Arvi FF- Love after marriage can happen..pge 2@

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello all... i m new at writing these FF n all but i tried to write becoz i ws having this story in my mind. since long tym... so please encourage me if u feel its boring or nt gud thn do tell me coz gud and bad both comments are welcomed...

i hope u all will have gud time reading it 😃
characters same as PR... few changes will be made if its needed for appropiate storyline ...

Prologue---->
'' Hamari shaadi hone ja rhi hai par ab bhi mera man ye manne ko taiyaar nahi hai ki aaj arjun aur meri shaadi hai ''

Savita -- Areey beta abhi tak tum aaise hi baithi ho ,jaldi se taiyaar hojao teju tughe shopping pe leke jaa rhi hai...

''uff kitna saara kaam hai aur sab mugh budhiya ko hi dekhna padta hai''

Girl-- OK Aaji mai ready hojati hu

Savita to sundari---->
Aeey sundari ,ghar mai kitna saara kaam hai,aaj ghar mai ek shaadi hai aur tu yahan pe nikammo ki tarah baith kar TV dekh rahi hai ja aur mere liye thanda sharbat bana ke la ...sab is ghar mai subah ke 9 baje tak sote rehte hai bus ek mai hi hu subah se kaam kar rahi hu tu ja leke aana mera muh mt dekh...
Sundari-- Ji aabhi laayi...

Girl---> bappa aap mere sang hamesha aaisa kyu karte ho ,mughe samagh nhi araha hai mai kya karu mughe kisi bhi haal mai ye shaadi rokni hogi mai ye shaadi karke apni aur arjun ki life barbaad nhi hone dena chahti...
''mughe arjun ko call karna chahiye '' par mai usse kahungi kya..
her inner voice says -- tughe kuch kehna nhi hai tughe usse puuchna hai ki usne tere sang aaisa kyu kiya aur usne abhi tak sabko sach kyu nhi bataya aur agar usme ye himmat nahi hai toh tu hi sabko bata de ki jis shaadi ka sab log sapna dekh rahe hai vo kabhi ho hi nahi sakti...

''That girl is lost in her own world of thoughts''
she came out of her thoughts and called arjun ...

Teju's entry...
oyee hoyee madam arjun ko call kar rahi hain but no this cannot happen aaj tumlogon ki shaadi hai thoda w8 karo kuch ghanto baad toh tum log face to face hoge na ...
ok mai tera phone leke jarhi hu tu ready hoja na hum shopping ja rahe hai...

Girl--- Teju tu ek min mughe phone dede pls bus mughe arjun se imp baat krni hai...
Teju-- OK ok theek hai only 1 min mai aake mai tera cell lelungi..
Girl---OK

That Girl called arjun twice but he didnt picked up...

Girl to herself---> Arjun mera phone kyu nahi utha raha hai? kya wo mughse dar raha hai,agar vo sacchai ko face nhi kar sakta toh commitments kyu karta hai...

She is sitting infront of a mirror and asking questions that can only be answered by arjun..
Girl---> Arjun kyu kiya tumne aaisa mere saath kyu? maine kiya kya tha bus tumse aur sirf tumse pyaar,jo mai shayad hamesha karti rahungi ...
'I LOVE YOU ARJUN'
Teju--> Waah kya baat hai ,shaadi se pehle ye aalam hai toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga aapka? waise baat hogyi na ab lao do cell..
Girl--> chal ja teju 'wiping her tears' mai bus arahi hu but hum shopping pe ja toh rahe hai but karenge kya?
Teju--> AREEE tere after marriage ki plannig teri first night etc etc...
Girl--> Shut up teju now go i m just cuming in 1 min

Prologue ends------------------

it was my attempt ...hope it was well...
i would like to hear all ur precious comments...
tell me if i should continue or not ? 😃
thnxx...

Edited by palakluvsabhiya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Dear ...👏👍🏼 😃Please continue soon as possible...!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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:O *rubs my eyes* pali is it you ????? My Gosh ... Ur brilliant baby :-)) i'm realy very proud of you*wipes tears* tune aaj aapna mumma aur mera naam roshan kardega hain.. *tumbs up* plz go ahead and love u alot baby <3...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg eg...u write ffs also...
thank u soo soo much dear for writing the ff ...and would love to read the ff too...

please continue soon and thanks for the pm and pm me again ok...
luv u eg 😳 😳 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey palak it was awesome so ur ff writer also huh.continue girl im eagerly waiting for the 1st part 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey its awesum dear...plz continue soon..waitng 4 1st part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT'S tooo good dear
luv to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear... do continue soon... one small request... can u write the convo in english...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: logambika

awesome dear... do continue soon... one small request... can u write the convo in english...?


thnxx sure...i 'll do it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanku so much my dearies...for all ur lovely comments they encouraged me too continue something that i hve started...love u guys so much 🤗

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