I'm Really Gonna Miss These Days!!- An OS

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Dedicated To each and every one who will pass out school in a few months, I'm sure you're gonna miss these days...

I'm Really Gonna Miss These Days!! - An OS..
Based on School life...

Tying my belt tightly so that it emphasis my thin waist, Managing my curly hair and tying it up in a pony tail so that it looks Okay, As it is far away from good, Applying Kajal in my eyes so that i look a bit fancy at least, Inserting Hanky inside the pocket, Lip Gloss is in my bag already. Oh no! It's 6:03 I'm so late. "Make it Fast!!" my mom yells at me from down stairs, Ugh! I hate this school, BUT, it's just a matter of a few days Why hate school? I mean, itne saal yahan rahe, Padhe,Likhe, Masti fun dhamal kiya, aur achanak.. Sab Khatam!! Ikdum se! Well, i push these thoughts away from my head and i go downstairs, my brother is placed like a big buffalo on the dining table. i grab myself some serials when..
"Sheee! Have you seen Your hair? Ghansle jese lag rahein hain" my mom shrieks.
"Its all right mom" i say
"Ma, isiliye toh Logon ko Dates nai miltin.." my brothere said
"Hello! Jab milni hongi na mil jaengi, I'm not Desperate okay!" i say, and eat..

butterfly


As i run out of the house i notice the time is 6:10 oh no! Has the bus left? Damn it! What am i going to do now? this is all because of Anish! I'm gonna kill him today. Fortunately just like me my bus is also late today, it came 3 minutes later and my bus driver is glad that i didn't say anything for the bus to be late this morning. Our bus driver is a total crazy, He refers girls as "Chokris" and opposite for boys.. He usually makes us all laugh as we call him "Buddha" ...
I sit next to Tanya- My Gossip mongrel but i love her anyway. she is talking to Aagosh- My other best friend.
"Oye, Teri tabyat Thik ha? tune aaj buddhe ko late aane ke liye nai daanta?" Tanya Asks confused
i nod.
"Kuch na kuch toh hua ha. Tera Oriflame ka kajal miss ho gaya kya?" Aagosh asks trying to tease me
"Nai yaar, Aaj subah me naha nai payi jaldi jaldi me.. isiliye thoda alas aa rha ha aur kuch nai, you guys continue" i say and a bit while i doze off in the bus itself. After a while tanya wakes me up saying we're finally inside the campus. I wake up my eyes still dreamy, I get down of the bus and check that the first subject is History today! Oh Lord! Mene kya bogada ha? Y me? I ask when i suddenly realise i'm caught for not cutting nails, as a matter of fact i cutted them yesterday itself, i dont know how they grow up every now and then, Tanya waits for me like a patient child while a ask a little girl for nail cutter and help- myself finally we're inside, I'm continuosly listening to tanya's bak-bak about any new sweater she bought And i'm replying her with my Nods, and a few "Ahan's" .. My eyes were searching Aagosh, my thoughts fixed some where else. I cause to imbalance in my shoes and fall on some one, Oh gosh! And i dont even know him. He looks at me, his eyes a shade of light brown, his lips light pink, i gather myself somewhat repeating sorry, now i understand what romance writers write, as he was damn cute! and sexxy too! i pick up his books and give them to him "Here" i said he smiled at me, and the way his lips curved my heart some what gave a funny little cute kick at the time. i look at his well-built-up body coming out of his half sleeved Uniform shirt, his stylishly chopped hair, i felt like running my hands through them, and his masculine scent filled my nose, i suddenly came back to earth and smiled at him, I instantly decide that i really like him. as tanya pulls me i walk away with her, and as i turn i find him still there, standing, his arms crossed around his fist and he's standing still like a statue, for a minute i feel like the whole world has disappeared, its just me and him, And now, i Exactly understand what they mean when they show scenes like this in romance movies.

Tanya is continuolsy observing me as i am physically present in the physics lecture while my mind is somewhere else
"Whats wrong with you kriya?" tanya says chirply "I thought physics was one of ur favourite subjects"
"It's a bit boring today, i hate this Mukherjee giving lecture" i say
"C'mon dont u make excuses, Mukherjee is the finest teacher in the school, you never miss any lecture, Its that boy isnt it?" tanya winks for a minute im freezed. woah! she understood how come then i get back to my senses and say
"Shut up, Its not that"
"Reyaansh Singhania, 12 C, New admission ha, girls crazy over him!" tanya shrieks.
"How come u catch up all the gossips going around" i say
"Dont Worry he likes u too, Face pe saaf likha tha dono ke, Especially wen u fall on him, and u too stood there like that, aww!" she chirps again i give her a look. "And well, i even liked it jab tu vo back turning heroing vala scene dali picture me, that was super cutieee!!" Tanya smiles yet again, Im irritated now, i check the time, 12 minutes are still left i make an excuse and run out of the class, so that im saved frm her tantrums and teasings. Gosh! Tanya!!

I am in the library Right now, reading one of my favourite writers book "Sydney Sheldon", i love to read whenever free. And right now i have nearly 30 mins free... It's only wen he comes and sits in front of me i try to ignore him, but i can't help but steal a few glances at him.
"Sydney Sheldon? Tumhe iski books pasand hain?" he asks
"Kyun? tumhe nai pasand?" i ask
"Nai, vo zyada tar girls nai parhti na, isiliye" he said i nodded. (What say Ayu? 😉)
Then i suddenly notice what he was reading ..
"Mills and boons? one of my favourite books" i said
"Mene toh kuch hi parhi hain, but i like them" he said
i nod and continued to concentrate on my book, while in reality i was concentrating on some one else. He walks away after a while, i curse myself for not continueing the conversation ! ! Ugh!
But then suddenly something hit me, hard on my face, Oh, a chit?
What kind of chit? I open it with curiosity growing inside me each and every second. Finally i let out a sigh of relief. Gosh! this is what i expected.

A Smile Is a Curve that sets everything straight...
Loved your Smile this morning!! Keep Smiling!! :)
Love, Me!

I realised that i was smiling, there was a curve on my face too.. i looked at him, his eyes fixed on me, i guess he's really SO interested! i stop smiling and write:

Don't Flatter me!! You're getting me on the 7th Cloud!!
-Kriya

Before this conversation flew much longer i kept the pen and the paper on the desk and went out with attitude in my walk, i should have some attitude i'm a girl after all.

"Sun Na, tu rich ha, cute ha, tera bhai mera friend ha, acchi khasi judge ki beti ha, Soch raha huh tujhse he shadi karloon" Aagosh said trying to tease me..

"Apni Bakwaas apne tak rakh, aur meri bhi toh choice honi chaiye na, ki me kisse shadi
karungi..!!" i said

"What? mere armaano pe paani phek diya tune yaar!!" agosh Behaves like a kid, while tanya is buzy watching herself in the hand mirror.

"Aur vese bhi mene apne liye choose kar liya ha" i said

"Kon kon kon??" aagosh asks..

"Secret ha, baad me bataungi..!" i wink and left..


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"It wasn't flattering, and well, Are you.. umm... free on saturday?" he asks
"Why?" i ask
"I was just planning.. err.. if u would come with me out for some dinner and all you know" he says
"Gosh! i dont even know you" i say while im dancing mentally. "Lemme just, think about it okay?"
"Fine!" he says and i go away. without stretching the conversation, i've just started to love his tiny beard on the curve of his chin, Gosh! This feeling is so beautiful.

We're walking through the corridor, i, tanya, aagosh, aagosh and tanya fighting over some record while i'm lost in his thoughts, i wish i could've kept that chit so that i could read it now, i mentally kick myself for not keeping that chit! silly, ediotic me!
Rey walks next to me..He starts walking with us, i look in those deep deep sea like beautiful eyes. those hair, that adorable face, beautifully carved features and everything, from his masculine bosy to his clean and kind soul, i almost love everything. and well, umm.. talking about masculine the thing i most love it his Masculine scent, So manly. I smile at seeing him

"You're Adorable" i said
"You're Lovable" he says and for a moment im freezed i have nothing to say nothing to tell, just simple freezed my mind blank, i feel utter silence in the harshy corridor, and my mouth gapes open but i simply say "They're Impossible!" to change the topic, Aagosh and tanya are still fighting unaware that rey even came by, im a bit nervous now. he will soon ask about my answer to his question ...

"So, You thought about it?" he says, and there it comes! gosh! no, what am i supposed to say, one part of me says yes, while the other part denies, my heart says go ahead, while my brain says to stop it at the moment, and i'm walking totally blank as i say...

I nodded my cheeks flushing, and then he gave a heart hacking, breath taking smile, his flawless face lightened as he smiled And i choose to follow my heart, he reaches my hand and gently holds it, while my cheeks flush bitterly. I look sat my a 2 extraordinary and Jungly best-friends and my new found love but what i realise is..
I'm Really gonna miss these days, I'm gonna miss my school days...

The End!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really hope u guys like it..
Next will be Savage Awakening..
Get ready..
Well, ese hi mann kiya toh likh li..
But it all turned out crap!
So, i leave it all to u guys okay?
Do tell me how it was..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww..!! Super Cute os
I loved how you depicted Kriya's feelings towards Rey.
Tanya an Aaghosh were adorable too!!😃
Beautiful os Rash!!👏👏
Edited by arjuhiswaron007 - 12 years ago
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Res!!!😊

Unres!!!!😃
first of all gimme ur address taaki mai tere ghar pe aau aur ek zor se tujhe maaru!!! Miss my-writings-turn-out-tobe-crap!!!!
but i must say dis is truly awesome!!!
its very well described!!!
n abt d OS, i wanna say dat its very perfectly described...
Kria's POV was d best part!!
Her fallin head ovr heels fr Rey, n their romantic convo!!
its excellent!!
n endin!! it ws fab!!
i ws thinkin hw i'd feel wen i'd be dne wid school!!!
n dare u say dat ur writings turn out crap!!!
i shld b d one sayin dat!!
n i loved readin dis OS!!

Edited by KriShaReYam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vedika And Rivana,
I want it Unresd now!! *Tapping my feet*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!!!
Unres

Ab mein tujhe jor se maarne waali hun!
'My writing turns out to be crap!'
Aisa kaun bol raha tha huh?
Aisa ek aur baar bola na toh i'll surely kill u!
Pagli ekdum!!! 😊

Now back to d OS!
It was amazing rashi!!!
Ekdum cute n sweet n chirpy!
Ekdum teri tarah! 😊
Loved d way u showed kria goin all gaga over rey! 😆
Tanya aur agosh bahot funny the! 😆
N fr d 'wats say ayu?' I'll say ki ab tu mujhe ek book gift karne waali hai!!! 😉
Ab jaldi se savage awakening update kar!
Be happy n chirpy like u r! 😊
Edited by ayu_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LovekinG AWosm😉
THis ths Awosm yaaar
ye od nhi hoskta yaar plz plz trun into ss y ff plz plz plz
trun into SS kam say kam plz plz plz plz
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i ws dead sure ki aap kuch na kuch toh likhogi hi 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWSUMMM OS,,,
LUV IT😃
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plz trun into ss yaar plz plz

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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