Tarey os...completed...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys m trying to write os on tarey if there is mistake pls ignore it bcus its my 1st time...

Intro:tarey r marid scene 2 month.swaron are also married now n allthe character r same but they r marrid now...tarey n swaron leaves seperately...

In tarey house..
Tani:rey abtoh uth jao its already 9 am now...
Rey:pls tani sone do na subhah subhah tipical bahu ki tarah order dena shuru kar diya abhi toh hamari shadi hui hai plzzz tani sone do...
Tani:kya kaha apne tipical bahu...in angry mood...
Rey: sorry baba...
Tani:toh abhi uthiye aur nashta karne chaliye vaise bhi apko office jana hai na...
Rey:hain jana toh par aaj zara der se jaunga...
Tani:par kyu...
Rey:woh swayam aaj ane wala hai na...
Tani:kya bhai ane wale hai jodpur se aur bhabhi bhi toh unhone mujhe kyu nai bataya ap ne bhi mujhse yeh bat chupayi...
Rey:relax baby take a breth woh actuly kal hi decide hua mein batane wala tha pae tum raat ko jaldi so chuki thi iss liye tuhm uthana zaroori nahi samzha m sorry...
Tani:vaise bhi aap mujhe kaha apne dil ki baat share karte hain...
Reyaab phir se no way mujhe aab sach mein fresh hona chahiye...
N rey goes...
Scene shifted to jodhpur swayam house...
Breakfast table...
Sharon:swayam kaha ho tum jaldo aao nashta thanda ho raha hai...
Swayam:aaya sharon woh packing kar raha tha...
Sharon:ho gayi sari paking?
Swayam:hain bas thodi si baki hain...
Sharom:m really very excited mere bf se milne wali ho...
Swayam:aur mein tani si pata nahi kaisi hogi...
Swayam mom entry..
Smom:beta tani ko yeh dena...
Swayam:hain dedunga ma...
Smom:apna aur sharon ka kyal rakhna aur pohckar phone zaroor karna...
Swayam;ok mom mein jaldi aa jaunga..
Both swayam n sharon wets for airport...

Precap:rey air tani sharon aur swayam ko pic karne airport ate hain...

Hey guys how was it i know botot kharab tha...agar apko pasand aya toh next part update karongi...
Edited by Naikravina - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taarey married & swaron 2.Nice dr.Cntinue sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great concept plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow taarey r married intresting update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear awesome very very nice os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

wow taarey r married intresting update soon


m glad u like that n sure i will conti it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow interesting
awsm do put nxt prt
soon n do PM me again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting taarey and swaron married, I love it. please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee update soon and pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow..gr8 TR's married .. as well as Swaron .. cool ..!! Awesome ud tha .. lekin next ud thoda long kar dena plz ..hehe ..Continue soon ..seriously you gotta cont it!Do PM me.. Waitin for your PM!

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