FF-A Beautiful Disaster (Ch-10/Pg-126)*11th APRIL* - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow really fantastic...rk was handsome..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arias

Wow really fantastic...rk was handsome..hehe



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Posted: 13 years ago
Its Such a Beautiful and Amazing Update Zara!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ā­ļø I loved reading it sho much.ā¤ļø
Rishabala first kiss.Wow.It was so intoxicating.So Wonderfully written. šŸ‘
RK's inner turmoil is so beautifully shown by you. šŸ‘
And Thankyou so much,I really love that Tum hi ho song alot.ā¤ļøIt suits our Rishabala the most.I just loved it that you added this song in this update.It compliments the beauty of this Update. 😊 ā¤ļø
I hope that RK realize that Madhu is his true love soon. 😳 And Pls Throw that Dipali out of here,I just can't tolerate her in betwn my Rishabala now. 😔
Sorry I can't like the Update as My like button is not working. 😭
Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon. 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwwiee thankuu so much nukti n janvie ā¤ļø
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
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Next day Madhu woke up and chckd the time

'11am !!!!!! ' Her jaw dropped to the floor

As she managed to sit up on the bed.

'Aahhh ! My head ' she grimaced in pain

'Adrak wali chai' and a cup was right in front of her

Her eyes shot open to see a freshly showered RK standing with a cup in his hand.

Madhu felt embarassed and muttered ' thankYou'

RK sat on the couch waiting for her response. He was secretly hoping she'd remember the kiss so that it would become easier for him to know her feelings.

Here Madhu was quiet , trying hard to remember what exactly happened last nite . And there she was ... She remembered and shook her head.
'I'm going to stay away from RK . That's it !! Enough is enough ! I'll control my feelings or whatever . But m not letting him hurt me like that ' she muttered to herself

'Are u alright ?' RK asked

'Ya I'm fine ...actually I wanted to apologize about last night '

'Apologize ? She's apologizing for the kiss ?? Why? ' RK thought confused

'I went too far !! I'm really sorry . I didn't mean to ... But ...it just happened' she spoke lowering her voice

And RK's heart ached as pain took over his face

Madhu continued ' I usually don't drink. Actually I've never drank . But I don't know what happened yesterday . I went to far wid the drinks . I'm relly sorry for spoiling ur party '

'What???? Ur apologizing for spoiling the party?' He literally jumped on the couch

'Eerrr yaa ... Why else would I apologize to u?' Madhu asked confused

'Crap ! She doesn't remember the kiss !! Jesusss Christ ... Why not ????' He spoke in his mind

'He must be cursing me for spoiling his party . Afterall he was enjoying so much with his Real Gf !! Arrghhh . I'm going to stay . Enough is enough ' madhu screamed in her mind.

'Its okay ! Nevermind ' RK spoke lying back on the couch.

Madhu gave a half smile . And walked out of the bed . She was still in her saree and now she couldn't carry it anymore.

As she got out of the bed , she tripped on her saree and fell directly on RK , who was lyin back on the couch.
RK immediately held her , as his hands touched her bare back , she immediately got goosebumps all over . As their eyesmet , they were just inches away and trust me Madhu looked gorgeous than ever in that 'out of the bed hungover look '
Her eyes were red , and her lips were pale pink , her hair silky came right near RK's chest .
'Beautiful' his lips whispered unknowingly.
And in a fraction of a second his hands started travelling down to her bare waist making a chill run down her spine . It seemed like he was getting drugged by her eyes . Madhu closed her eyes , takin in the feeling of bein so close to RK . His scent was driving her crazy early morning . RK travelled his other hand upwards to her neck and her cheek bone and settled it there. He didn't know what force was guiding him to do all that but he just knew that its exactly what he wants right now .
He gently brushed Madhu's lips with his thumb ...makin her body arch to his touch. He brushed her lower lip , gettin his own lips closer to her's ...


'Knock. Knock !!' Someone knocked at the door

And Madhu in a reflex jerked up and straightened herself . While RK was dumbstruck in the same position. Tryin to make sense of what he was about to do .

Madhu"s face flushed red 'ughhh ! Madhubala ur losing it ! Just now u promised urself to stay away ! Fine Fine I will from nw ' she spoke to herself and walked into the washroom .

'Come in bittuji' RK ordered.

'Chief ur shoot is scheduled at 2pm . Miss Dipali has already shot all her scenes since morning '

RK was shocked ' shot all her scenes ?'

'Yes chief . She has suddenly become very sincere ' bittuji replied

'Is the director happy with her work ?' RK questioned

'Chief the thing is . She acts okay . But the director n even the producers feel her face is not resembling that of the heroine of this movie . They feel she'l do great as a supporting actress . But somehow her personality is nt matchin that of this movie's lead'

'Hmmm.. But now nothing can be done. Tell the director to be content wid what he's got . Anyways I'll b thr on time ' RK spoke thinking something.

As bittuji left he thought ' what if this movie doesn't make a mark on box office ? I've invested so much money ... What do I do nw ???'

Suddenly Madhu walked out of the washroom , changed in her normal salwar suit ..

And RK's thought processes shifted to Madhu ' well Madhubala !! U do feel something for me ! And I'll soon figure it out ' he smirked and left the room..

RK went to dadimaa's room .

'Dadimaa how r u today ?' He asked taking her hand in his...

'M...uchhh betterr...' He spoke slurping

'How's bahu?' She enquired

'I don't know ' RK replied lost

'What hpnd RK beta ?' Dadimaa asked concerned

RK thought for a while. Then decided only dadimaa can help him..

'Dadimaa ...I don't know what ur Bahu thinks about me ... I mean I know we got married too early but we have been living under the same roof since so many days and I still can't understand what she thinks or feels about me . I'm too confused dadimaa '

Dadimaa smiled at his gesture

'RK beta .. If u want to know about bahu's real feelings then u have to do something that she gets jealous of . Becoz only in jealousy a person's real feelings come out . '

'Jealousy ..hmmm' RK thought

'Dadimaa what do u think ? Does ur Bahu love me ??'

'Beta I know what she feels . But now u should figure out on ur own what she feels about u '

RK nodded and kissed her hand ..


Here Madhu was talking to Trishna on the phone..

'Didu how's Mallik now ???'

'He's better glycerine. But he wakes up only for few minutes and again goes unconscious. But the doctors are saying he's gettin better'

'Really didu ??' She almost had tears in her eyes

'And maa how's maa ??? '

'Maa is okay . She relly misses u .. She enquired a no.of times about u . So I told her its a long outdoor shoot... But glycerine u tell me how r u ?? Is RK treating u well ???'

'Ya didu . I'm good. Everyone here is great. And RK takes care of me properly. U just keep updating me about Mallik and give my love to Maa . I miss her so much' Madhu spoke crying

'I will Glycerine. I got to go now . Byeee'
Trishna spoke

'Bye didu' and the line from the other end went blank.

And Madhu bursted in tears . She was crying thinking and missing her maa , mallik and didu when suddenly a handkerchief was in front of her .
She looked up wid teary eyes ...
And RK stood there with the handkerchief...

She shook her head in a no.

RK was surprised .. He sat next to her ' missing ur mom n dad ?'

Madhu nodded

She was still crying . And RK just couldn't see her in that condition. He almost felt he was choked to death seeing her tears...
Somewhere he felt responsible for her tears ...

' I'm sorry Madhu . I'm keeping u away from ur parents . But I promise it won't be long ...I will re-unite u wid ur parents. Ul be free from me soon' he spoke wid a painful voice

Madhu's heartbroke again hearing that ...as her tears started overflowing more n more..
RK got his hand closer to her's and was about to keep it on her hand when she spoke

'I'm waiting for that day '

And went out of the room. Leaving a hurt RK behind...

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RK went for his shoot in tht very bad mood...

'Afternoon Mr . Kapoor .. How's it going ?' He asked

'So far only gud . Well Dipali has been shooting ..but sir I have a problem'

'What problem?'

'RK sir see . This script requires a girl wid an innocent face and fragile structure . Dipali's acting is improving , but still her face isn't what is required for the movie. '

'Change the script then' RK responded coldly

'Sir but..script ...change ?'

'Yes Mr kapoor. We can't change the heroine , so u have to change the script if ur not happy ' and he walked off for his shot

He entered his vanity , where dipali was waiting..

'Hey hero?? How are u?' She wrapped her arms around him

'I'm waiting for that day' kept ringing in RK's ears..

When he realised someone was hugging him...

'Madhu?' He thought

And hugged her back tightly making an unaware dipali feel joyous

'I knew u only love me and not ur fake wife' she spoke breaking the hug and making RK realize he just hugged dipali

He didn't say a word

'I'm waiting for that day ' again rang in his ears

'Huhh ! I just don't understnd what that fake wife of urs thinks about herself . I just can't wait for u to divorce her and come to me ' dipali spoke kissing Rk's neck.

RK pushed her away slightly

'Leave me alone Dipali' RK spoke

'But RK ... What hap'

'Leave me alone ' he shouted

Dipali walked out of the vanity




Here Madhu was in her room , when Priya entered

'Ma'am these papers have come for RK sir ' priya said handing the papers to Madhu

'Okay thankyou' Madhu responded as Priya left

Madhu opened the envelope and what she read inside Shocked Madhu to the core

'Divorce' it read in Bold letters


Madhu and RK were both heartbroken and hurt ...RK in vanity was thinking about MADHU while Madhu in her room hugged her pillow and thought about RK as tears streamed down her eyes ...





Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden
Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankhon Mein Kaisi Nami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Sapnon Ka Saya Palkon Pe Aya
Pal Mein Hasaya Pal Mein Rulaya
Phir Bhi Yeh Kaisi Kami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
( Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani )? (2)

Aadhi Aadhi Jaagi Aadhi Aadhi Soyi
Aankhen Yeh Teri Toh Lagta Hai Royi
Lekar Ke Naam Hamara
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Rutha Rutha Rab Chhuta Chhuta Sab
Toota Toota Dil Tere Bina Ab
Kaise Ho Jeena Ganwara
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
( Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani )? (2)

Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden
Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankhon Mein Kaisi Nami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani Zindgaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani
Na Jaane Koi Hamari Adhuri Kahani
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagaani
Hamari Adhuri Kahani

Hamari Adhuri Kahani Kahaani

p.s - do leave your reviews 😳
Edited by zara.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm the 1st!!!yeee..šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
this one is full of emotions and tears..both r heart-broken😭
I wish they could read each other's mind just like Edward does in Twilight..šŸ˜‰
I'm still hoping that the divorce won't happen really..
a passionate confesion is needed n this time plz don't bring Bittuji as kabab me haddi!😔

Edited by titli4love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
resšŸ˜†, dil kaha ho??

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RK with adrak wali chaišŸ˜†

but kitni awkwardness thi dono ke bech, RK thinking kya bolo madhu ko about kiss and madhu apologizing for the party.

but that scene😳😳, itna aacha tha, bas bittuji!!! 😔 har baar galat timing.

deepali inti aachi ban rahi hai, kitni nautanki karti hai but tab bhi director don't like her actingšŸ˜†

finally RK pahuch gaya to his Darling aare Dadima ki baat kah rahi hu, but aap ka plan sahi kam karna cahiye.

"i m waiting for the day" baar baar yahi ghoom raha RK ke dimaag main.

director want a innocent face, bas hint deti raho zara!!

yaahan RK pareshan aur wahan madhu, but i want this aadhoori kahani to complete.


Edited by adeeba21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update gal...😊😊😊 really felt gud whn bth felt for each oda in da same way...its gud dat bth hav mutual feelings...i hope he doesnt make madhu jealous by stickin too much to deepali..
thnks for da pm...😊😊
Edited by philantus - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update Zara..hope Madhu gets to become the heroine..then actually it will be fun to watch flustered Dips..šŸ˜†..update soon deary

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