ArHi FF: Guilt-Ridden Imp Note - Page 37, 05/31

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

sigh,. this is a weird story to read... to know Arnav was so committed to some1 else adn even have a baby with her..

And Khushi's hand in them seperating... and now finally her being back in their lives n her own feelings of love and guilt..

not a story i would have usually picked to read as i find it hard when Khsuhi doesn't come 1st in Arnav's affections..

but you write wonderfully.. there is a lull like feel when i read that i feel drawn to the story despite the concept..

do write more.. would love to see how u manage to bring this story to us...

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pri3love

@pri3love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Any chance of getting an update soon? 😊

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@SuperstarSanaya

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: pri3love
Any chance of getting an update soon? 😊

so sorry for being extremely late for this update.. I was very demotivated for this story.. 😔

give me 2 days.. I am drafting this one 😊

Thanks much for appreciation & encouragement.😃

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@SuperstarSanaya

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 44

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

reserved!

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Hey Madhs..

I haven't read this FF... Will update this comment after I read all 3 parts!

Love

Mrina

P.S.: I'm FIRST again!

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Amazing FF... Read all 3 parts in a go and I must say.. This concept is mind blowing!

The flash back and revelations for written so smoothly! 👏 These was a beautiful flow throughout and I really fell in love with this! 😃

The bond between Khushi and Aliya is soo cute! 😊

Both Arnav and Khushi have a depressing past.. But Khushi being with Lavanya during the accident and the guilt.. I'm so waiting for her to tell Arnav everything!

She would have a lot to face after that but telling the truth is much better than hiding it! 😊

Continue soon Madhs!

Love u loads,

Mrina

P.S.: PM ME ALL YOUR UPDATES FROM NOW ON!

Now waiting for Consequences of Silly Bet.. 😳

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Glad that Arnav saw Khushi has the instincts to know how to soothe Aliya.

What was she hiding? Felt bed for Nani.

Wonder what'll happen now!

Looking forward to the next post

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

maybe them reports of lavanya's was conveying some illness or something where she could have died anyway

but its nice how they both are conversing so easily and are surprised by that too

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

I So Feel Khushi Should Move On & Try To Forget The Past 😳

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Emotional loaded updated.
Everyone in the house is suffering from the lost of beloved ones.
Arnav and Khushi sharing their pains was good for both.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Brilliant update, yet so emotional and heart breaking but it was written exceptionally well from start to finish. Awww the conversation between khushi and nani was so emotional and nani's desperate plea to ask khushi to continue staying at the raizada house was so heart warming. So khushi tried confessing the truth to Arnav but the conversation got diverted and they both shared there painful past with each other, both have been devasted and upset in the past. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx