dazzling Divz] 😃)

Sorry for lateness Hope you all havent forgotten the story..
Anywayss here's wadda wala update for all 😃

And yeh Update specially for my SABAAA (Brown-Eyes) Ummahhh here's your update 😆 Abb pleej meri maa aishe papers mei eshtoly na likh ke na aa jana 😉

PART-11
"Chalo chalo abb jaldi jao warna late ho jayega... aur Maan ajj app ro liye par aggli baar ek aansu bhi bahaya na toh dekh lena appki maa se bura koi ni hoga, Samjhe" Maan chuckled at her fake stern voice "Maan mumma nahi toh kya huya Maa toh hai na appke paas?" she asked tenderly. Maan nodded as Rano kissed him and Geet by turn. Both ran as the car honked quickly kissing Rano on her cheek. Rano waved both babies bye as the car started dissapearing out of their site.
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Both maneet sat in the car, some nervous, some excieted. For geet it was getting too difficult to bottle up her excietment, she didnt really knew what and how a school is supposed to be, but however it will be, that would be the best of all places. Her little brain tried to visualize all sorts of her imaginations, filled with all fairytale kind, and the more she imagined, the more her excietment grew.

Finally they reached their destination and the driver stopped the car a few metres away from school due to road block and led the kids out of the car.

Geet frowned not finding the school around "nanguu school toh aya hi nahi, hum kaha aa gaye?" she ended with a li'l scared expression.
"Hum school hi aye hai, wo dekho.. wo raha school" he pointed at their school gate which was just few steps away from where they stood. The driver accompanied the kids till the main huge gate, from where he returned to the car after making sure they were inside all safely.

Both entered the school premises together, while geet could just gape at the huge building, trying to make out the front and back of their huge school but yet again nervousness surfaced her li'l mind and her hand on its own got entangled with maan's, holding his hand softly as they walked. Maan frowned a li'l in confusion feeling her holding his hand, and looked her way who herself was buzy staring all around, but before he could speak to her they heard a loud cry and maan at once recognizing the voice turned around only to witness an amusing scene, his buddy yash was howling there clutching his mammaa's arm tightly. Yash was his only friend since they both started with their school. Maan never mingles with anyone else in the school except Yash. They both are really close. it was yash's old habbit to crib and cry at the mention of school. God knows why he disliked coming to school this much.

Now too he was clutching his mother tight from waist making it even difficult for her to walk. Just then she spotted maan.. she have known him from years, since when he joined the playschool along with yash. "Arre yash dekho toh, kon aya hai! Maan" she said in an attempt to divert her ziddi son's attention but yash just looked at him from corner of his eyes still sobbing, as maneet approached them with geet a li'l behind maan.

"Maan bete acha hua tum aa gaye, yash bhi bass class mei hi ja raha tha.. abb tum dono sath me chale jayo" "ha yash, chal na hum class me chalte hai" "nahiii mujhee nahi janaaa" and again his voice cracked as he cried yet louder.

"Chee, kitna ganda bacha hai, Rotlu (cry baby)" it was geet who interrupted in mid voicing out her opinion a bit loudly shaking her head "mei gandaa nahi huu" yash retorted with a frown.. "humari maa kehti hai k jo rote hai wo gande bacche hote hai, mei achi bacchi hu toh mei ni roti.. aur aur tum gande bacche ho" geet reasoned making yash fume.. all those crying and howling long forgotten.

Maan was a silent spectator as he was helpless, one side was yash his only friend while other side geet, usse panga lena matlab too dangerous so at safe side just be quiet.

"Meine kaha na mei ganda ni hu" he said irritated.. "yash" his mother warned him in a stern voice at which he just kept quiet but kept glaring geet with a frown. His mom looked at the tiny girl in front of her, almost looking like a doll in that cute knee length skirt and her 2 bouncy ponies. It was first time she noticed her. Sitting on her knees to level geet's height she asked sweetly "aur iss achi bacchi ka naam kya hai?""humara naam geet hai, hum maan k friend hai" she too replied chirpily flashing her biig smile... "arre wah! bada pyara naam hai appka geet" she said in delight and then geet giggled softly as the lady kissed her pink cheek fondly "App bhi bade pyaale ho" saying geet too kissed her back making her laugh at the cute doll.

Yash just twisted his lips watching his mammaa showering her love upon some other baby and that too this devil! his childish possessive brain took over him.. and true not everyone is like geet, who would happily share his mammaa. Murmering curses to her he looked at maan with accusing eyes at which he only made a puppy face saying meine kya kiya??
Just then school bell rang. "accha kids abb app logo ki class ka time ho gaya hai... app log jayiye. Mei bhi abb chalti hu" saying she got up to leave and kissed all the 3 bye.

Yash watched her retreat with dissapointed eyes still sniffing, but he knew now nothing could be done. Just then geet poked him from behind and he turned "appki maa gayii" she said as a matter of fact "appko chod ke" geet continued "pata hai mujhe" yash spat angrily. Geet shrugged her shoulder mumbling casually "mei toh bass bata rahi th... oyeee rukoo" her tone changed as yash hurriedly held maan's hand in anger and started dragging him along inside the building while geet walked faster almost running to match their steps shouting...

Maan worriedly tried prying off his hand since he was aware geet didnt knew anything about their school and mainly it was his responsibility to take care of her.. yash in frustation continued dragging him. His mood would each time be the same whenever his mom would send him to school against his wish.

Finally yash stopped once inside their classroom, class Ist section 'A'. Geet barged inside after them, her eyes shooting daggers at yash "oyyeee sunayi ni deta kya?? hum tabse chilla rahe hai rukne ko" she spoke in anger "agar.. agar hum kho jate tohhh..." she yelled at him. Maan looked at them with worry, he knew their teacher might be coming anytime now and these two ziddi's were hell bent upon making him insane..

"kho jaati toh hi accha hotaa" yash screamed back at her leaving her with mouth open at this guy's audacity. "Isski tohh" geet muttered and marched angrily towards him but maan came in mid stopping her "geet, abb jaane do naa.. dekho ma'am bhi bass ati hongi, chalo hum apni seat pe baith jate hai nahi toh mam daategi" he said scared and also coaxed yash for the same..

Maan reached his seat and sat there while geet and yash followed keeping a safe distance among them.

Yash just casually sat on the bench just beside maan while geet frowned at it, she was supposed to sit beside maan not him "oyeee waha se utho wo humari jagah hai.." she said with a frown "tumhari nahi yeh meri place hai, aur mei nahi jaunga" yash answered adamantly. "Maan humare friend hai toh hum unke pass baithenge na ki tum" Geet said firmly "wo tumhara nahi mera friend hai aur me nahi jaunga" saying yash turned his face in front ignoring her "maan humare friend hai.. issiliye wahaa se uth jao warnaaa... " she threatened him "warnaa kyaa?" yash challenged

"warnaa.. warnaa yehh" and the next second yash was forcefully thrown out of his place as geet pulled him off his seat and hurriedly took the place with her small bag still on her back.

Maan smacked his head at it.. god yeh geet bhii... "Geett!! yeh kya kiya tumne?" maan asked in an annoyed manner still trying to recover from the shock. "Humne? humne wo bandar ko neeche gira diya" she said giggling sheepily keeping her small palm on her mouth. While yash who just got up rubbing his bum pouted making a crying face and hurriedly sat on the bench behind maneet muttering about geet silently making all sorts of faces. But as he heard geet's words he made an O face and next moment geet's pony was pulled by yash from behind "bandariyaa" yash said stucking his tongue at her as she looked at him shocked but before both could yet again pounce on each other their teacher Sheetal mam entered the class and all stood hurriedly singing her a 'good morning'.

Their teacher sat on her chair and started taking the attendance. Silence covered the classroom as all students sat very conciuous not wanting to face their 'scary' teacher's wrath. Her strictness and stern nature was the main reason for this terror among small students. One noise and you will be awarded by the deadly glare from the teacher.

But unaware to all this Geet who was fuming due to Yash's earlier act found a brilliant idea for revenge as she felt Yash's shoe by miistake colliding with hers which she kept on her bench's bottom bar quiet behind. Yash who sat right behind Geet, too put his shoes on the same bar as her and thats when his shoe collided with Geets and befor he could remove them he found Geet the devil trapping his shoes by her's, pressing onto them with force.

Their this "shoe fight" continued while Maan who was panicked at first tried stopping them by making Geet understand in a hush tone but as none listened to him he defeatedly hid his face in his palms coz he knew now these both were in trouble once their teacher comes to know about it. And as expected their teacher spot them quickly as Geet who by mistake hit the bar instead his shoe a little strongly and shrieked in pain and thats when Miss Sheetal caught them.

"Yess you! Disnt i say no noise while i take the attendance? Stand up now..!" Miss Sheetal scolded Geet in stern voice and as she stood confused and a bit scared the teacher scrunched her brows in confusion looking at her. Geet didnt seem one of her students, then why was she here? She havent seen this child before in her claas "You dont seem to be of my claas! Who are you then?" She voiced out her confusion. Yash too straightened immediately as soon as Miss Sheetal spotted them, scared to death, but sighed in relief as she spotted only Geet.

"Wo, am Geet, Geet Handa" Seet answered innocently blinking her eyes at her. "And what are you doing here?" "Humara addmission hua hai yaha. Ajj humara pehla din hai " Geet explained whatever she came to knew from Daadi. She also have learnt a little bit of english all thanks to Mr Aditya's classes, she was able to speak and understand english just as much as any other child of her age. "Ohh, you are new here. Then what are you doing here? Were'nt you suppossed to be in your claas??" Miss Sheetal further inquired her, frustated. "Yeh hi toh humari class hai" confused she asked "Ji nahi. Yeh appki class nahi, new addmissions ke liye seperate section hai, You cant sit here in this class. Wait! Let me just talk to the incharge" She further explained her and then ordred the students to be quiet till she returns. She went out of the class to talk to the incharge whereas Geet was highly scared by now.

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PRECAP- Umm, Geet being seperated from Maan. What would happen??

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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